I am grinning so hard, I love the flashbacks and how smoothly you integrate them into the story line so far. I'm really enjoying the way they react to each other even after so many years and I don't know, it's just really great.

I left you a review already under the name 'Jage' but I had to join so I could find this story easier and be able to follow along because I am loving it.

 The angst, the drama, the sexual tension... I just love it! I really like the fact that you show that he wasn't a good man, even before storm, but at the same time she sort of kept him calm and she did matter to him, even though he left her. 

 And I like that once she got over her shock of seeing him again and then getting Victor back and not just dealing with Sabertooth she pulls back, because he does need to prove himself worthy to her or at least explain why he just left her. 

I think the fact that she kept the necklace is more telling of her feelings for him in my mind, then her keeping his clothes since that's something she appears to wear all the time while the clothes can stay hidden. It's like she has a part of him with her at all times. 

 I am really enjoying your portrayal of Logan and his interactions with his brother. I'm assuming this is going off of the wolverine movie right? 

Anyway, I am loving this story, so happy that I happened across this site the same day you happened to update and I can't wait to see  what happens next.

How much do I love the contrast between him being a hired killer who doesn't care about anything and enjoys the way he destroys people to him trying to express to her that she was too important for him to lose because of his nature? Very, very much.

I love the fact that he tried to express himself through the necklace how much she means to him, even if in teh end that's not how it came across. 

 And I should've known it wouldn't just be about him trying to win her back and getting his memory back while dealing with the fact that he enjoys killing things. Who is that watching from the shadows? 

Great chapter as usual, love the emotions you manage to get across and the fact that even when he's trying to apologize or explain he doesn't lose his character. 

For some reason I thought once Xavier saw that it wasn't him he'd stay around and try and woo Storm back, but I guess this really just highlighted the reasons he left her in the first place.

 At least now he'll be upfront about it, though I doubt it's going to go smoothly or easily, even if Storm thought she wanted him to go, getting him back then losing him will just make everything harder. 

Interesting way to show what's in Victor's mind. I was expecting a look into what he did the night before, not hsi actual mind. I wonder how it would look/does look after he commits a violent crime, although, from the Victor we see who *knows* himself, he could do it without turning crazed. 

Great chapter as usual!

Will you be adding part two to this same story file or will be creating a new one for it?

I have to say, I don't know what I was expecting but it definitely wasn't for Logan to think hse's being abused and blow everything out of proportion even though it seems like Victor set it up like that on purpose.

I do wonder if their goodbye would've been calmer if that whole fight hadn't happened or it he would've just disappeared again since goodbye doesn't seem to be his strong suit.

Looking forward to book II.

I have never watched an episode of this show though I need too, but I love what you've written so far. Even though there are certain strings that are over my head since I haven't watched the show the story-telling makes all of that irrelevant and you give enough t hta I can sort of figure out what's going on and if I can't, I can always google, lol.

I love Rachel and the fact that even though she has found herself in two difficult situations she acknowledges it and it she doesn't let it ruin her work, she's still competent and I really like that even though her love life might be a bit of a mess she isn't.

The way you're showing Raylan and Tim works brilliantly for me, I don't know who to cheer for and although Raylan should be unlikable [really, Ava and Winona?] the way you write him just makes me feel a bit sad for him. Especially since he knows he screwed up.

Tim... I feel bad for him because he seems like a nice guy but I don't know, in this case he might come in last just because he doesn't seem to spark the same feelings in Rachel that Raylan does and she keeps thinking of him as a friend with benefits while it's clear he's fallen harder.

Shoot, he's probably liked her from time.

Great chapter.

Raylan, I like you but keep yourself away from Rachel. I just keep liking Tim more and more and more. I mean, someone who is dependable, gets you hot, and loves you dearly is clearly a prince. And then there's Raylan...I mean, he has a history of hreat breaking and yet there's something about him, ugh.

And Winona, I can't stand her but I do feel bad for her. She lost not only her husband but a friend who she still loves but he's caught up with someone else and now she's pregnant [maybe]. sucks to be her.

Great chapter.

I'm smiling so wide right now, lol, adored this, adored them. I mean, he makes a reference to the fact that he would've raped her and it didn't phase me or bother me [all that much].

 I love the set up and the way we see it from both of their POVs. Brilliant as usual. Is it a companion piece to In His Skin?

hahaha, I love sexual tension, it makes it so much better when they give in. Great chapter as usual and I'm glad that the date was perfect even though it didn't actually go perfectly, haha.

Huh, it's interesting that they both put so much of their own worth on whether or not they're in a relationship. They're both gorgeous and successful and yet they think something's lacking because they haven't had a successful relationship?

Well at least they will both appreciate the other even once the new person glow wears off, lol.

Author's Response:

I wouldn't say they base their worth on whether or not their in a relationship...that they just feel like for as much as they do everything else right...they just can't nail this particular area...but they're working on it