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Summary:

The best part was that he could see down onto the patio of her home from his corner apartment.

Her curly hair pulled up into something he couldn't quite make out in the insufficient light. It had a mind of it's own, he liked to think, always fashionably messy and due to the heat, most days up. Also as most days she wore a tank top of some feather light material and no bra. One of the thin straps teetering on the edge of her shoulder. A skirt, probably vintage, hung on her slim hips and danced just above her knees as she shifted her weight from one bare foot to the other.


 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Breakdown
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 14261
Read Count: 10813
Published: 24/03/11
Updated: 14/04/11


Title: Chapter 4: Invitation

Your story has drawn me in and my curiosity is peaked.  I like that it’s from Boon’s POV, and glad to see you will keep it that way through-out the story (normally I hate 1st person narrative but this works for me).   When reading your tale I feel like a voyeur, not only into Hanna’s world but Boon’s as well.  You have a great story going hope to read more soon.

Author's Response:

*laughs wickedly*

Good, I am happy you like it. If you feel like a voyeur, than I am doing my job right. Thank you. 

Reviewer: myea Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30/03/11