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Big Girls Won't Cry by Suprina Frazier
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

They messed with the wrong woman this time!

FBI agent Subrina Rayelle is on a mission to take down the people that forced her best friend Leesha into prostitution and then beat her to death when she tried to escape.

Refusing to even cry one tear of grief for Leesha until all guilty parties are brought to justice, Subrina sets her sights on Nevada where the crime took place. If only she hadn’t met her soul-mate on this mission – a beloved nephew to the leaders of the suspected prostitution ring and who may also be among the guilty parties himself. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 210
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3441
Read Count: 79607
Published: 09/10/10
Updated: 09/04/11

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Title: Chapter 201: Chapter 91.1

Oh man :o(

I didn't want them to die. Why the hell would Mercedes risk her life over some damn jewellery? Her head was never focused on the right things. Maybe some will disagree, but I actually wanted Ricky to get a chance to redeem himself with Leesha. Its so sad. And poor Victoria. . . she didn't need all this. Things are never gonna be the same. Avalon will most likely be heartbroken.

I'm glad Subrina finally came out with the truth. It was expected that Caesar would react like this. Some previous chapters forewarned us with his whole reaction to forgiving Rae and then Ricky too. I wish he wouldn't push her away though, cause his only family right now is his mom.

I just wonder how Leesha will come back into the picture since I guess she is suffering from memory loss.

This is just so sad man.

Blaine needs to DIE. Seriously, he's been going TOO far already, but this is just too much. He's lost all his gotdamn marbles, if he even had any left. I wish I could just Jackie Chan his ass! I'm so mad, lol, but he needs to be ripped to shreds . . . SLOWLY PLEASE!

Update soon. <3



Author's Response:

Jane Dope, remember that everything is NOT what it seems when it comes to who died and who lived (spoiler). Can't say much more than that without telling story secrets.

By the way, I love your summarization of events. You're very astute. And that Jackie Chan statement had me rolling. lol.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: _janeDOPE Signed
Date: 03/04/11
Three's A Crowd by Valhalla
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 61]
Summary:

 

Just when Georgina Akande thought she had rid herself of her creepy ex-fiance, he strolls back into her life in the worst way possible.

A misguided attempt to assert herself leads to some painful home truths, but, also, the opportunity to grow and love again.



Table of Contents
Categories: Books, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Love Is...
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 37015
Read Count: 8026
Published: 18/01/11
Updated: 31/05/11

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Title: Chapter 10: More Matter For A May Morning

Patrick is a damn snake. All this time he was getting his knowledge about Celeste from Rohan. What a fool! I feel bad that Celeste is so naive and oblivious to see that this is clearly a one-sided relationship. I do feel bad for Rohan, but he should have had the balls to tell Celeste how he feels.

Andrew and George are so cute. He's utterly smitten with her.

I'm glad that Hulk wants to work things out with Rachel despite everything that happened before they met.

Serena spells trouble to me. She seems very sheisty. Elizabeth just needs to get away, really. If the two of them could just join Patrick and all walk on a busy highway, my life would be complete, lol.

Plz update soon. I hope you haven't forgotten about this story.

 Reviewer: _janeDOPE Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 23/04/11
Title: Chapter 11: A Cold, Wet Fish To The Face Part I

Yay! I'm so glad you updated! :o)

George and Andrew are so cute together. I can tell they really like each other. I do love the moments when its just them so I'm anticipating more of that. Its cute how he got jealous when he heard Rohan's name though. And George catching him naked . . . priceless! Lol, nothing like a nice pair of buns.

Grandma Priscilla is hilarious! I'm Ghanaian but I can just imagine this. Heard the exaggerations so many times. You wanna laugh but you have to shut up, otherwise they'll tell you that you don't respect. But I totally agree with her grandparents.

Rachel and Hulk are so shy. They should get over their nervousness and go for it. I hope she calls him. I'm happy that she took Prince to see her family and his father. It's not easy to just allow others to be all over him when its always been the two of them, but its great, if only for Prince to know who his father is, his mom's family, and to build a relationship with them.

I really hope that Celeste will wisen up and see Patrick for who he really is . . . the devil! And I really want Rohan to build up the courage to confess his feelings for her and reveal that it is him that knows her inside out rather than Patrick. The longer he waits, the more hurt and late it will be.

Update soon. <3

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Date: 01/06/11
Full Bloom by Elizablu
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 385]
Summary:

FullBloom2--Banner

 

Tabby and Jace met for the first time at a family member's wedding and decided to take advantage of the company and island scenery. What they didn't expect is that their paths have crossed before. It's funny how the past can come full circle.

DISCLAIMER: All publically recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. (ME!!) The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Full Bloom is an original work of fiction, please do not post or copy this story to any other websites.   

Full Bloom © 2011 by C.E. Givens (Elizablu)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female, Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kitten's Bed & Bath
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11685
Read Count: 102556
Published: 02/07/11
Updated: 10/07/17

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Title: Full Bloom

I swear I had written a review for this story, but I can't find it. Your writing is thebomb.com/theshit . . . lol! Honestly, you are an amazing writer. I love the way you bring alot of humour into the story. You are able to evict alot of emotions through your words. Love it.

Now Jace and Tabby . . . that's what I call bedroom boom! I do hope they get together and Tabby sees that he genuinely wants her and lets go of her insecurities. I really like that he admitted that he is ready to love her. He should keep showering her with love and care so she never has a shadow of a doubt. I know that Ginger is coming for them with a huge load of drama, but I hope that they will be strong together and not allow her to win. But it will be a huge shock to them and I hate that they are in the dark, but hopefully Mary can talk to them ASAP.

Now to my favourite couple, Coco and Malcolm. I absolutely LOVE Coco. She is so dope! I love her humour. The two of them have so much chemistry its insane. I believe they will both tame each other, but not lose themselves in the process. I threw up a little in my mouth when I read that he slept with Francis. That really disgusted me and Mal had to lose a few cool points. Its not going to go over well with Coco that much I can tell. A few cans of whoop-ass for Aunt Loosie Booty and Mal will suffice for me. I hope his ass grovels, cause nothing has happened yet, but he may lose the one thing that he truly wants. And Coco better not make it easy for him . . . too many female characters do that. But if Coco is getting her own story (dancing a little jig), then they can reconcile there *hint hint* . . .

Francis is a low down dirty ass snake slithering in that family and causing strife. I think deep down she is jealous of Mary and what she has. And come to find out she is good friends with Ginger - that figures. Hoes will always find each other. I can't believe that Darren is really that stupid and oblivious to his wife's nasty habits. It boggles my mind. All I know is that Ginger and Francis can't succeed in their plan to destroy the family. Ginger is only there cause her gravy train has come to a full stop. Benny will kill her when he finds out and Jace better give her a piece of his mind.

Love the story. Can't wait for the next chapter. <3



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that u loved the story!! I'm rooting for Jace and Tabby too. Hopefully Mary can talk to them before it's too late. I think Jace isn't the kind of man that will just give up when the shit gets tough! Ginger will be catching more hell than she will be throwing it. Now CoCo and Mal (my favorite couple by far) CoCo will be giving Mal hell...but he will definitely be luvin every minute of it. But he will giving our CoCo hell also...he loves seeing her squirm. He's a confident man and he's not gonna let so mess that happen in the past deter him from his goal...CoCo. Francis will need to watch her back. Thanks..

 Reviewer: _janeDOPE Signed
Date: 26/07/11
Title: Full Bloom

I hope Jace and Tabby talk it out before those hoes arrive. They can all present a united front against them. If not, then Tabby may think this is all a game to Jace.

Ass whoopings are seriously gonna arrive next chapter, lol. I can't wait. Coco is gonna go OFF! I almost feel sory for Mal.

I don't even know what to say about Calise's new adventure. She still has feelings for Tony. I don't know what kind of game she is playing. And it looks like Princess may find it hard to let go if Tony acknowledges his feelings for Calise. Oh boy!

Update soon. <3



Author's Response:

To really avoid any mess or drama Jace and Tabby needs to talk...pronto. The more they know the better prepared they can be for the bullshit comes. I think Calise really believes (misspelled I think...forgive me) that she has gotten over her 15+ years obsession of Tony...poor disillusioned child!!  Thanks for reading it and reveiwing, glad that u dig it!!

 Reviewer: _janeDOPE Signed
Date: 03/08/11
Title: Full Bloom

Happy Birthday in advance!!! Wish you well and enjoy it, but please get sober soon, because I am anxiously waiting to know what's gonna happen in the next chapter.

LMAO at Jace and Tabby making the bed break. That was some intense loving. They have really fallen for each other. I know their parents wanted to tell them tonight, but it seems that Jace has already found evidence and summed it up. I do wonder why Tabby kept the ring. In essence, its almost like they were meant to be. He bought the ring for her and didn't he call her his Cat not too long ago, if I am mistaken? This is really coming full circle.

Coco once again slays me with her words. She is hilarious! Coco should realize by now that Mal is determined to have her. I can't wait to read Mal's POV...that would be interesting. But her words about Auntie Loose Booty gave me a sense of foreboding. In the next chapter it is about to go down. I doubt Mal will let go of Coco easily, not at all, but she kind of made it clear that he is gonna have a long journey getting back in her good graces. Oh lawd, the anticipation. And please, don't let Darren Jr. be Malcolm's. That would just kill everything.

I can't stand bitter bitches and that is exactly what Ginger and Francis are. Ginger and Francis' plans are gonna backfire on them; sure they may cause a stir, but they won't win. Benny is definitely gonna make sure of that. Ginger needs to know that she is stuck with him and their child. What a sorry ass mother she is. If Benny is genuinely sorry then I would love for him to apologize for all the pain he inflicted. But why does it seem like everyone has been keeping tabs on Tabby, Jace and the rest of the family?

Loving it as usual. Update soon, like really soon, lol. <3

 



Author's Response:

Thank you. So glad that u enjoyed it!! 

 Reviewer: _janeDOPE Signed
Date: 30/07/11
Title: Full Bloom

Loved it, loved it, loved it. I was rooting for Tabby, Coco and Calise the whole time. Tabby straight whooped Ginger's ass. She never saw that coming, and that's the best way to do it. Auntie Loose Booty is a damn fool. Darren is clearly not in the present. He had to know that child was not his. He's either pretending or he really is that oblivious. Francis, no doubt will keep on pushing everyone's buttons especially Coco's. I can't wait for when they all tag team her ass and I love that there will be none of that slapping, hairpulling shit. They need to give her a beating she will remember. I know Mary is just itching to snatch her.

Jace and Tabby will work things out because they are both ready to give their love a chance. Ginger thought she was gonna wreck everything up. Too bad, my dear. I guess Benny didn't make it in time to see this shit. He already knew Ginger had the odds stacked against her.

Now as for Mal, I almost felt sorry for him....almost. That's what you get for being a ho. I'm surprised Coco didn't give him a knock in his head when she found out. I think his beatdown may be next, if that officer doesn't put Coco behind bars *kiss teeth*. I wonder how Mal is gonna make things right cause Coco is beyond pissed. Will she even hear him out? Lawd he has an uphill battle.

Tony and Calise are something else. Princess is caught up in their little spat. They need to sort out what's going on between them and Calise should stop leading her on, knowing she is just a diversion for her feelings for Tony.

Update soon. <3

 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you loved the craziness! Tabby straight up showed her ass! Darren is a lost cause, instead of trying to beat Mal,, he should have been checking his wife. Francis is going to be that irritating rash that CoCo can't get rid of, but she better hope the police won't give her that one phone call, cause she's gonna tell Mary and Momma Bear is going to beat Francis's ass all thru Luminensce. If I was Auntie Loose Booty, I would be catching the first flight back the D.C. Tabby and Jace can make it, aslong as they listen to everything. I might have to start up a prayer line for my boy Mal, cause hell hath no fury...like being on CoCo's shit list. Mal better do some tricks like Cris Angel if he ever want a slim chance with my girl. I think that she was too busy trying to get out his hold so she could get Ginger. Believe me if the situation was different, she would have staight deck him. But with her being pissed at A.L.B and Mal's past , it just shows that she do have strong feeling for Mal. If she didn't, CoCo wouldn't bat a eyelash. Thanks for reading!!

 Reviewer: _janeDOPE Signed
Date: 07/08/11
Title: Full Bloom

I really enjoyed this chapter.

Jace and Tabby's visit with Olea was so sweet. Ginger is such a trick for cutting off Olea's chance of a fulfilling life with friends and family. Despite everything, Olea seems happy and content and I know that she has already grown attached to Tabby, and vice versa. It was nice to see that Tabby genuinely cared and loved being in her presence. I know that must have been a bonus to Jace. Olea does seem to have an old soul though; she may be wiser than we all think.

Coco was just so on point with her words to Calise. Calise is not fooling anybody with this charade. She is playing a game that she is not ready for and has placed Princess as a pawn in this game of trying to get Tony to realize his love for her. She can deny it all she wants, but deep down inside, she wants him to burst out in a jealous rage, so she knows that there are feelings there. Lawd, this is such a mess. She does need to take responsibility and let Princess know what's really going on. It's so unfair to her.

Mal has good intentions, but I wonder if Coco will see it that way. I know he wants to protect her and show her that he will always be there for her, but it definitely won't be easy tryna break that down to Coco. He might have alot of explaining to do.

Update soon. <3



Author's Response:

So glad that you enjoyed this chapter. I wanted to show Tabby the kind of man she fell for. A good honest and LOYAL Man with a lot of love to give.And I wanted to show Jace the kind of woman Tabby was...he took a big chance bringing her there. Jace was showing her that Olea was his responsibilty also...What shocked him was that Tabby wanted to share that with him also. Tabby and Olea have a couple of things in common, they both were victims of Ginger's jealously and they both have the love of Jace. I freakin love this!!!                                                                                                                                             Calise has that West pride of hers that won't let her own self admit that...she's fuckin up! She thinks CoCo just love to herself fuss but her sister is trying to beat in her damn skull about the dangerous road she's on...we don't know that much about Princess...hopefull the bitch aint coo-koo.                                                                                                                                                                                     Cayenne is a VERY DELICATE subject for CoCo...she only talks to a few people about it...Mama Lundy, Papa Elliot and Linette (her cousin...you will meet her crazy ass soon.) Mal has good intentions...he cares for his CoCobean, but he is about to open a BIG can of nasty worms...This right here will show us if he really wants to be there for her...Thanks for reading!

 Reviewer: _janeDOPE Signed
Date: 25/08/11
Title: Full Bloom

I'm so happy for Jace and Tabby. They deserve all the happiness that is coming their way. And for them to want to be there for each other despite the trials that have come their wa si a testament to their love and commitment for each other. I died laughing reading about Jace dancing a jig to the baby news. I know he is elated and thank God that he has rhythm.

Coco has some issues from her childhood that have festered within her. I think she does act hard on the outside as a form of protecting herself, because no one ever did when she was back with her mom. She is still a little girl on the inside that feels undeserving of the fierce love and protection she gets from the West clan. She needs to realize that she is one of them. Her mother may have gave birth to her, but Mary has been more of a mother than Cayenne.

I'm glad that she talked with Mama Lundy. Cayenne is a poor excuse for a mother. I wonder what secrets Coco is keeping. Now that Mal has heard that convo, he is never letting Coco go. He is absolutely taken with her. Now, Coco shouldn't make it easier for him, especially in her story coming up (I can't wait lol). He'll appreciate it more when he has to work hard for her. He may do his own investigation and its great that she has him on her side, even if she is unaware that he heard.

I'm so happy that Ginger finally got her comeuppance. Benny left her ass high and dry lol. It took some years, but it is always guaranteed that whatever you do in the dark will surely come to the light. No one can help her now - let's see how well she can manipulate the girls in prison, lmao! They're gonna come for her ass.

Darren just needs to #haveadamnseat. How are you gonna advise someone on who they should date, when you can't even realize you have a two-faced, loose ass wife that is determined to maintain her position on the ho stroll? Come on now. This man is in denial and I wish Coco would have just whooped him. His blind love for that ho always makes him come out of pocket. I think its a lost cause for him. I just don't see what he sees in Francis.

Update soon. <3



Author's Response:

Jace and Tabby are my fairytale couple...actually Jace is a pretty good dancer. CoCo has  a lot of demons that she needs to exorcise and the majority of them...has alot to do with her mother (Cayenne). She is going to give Mal gray hairs galore, but he's going to stay be her side. Ginger days of freedom are over!! (bye-bye bitch) Darren needs Jesus. Thanks for reading!

 Reviewer: _janeDOPE Signed
Date: 22/08/11
Title: Full Bloom

I am so glad that Mary and Madeline confessed. It was for the best because they were not in the best shape at the time that all this went down. Jace would have probably messed up a good thing and Tabby would have been a former shell of herself. I'm glad that they still want to move on beyond this and carve a much better future for themselves together.

Officer Durbin is a crooked ass cop. He has to have some connections with Francis. Who else is supplying him with all this info? Unless it is Coco's mother? He just wants Coco to himself.

Francis will never learn. Time and time again, she wants to push people's buttons. It's ridiculous. She is just extremely jealous of Coco, that's all there is to it. I can't wait for Coco to just snatch her, and please when her husband is not around. He's always trying to play Captain Save-a-Hoe when she CLEARLY doesn't need it.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that the moms confessed also and it seems that Jace & Tabby are still in it to win it. I love those two. whenever I write a scene with them I just grin. Officer Durbin is a crooked cop, yes! You will be seeing more of him in CoCo & Mal's story and also Francis and Dumb-ass Darren. So glad that you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading.

 Reviewer: _janeDOPE Signed
Date: 11/08/11
Title: Full Bloom

At least Mary got a good punch in. Francis never learns, she just continues to pop off at the mouth.

Officer Durbin once again is shady as hell. He is not gonna have Coco. I think Mal is the last person Coco wants to see right now. It's gonna be an uphill battle to get back in her good graces. This may be a challenge he won't win.

Benny, although he has had a change of heart, has bad timing. It couldn't be avoided though. His beatdown has been a long time coming and Jace is more than ready to give it to him.

Update soon. <3



Author's Response:

Francis' mouth will always get her in trouble, but don't worry Mary will get another chance at her and CoCo also. Durbin is bad news, we will have to watch out for him. Mal was the last person, CoCo wanted to see, but she just wanted to get out of jail more. It will be a challenge...will he win? We will have to just wait and see.

 Reviewer: _janeDOPE Signed
Date: 11/08/11
Title: Full Bloom

What a miracle! I am so happy for Tabby and Jace. Now they can take this news and move forward with no worries, but just making sure that both mom and baby are healthy. I was getting prepared for bad news, but I'm glad it was all positive.

Jace and Coco are funny as hell together. I love their banter. I see them becoming great friends. Thank God he only knew about those rings for a while. We couldn't have Ginger sinking her dirty little paws into them.

On to the next update. <3



Author's Response:

What a miracle indeed! I couldn't make my fairytale couple endure no more heartache. They have been thru enough! Jace and CoCo have the same sort of wicked humor. You will be seeing more of their banter in the next upcoming story. Madeline wasn't going to let Ginger get her paws on those rings.Thanks for reading!

 Reviewer: _janeDOPE Signed
Date: 30/08/11
Title: Full Bloom

That was so sweet for Jace to ask Coco permission for Tabby's hand in marriage. Such a gentleman. Its crazy to think that after all these years together, Coco still thinks that she isn't highly regarded. She is worth so much more to everyone around her. I wonder what happened to her to make her self-worth quite low.

Jace proposed!!! I'm so happy . . . and whilst naked?!! Couldn't get better than that. The first and second time he fell for her were all around the time they had sex. Men! Lol! Ahh, and the lovely celebratory sex after . . .

Mama Lundy takes no prisoners and furiously protects her own. I love that she was on point with her analysis and told Mal just how wrong his lifestyle was before. I loved that she made him shiver. Good for him! Now Mal better be in it for the long haul because it is gonna take a strong man and essentially, a strong couple together to fight the demons that are gonna come at them. I hope they will be prepared.

Ahh, the last chapter is next. I don't want this to end. Update soon. <3



Author's Response:

Jace is a gentleman ain't he?! CoCo's self worth issues has alot to with Cayenne and the stunts she pulled. You will find out more about this when I do Team Mal. I really couldn't see Jace proposing any other way than naked. Jace really fell for her at first sight...he just didn't know it at the time.

I want to give you folks a much needed PSA **Don't let the old age fool ya'** Mama Lundy is loving and caring but she can be a beast...fuck over her children and find out for ya'self. She knew that Mal was the right choice for CoCo, but she just had to throw his less than savory lifestyle in his face...the truth is a bitter pill...Plus she wanted to know if Mal was sincere about his out of character response to CoCo.

Ms. Armani has done the one thing all of the others haven't...make him second guess his own self. So glad that you loved it. Thanks for reading!!!

 Reviewer: _janeDOPE Signed
Date: 30/08/11
Title: Full Bloom

Awww, I didn't want it to end. It was a beautiful story all the same. I am so happy that Jace and Tabby got their happy ending. They absolutely deserved it and I know that their baby girl Olea will be loved and cherished. She has a crazy family, lol, but they'll always be there.

Mama Lundy is like a hawk. She catches everything that's going on. I knew she would notice the way Tony and Mal were watching Calise and Coco. It won't be longer before they start coming together. I loved that Calvin made an appearance, though in spirit. That was beautiful.

Coco better heed Mal's warning. Once he goes after her that's it. She can't hide or run. I can tell there's gonna be alot of denial, fighting and making up going on with them.

Great story once again and I cannot wait for my favourite couple's story (Coco & Mal). I love them. Thanks for sharing your gift with us and keep on the great work. <3



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you loved my tale...trust and believe Jace and Tabby was gonna get their happy damn ending. lil' Olea will spoiled rotten, loved and protected to the upmost power. She's their miracle baby. You can't pulled the wool over Mama Lundy's eyes. She's worse than a beagle on a hunter's run. Calvin's true legacy was his 3 girls and you will be seeing more appearances of him as the series progresses. CoCo and Mal...just wait and the rollercoaster those two will be on. Thanks so much for reading!

 Reviewer: _janeDOPE Signed
Date: 01/09/11