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Reviews by brown_mocha

Asadian Nights by Quania2004

Rated: Mature Content

[Reviews - 47]

Summary:

In a world where demons are the good guys and human's are the enemy a young prince must protect his mate from the enemies that wish to destroy him by killing her.Will he be able to hold on to her once she discovers what he is?

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Fantasy, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 10942
Read Count: 20739
Published: 13/09/08
Updated: 10/04/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm going to need an update right quick and in a hurry!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed

Date: 13/09/08

Valkyrie by rogueprinzess

Rated: 17 and older

[Reviews - 74]

Summary:

Dawn Austin is a geologist, living her life in Vancouver until she's offered her dream job in Iceland only days before her 30th birthday. On the eve of her birthday,her body starts to change, and with the help of a new friend, she learns that she is a creature of myth; a Valkyrie.

Dawn is then introduced to a world she never knew existed; made up of creatures and places that she'd always thought were no more than fantasy. But her biggest challenge may be learning to live with what binds her to this world - the Elfen Lord, Hinrik.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 67135
Read Count: 8929
Published: 25/10/08
Updated: 24/08/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Preface

This update was a goody. I'm starting to get a little ticked at Dawn to me she seems to be whining a little much, but I'm trying to put myself in her shoes. What I really want to know is what did Hinrik mean when he said 'eternal mate'? Did that pass by Dawn or what?

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: 12/01/09

SLAV by chocolate470

Rated: Mature Content

[Reviews - 76]

Summary:

In an era filled with prejudice, racism, class divisions and societal norms enter Drake and Eliza – one born into wealth, one born to serve that wealth. Whilst growing up they shared a mutual respect for one another but years spent apart made their lives take its assumed direction. Could a return visit rekindle their friendship and something more?

Banner: Thanks to TokenBlackGirl for the awesome banner!

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:Yes
Word count: 36040
Read Count: 56860
Published: 21/11/08
Updated: 14/01/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

This story has caught me. At first I wasn't going to give it chance, but I'm glad that I did. Drake and Eliza are so real with their feelings, especially Drake. He's a very damn the consequences type man. The chapters have amazing build up and I am going to suprised as to how everything is resolved. I am hoping for maybe and indepth look at Jonathan *hint hint*. I would love to read a story about his lost lady love and maybe a reunion.

Author's Response:

Happy New Year!

Thanks for giving my fic a chance brown_mocha. Hmmm...I grabbed your attention with Jonathan's admission maybe who knows...if I'm inspired...LOL!!! I will write it! Hey maybe I will surprise myself with the ending...:)

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed

Date: 31/12/08

Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

That should have been more stars. LOL

Author's Response:

Hey Brown,

As you may have guessed I hate doing descriptions of my characters so I just added some few stars to get people thinking...LOL!!! :)

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed

Date: 31/12/08

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I am in love with this story. Excellent update! Please, please, please give Jonathon a chance to have his own story. Let something happen where his young son comes to find him because his mom is seeing really hard times, and come under their employment. Then let the sparks fly from there. I know you said that he loves his wife but I have two options for that obstacle. A: she dies or B: she had a master plan all along to keep Jonathon from his true love. Just think about it okay? ahahaha.

Author's Response:

Hi brown_mocha,

I appreciate your support. So you really have some ideas about a Jonathon story....LOL! Your ideas really sound great so here is an idea...you have my permission to write it...;) Do we have a deal or what?...LOL!

Alright I'm giving it serious considerations but it will take some time to get my head wrapped around it and start the process. I'm sure one of your ideas will be involved in it ;)

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: 08/01/09

Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

So, I just read where you responded to my review. I'm soo thrilled about you potentially writing the story about Jonathan. I'm even more stoked that you might use one of my ideas. I think it's just a telling sign how you ensnared a reader and their imagination.

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: 12/01/09

A Father for Christmas by MHLoveless

Rated: 17 and older

[Reviews - 99]

Summary:

A single mother is determined to give her sons a father for christmas even if it means reopening old wounds.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 11349
Read Count: 8908
Published: 08/12/08
Updated: 25/01/09

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Title: Chapter 1: "Mommy, can we have a Father for Christmas?"

I'm really excited about this story, and I cannot wait for it to continue.

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: 10/12/08

A Promise To Keep by ShanniC

Rated: Teen or Above

[Reviews - 55]

Summary:

Monique Harrington loves her family. She and her husband Mark's relationship is founded on the basis of love, honesty, and respect. Everything was supposed to go off smoothly during this year's Christmas Week get together. But when she begins to suspect Mark of cheating, secrets are revealed, demons are unleashed, pasts are unraveled and hearts are broken. Can she and Mark remember that they still have a promise to keep? This is a response to BlackMamba's Holiday challenge.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Work in Progress
Challenges: Tis The Season Holiday Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 6727
Read Count: 11413
Published: 09/12/08
Updated: 31/12/08

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Title: Chapter 1: Cast of Characters

I'm so glad this story was updated, and I hope I don't 'have to wait long for another one. It's so intriguing with all the characters. There is nothing better than family drama. This is just with all of the Harringtons! Michelle's family hasn't even arrived yet. I cannot cannot wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I will try to be as quick as possible with my updates.

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: 31/12/08

CELIA by chocolate470

Rated: Mature Content

[Reviews - 135]

Summary:

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Their love affair was never destined to go on for a lifetime - his father made sure of that outcome. Pregnant and alone Celia found comfort in the arms of Joseph who became a husband to her and a father to Joshua...the only man she could place her faith and trust.

Circumstances change and she had to seek out the one man that still had a part of her soul. How would things play out and how would it affect those around them?

Dedicated to: Megumi, Brown_Mocha, Sweet Pea and Robin

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 59634
Read Count: 76881
Published: 09/02/09
Updated: 04/06/09

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Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

I cannot tell you how excited I am about this story! Squeel!

Author's Response:

Hey brown-mocha,

I'm so happy that you are excited about the fic and continue to look forward to the upcoming updates!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: 11/02/09

96 Hrs in True Falls by Jamey_St_Peters

Rated: Most Ages

[Reviews - 130]

Summary:

Emery Harris has her hands full running the Beckenbach family for the past 7 years and she's loved every minute of it. So throwing the surprise 35th anniversary party for her employers is hardly a chore. But rather than worrying about the guests and the band, Emery finds herself fretting about the arrival of the prodical son. For the first time in 3 years Nick Beckenbach will be stateside. As much as Em has tried to convince herself that she's moved past her feelings for him, she can't be sure until this weekend is over. But there is more than just her feelings for Nick to contend with. One thing is for sure, the party won't be the only surprise this weekend.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:Yes
Word count: 10325
Read Count: 41488
Published: 26/04/11
Updated: 29/05/11

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Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Short but good, sort of confused on why she's crying though....hmmm. Anyhoo, there's one part where you meant to write Bas, but instead wrote Nick. A few minor typos, but other than that I loved it!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed

Date: 24/05/11

Our Sunshine after the Storm by kellyklue

Rated: Mature Content

[Reviews - 96]

Summary:

Can two people overcome the incredible darkness that seems to hover over their lives, to find the goodness and love that live in each other? Can they be each other’s sunshine after the storm?

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 34142
Read Count: 66406
Published: 13/05/11
Updated: 30/06/11

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - the intro

LOoooooooooove it! Caleb didn't something horrible to her. Redemption time.

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: 14/05/11

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - prologue cont'd

Gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh, such an interesting story,please continue.

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: 17/05/11