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Summary:

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This is a General Hospital fan fic that takes place in 2014.  When Keesha Ward left the show in 1998, she returned to Philadelphia to tend to her sick father.  In my story, Keesha also found out she was pregnant by A.J. Quartermaine.  She gave birth to a daughter, Julianna Mae Ward, and has remained in her family home all this time.  She studied to become a nurse and had a successful career until a diseased liver brings her closer to death than life, and she decides it's time to let A.J. know he has a daughter.

Other PCers are also in this story.  Sonny and Carly Corinthos have died.



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, General Hospital
Characters: Keesha Ward
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 64
Completed:Yes
Word count: 151015
Read Count: 363559
Published: 15/07/08
Updated: 26/08/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You got my attention.  I haven't watch GH in years but I am liking this fic.  I can't wait to see where it goes.

 



Author's Response: Hi!  Thanks for your review!  I'm glad this story captured your interest.  Hope you will continue to
enjoy! :-)

Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed
Date: 05/08/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 63]
Summary:

Jake is a cynical Chicago bar owner just looking for some peace.  Josephine is a woman with a shady past just looking for a second chance.  When their two worlds collide during a city blackout each knows that the other presents a threat and yet they can't resist each other.  They along with several people from different walks of life converge on Jake's bar while chaos erupts around them.  Everyone is in for a night of secrets, revelations and lessons learned.  Who will survive the blackout with their heart intact?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 14109
Read Count: 4110
Published: 21/07/08
Updated: 23/10/08


Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

Girl, who is Connor?  I saw his pick and had to audibly gasp?

Author's Response: Hey girl!  Connor is Greg Vaughn he plays Lucky Spencer on General Hospital and he is definitely swoon worthy hahaha.  If you think he looks good in the picture you should see him without a shirt!

Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed
Date: 04/08/08

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

 


 


 


Looking back, I have this to regret. That too often when I loved, I did not say so.


 


 


 


A Bones Fan Fiction:  My response to the Chamber Character Challenge.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Dr. Camille Saroyan
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Comedy , Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Cam/Booth (Bones)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenges: Chamber Character Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2997
Read Count: 4004
Published: 27/08/08
Updated: 27/08/08


Title: Chapter 1: An Unnatural Death

Girl, your good.  I am a new Bones fan so the backstory bteween everyone is lost on me.  I do know that Seely and Cam have known eachother a while.  I think longer than anyone else on the team. Did they actually date?  Eitherway, this wab fabulous! 

Author's Response:

Hey Sebine!

It's funny that you're new to Bones, because I'm actually an old fan that stoped watching in the middle of the second season. I really liked the show then though, and loved Cam, thought she was the best character by far. And they did date, they had a relationship before Booth met Bones, and then started it again after Cam came to the lab. They broke up after she almost died from being poisoned, some mess about work relationships being too dangerous. Cop out if you ask me. :(

Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27/08/08

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Summary:

Spencer Edwards is a happy bachelor. He’s got a great job, lives in a great penthouse, and thanks to his good genetics, a fair amount of luck where the ladies were concerned. Family was the furthest thing from his mind, but apparently, life had other plans.

 

His world is turned upside down when his older sister and brother-in-law die suddenly, leaving their two young children in his care. Spencer can barely take care of himself, and he’s not so sure he should be placed in charge of anyone else.

 

But a light appears at the end of the tunnel when spirited, no-nonsense live-in Nanny Reese Talbot enters their lives. Through ups and downs and self-discovery, Spencer learns just what it takes to be a Family Man.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 35037
Read Count: 11077
Published: 05/02/09
Updated: 07/08/09


Title: Chapter 6: V

Rogue dearest, you have done it again. This update was on the sadder side but I dug it. Spencer is hurting....BAD. I can't imagine what its like to lose someone so suddenly.

I want to give him a big hug!

Great job RP!

Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07/08/09

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 19]
Summary:

She just wanted to be the woman he couldn’t leave behind.


 


 


A Supernatural Story Written for the 100 First Kisses Challenge.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Cassie Robinson
Classification: Off Cannon , Supernatural
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Challenges: 100 First Kisses Challenge
Series: Devils and Dust
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1457
Read Count: 4192
Published: 13/02/09
Updated: 13/02/09


Title: Chapter 1: That Other Woman

Read it.  Loved it.  And hopes that one day I grow up and write like you :)

It was amazing how much hate the Cassie character generated.  I mean is it so wrong for a man like Dean to be attracted to a woman who has melanin?

Dean and Cassie were a great couple for me. Thank you for your take on them.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading Sebine, glad you liked it. I think some of the Cassie hate stemmed from the fans not liking the boys with women at all, plus the writers never seem that interested either. But of course, her skin color was a factor too, I think that character was just doomed from the start. But yeah, I've yet to see a woman accepted for either boys, I think most fans just want them to ride off into the sunset alone. *shrugs*

Thanks so much for reading!

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Date: 13/02/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 101]
Summary:

Lance comes back to NYC to teach at one of the most elite private schools in the country, and in the middle of his second semester, in walks this new student with more brains than Einstein, a fast tongue - and his green eyes. You can never avoid the past. Ever.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 16935
Read Count: 6218
Published: 18/02/09
Updated: 26/06/09


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Part II

Good premise.  Can't wait to read more!

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Date: 11/06/09

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

 

Looking back, he couldn’t quite find that moment when things started to change between them.

A Cold Case story written for the March "Friend or Foe?" challenge.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Det. Kat Miller
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language
Challenges: Friend or Foe?
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3615
Read Count: 3490
Published: 29/03/09
Updated: 29/03/09


Title: Chapter 1: The Other Side

I haven't watched Cold Case in years but loved the story.  For some reason Kat always struck as someone who played for 'the other team'.  Interesting to see that she doesn't...and is now getting it on with the hottest man on the show!

Great work TBG! 

Sebine



Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I hope that Kat/Scotty is in the future, they hinted at it this seaon, and I hope they follow through. :D

Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/03/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 48]
Summary:

 

 

Tick-tock, tick-tock, tick-tock...welcome to the sound of the biological clock. It takes center stage in the lives of three families: The Whitmans, The Thompsons, and the Murrays. This is the story about love versus loss, dreams versus duty, fame versus family, and babies, babies, babies!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 32141
Read Count: 4850
Published: 28/05/09
Updated: 01/01/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Morning Sickness (2004)

So after your hiatus, you reappear with this! 

At least we know you're alive...

As for this update:  I'm glad you finally decided to share this with the world.  I am so ready for the ride!



Author's Response:

Hahaha!! I see you Girl! Yes I'm alive :o) Readers, this is the awesome lady who indulged me when I first started this story and gave me loads of helpful advice (which I am hoping might continue?)

I hope all is going well with you and your new arrival? Thank you for checking this out again!

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Date: 28/05/09

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Whitmans (Present Day)

Poor Whit...

That's what happens when your penis does all the talking for you: you get a big life sized bitch slap in the face!

I am excited as all get out to be reading this again.  I can't wait for the intro fo the other characters.  I'm invested in everyone but there is a certain couple that I just can't help but root for (Eastern Parkway anyone?)

HP, all you need to do is ask and I'll give u all the advice you want!  Besides it doesn't hurt that I would get to see 'the goods' first. 

You know this story is my crack!!! 

Hit me up whenever you are ready.

Loving this Girl



Author's Response:

Thank you!! :o)

Don't worry, we'll be getting to your favorites real soon :o)

Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/06/09

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Morning Sickness (2004)

You dedicated the chapter to me?

Awwwww, HP!!!

You already know how I feel about these two, but if you need I reminder, I'll give it:  LOVE. THEM!!!

Perry and Sas are it for me!  I love all the characters but I really need these two to have an HEA.  As we see, something happened between then and now b/c Perry is in the middle of a divorce but I know you'll work your way around that *gives you the side eye* won't you.

Yeah to the Parkway!  Your description was so on point from the flags to the glitter, to the food, to the dancing to the random white ppl that come through and are deemed honorary West Indians.

Bravo Lady!  Bring on the next update!



Author's Response:

LOL! You are welcome Ms. Lady. I have to admit that P & S give me the warm fuzzies too. I have felt the pressure of your side eye before, so I'd better hope that they do live happily ever after hehehe...

P.S. Glad you enjoyed the sights and sounds of the West Indian Day Parade!

Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/06/09

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Thompsons (Present Day)

Perry let out a harsh laugh, "Is this motherfucker high?? Did he really just try to tell me that my own motherfucking smoothie maker makes good smoothies? Like he's not standing in the million-dollar house that I OWN???"

This is why I love Perry!  Yes, yes and YES!!!

Its obvious the Thompson have some unfinished business between them.  You just don't throw away 15 years.  I can't wait to see where you take us with them! 

You've done it again HP and for that I am grateful!  I'm also glad you know how the side eye works, so I need Perry to knock Sass up PRONTO!! 

 



Author's Response:

Lol! Glad you enjoyed it, Steph. This is a man that knows what he wants (and I love it!) I know I can't play favorites but hmmm, Perry Thompson has a place in my heart right now.

Both of the Thompsons just need a minor procedure I like to call a Stubborn-ectomy, a removal of the stubborness by bashing their heads together without anesthetic, lol!

Thank you as ever for all of you brilliant help :o)

Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/06/09

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Cancelling The Stork (2003)

You posted!!!! YAY!!!

Well deary...

I guess this chapter gives us some insight into the woman that is Jasmine Green, yes?

She didn't make that baby by herself but she chose to burden it by herself.  I say chose b/c she never gave Aaron the chance to 'man up'.  I feel for her.  I truly do. No one should bear what she is bearing alone.

I would also say that Jas is kinda selfish.  But aren't we all?

Way to go HP for making this diva very human!



Author's Response:

Thankya, thankya! You know I couldn't have done it with your wise words of advice, deary!

Yesss, insight indeed... I feel for her too - this is probably the first time she tried to be selfless, but she didn't quite hit the mark. It's also a rookie mistake to try and make decision for someone that is capable of making their own...and a touch arrogant too...

Selfish and arrogant, that doesn't sound very complimentary to Jasmine! But she was motivated by love, and the desire to give her man the happy future they talked about...I just wish she had thought about the effect such a burden could have on that future.

Thank you so much for the continued support :o)

Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/07/09

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - The Murrays (Present Day)

Well, welll, well...

Nice update m'lady!

Jazz with her legs up is hilarious!  Some wives tales just need to be left alone.

I feel for Bo and Jasmine.  You can tell they love each other but they are sidetracked by the obstacles of life. There is a lot they haven't said to eachother.  Stuff that they really should. 

Bo loves his wife but his mistress (work) has a tight rein on him.  Is there anything to snap him out of it? 

And Jaz using Aaron and Destiny as motivation to have a baby is just a bad idea on many levels. 

I like how you have set everyone up.  Now I can't wait to see how their stories unfold.

 Great Job!

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you Sebine! As ever, your comments are always appreciated.

You're right, these two still have a lot to talk about before they embark on this next big step. But their issues are only just beginning.

Thanks, girl,

Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/08/09

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - A Fluttering In The Stomach (2000)

And just where in the HELL have you been?  No phone calls, pigeons in my window, emails, NOTHING...

And then you give us an update...WOW!

So Bo and Jaz have a bit of a side history that doesn't include Whit...Interesting.

It makes the situation less sleazy but more complicated.  Bravo!

I can't wait to see what happens next!

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Date: 02/01/10

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 57]
Summary:

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At seventeen years old, Leah Henderson is homeless and pissed off as hell at the world. Pick pocketing is a trade she's become accustomed to and used as payment for what she thinks society owes her. However, her most recent victim is definitely no push-over or willing to let a "criminal" out of his sight until she is behind bars where she belongs.

Officer David Greenburg is a kind-hearted man with a loving temperament and wholesome family that, in his opinion, could use another addition and the young lady soaked to the bone sitting in front of him seems to be the perfect candidate. David's eighteen year old son is less than thrilled and more than happy to see her go, at least that's what he keeps telling himself.

Disclaimer/Credits: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended. Photo found on gettyimages.com



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 13411
Read Count: 22547
Published: 31/05/09
Updated: 22/12/10


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

My eyes seemed to be deceiving me because I can't be looking at an update...

But...OMG I AM!  And what an update.  Let me find you   got your mojo back?

Loved he update deary.  I see Owen is proof ' de nile' isn't just a river in Africa :)  LOL!  He's got hit by Cupid's arrow and doesn't know it yet...SUCH a great combo.

I don't like Jeffery.  I need him to go bye-bye.  I think Owen is going to find he doesn't like Jeff too much either when it comes to Lee.

And there is someone is the great unknown looking for our girl.  Interesting...

Who exactly is Virgil and who is Lee to him?

Great Update!

Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/12/10

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Yeah so I am realizing now that I didn't review this chapter.  SHAME. ON. ME!

I am loving Lean.  I am loving Owen. And (YES DEAR GOD!) I am loving the PROGRESS.  These two are so well matched its not funny. 

Leah was cute with her leaving, but I guess she may be a little slow on the uptake in that, that family is not letting her go.  Not without a fight.  She's gonna have to come to grips with that at some point.

I'm not feeling Owen's friend and I can already see he is going to be a monkey wrench in the plans.

And who is Leah, really?  The mob boss doesn't want her dead.  Harmed at all really...or did I read that wrong.  Then there is a missing person's report on her *rubs chin*

...yeah that seems like it gonna be a can of worms.

BRING ON ANOTHER UPDATE!!!  I is READY!!

 

Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/12/10

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[Reviews - 23]
Summary:

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Two people meet, not an unusual story but...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2404
Read Count: 1689
Published: 05/07/09
Updated: 05/07/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Brilliant!  I thoroughly enjoyed your tale.  Although I would encourage ole girl to give food and sex a chance.  Stawberries, cherries, fruit in general along with caramel, chocolate, whipped cream and/or honey can make for a 'heightened' sexual experience.

I'm just saying...LOL!



Author's Response: She's kinda slow but if Jace can sneak in a streak of whip cream now and then she might be able to broaden her mind.

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Date: 05/07/09

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary: Where do you hide when the battle is within?

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 136
Read Count: 2439
Published: 11/08/09
Updated: 11/08/09


Title: Chapter 1: The Poem

Digging the poem girl...Seriously.

I've been a kind of vampire kick as well for a little while.  I've begun to read Sherrilyn Kenyon books again as well as Shelly Laurenston who has a shifter series.

I can't wait to see what comes of this!

 

P.S.  Can Bonded please get some love?  I want to see how Red handles Chlamidiya and the tit wad known as Derrick.



Author's Response: LOL! I haven't forgotten Bonded, I swear. I'm just trying to catch up with Valkryrie right now, and keep my schizo mind on only one or two stories at once. But while we're on the subject, can I see what's goin' down with my boy Brian and Sunny? Pretty please with cherries on top? :)

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Date: 12/08/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 43]
Summary:

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Uncanny X-Men

When she shows up that first night, he’s not surprised.



Table of Contents
Categories: Books
Characters: Storm/Ororo Munroe
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1550
Read Count: 2932
Published: 09/09/09
Updated: 09/09/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chaleur

LOVED IT!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/09/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 23]
Summary:

 


Vampire Diaries


He’s not strong enough to fight this. He never has been.


A belated gift fic written for BlackMamba



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Bonnie Bennett
Classification: Off Cannon , Supernatural
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: The "All I Want For Christmas" Challenge
Series: Bloodlust
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1368
Read Count: 4276
Published: 27/12/09
Updated: 27/12/09


Title: Chapter 1: You Won’t Let Me Sleep

I am oh so late to the 'Vampire Diaries' party but the good Lord knows I'm glad to have finally arrived. I just saw the pilot ep on Thursday.  Now I am trying to get my hands on everything to catch up.  But I digress...

This is awesome TBG.  These two are hotter than hot! 

 



Author's Response: Yay, another fan! The show is awesome, I think you'll like the last few episodes. Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/12/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary:

The problem was she loved him too much and he didn't love her enough, till it was too late.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q8yZedKTXJ0 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Music
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence
Challenges: They're Playing Our Song Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1642
Read Count: 2124
Published: 01/03/10
Updated: 01/03/10


Title: Chapter 1: CAST

Nice work!  Home girl's loev did turn into obession.  She really took to heart the whole, 'If I can't have him, no one will' scenario.

Thanks for the great read!

Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/03/10

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 51]
Summary:

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Wouldn't it be easier to just stay?

For Nene

Disclaimer/Credit: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended. Image(s) from gettyimages.com.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9465
Read Count: 17251
Published: 24/07/10
Updated: 10/09/10


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four: Stay

One word:  Beautiful!!!

Thanks for writing this Renee! 

Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/09/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 82]
Summary:

The Continuation of Possession  

Olivia is in love with a man that belongs to another. Sounds simple right? Well, he enjoys taking her to the height of lust, but can never remember a thing the next day. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Mystery, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 8814
Read Count: 17770
Published: 07/09/10
Updated: 03/10/11


Title: Chapter 7: The Breaking Point

Excellent Update Thespian!!!  I am so ready for this ride!

Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/10/10

Title: Chapter 1: Possession

Yeah this was hot!  So I'm going to need you to puc some quick on that next update?  Yes?  Yes! 

I can't wait to see the juicy goodness you have in sotre for us!



Author's Response: Thanks Sebine! i hope you like whats next!

Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/09/10

Title: Chapter 5: Distractions

So I see we have a multiple personality thing going on right now.  This should be interesting.  I loved the Vicky/Tori/Princess/Jean/Tommy on One Life to Live.  I'm down for the ride.

Bring it on Baby!

Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/09/10