Penname: brinagal [Contact]

Real name: sabrina hayes

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Summary:

 

 Perhaps I have a little of the monster in me after all...

How much would you sacrifice for those you love? To save her father, Sunshine must give up the life she's longed for to a powerful gangster.

Can she go with him and keep herself?

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: Beastly Things
Chapters: 43
Completed:Yes
Word count: 183149
Read Count: 419663
Published: 05/12/09
Updated: 22/03/10


Title: Chapter 23: When You Are on Your Own

Very sweet chapter..sad, but sweet because of how Nikolai took care of the sibblings..I loved all of the conversations between he and sibblings! But..it's the calm before Nikki's storm..now what? He's sooooooo loves this girl..and like someone said she is the life force of this family and household..a life force Nikki can't do without now..She's his light in an otherwise dark world..and..I think..he has abandonment issues..that only came to light with Sunny!  Yeah he says he's not angry with his parents and 'friends' that rejected him, but it left him with big time trust issues..I mean, he approached Ben like he was a foreign object! LOL..

So as Sunny likes to say..Carry on Grasshopper! Thanks for the update..can't wait til the next!

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Date: 15/01/10

Title: Chapter 36: I'll Send You My Best Part 1

Thanks for the update! Splendid!  I love fluff! And you do fluff quite well, thank you!

I loved reading about what Nik went through while waiting to see if she was safe..and I like that he had to think about what it could be like for her to worry about him! Of course, he would know what she has to worry about too!

There coming together again was wonderful..and she knows how to take care of her Nikki..LOL..oh Nikki boy she 'tells' you she loves you in one million ways..Just pay attention..and Sunny? The words will bring clarity..clarity he needs to tell you what's going on..

Pooooooor Stavros..He should buy Sunny a gift everyday and two on Sundays..although I think Stanislansky probably did away with you anyway..Oh well..

I love Nikki ..but I'm glad he's fiction..lol..cause truth be told ..he's a sociopath..dang! that makes Sunny go some strong stuff! LOL..Her love and his hope for it keeps him from doing many of things..methinks! Anyway, maybe he'll give it all up for her..maybe Stanislansky will free him? Or maybe he'll give Nikolai freedom to be the son his wife wanted (a good son, in a legimate business)..just sayin'

Good job O..can't wait for Monday's update!

 

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Date: 22/02/10

Title: Chapter 24: I'll Send You a Sign...Just so You Know

His dusha..His prelest' dusha! Chickens come home to roost, eh Nikki?  Well since he was horrified and resigned, he knew it was coming..I hope he has a plan..cause I'm pretty sure his Sunshine developed one as she left her former home..

I knew this chapter started so sweet and powerful for a reason..I don't hate Darla..she learned some lessons herself..and all of the stuff that happened between Nikolai and Jacob needed to be revealed..Nikolai told Sunny he demanded loyalty from people in his life..that's another way to say he must be able to trust you..and Sunny must be able to trust him..so the truth needed to be told..and now their relationship has to deal with the fall out..can all they mean to each other withstand Nikolai's treachery?  It is yet to be determined! I have faith in Sunny and Nikki....I have faith! LOL..

Good job on the reveal to Sunny..Good bye Darla and good riddance..

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Date: 17/01/10

Title: Chapter 42: I've Made Up My Mind... to Let My Life Shine

No..thank you O! Thank you!

Wonderful read!  Must repeat reading several more times!  Hope to read another story from you soon!

 

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Date: 19/03/10

Title: Chapter 43: Shine - Epilogue

Thanks O! This was one the best reads I've read, let alone on this web site! Nikolai and Sunshine will always be in my heart! What a thrilling ride you taken us on! Thanks for coming out of your drought! 

 

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Date: 22/03/10

Title: Chapter 22: You Know There's No Need to Hide Away

Wow! I just spent the whole evening on this tale!  I should have reviewed after every chapter! LOL..so much to say..and it's so late..so I'll just leave a note to say you are a terrific writer..I was not sure I'd like Nikki at all..he was a bit to brutal for me..but his Sunshine has softened him up a bit..at least a bit..lol..anyway it's ironic how open Nikki is to the audience..and Sunshine?  Well as bright as she is..she's still a bit of a mystery as far as..will she say yes? I find myself hoping so..heck even the cops thinks his biz is going well..things are calm..how about his personal life getting to be that way?

Oh..and it's sad that Jacob thought the only way to save his daughter was to kill himself..isn't that what he's been doing all along?  This will have devestating impact on his kids..Ben is not as cold as he thinks..he will definitely feel a big let down..and Sunny? She's gonna feel crucified..all that sacrifice...for nuttin'...Jacob took the easy road once again..I understand what he was thinking..but he'd just heard all that love in the room and he didn't think he could overcome it..just for the second...He saw all that love between Nikki and his daughter and that made him want to die? hmmm..sad...

Now more angst for Nikki I guess..he won't know if Sunshine is with him because he 'forced' her or he'll be frightened because she can now leave him..her father is dead..not able to incur debts..so...what's a sista gonna do?

Wonderful work! Thanks for sharing..

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Date: 13/01/10

Title: Chapter 35: Around the Kinda Misery I Find Part 3

Great update O! 

If you were trying to convey that Sunny hasn't said those 3 little words to Nikki out of fear...Fear to trust that Nikki is all that he says he is (in loving her)...Faith in their love for each other..Faith that their love will see them through whatever life (especially Nikki's lifestyle) will bring..Then you did great O!  Loved the conv with Royce..very enlightening..very revealing..and I don't believe there is  any such thing as loving too hard only loving in the wrong way..meaning not loving yourself..and therefore ruining any love you have for others..because that will happen..just as Royce and Jacob did...

I believe love changes people..not always..but then like Royce says everyone has a different 'bottom'...and maybe Nikki has found his..don't know if that means he will give up the biz...but maybe he can go completely legit eventually..being safe for the family he's found with Sunny...they'll have to have the convo next..the convo where both reveal their feelings and who they are..should be interesting...

thanks for such a powerful and riveting story O..you do good work!

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Date: 16/02/10

Title: Chapter 25: I'll Be Long Gone

I'm definitely Team Sunshine..what's NOT to love about Sunshine?

However...poor Sunshine..her Nikki hurt her so badly! I think she does love him..funny how what he did is not what's bothering her except that he did it to HER..She trusted him..glad she brought up the convo about loyalty..I got the impression that Nikki was stunned that she even thought of all those very salient points..well he was truly hung by his own rope! And how it must have galled him to send for Sergei..lol..galled me too..Sergei has his way of smirking even without moving a muscle..but now I feel he's definitely hiding under Sunny's skirt..lol..he knows Nikki is not likely to do anything to him because of Sunny..but if I was Serge (as Nadia calls him..lol), I would still steer clear...Nikki might shoot! LOL..

Priscilla was like a mother hen..about Sunny and about Nikki...Men! Indeed! Yeah well Nikki has to work his way back into the household's graces..I have a feeling Priscilla will now shoot him disapproving looks for a while..lol..and he has to start with Sunny..he now has to present himself..as himself..no tricks..no money, gifts, exotic trips..just Nikki..humble..not begging..but humble..and sincerely..I know he's not used to that..it will be hard..it should be..but just like he went to back to see his parents (and was rejected). he'll need to go back to Nikki..hat in hand..and not be afraid or give up after some rejection..he's gotta earn back trust..

OK..Sergei, she loves ya..but she's not in love with you..and you got rebound written all over you! Even if she and Nikki don't get back together..she's not going with you..heartbreak hotel for you bud..if your brother or Nikki don't kill ya! lol..

Nikki, baby boy, time to grow up!  Good luck buddy, good luck..

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Date: 19/01/10

Title: Chapter 40: I'm Gonna Get Up...

How ironic that Sergei has basically chosen (at least in part) the same solution Jocab Jones chose..I hope no one is hurt..gunshot wounds have to be reported, don't they?  And I certainly don't want anyone to die!

Sergei says Nikolai 'caged' Sunny..well Sergei, what do you think will happen if you kill Nikolai and you also end up dead?  Sunny WILL NOT be free..for a very long time..she will be filled with guilt and that will tie her hands..not to mention in unspeakable pain..which could mean she won't pick up the pieces and move on! She'll be heartbroken..she's strong..but really you think she's that strong? 

You're too late Sergei..Nikki is right..She's choosing to be with Nikki..maybe her eyes aren't wide open, but deep down she knows what's going on..and she still can make a choice (although I hope it's with Nikki!)...she has to make the choice..no going back..

My hope is that Stanislovasky is setting things up so Nikki can get out the mob..won't wash him clean..but at least he can make a life with his love..besides anything that gets Nikolai, the Bloody 'off the streets' is a winner to me! LOL

Loved the convo between the two guys though..and it was very climatic to have Sunny walk in at that moment..definitely a wow moment for me! But..you made one mean ass cliffhanger! LOL..good work chica!

Now when's the next update? Soon I hope!

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Date: 12/03/10

Title: Chapter 29: I'll Be High Flyin'

O, I just smiled and smiled and smiled as I read this chapter..I loved that she keeps pressing him for answers about his 'secrets'...I loved the insights as to why and how he got started in the 'biz'...I love that he's at least taking some of the biz legitimate..I love, love love their date..and I knew (and love) that when she invited him in her home..they couldn't resist each other..and I absolutely love how Nikki loves his woman..it's gonna be emotional when she finally..and freely says she loves him..I know, I know we don't know how it's gonna end..but..like Nikki..I got hope..I's got high hope! LOL

Good chapter chica..keep'em coming!

 

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Date: 29/01/10

Title: Chapter 30: By The Time You Make Up Your Mind

Glad to know you and the muse are doing better..keep up the 'good work' and take it easy!

Your fans can wait because your story is worth the wait..

Now..this chapter was very sweet..I'm glad to see Nikki do some old fashion courting..He is so sweet with her..and Jil 'gets' it I think..nice friend to have around..I have a feeling Sergei won't 'get it' (about Nikki and Sunny)...

Glad also to see Nikki has a friend in Anatoly..

So what's a girl whose in love to do when given an opportunity like going to do good in a dangerous place like Sudan..Vastily better get that passport..and maybe a couple more of Nikki's minions..lol..Nikki may relocate!

 

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Date: 02/02/10

Title: Chapter 32: Good Luck With Your Path

Please tell him you love him before you go to Sudan Sunny! Please! 

Very intense chapter..Thanks for the update O!

 

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Date: 09/02/10

Title: Chapter 39: Or We Might Take it Differently

Holy cow! WTH is Sergei thinking?! I read through this whole chapter with great trepidiation!  Geez..I was right there with Nikki..feeling all that fear! I'm impressed with Stanislansky..I hope he's going to do what I think he's going to do..release his son..He's been a true father..first he taught him how to survive in a hopeless situation..and now..well hopefully he's going to protect him OUT of the biz..at least the illegitmate stuff anyway..I hope! I hope! Yeah the Godfather sees what we all see in Sunny/Nikki..Nikki IS a better man..she's good for him..and the Godfather is all about keep the lights on in his son's eyes..

Well like I said, I keep reading thinking when's the other shoe gonna drop! Little did I know it would be Sergei dropping the shoe! Dang..Serg you kill him you'll have to answer to Sunny..but I guess you don't care about that because you wouldn't be here if you did, huh?  Well I hope Nikki doesn't end up having to kill your ass..because that may come between he and his Sunny..OTOH..You'd better not harm Nikki..Sunny and Stantislansky won't be nice!

Oh Lord O, now you gotta give us an update soon!  That was one bad ass cliffhanger! LOL..

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Date: 05/03/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 21]
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Disclaimer: All recognizable characters and settings belong to their respective owners..i.e. One Life to Live. No copyright infringement intended. All characters are used for entertainment purposes only. The author is not afflilated with any media franchise/organization and has not received any monetary payments for the use of said characters.

 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Jovan (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 1816
Read Count: 2882
Published: 07/06/11
Updated: 19/06/11


Title: Chapter 1: Second Chances with a Ghost

Awwwwwwwww...I still miss Jovan!  How wacked is that! Considering the show is now cancelled and it's last days!

Great little Fic about them. Thanks!

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Date: 07/06/11

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 89]
Summary:

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Two broken hearts...

Lots of alcohol...

...and the city that never sleeps.


What if after a night of drowning your sorrows, you woke up married to Hollywood's Most Eligible Bachelor?  Well, that's what happened to Jackie Smith.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 11222
Read Count: 11677
Published: 19/10/11
Updated: 09/11/11


Title: Chapter 3: Two

Cute story!  But what a place to stop! Mean azz cliffhanger! Get thee to work young lady! LOL

 

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Date: 21/10/11