The Chamber Vault :: Natori aka R

Penname: Natori aka R [Contact]

Real name: R.

Member Since: 23/07/11

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I am an avid reader of both non-fiction and fiction books. I also love reading online fiction stories. I like surfing the web to research topics of interest and frequenting my favorite websites.

Beta-reader: Yes

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Reviews by Natori aka R

Lips of Pink by god gave me style

Rated: 17 and older

[Reviews - 49]

Summary:

I’ve been watching him for two weeks now. He’s beautiful, absolutely, undeniably, beautiful. He’s about 6’1, with a hard, but lean and athletic body. His short haircut fits his soft but chiseled features and that smile. Don’t get me started on that smile. Every time I see it, it sends a shiver right down my spine and I almost have to sit down to regain my composure. Then, there are the lips. Those pretty pink lips. They are so alluring that it would make God himself take off a Sunday afternoon just to admire them. I think that’s what I like about him most, his lips.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9850
Read Count: 3670
Published: 14/10/08
Updated: 30/10/08

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Title: Chapter 5: five

Wow, this is such a cute story but it's so full of sexual passion between the two even though they have not taken it there yet. Would love to read an update of it since it's been a few years now.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed

Date: 03/02/13

Loving Lane by Lina1890

Rated: 17 and older

[Reviews - 52]

Summary:

There’s love, there’s loathing and then there’s Lane.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: Bookworm Beauties
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 10543
Read Count: 7342
Published: 08/05/09
Updated: 30/04/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Will there be an update soon? I realize that this has not been updated in over two years but I like what I read so far and would love to read the rest.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed

Date: 01/11/12

Tick Tock by Honeypeach

Rated: 17 and older

[Reviews - 48]

Summary:

Tick-tock, tick-tock, tick-tock...welcome to the sound of the biological clock. It takes center stage in the lives of three families: The Whitmans, The Thompsons, and the Murrays. This is the story about love versus loss, dreams versus duty, fame versus family, and babies, babies, babies!

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 32141
Read Count: 4851
Published: 28/05/09
Updated: 01/01/10

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Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - A Fluttering In The Stomach (2000)

This story is pretty good. I just found it today. Maybe there will be an update soon?

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed

Date: 09/01/13

Everything by blkpunk311

Rated: All Ages

[Reviews - 6]

Summary: Angela walks in on a tender moment between Shawn and a special someone.

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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Angela Moore
Classification: None
Genre: Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1961
Read Count: 2461
Published: 31/10/09
Updated: 31/10/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sweet story. I love it.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed

Date: 15/02/13

An Unconditional Love by cimmy1

Rated: Mature Content

[Reviews - 88]

Summary:

Noelle and Trey are two individuals looking for the same thing, in Washington D.C.'s highly competitive social scene, where power and money are king. Though they are both from different worlds they both want... An Unconditional Love.

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I would like to send a big shout out to JUNEBUG66 for all of her help getting this story off the ground. She was a literal Slave Driver. But because of her drive and commitment, I finally got the beginning parts off the ground. So THANK YOU, Sister girl. For helping a newbie like me :0). Hope to do us proud.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9393
Read Count: 23535
Published: 14/07/10
Updated: 14/11/11

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I finally decided to read this story after bypassing it. I love Noelle and Trey. Noelle was too cute asking him out for drinks. Lol @ Trey being so excited that she was the woman who delivered his jewelry. I am glad I decided to give this story a chance...I can tell it's going to be GOOD.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed

Date: 07/12/11

Stay by Renee Banks

Rated: Mature Content

[Reviews - 51]

Summary:

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Wouldn't it be easier to just stay?

For Nene

Disclaimer/Credit: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended. Image(s) from gettyimages.com.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9465
Read Count: 17272
Published: 24/07/10
Updated: 10/09/10

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four: Stay

OMG! I haven't read a story this good in a long, long time. The way you captured the character's pain and then their love was fantastic. LOVE reading this..and so happy that the heroine chose love and happiness over contentment.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed

Date: 23/09/12

Lay Me Down by Missus James

Rated: 17 and older

[Reviews - 247]

Summary:

Lay Me Down

Life is hard. James knows this for a fact in which she picked a bad time to quit smoking. Working long days as a housekeeper and taking online college classes just adds more stress. With a troubled childhood and a dark past looming over her shoulder, James is untrusting of others therefore lets very few people into her life.

That is until she stumbles -- literally -- into Tristen, a computer software engineer who won't take 'no' for an answer. He's different, kind, and fun. And French. He wants to get to know her, but will her past drive him away like the others and if he does stay, can he endure damage of her skeletons tumbling out of the closet?

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content
Series: City of Lights
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 63166
Read Count: 67191
Published: 22/09/10
Updated: 06/08/11

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Title: Chapter 14: Joyeux Noël (Part I)

I love these two so much! Thanks for sharing their story.

Author's Response:
It's my pleasure in sharing them! I am so glad that you are enjoying my story so far! :)

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed

Date: 01/08/11

Heartbreaker by SeoulSinger

Rated: 17 and older

[Reviews - 335]

Summary:

Kwan is one fifth of Korea's most popular idol group, and a dedicated, card carrying heartbreaker. But what happens when he is confronted with the girl from his past? the one that got away?

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 33
Completed:Yes
Word count: 65707
Read Count: 69302
Published: 06/12/10
Updated: 15/11/11

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Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

Interesting development. I see that Kibum and Carla have gotten close....I thought he might have an interest in her...I CALLED that one too in an early chapter, lol. However as time went on I liked Fire and thought he'd be a better match. And Fire seemed to have an interest in Carla too right? Or wrong? Yes, Carla should have kept the pregnancy news to herself. Audra DID try to call him. I have to be honest and say that I was afraid that Audra was going to lose the baby.

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Date: 09/12/11

Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

Wow...just got done reading the other chapter then I read this one...

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed

Date: 09/12/11

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

Yep...I KNEW she was going to end up pregnant. I caught it in an earlier chapter and mentioned it in one of my reviews. I see that this pregnancy fit right in with the rest of storyline, lol. Now, let me get back to reading..I HAVE to finish this story TONIGHT.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed

Date: 09/12/11

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

LOVING this story but that's nothing new, lol. I KNEW Fire was just *messing with Kwan and his *messing with Kwan..made Kwan wake up. I loved the interaction with the rest of the boys! Missed reading about their friendship. Loved Young's ribbing as he called Kwan "old." LOL. Also, I am glad to see that this story might be going in the direction that I suggested in one of my comments. ;-) Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed

Date: 16/08/11

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

I thought about this series today (not this story but another)...checked this site and just like that...there was an update! I love Fire..I don't know who he is but I LOVE the way you are writing his fictional character! Kwan better wake up (did Audra really ask for his number or is Fire just saying that to get Kwan to see what he has?).

Is Carla getting a man of her own? If so, this is going to be good...

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed

Date: 14/08/11

Title: Chapter 33: Epilogue

Aw, he got her a ring! This was well done; it is now one of my favorite stories in the series (besides my other favorites-I like some stories more than others). LOVE thatKwan!

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed

Date: 09/12/11

Skyscraper by Devon

Rated: Mature Content
Round robin

[Reviews - 21]

Summary:

When Sloan Cassidy is given the opportunity to work as an assistant to a world renowned fashion photographer in New York City her dreams of becoming a supermodel finally feel within her reach. Dean Delucia has burned through ten personal assistants in three months and the second he lays eyes on the cheery Sloan Cassidy he is sure she won't make it to the end of the day. As a favor to his brother he gives her the job, anyway, and unwittingly opens a door he swore he would never open again.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 8440
Read Count: 6126
Published: 05/10/11
Updated: 06/10/11

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I am LOVING the way this story is developing...love Dean AND Josh too.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed

Date: 07/10/11

Our Story by carolinaheart

Rated: Teen or Above

[Reviews - 185]

Summary:

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One night, an accident and seven years that never happened. At least, he doesn't remember them happening.

*Banner by me, carolinaheart (it's my first try).

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35
Completed:Yes
Word count: 75229
Read Count: 169130
Published: 29/10/11
Updated: 23/12/11

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Title: Chapter 9: Date One

I love how their relationship progressed from friends to something more...too bad he doesn't remember any of it.

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Date: 04/11/11

Title: Chapter 1: Characters

Aw, I love Javier Bardem! I wasn't expecting him to be Miguel though...yes I read the chapter before viewing the new pics, lol.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed

Date: 03/11/11

Title: Chapter 16: Thanksgiving

Sam is such a dumb-ass. Does she have any brain cells? Then Kevin had the nerve to try and make a snide comment about Deidre. Ugh. I see that Sam didn't bother to apologize to Deidre or maybe she does in a later chapter. I'm catching up now.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed

Date: 13/11/11

Title: Chapter 6: February 14

Aw...I like Scott. I think he's misunderstood. I can see Deidre falling for him already at first I was like *how did they end up together...I don't see it.* So that's how the rift between him and Chase began? I have a feeling that the beginning of the end of their friendship starts at his dinner party.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed

Date: 02/11/11

Title: Chapter 29: Rachel

I'm just catching up with this story. This chapter was so sad...as soon as I read that they'd adopted Rachel I dreaded reading what came next. At first I was thinking she met up with a psycho killer on the internet.

It's great that Deidre and Scott are able to give Rachel a good home. Though I wonder why Rachel's father isn't in her life. There was no mention of him and Jessica's relationship at all.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed

Date: 23/12/11

Henry's New Year's Resolution by Brenda1257

Rated: 17 and older

[Reviews - 36]

Summary:

Henry McDermont has regained his health, now he wants to regain his family.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: News Year's Eve Challenge: The Resolutoin
Series: New Beginnings
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6553
Read Count: 75871
Published: 30/12/11
Updated: 30/12/11

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Henry's Quest

This was a good read...I understand Henrietta's anger completely. I have to say that I found it almost unbelievable that Henry was never with another woman except for his lesbian wife...after twenty something years. I can understand Vanessa not wanting to be with anyone else and besides her daughter was her first priority. Oh well...I guess that was some powerful love though it wasn't enough for him choose her and their child. He remained celibate all those years and was miserable from what I read so why in the hell did he wait until his daughter shows up to save his life to finally do SOMETHING about it? Better late than never...I guess. I would love a little more backstory about the history of Henry and Vanessa...I caught a glimpse of it in the little that you wrote but I need a little more.

Author's Response:
More of their past will be revealed in the future. I will say that Henry was miserable after leaving Vanessa. He never went back to her because he felt guilty about having her to have an abortion and he felt that she would never forgive him for that. He couldn't forgive himself for being too weak to stand up against his parents. His self imposed celibacy was part of his penance for what he did to Vanessa. Once he realized that his child was alive and well, he felt that he had a second chance to redeem himself.

I will say in Henry's defense that he was a sickly child with asthma. He didn't have many friends and spent his first seventeen years under constant doctors care. Once his asthma went into remission, he decided to go away to college to experience life. That's when he met Vanessa. When she became pregnant, he wanted to marry her and went to his parents who threatened to cut him off if he didn't make her have an abortion and Henry had to transfer to another college. Henry had no idea how to take care of himself, because he never had to in the past. He felt that he had no choice but to bow to his parent's wishes.

Thanks for the review. More is coming with Henry and Henny and Vanessa in the near future!

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed

Date: 30/12/11