The things we do for family members, especially a mother, father or sibling.....we always think we are doing the right thing for the right reason, when in fact it turns out to be the wrong thing for what we think is the right reason!  Damn, Poor Sunshine.....she is to be tied to a Russian Mobster just to save her father and brother....I hope Nikolai has a heart and does not use her and throw her away like...."Just Darla". I will give this a strong 9 due to the sexual content and violence.

That scene was Freakin' Fabulous....even without the sex!  I love the backstory of how her mother promised to take her to the opera have drinks like she is a big girl. I love the fact that he "Get's her" with the small less expensive gift, and especially, how he gives her Ginger Ale, while he himself has champage, so she will be more comfortable.  The sex was good but the story was good without it! I will give you your first 10 from me...I expect to read more scenes like this.....and you may expect more 10's from me!  Thank you!

I am glad her father takes the initiative to do the right thing and get the help he needs...maybe since now he knows that she is giving Nikki five years of her life for his past deeds, maybe he is changing to save his family? Who knows but I do know this story is soooo  good sooo far.  Keep it up 9.

Sunshine is very strong to live through the things she has with the death of her mother at such a young age and then her father just giving up on life in general because the woman he loves has died.  I feel sympothy for her father, but I do not feel sorry for the life he has chosed.  He has the informatino to make him better, he just choses not to listen to what is right. "You can lead a horse to water, but you can not make him drink!" Sometimes you have to step back and let a person fend for themselves. All jacob is going to do befriending Just Darla, is make Nicolai mad, and end up getting himself and her killed in the process. I give you a 9 for the heartfelt story that Nikki told Sunshine and the fact that he wants to get to know her in more ways then just sexual! 

I am giving you a 10, because this story is Damn Good even without the sex. Thank you for making Nikolai the better man and not killing her father, because even though she is mad at him right now, it is still her father and she would never forgive Nikki for it, and I don't think he could stand her hating him, cuz he has fallen head over heels for her.  I hope there is no trouble when he takes her to Russia and they find out he is in love with a black woman.  I hope Jacob takes this warning and checks himself into a rehab, even though I know it will never happen, I have a feeling Jacob and Darla are going to get together to try and get Nikolai back, but in the end they will be working together for their own personal vindetta.  Please do not let Nikolai or Sunshine get hurt in the process. This story is AMAZING!

Yes this is a bridge chapter, I know the excitement is about to take place. Please get rid of the Skank and soon, but keep Jacob alive so he can find out about Darla's try motives. Help Sergei find a nice girl he can fall in love with so he will not end up with cement shoes, sleepin' with the fishes! All in all still a good chapter even though it was short!

This is my happiness, reading your story. I am a student and I should be doing my homework, but I can not. I will stop after chapter 20 in order to get a few things done, but I will be back to continue this wonderfully written piece of fiction.  I can see the faces of the characters you chose and you picked a bunch of good ones. Thank you for being such a great writer. I love this story again. Thanks for making Nikolai human.....I knew he had fallen in love with Sunny. I just wish Darla was not the first one to discover it. She is like a worm in a beautiful apple...the serpent in the Garden of Eden!I am giving you a ten, because he confessed his love for Sunshine, even if it was in Russian!

Well, Well, Well, look what the cat has dragged back? A rat named Peanut! And of course Jacob is going to go to this big "game" and try to win his money back, so he can buy Sunshine out of HOCK because essentially that is what she is...in hock to the russian mob.  Pretty good chapter.

For the first time in Jacob Jones' life he thought of someone else. But he was still selfish. He did not think of how his children (though they may be mad at him) are going to grieve for the loss of their father. I guess he could not stand to see Nikki look at his daughter with the eyes of a man in love.....Isn't that Ironic, he forces his daughter to do something like this and now he can not stand to look at the man she is doing it with. 10 because Jacob finally grew up and put himself out of his own misery! 

Damn I cried like a baby for Sunny and Nikki, damn I did not want this to happen, but I guess everything happens for a reason! My heart was breaking when he started to plead for her to stay with him in Russian. Yes, he has hung himself with his own rope! But Priscilla said it best men are Estupido, and Pendejo's! 

I never thought the Russian language was sexy, but Dayam! When you write it within the context of your story, my goodness, it makes me HOT AND BOTHERED!!!! Damn I am going to have to invest in me some damn Rosetta Stone! I was teary eyed as they made love.....I love the fact that Nikolai thinks of Sunshine as being his wife. That was sooooooooooo damn sexy! I love this story. 10

Has that boy lost his Freakin' mind?  Did he not know that Nikolai would kill him? Yeah, he knew but did he care? Evidently not! Now Sunny has to see this mess and you know she will not be able to stop Nikolai from killing this boy and then Nik and Toly are going to end up falling out because of Serg's stupidity! MY GOODNESS!  Damn this story is the Freakin' Best!

It takes an older person to fix what a younger person messes up! Thank you Mr. Stanislavsky for knowing Nicholai needed saving...and Thank you for being such a good writer. Thank you and good night!