Penname: Redbird [Contact]

Real name: RaShonda

Member Since: 14/10/08

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Hmmm...well I live in Houston TX...I discovered a love for writing after participating on the So You Think You Can Dance Fanfic Site...I am also a member of The Sweetest Taboo site.


 




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When My Back's Against the Wall by shiree022000
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 215]
Summary:

 

THANK YOU TokenBlackGirl FOR THE WONDERFUL BANNER! 

19 year old hair stylist Tina Jones' love and loyalty is put to the ultimate test when demons from 23 year old Chris Brown's closet come out to play.

WARNING:  this story is rated NC-17 For strong sexual content, violence, and language.

YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 34
Completed:No
Word count: 193686
Read Count: 19509
Published: 18/12/08
Updated: 10/11/09

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Title: Chapter 18: I'm Real

:yay:  I have been stalking the boards all week hoping you were going to update this story!!! 

I loved Tina taking care of her man!!!  I am glad they are close to fixing things between them.

And can I say how much I dislike Shalay right now?  Everyone has put the Shad thing behind them except her...Tina has never made any hint she was interested in her man...that is foul that she would let the petty jealousy ruin their freindship!  Now her stupid butis trying to get them all killed!

Chris is going to go ballistic once he realizes she snuck out the house!!

 

I hope you post the next chapter soon!

 



Author's Response: I won't keep you waiting to long girl.  Thank you for commenting. You are a fateful reader andi really apreciate it.

 Reviewer: Redbird Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/01/09
Title: Chapter 19: Dance! Dance!

WOW...there was so much in that chapter that I can hardly process it all!

The one thing I do know is that Shalay is a trick of the highest order!!  I cannot believe she tried to seduce Chris like that!  

And Lloyd's dumb behind needs to be dealt with!  I can't believe Chris has allowed him to survive this long!!

The girls know they are ALL in big trouble with their men!  

I can't wait to see how much Mama Jones is going to charge to give her daughter some blood because we all know that she is not going to donate any blood for free!!

I hope Tina and the baby are okay...I would say that I hope Tina and Chris work things out, but even I am starting to wonder how healthy this relationship is for Tina...

 Girl this story just gets better and better!  I can't wait for the next update!!

 



Author's Response:

there's a lot more to come.

 Reviewer: Redbird Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/01/09
Title: Chapter 21: Redemption

Aww... dang girl, this was awesome! Seeing him break almost had me in tears :( 

Wow...just when you think you can't despise Shalay anymore she sinks to a whole new level of skankdom (is that a word?)  I feel bad for Shad once he finds out what Lay has done...I did thoroughly enjoy Chris beating the heck out of Lloyd!!!  

I loved that they are going to let Peaches sit in on the surgery...although I was hoping she would have pulled through and not lose the baby...

I can't wait for the next update to find out what happens next!

 

 Reviewer: Redbird Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/02/09
Title: Chapter 20: Life Line!

Girl you know this story is the BOMB!!!

I am actually proud of Chris, he has been showing a lot of maturity in this chapter!  The scene with him and Tina was heartbreaking!  I am glad she is fighting for her and the baby!

I couldn't beleive Tina's mom coming in with all that confusion!  That was a hot mess!  I am glad her sister stuck up for her!

I almost...almost felt bad for Rhiana when Chris told her he was taking her son...but I got over it!

I do feel bad for Shad...he is going to be heartbroken when finds out all that Lay has been up to.

Shalay is working my last nerve however...I am intrigued to see what is going to happen in the next chapter!

I am so glad to see an update to this story and can't wait for the next one!!! 

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you saw some maturity because that's what I was trying to show. Thank you. 

Thank God you got over feeling a little bad for Rihanna lol.

 

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Date: 03/02/09
Title: Chapter 22: Glass Houses

Thank you thank you thank you for another update to my favorite story!!! 

I am glad that Tina pulled through and I CANNOT believe Shalay had the nerve to show up at the hospital...and Tina's mom is plain crazy!!!

I love GH too...although not as much as I used to...and Zacchara is definitely crazy!  I can't wait to see how this all plays out!!

 

 

 



Author's Response:

yay! it's your favorite!  I have to say thank you for the support. 

I use to love GH but now I don't watch it. It's a disapointment

 Reviewer: Redbird Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/02/09
Title: Chapter 23: Lights Out

How in the world could you not like this chapter!!! It had me glued to my seat the whole time!!

I am so glad Chris found her before that sleeze got what he wanted from her...

I am liking the Shantell Shad hookup and I am LOVING that Shalay is finally getting the beatdown she sorely deserves!!!

I can't wait to see who the traitor is...I have an idea but will wait to see if I am right!!

 



Author's Response: I"m dieing to know who you think it is!  You have to tell me!

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Date: 11/02/09
Title: Chapter 24: Can You Stand the Rain

My crack is back and it was freaking awesome!!!  I loved it!  I am glad he came clean with her and she told him about what the doctor said...I wish she had let him know about Sorrel though...

 

And I KNEW that Nick was the snitch!!  He didn't react right when she ran into Lloyd that day outside the hair salon!!  I still think one other person is a traitor we will see if I am right!!

 

Hopefully the next update is coming soon!!!  *hint hint*  LOL



Author's Response: Lol I won't keep you waiting as long as I did.  I'm glad you liked the add.

 Reviewer: Redbird Signed
Date: 28/02/09
Title: Chapter 25: Don't Let Me Get Me

Ohhh boy...this is about to get ugly!!!  I had forgotten she still didn't remember what had happened to her...in my mind they had already worked through this...

And I really hate that she still won't tell him what Sorrel did to her or that he has been calling her and leaving crude messages...she gets mad at him for keeping secrets now here she is doing it...

Girl your writing is off the chain!  You definitely get me caught up in the personal drama these two are forever creating for one another!!!  Hopefully one day they will stop trying to protect the other one and lear to just be honest!!

Oh and thank you thank you thank you for two updates to this wonderful story in one weekend!! 

 

 

 

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Date: 02/03/09
Title: Chapter 26: 2 Wrongs

Aww.. this was so sad...their whole relationship has just been a series of misunderstandings...

The saddest part was the statement Chris made  The one time he wasn’t at fault and it was the end for them. 

I hope that Tina doesn't do anything crazy...once she sees the whole tape she will feel so awful about what she did...

 

Thanks for another supply of fic crack!!!  I will be looking out for my next dose!  

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Date: 09/03/09
Title: Chapter 27: Love In This Club

Yeah yeah yeah my crack is back!!!  I so love this story!

I am glad Tina did not sleep with Raymond.  That would have most defintely made things worse!  Now that she has demanded that he come clean with her, she needs to tell him about Sorrel and his threats!!

I am so glad you did not abandon this story!  Can't wait for the next update!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I didn't abandon it.  I just needed a break.

 

 Reviewer: Redbird Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/04/09
Title: Chapter 28: The Terminal

EEP!  How did I miss a chapter!!!  I am so sorry!  I loved the way they decided to kill time waiting for their flight...

 

Hmmm what in the world is he going to do to Raymond????  



Author's Response: Girl don't stress it. I knew you would be back.

 Reviewer: Redbird Signed
Date: 24/05/09
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 27 - Secrets (Part 2)

Ooooh Crapola is about to jump off now!!!

Sonny is Tina's Father???  Zachara is his brother???  WOW this is about to get GOOD!!!

Hopefully Tina or Shan one will finally let Chris know what Sorrell has been saying!

And I am geeked that Shan and Shad hooked up...hopefully it will become something serious.

 

 Reviewer: Redbird Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/05/09
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 27 - Come Clean (Part 3)

Oh boy...she really should have told him what was going on! She knows that it doesn't take much to set that boy off!!  He is going to snap once he talks to Sonny!!

Oooh you can smell the crapola about to hit the fan!!  I can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response: lol

 Reviewer: Redbird Signed
Date: 27/05/09
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 28 – Love Don't Come Easy

Very intense!  For the first time in this story I actually got a little frustrated with Chris!!  He seems to be spiraling out of control a little bit!  I am glad that he realized his anger was to the point he could actually hurt Tina and backed off.

I like how the drama and the tension is building!  You can sense that things are going to jump off soon!!  And I can't wait to see it all unfold!!! 

 



Author's Response:

Good Good!  I'm glad you got frustrated with him.  I wanted to show that Chris is still Chris to a certain degree and he'll never be perfect.  He's a flawed man. 

Thanks chica!

 Reviewer: Redbird Signed
Date: 02/06/09
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 29 – Volume Overload

Oooh Raymond thought he caught a beat down before....SMH...

I can't beleive he lied on Tina like that!!!  She should beat his butt before Chris is able to lay a hand on him.

I CANNOT wait to see what he does to Shalay!!!

You can still tellt hings are going to pop off soon!  I have my popcorn and am sitting back to watch!!!

 

 

 



Author's Response: There's definitely some drama ahead!

 Reviewer: Redbird Signed
Date: 15/06/09
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 30 - Dance With My Father

Oooh Snap!!!  I hope Tina beats her straight down!!! 

I am glad that Chris is going to come out in the open with everything!

And of course Shalay and Sorrell are going to activate their plan at the engagement party!!

I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: Redbird Signed
Date: 20/06/09
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 31 – This Time Imperfect

I have soooooo missed this story and I am glad it is back!!  And better than ever!

I am glad that Tina did not trip too hard on Chris for keeping the details of her father from her!  I am also glad that trick Shalay got hers!  It was a long time coming, and I am glad that Tina got to tag that ass before Chris finished her off!!

I am sad to know that this story is coming to an end, but I am excited to know there is a potential for a sequel!!

Thank you so much for coming back to update this one!  

 



Author's Response: You're welcome, and thank you for reading and always leaving a comment.

 Reviewer: Redbird Signed
Date: 10/11/09
Fastlane by Thespiandiva
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Sienna has always felt alone in life, but an unexpected message from beyond the grave will change everything she holds true.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 1361
Read Count: 1089
Published: 08/02/09
Updated: 08/02/09

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

This is off to an amazing start!!  I can't wait to see where this goes!

 Reviewer: Redbird Signed
Date: 08/02/09
The Art of the Steal by Reese
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 272]
Summary:

 Banner

Art Historian Aidan Bell and student Collista Carson can't stand each other. Yet for some reason, he asks her to be his new assistant.  Although doubtful that they can co-exist without killing each other, Collista has her grade in his class to think about and so accepts the position.  One thing leads to another, and before long, the two are finding it hard to maintain their professional distance.

Then the specter of Aidan's murky past casts its shadow over the forbidden relationship.  Add a priceless painting, a ruthless art collector and soon Collista finds herself in the position of having to help Aidan solve a mystery before he goes down for the count.  Will he have enough time to teach her what she needs to know about the art of the steal?  

Banner by Idjunkie



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 26
Completed:Yes
Word count: 131714
Read Count: 89885
Published: 22/02/09
Updated: 22/02/10

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Title: Chapter 26: Chapter Twenty-Four

Absolutey phenomenal!!!  I was floored when I realized that Rocky was part of the scheme!  I totally did not see that one coming!

It was good to see Dr. Bell so proud of his dad despite the life of crime he had chosen to live.

You did an amazing job on this one Reese!  I can't wait to see what happens next!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, Red.  I'm absolutely tickled you guys didn't catch on.  I'm a sly one, aren't I?  LOL   Anyway, I happy I didn't give that one away. 

Yes, Aidan's connection and love for his Dad remained unchanged even though choice to be a criminal albeit an elite one caused Aidan nothing but trouble.  As for Andre (Aidan's father), there's more to his story than what has been revealed. 

Thanks for reviewing and letting me what you thought about the story and it's (sorta) end.

 Reviewer: Redbird Signed
Date: 23/02/10
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Fifteen

Awesome chapter!  I was actually beginning to think Aidan had something to do with the theft of the art.  I am glad to know it was his dad and not him!

I can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thanks Red.  Yeah, Aidan's reluctance to come clean to Collista was starting to make him seem like he had something to hide in regards to himself.  Stay tuned.  There's lots more to come.

Thanks for reviewing.

 Reviewer: Redbird Signed
Date: 16/09/09
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Fourteen

Thanks for another update! 

I can't wait to find out what is going on myself!!  Loved the update!



Author's Response:

Thanks Red.  Glad you enjoyed it.  Stay tuned for an interesting evening with Aidan.  I'm sure Collista is on tenterhooks.

Thanks for reviewing. 

 

 Reviewer: Redbird Signed
Date: 13/09/09
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Sixteen

Awww...they are so sweet...but yeah you can smell the DRAMA coming!

 

Loved the update!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it, Nene.  Yep.  Drama is definitely right around the corner.

Thanks for reviewing.

 Reviewer: Redbird Signed
Date: 24/09/09
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Twelve

WOW...this story is off the chain...I am interested to see what Carla has over Bell's head...

Iris is an amazing friend and Colista is blessed to have such a good friend!!

Can't wait to see what happens at the gala...

 



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks Red.  I really appreciate the kind word and am glad you're enjoying the story.  Yes, Bell is in quite a quandry with this unscrupulous woman. 

Isn't Iris a peach?  I love her devotion to Collista and the fact that she's so down to earth.  She presents a really solid contrast to Collista. 

Thanks for reviewing.   

 

 Reviewer: Redbird Signed
Date: 08/09/09
It's Not Right by BleedingPen
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

 

Friend or Foe Challenge

Her whole life was shattered, how was she suppose to piece it back together? The sharp shards were too much for her to handle.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters
Challenges: Friend or Foe?
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3898
Read Count: 6239
Published: 07/03/09
Updated: 07/03/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Characters

An absolutely beautiful story!  It was heartbreaking to read, but amazing all the same!  I am glad that Toni did not give up on Layla and continued to be there for her friend. 

I am also glad that she got through rehab and that her daughter recovered from the poison!

 

Awesome job! :)

Reviewer: Redbird Signed
Date: 31/03/09
Your Life Without Me by TokenBlackGirl
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 20]
Summary:

This is his life without her.

Written for the April "New Beginnings" Challenge.  

 



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Makemba 'Kem' Likasu
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Kem/Carter (ER)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Challenges: New Beginnings
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2493
Read Count: 3131
Published: 28/04/09
Updated: 28/04/09

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Title: Chapter 1: your life without me.

Wow...that was beautiful!!  I loved it!  I am glad they were able to realize their lives were better together than they were apart!

 



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading redbird, I'm glad you liked it! :D

Reviewer: Redbird Signed
Date: 28/04/09