Penname: miquerida [Contact]

Real name: Chel

Member Since: 16/11/08

Membership status: Member

Bio:  

Different But Same 

 

I LOVE reading all types of fiction and non-fiction.  I LOVE reading the stories on The Chamber and look forward to reading more of the most WONDERFUL stories written by some of the most TALANTED writers I've read!




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[Reviews - 1636]
Summary:

 

 Perhaps I have a little of the monster in me after all...

How much would you sacrifice for those you love? To save her father, Sunshine must give up the life she's longed for to a powerful gangster.

Can she go with him and keep herself?

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: Beastly Things
Chapters: 43
Completed:Yes
Word count: 183149
Read Count: 410126
Published: 05/12/09
Updated: 22/03/10


Title: Chapter 36: I'll Send You My Best Part 1

SIGH, Nikki got HIS Sunshine back to him safely.  I'm in AWE of your wirting Onimosity. I'm going to give a more detailed review later because it is so much yummy goodness in this chapter; Can't wait for part 2!

Chel 

 

Reviewer: miquerida Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/02/10

Title: Chapter 1: Who they are

I forgot to ask: do you still need a beta?

Chel 

 

Reviewer: miquerida Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/02/10

Title: Chapter 1: Who they are

Lord have mercy! I just discovered this story and I LOVE it. Girl, you are doing the damn thang! Can't wait for the next installment! Chel

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Date: 18/02/10

Title: Chapter 40: I'm Gonna Get Up...

WHAT A CLIFFHANGER!  I hope that Sunny doesn't get shoot. Actually I hope that Sergi PUNK ASS is the one shot.  I CAN'T WAIT for the next chapter. PLEASE update SOON!!!!!!!!

Chel 

 

Reviewer: miquerida Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/03/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 4]
Summary:

The Hidden secret behind friends that tore the ROC family apart.

Starring

 

Shawn Jay Z Carter

Beyonce Knowles

Aaliyah Haughton

Damon Dash

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Miscellaneous, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 1715
Read Count: 900
Published: 12/04/10
Updated: 12/04/10


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I enjoyed reading this story even though it was diifficult reading with paragraph spaces. Ohter than than it's a GREAT story and I hope you update soon!

Chel

Reviewer: miquerida Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02/06/10

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 222]
Summary:

Island Interlude is the story of Gabrielle Hall, a young woman who teaches physical education and K.C. Whitfield an architect who comes to the fictional island of St. Sebastian. They meet and sparks fly but K.C. isn't who he seems and Gabrielle must decide if she can live with who he really is.    

island interlude                

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 47
Completed:No
Word count: 97729
Read Count: 179408
Published: 07/05/10
Updated: 01/02/11


Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Hey girl!

I'm praying about your medical situation;  Know that God does not give us any more than we can handle.

LOVE THE CHAPTER!

Chel



Author's Response:

Hey Chel,

I appreciate you reading and reviewing as usual and I definitely appreciate the prayers.

Thanks Chel.

Reviewer: miquerida Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/06/10

Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I wish there was emot-icons I could use to convey my shock at all the revelations.

But why do I have a feeling that the relevations are just beginning. . .

Damn girl, you are writing your arse off!

Can't wait for the next installment!

Chel

 

 

 



Author's Response: Hey chel, I am glad I could give you a thrill. There are a few more things we don't know but will find out soon. I wish I was writing something else off, I like my ass! How about if you say I'm writing my stomach off or my thighs, wait no the one breast that I have left! It may take a minute or two for me to post another chapter. I thank you for your support as usual girl. Love ya!

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Date: 11/09/10

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Girl, Ch.24 is OFF THE HOOK! LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT.

I'm glad he explained himself to her.  They needed that talk.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!

 



Author's Response: Hey chel thank you. They did need that talk but that is not the only one they need to have. You'll see what I mean soon. Keep reading, I appreciate it your support.

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Date: 08/06/10

Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Ole girl Tifanni couldn't leave quietly.  Damn what a skank!

I was ready to take off my earings and grease up when that skank was talking shit to KC and Rielle.  Guess I ain't a lady because ol' girl would have left with a good whooped ass! 

Good work as always!

Chel



Author's Response:

Now tell me the truth which would you prefer a cold jail cell the night before the biggest events of Carnival or your hot man jamming behind you while you are getting your party on? Let Tiffani get tossed in jail I'm gonna party!!! Hey!!! Remember Gabrielle got the man so she can afford to be the bigger woman and take all of that yummy K.C. goodness and revel in it!!! Gotta think bigger picture here girl!!!! Thanks for reading Chel.

 

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Date: 05/08/10

Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Oh, the aftermath of bringing sexy back is just as delicious as the main course lol.

I cracked up when she was looking at KC sideways when he said he wanted seconds and thirds. . .which he got anyway.  Damn he's smooth.

I so glad that KC recipcated Rielle's love.   It was perfect!

 

 



Author's Response: More sexy to come Chel, wait and see. Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

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Date: 10/07/10

Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Perfection as always!  Come on, loan KC out to a sista lol!

Chel



Author's Response: After I wear him out what do you thnk is gonna be left for anyone else? Just kidding my husband doesn't go in for threesomes. Thanks for reading Chel as usual and for reviewing. Appreciate you.

Reviewer: miquerida Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/07/10

Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Damn, KC got grilled.   He should check to see if he had any grill marks on that magnificiant body lol.

Fantastic as always;  Can't wait to meet KC's people!

Chel 

 



Author's Response: Hey Chel, Haha love the grilling jokes. I am never far from the food thing am I. Thanks for the support and keep reading we will be meeting K.C.'s folks soon.

Reviewer: miquerida Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/07/10

Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Wow! You described Carival so well that felt like I was actually there lol.

Poor KC's mother!  It's sad that see had to go through it, but I'm happy that she still has loyal friends on the island.

Tiffani can kindly take her phony self back to where she came.  KC is worried about Rielle's reaction, but I think she can handle such a vapid creature like Tifanni!

Can't wait for the next update!

Chel 

 



Author's Response:

Hey Chel, you need to experience a real Carnival! Nothing like seeing old friends and meeting new ones, listening to good music and shaking your booty getting your dance on, and eating good food I know always with the food. Tiffani will be taken care of never fear. Thank you girl I appreciate you.

 

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Date: 30/07/10

Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

WHOA!

Now that's a cliffhanger!

LOVE Walt Willey and Beverly Johnson!  GREAT choices for KC's parents.

Can't wait for the next installment.

chel

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response: Hey Chel, wait until you meet his brother and sister and Uncle Frank. I think you'll approve those choices too. Next installment manana. Thanks for hanging tough with me girl, I really appreciate that.

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Date: 29/08/10

Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

It's a tough situation for all:

Rielle found out that her white boyfriend is biracial; she loves him but that's a biggie to keep from someone, esp. since he shows no visiable signs of being biracial.  I know they will work it out though.

KC found out the truth of his mother's previous life in st. sebestian.  It seems like his mother has a lot of healing left to do. Which brings his father in because his main goals is to protect his wife and children.

Marcus lashed out.  His mother is hurting, which makes his father hurt.  His brother is hurting, therefore he would want to lash out at the person who he precieves is hurting KC.  I don't think that Marcus is a bad guy at all; he is watching his family hurting and he wants to stop it.  I'm sure that once Marcus and Rielle get to know each other better,, he will see her as the good woman she is.

I'm glad that Uncle Frank came with some insight; it helped me to see how everyone got to this point.

GREAT chapter and I can't wait for the next installment!

Chel



Author's Response: Hello Chel, I'm so glad you are still enjoying the Island Interlude gang. Rielle and K.C. have a lot to talk about but will either one be open to the other's point of view? It sounds like Marcus has made up his mind already but Uncle Frank is trying to be the voice of reason. Thank you for input as usual you know I really appreciate it.

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Date: 09/10/10

Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Girl, this is SO GOOD!  I LOVED the party and how you had everyone having a good time before the @#$% hit the fan.  The food was on point as usual and made me very hungry lol!

What did KC find out about his mother?  I hope he finds Patrick Roebuck and kick his ass! YOU DO NOT MESS WITH MAMA!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Chel

 



Author's Response: Hey girl, that was a rocking party. Everyone had fun but you know into every life a little rain must fall. But rain makes the flowers grow. Patrick got what was coming to him and the next chapter is soon to come. Thanks for reading & reviewing Chel I know you've got lots going on and I appreciate you taking time out to do both. 

Reviewer: miquerida Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/07/10

Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Hey Girl!

The loving was ON POINT as usual!

BAD K.C. using lovemaking as distraction lol.

He needs to come clean with Rielle before somebody else tells the rest of the story. . .

FANTASTIC work as always girl, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Chel



Author's Response:

Miquerida, I thank you for your kind words and look forwarding to saying the same about Jack & Jill. You know men can't help it, when you put some good loving on them they don't know what to do with themself. Thank you again and enjoy.

Reviewer: miquerida Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/08/10

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

First of all, welcome back mami! And you're so welcome about the prayers and emails.  We all need prayer lol.

Girl, I don't think Rielle is ready for some K.C.  But she's going to get him anyways and it's gonna be so delicious!

Chel



Author's Response:

Thank you girl. It's good to be back. I appreciate you so much.

Ready or not she's gonna get him and he's gonna have his hands full. Glad you enjoyed the chaps. It was an experience to be sure. 

 

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Date: 04/07/10

Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

DAMN!!

I need I need me some KC lol!

Great update!

Chel



Author's Response: I wish I could write us all into the story and give us all K.C.s.. Thank you Chel.

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Date: 04/07/10

Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

WHOA!!

What a display of fireworks on this July 4th day!

Damn, Damn and DAMN

TOO HOT.  

I'M REALLY QUITE SPEACHLESS OVER HERE LOL.

GREAT UPDATE and Happy July 4th!

Chel



Author's Response: Hi Chel,  bringing the grown and sexy back. Hope I gave you the bang four your buck since you've invested your time into my story. Thank you Chel.

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Date: 04/07/10

Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Girl, this chapter is ON POINT AS ALWAYS!

The Carnival pics are SO BEAUTIFUL and the details are so vivd I feel like I'm THERE lol!

Alex is cute.

Tiffani is not only a skank, but she's a idiot skank.  I didn't understand why she would cheat on the FIONE ass K.C., but know I do.  STUPID SKANK.

I'm glad that K.C. came clean with Rielle on some of what's going on; he just needs to tell it all and know that Rielle is ALWAYS in his corner!

chel



Author's Response: Hey chel, that chapter was practically wrote itself. There is nothing like a good Carnival and quite a few cities have them, so depending on where you live you might check it out. Girl Alex is a hunk of burning love. Tiffani is a hot mess and she needs to get herself together. If you know you can't be faithful be honest. I'm glad he came clean too, we'll have to wait and see about the rest. Rielle has been very understanding and loving she does accept all of him and I hpe she can accept this too. Thank you for taking the time to read and rreview. Waiting on M&MS girl!

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Date: 14/08/10

Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Oh Junebug66!

This chapter is SO ROMANTIC!

LOVED the food and ESPECIALLY LOVED the Jewelry!!

And yes, we all should have a man so attentive lol!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Chel

 



Author's Response: Hey Chel. Yes we should all have a partner that is so romantic and we should return the favor too. I am pleased you are enjoying them. Thank you for hanging tough with me. I appreciate every e-mail and all of your prayers. Thank you. Next chapter is coming up in a little bit.

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Date: 20/06/10

Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Damn!

That was HOT. VERY HOT. Did I meantion it was HOT lol.

Glad that Rielle and KC got their HOT reunion; they are gonna wear each other out!

Fantastic as always and can't wait for the next installment!

Chel



Author's Response:

Hey Chel, after all of the drama with the break up and not seeing each other for six weeks they have a lot to work out (in and out of bed). Things are back on track for Gabrielle and K.C. and they have lots to be thankful for. I think you'll like it.

Thanks for reading, enjoying and giving me your support from the very beginning. I truly appreciate it.

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Date: 08/01/11

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Table of Contents
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0
Completed:No
Word count: 0
Read Count: 0
Published: 01/01/70
Updated: 01/01/70


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PLEASE DO NOT DELETE THIS STORY! THIS IS A GOOD STORY! Yes, it has a lot of spelling and other errors, but you are just getting back into writing if I read your bio correctly. 

I read all the comments.  Some of them were VERY HARSH, but the majority of the comments were CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM.  I HOPE you did not take any of my comments has harsh or negetive; that was not my intention.  If I did get you upset with my comments, I owe an  you an apology. I AM SORRY.  It takes guts for a person to post their writing to the masses , and sometimes people are just HARSH.  But, I don't think ALL readers and writers on this site are like that (I can only speak for myself)  Myself, I LOVE reading QUALITY writing that has me sitting on the edge of my desk waiting for the next chapter.  Life's Lesson is one of those stories that have me like that.

When I offered to see if you wanted a beta reader, I was not trying to be a smart ass or funny or condesenting. I was only trying to see if you wanted help with your writing.  Having a beta reader is GREAT tool for some writers because the beta can see errors or can give suggustions that the author may have missed.  If you are like some writers I know, they get so caught up in writing the story, to get what is in their imagination on paper that they sometime can't get across the motives of the characters andor story to the reader.  The reader CAN NOT read what's on the writer's mind; it's up to the writer to get their vision on the page.

I see GREAT POTIENTIAL in your writing; you are weaving a story that has people wanting to read more.   I enjoy reading Faded Love and Life's Lesson.  I'm REALLY getting into Life's Lesson.

DO NOT GIVE UP because of what you percieve as negetive comments or harsh criticism.  Again I can only speak for myself, but my intentions what to let you know what a GREAT story you have and to point out what areas that I thought needing improving.

If you want to delete or recreate this story it's your decision.  I will say that your read count is VERY HIGH for a newbie,  errors and all. That should tell you that people are interesting in hearing your stories.

Good Luck and Peace be to you either way you decide to go.

Chel

Reviewer: miquerida Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 31/05/10

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 4]
Summary: This is sort of an auto-bio of how I've been feeling about a certain guy.

Table of Contents
Categories: Miscellaneous, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 744
Read Count: 1926
Published: 09/07/10
Updated: 09/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: Just How I Feel

This is GOOD! Yes, writing is good fo the soul!

The only thing I willl say is do what your heart and instincts tells you. . .

Chel

 

Reviewer: miquerida Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/07/10