That was a pretty good start.  I was confused though a bit.  Some of what Angel said was in italic does that mean she was talking to herself in thought or did she say those things out loud cause Mrs. Nevells responded to her.

Also in the beginning you had the same thought in the first two sentences but worded differently.

Again nice start I am interested in seeing what you have to come for this story so will be looking out for you next updates.  I hope they will be coming soon.  Also congrats on starting you first story here I am sure you will be preceived well.

OH! It is coming along quiet nicely. More please I am enjoying it.

Angel finally got a job and it sounds like one she is truly going to enjoy and thribe in.  The mysterious stranger that almost hit her has been thinking about her as well.  I can't wait till they met up again.

Thanks for the update.

That was a wonderful start....I started reading this on TST but with VC they let you know when and update is in place so I came over here.

The characters you chose for Farrah and Finola are they related in real life they look so similar?  So who is to be Sammy's love interest Farrah or Finola...I'm I getting ahead of myself more the likely yes but hey I had to ask.

I am so happy that Sammy was able to get Fair to her gig in time.  She is so sweet and trying to make it with an 18 month old and doing it by herself shows much character and determination to she the nasayers they are wrong wrong wrong....I thought so sure that Jess would not be so judgmental since she herself had children young and she herself did not complete college cause she said it was not for her, but you always want better for you children so I guess I can understand her on that part.  Jalin father bet not come back in the picture when his hoop dream flop cause he is definitely a dog.  So will we be seeing any of Farrah and Finola's siblings from another mother like Quincey and Bristol?

Great start thank you for sharing can't wait for what you have next for us.

You know I have always liked the saying...People with glass houses shouldn't throw stones.  I guess Jessy is findng that out the hard way.  I understand that she wanted better for her children but she CANNOT run their lives.  She has to just be there and be their support system when things go wrong and have confidence in herself that she raised them right.  Apparently she has no faith in her parenting.

Sammy is so cute and has fallen for Farreh already sweet and she is close behind him.  

I can't wait til Pat and Far meet up at the barbeque.

I hope Jessyce get's her shyte together and get that chip off her shoulder and stop trying to run everyone else's life namely her children.  Her's doesn't sound exactly kosher.

Great update more please.  Thanks.

Damn! And that is truly going to make it even worse for Don-Don and Ken caus she is going to go and open her big mouth to Garrett.

Thank you for always responding to my reviews it makes me feel like you care that I read your writings.  Just love it and your writing. 

I enjoyed Don and Ken's story. 

Thank you so much for sharing them with us.

I am sorry to hear that your health has not been all that up to standards.

I wish you wellness and continued writings.

sweet nice meeting.  I think Don and Ken are going to be good together.  She is blushing he made her blush.

Great update 

Ahhhh! Thank you for the update.  Donovan is so sweet and gentlemanly.  I guess he found out enough about her for one night. Plus she answered his question just as he would have liked her to.

Kendra is a sweetie pie and she was made just for Donovan and sent to him just as he requested and I am happy he recognizes that.

Now you know I am greedy but I will try to curve it but I want more please thank you.

*Clapping* Wonderful update...Donovan is so funny and he knows what and who he wants.

Yeah he knew Taylor was not his for real cause he didn't go this hard for her as he is for Ken.

More please...Thank You

Oh my Kendra is fighting it so hard and I can understand why they work together and it could cause complications and I just don't like her boss David he seems like a shady mo'fo to me.

I do think they are so cute together and Donovan is so out there with Ken he knows she is the one for him and he is so going after her no matter what anyone else says.  And she is trying to keep it light not because of another man cause this man has her doing things she would not normally do but she keeps putting that factor in there that they work together and apparently there are folk out there that want to see her fail and I already think it's David.

Great update...can't wait for the next one please don't torture me with a  long delay :D

YEAHHH! DS1!!!! I am so happy to see you back.  I have missed you.  I hope you are feeling better and have been taking care of yourself as you see I toned down the stalker mode and waited patiently :D aint you proud of me? LOL!!! But with that said can I turn it back up?  I'm just saying?  LOL! At least seems like you are feeling a little bit better since you spit out this awesome update, don't over do it though continue to take care of yourself and make a full recovery. 

I loved it Kendra is so fiening for Donovan she should just put herself out of her misery...but I understand that she wants her career too but she doesn't have a clause to contend with correct or did I miss that somewhere and she would ONLY be with Donovan :D.

I so was hoping that she wouldn't use the cream and her instincts about her boss was kicking or would have kicked in but guess not.  I am hoping that this was a one time occurance but then again this story would be all peaches and roses without the drama which is all good and well by me but I don't think that's the direction you are going for and hey a little drama makes you stronger right? right? 

Oh snap winkle! I kind of figured you would have a new couple for me to love in Dani and Chad and it is coming to light kinda sorta.  Do we have pictures of those two or am I getting ahead of myself?  :D  If so please forgive me I enjoy your stories and couples so much any who...I will stop with the rambling.

There whole date was so romantic and sweet and it sounded so fun. 

Don-Don was afraid of butterflies when he was a boy I wonder if he grew out of it.  Ken did not try to bring it up close to him and I don't think he was saying the butterfly was beautiful when she said it was gorgous :D  I'm just saying.

I love this couple and Rachel is going out with Garrett huh does baby girl have no standards other then a football player and rich gee whiz.

I wonder who is having pictures taken of them it has to be btwn Garrett and David I think it is Garrett b/c he is going out with Rachel and she has the tendency to talk too freaking much...and her not knowing that Garrett doesn't like Don well there you have it.  He only probably asked her out just so he could find out what Ken was up to and see if she was with Don.  

DAMN! DAMN! DAMN!

Great update as always can't wait for more