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Real name: Stephanie

Member Since: 11/12/08

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Hi all I am an advit reader love all types of genres but have to say that I/R has become my most favorite for the last 3 plus years.  I have found a lot of my favorite authors are here and looking forward to reading lots of their work and finding more favorites.

 



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Beast by Onimosity
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1636]
Summary:

 

 Perhaps I have a little of the monster in me after all...

How much would you sacrifice for those you love? To save her father, Sunshine must give up the life she's longed for to a powerful gangster.

Can she go with him and keep herself?

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: Beastly Things
Chapters: 43
Completed:Yes
Word count: 183149
Read Count: 419676
Published: 05/12/09
Updated: 22/03/10

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Title: Chapter 40: I'm Gonna Get Up...

OH MY GOSH BECKY! NO! NO! NO! NO! U DIDN'T JUST STOP RIGHT THERE!?

Please don't leave us in suspense to long.  I needs to know what happened.  I think Sunshine or Cilla shoot (no pun intended) maybe even Nikolai got shot before Nikolai was able to get the gun away from Sergei. Maybe he does not realize it because of the rage and adrenline going thru his body right now with the adasity of Sergei's plan though not a very good one had to kill him.  Sergei was working straight off of emotion not a logical thought in this whole plot.

 DAMN! DAMN! DAMN!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE HURRY UP AND UPDATE AGAIN!

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Date: 11/03/10
Title: Chapter 34: Around the Kinda Misery I Find Part 2

Always! Always a wonderful update.  I was thinking that something was going to break out at the rally.  I am so very very pleased and happy that Sunny did not go with them.  I hope that she is safe there in the safe room on the compound.

I wonder why she does not like Royce he is a recovering alcoholic like Hershell.  Is it because he has a family and may have put his family thru some things but she must also look at it this way he was strong enough to be a recovering not a continous alcholic.

He has better strength then her father ever had.

That was some wise advice that Achan gave and I hope that Sunny can take it and have faith and finally let herself love Niki completely and let him hear the words he so desperatly wants to hear.  "I Love You!"

Thank you for the update....I see we got two in one day you are the bomb chica!

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Date: 16/02/10
Title: Chapter 35: Around the Kinda Misery I Find Part 3

Wonderful! Just plain ole Wonderful.

She is going home...she is going to be with her man....he is cutting his trip short as her group is cutting their trip short.

I hope nothing happens in between time they are to meet up again with each other and I hope that she did not tell him that she loves him because she wants to do it in person.

Thank you for the great update and the marvelous story!

 

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Date: 16/02/10
Title: Chapter 2: Satisfy this Hungriness

Oh I like so very much so far. 

What does "dyrka glupaja" mean?

Nikolai does not seem like a very nice man but I guess business is business.

Ok, her father is a straight dumbass that is all I have to say about that one. 

When they were handing out common sense he was too occupied with playing craps to get in the line.  Hell he should have been in that line twice.

He is suppose to be taking care of his children not the other way around. 

Loved the update and story going to read more.  

Thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

So sorry it took me forever to respond to this. I had the translation and lost it but if I'm remembering correctly, dyrka glupaja is like a silly, little girl.

 Thank you for all your kind reviews! 

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Date: 06/12/09
Title: Chapter 3: You Touch Me

WOW!!!!

Damn! Nikolai  don't play around when it comes to something that he wants and he said he hates to wait but he has decided to give her a week...

Why is it when he said he wanted a kiss that I just knew it was going to be south of the border.

Goodness gracious this man is hot and dangerous and scary to boot.  I hope baby girl knows what she is getting herself into and daddy dearest bet not show any kind of stupidness.

Nikolai said that as long as her dad incurred debt and he pay for that debt then she was his.  I would tell daddy dearest to cut the shyte quick like and in a hurry.

This was a great update and this is a great story.

Thank you for sharing.

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Date: 06/12/09
Title: Chapter 4: With your kiss my life begins

OMG!!! I am so tired of her father that is a selfish SOB...He ruined her mother's life with his schemes and get rich quick ideas.

He selfishly wanted to hock the bracelet since he would not get enough at the pawn to go and gamble it away because that is surely what he would have done.

Then when she tells him that Nikolai wants her to be his until all his debt and any occurring debt is payed he says for how long...then he doesn't understand why she is upset.  Like she said she is the only one in this looking out for herself and Benji cause she definitely can't depend on her father. 

Nikolai said he would not break her well I would say he is off to a pretty good start but I have faith in our girl that she is strong and will make it thru.

Darla I can see right now it going to be problems for Sunny...I don't know how and I don't know when but I think she is going to be a problem that is if Sunny takes the alternative....which in this case I can't see her not doing so because again like she said there are other lives at stake other then her father's now.  She can't even take the bracelet pawn it and make a run for it.  Nikolai has gotten her in his sights now and I don't see him being a man giving up so easily.

Sergei is a sweetie I hope he is careful with Sunny I see him falling for her you see how anger Nikolai got when he thought that she had touch him.

At least Sunny can continue her education but she has to come back to him every night. I wonder will he move Benji in as well so she can at least have contact with her brother as for her father at this point in time I don't care cause he has a problem and he has drug his family down with him.

I can't wait for the next update which I hope is soon.

Thanks for sharing.

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Date: 06/12/09
Title: Chapter 5: We are creatures of the wind

I am so loving this story.  I love Sunny she is so smart, witty, and a take charge kind of girl.

I like that she went in and made her demands for herself and her brother.  I seriously think that Nikolai could fall in love with her not just want to own and possess her but I also think that Sergei is falling for her and therefore lies a problem it would seem.

I see that Nikolai has good qualities and I am drawn to his strongness...his Alpha but Sergei is so sweet and observous and would be a very attenative boyfriend not saying that Nikolai would but then again maybe he would because he is a busy man.

I know that Priscilla is going to love Sunny and I love that Sunny asked for her own room, asked for him to take her on a date to the opera and asked the any gifts that come from him come from him truly and not his flunkies.  I like that she demands her props she is doing this for her family well her brother and her future why not do it on her "FEET" I love how smart and determined she is for such a young age but she has had to be with the kind of father she has.

I hope that she gets to see her brother on a regular base like for x-mas and during other holidays and if things turn out better at the fortress Nikolai calls home.  

Thank you for the update I so need another one please.

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Date: 07/12/09
Title: Chapter 6: Wild is the Wind

That was deep and she is opening up to him I think if not I don't think she could have given herself so freely to him even if he made her feel good.

This is a great story and I don't think that Nikolai is going to escape this relationship with his heart in tack.  I think he is going to fall for her and fall for her hard.  Though there is a big age gap I think Sunny is the one that is gong to be able to tame the Beast so to speak.

I did not hear anything about protection so I take it that Sunny is on birth control pills. :D

Great job...more please more

Thank you.

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Date: 07/12/09
Title: Chapter 7: Cling to me.

Daddy is selfish just a selfish old man.  She tells him if he stops then he will let her go free early but all he can think about is the plan and gambling which we all know his luck and then there in lies more debt for Nikki to pay and longer for Sunny to stay.

Nikki is so possessive...I wonder what he would do if she did run.  But I trust her @ her word and I think he does to she will not run.  

When she was taking off her jewerlry I thought so sure Pops was going to see it and go hock it and spend the money gambling he has already spend part of the rent money on drinking.

Great update...Please update again soon.

Thank you.

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Date: 08/12/09
Title: Chapter 8: Let the Wind Blow through Your Heart Part I

That was an emotional update at least for me.

Sergei is falling in love with Sunny.

I think Nikolai is also falling in love with Sunny.

Priscilla likes Sunny I can tell already but what's not to like.  She's a good girl and her brother is a good boy.

Sunny left her selfish father $4000 dollars and told him that she and Ben loves him and to get help I wonder will he or will he just gamble the $4000.00 away.

Anatoly recognizes that Sunny is a good girl I didn't think he would I thought he had a low opinion of all women I am glad to see I was wrong and he also recognizes that his brother is falling for Sunny.

Sunny is trying to make a situation she does not wish to be in bearable I admire her strenght and intelligence and I know she will do well.  Yeah! Is Nikki consider her boyfriend now?

Love the story thanks for the update more please.

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Date: 09/12/09
Title: Chapter 42: I've Made Up My Mind... to Let My Life Shine

I so have enjoyed and loved this story for beginning to end.

You are a very talent imaginative author.  I would definitely like to see what else you have in that imaginative brain of your story wise.  If it is anything like this dark/delightful story then I know it will be very entertaining.

Stanislavsky is a very wise ole man but I guess he would have not gotten as far as he has in life without being that way.  I am glad that it was easy for Nikolai to transition so well over to the legit side of the business but he father had already groomed him for that side as well.

So glad very very glad that Sunni finally admitted her love for Nikki it was well over due but necessary as well for herself and Nikki.

I can't wait to see what you have for us in the ending chapter.

Thank you!  Thank you! Thank you!

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Date: 17/03/10
Title: Chapter 9: Let the Wind Blow through Your Heart Part 2

I so enjoy this story.  I love the way Nikolai handles her and how he is being patient.  More and more it seems he opens up to her.

The ice cream was bought b/c she likes it correct and Sergei knows this.

I like the way she is slowly warming up to him she is still nervous around him though I say this because he says sorry alot when she thinks she has done something that displeases him. 

Love the story more please.

Thank you!

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Date: 10/12/09
Title: Chapter 10: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

I am happy to see that Pop has gone to his first meeting.  I hope that he keeps it up.

Nikolai and Sunny seem to be getting closer.  I wonder will he get her a cat :D  LOL!

Sergei is pining for her I hope he does not make a mistake and allows Nikolai see that picture of him and Sunny and Benji that would not be so good for him.

The gardener I bet will not be sleeping on the job again but then he is being replaced soooo.

Great update as always can't wait for the next one.

Thanks!

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Date: 11/12/09
Title: Chapter 11: With your child's eyes ... You are more than you seem

Why is his dumbass waiting for Herschell in a bar of all places...Herschell has the true addiction to alcohol so he will probably not go into the bar and now he has met Darla just Darla.  This man seems to never make wise decisions.

More and more I am liking Nikolai...he let her go to the party but she had to be escorted by Sergei which he does not understand that he is allowing them to get closer and closer cause Sunny does not take no for an anser when it comes to having him do stuff...and Sergei may as well hang it up on the point of her not touching him she does not do it on purpose to get him in trouble but because she is just a touchie feelie kind of person...and she does not know that Nikolai does not allow touching.

This was a great update like always.  Thanks

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Date: 12/12/09
Title: Chapter 12: The places you've been ...The things you have learned ...They sit with you so beautifully

That was a wonderful update and Darla is up to no good and when she finds out who Jacob is then all hell  is going to break loose cause she is going to be scheming and may ever try to bring harm to Sunny.  Another effed up decision he makes.  It would seem like the storm is coming and this is just the calm before.

Sunny is excited about her bro coming home :D

Nikolai and Sunny are getting to know each other better...I am glad that he is able to talk to her.  I know he is not going to tell her all things but at least he tells her some.

Sergei is such a sweetie and he is too falling for the notorious Sunny :D

Again great and wonderful update and story.  Loving it!

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Date: 13/12/09
Title: Chapter 13: You know I tell the truth... We are just the same

Oh Sergei baby you are so pushing it but you can't help it she is a good girl.

It was funny when Nikolai closed the door in Cilla's face he does not like to share HIS Sunshine does he.  :D

He brought her a calico kitten he is so sweet plus more jewel that he hasn't given her yet.

It has been a year and things are still going strong with her father gambling and not trying to get help.

Nothing on Darla this update wonderful cause I want that heffa to be far far away...but I know she is lurking somewhere in the background up to no good.

Ben wants to go to Spain and study abroad I love it I think it will be good for him.  He is though getting farther and farther away from Pop though does he ever have lunch with Ben or is it always with Sunny.  I did not like the fact that he upset her to the point of tears for talking about Nikolai that shows she is caring for him more and more but it is dangerous for Sergei to comfort her very dangerous.

Loved the update

Love the way Nikolai is with Sunny...I like Sergei but I still want her with Nikki is that crazy but he is so different with her...softer...more caring and loving.

Can't wait for the next update.

Thanks!

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Date: 15/12/09
Title: Chapter 14: Making Holes in the Night

I so love this story and I so love Nikki and Sunshine together.

He takes such good care of her...He's so gentle and patient with her...I love how he told Mr. Jones that Sunshine makes him happy and when Sunshine is unhappy he is unhappy :D

I was in tears as she cried in his shoulder and he was so loving and affectionate and patient with her and he put his meeting off just for her...if that had been Darla just Darla please she would have gotten paid no mind I LOVE IT!!!

I love the way that Cilla is like a mother hen when it comes to Sunny she is so loving toward her to.  I think everyone loves her even Anatoly but I think more of a brotherly kind of love but who couldn't help but love her she is truly a ray of Sunshine.

Now Sergei I love him to death I do but he need to be careful...be careful...be careful.

I am not saying that while she was crying in the car that he should have been cold toward her but he should have found another way to comfort her without holding her in his arms. Cause Nikki/Nikolai saw the smudge on his shirt and knows where it came from...and the kiss on her head who is to say that Nikolai does not have camera's in his study anyway not a wise choice not a wise choice.

Nikki is taking Sunny to the Caribbean she is going to have so much fun and she needs to get away for awhile...her dad makes me tired and I don't have to deal with him.

I am glad that Nikolai did not kill or maime Jacob because like he said it would be on him if it got back to Sunny and that would make her unhappy.  I think the choice he made to have him cut off from all gambling locations except his was a good idea and to put him on probation until the end of the year. As he said this should be the prompt for him to go into rehab but we all know that it is not...Plus he has started talking about talking to Darla bad bad idea but he is scum and makes screwed up decisions so eventually he will problably go to her and pour his guts out and let her know about Sunny and the situation what she can do I am not sure but I am sure it will not be something pleasant cause she is an unhappy old bag.

I SO LOVE THIS STORY THANK U SO VERY MUCH 4 SHARING WITH US!!!!

 

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Date: 17/12/09
Title: Chapter 15: I can feel everything you do...Hear everything you say

As always that was a wonderfu and delightfully entertaining chapter.

I love Nikki and Sunshine together.

Nikolai has finally sent out his warning to Sergei I do hope he heeds it for his own good.  I would so hate for my Nikki to turn into that other fellow and do away with him.

Damn Darla saw Sergei and I guess now she will put 2 and 2 together and get Nikolai and what shyte she will come up with to find out what is going on.  I can't stand that wench and if she does anything to make Sunny unhappy I will not be sad to what may happen to her old tired ass when Nikolai gets to her.

More please....Thank you.

Oh! Yeah! Another thing I hope Sunny has still be popping those pills that her dad took her to get a long time ago. Cause Nikolai's nose is already wide open just for Sunny but I would hate to  see what he was like with Sunny with his child....goodness the poor girl would never get to do anything.  :D

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Date: 20/12/09
Title: Chapter 16: We are Building Bridges Part 1

Great update as always sorry it gave you trouble.

Jacob and Darla need to watch their P's and Q's but then again I don't care with Darla watches she gets on my nerves I only care about what Jabcob needs to watch because he is Sunny's father and if Nikolai did something to him then she would be unhappy with Nikolai and withdraw from him I am suspecting.

Sergei just can't help himself it would seem.  It is good that he recognized and reported Darla but Nikolai was angry and wanted to smash him in the head but he didn't because he is Sunny friend.

I am glad she is going to the meeting but I wish she wouldnt talk to Sergei about it but try to talk to Niki about it.

Again wonderful update can't wait for more.

Thanks.

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Date: 21/12/09
Title: Chapter 17: We Are Building Bridges Part 2

I wonder what the continous dream she keeps having of her mother and the NICU mean.

That she is falling in love with Nikki and that her mom is reminding her that she is only in waiting and should get to close to him.

Interesting.

Please update again soon.  I so love this story it is awesome and your are doing a wonderful job.

Thanks for sharing

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Date: 22/12/09
Title: Chapter 18: A fire burns... Water comes

Nikki is so in love with Sunny I wonder if she is in love with him too are just binding her time and bending with her situation with him.  I personally think that she is too in love with him but she is going to be very very very upset with him if she ever finds out that he had anything to do with her father's relapse into gambling and Darla was leading him to water so to speak.

Great story!
Great update!

As Always Thank YOU!

Enjoy your vacation...

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Date: 27/12/09
Title: Chapter 19: Even When You're Miles Away Part 1

Wonderful just wonderful! Nikolai wants to ask Sunny to marry him but he can't due to the situation the deal.

I agree with Stanislavski set her free then ask her and see what she says.  If she says "no" then still set her free and if she comes back to you then that is where you go from.

Dad went back to gambling way without Darla's help I wonder what happened to her by the way...Did she ever gain some sense of right or did she fucc somthing up and now Nikolai has a hit out for her?

Nikki is thinking about kids with her beautiful skin and his eyes....hmmmm does he want to get her pregnant now.  Apparently she is still taking the pill but he could alway switch them and she only be taking placebos....

Great and wonderful update and story as always...

Thank you!

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Date: 27/12/09
Title: Chapter 20: Even When You're Miles Away Part 2

I so love this couple and they have so many obstacles in their path...his profession

Her finding out that he has been keeping her father's habits going but he is goind a bang up job of that himself the father that is.

Sergei being in love with her.

Tell me "no" was Darla trying to get a little heart about herself was she not angry @ Mr. Coffee for his continued gambling habit.

Jacob is truly a big disappointment and he seriously doesn't understand what he has done to his children...then his simple ass does not understand why his children turned their backs on him "NO" idiot it was not only over a simple crap game but a game that you should not been dealing with for one and 2 it was illegal and you got sent to jail for it.

Then on top of that you dumbass is going to trust "PEANUT" again after he scammed you and took your money and partly the reason you are in the situation you are currently in damn does it not getting any plainer the that.

Great update!
Great story!

Thank you!

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Date: 29/12/09
Title: Chapter 21: Cause I Am Me, the Universe and You

OMG!!!! I so did not see that coming!

Peanut/Peter I hope he gets fried.

I know Jacob had is issues but he did not deserve to get hurt like this over them.  I hope he makes it.  I hope Sunny knows that it was Peanut that did this and that Nikki had nothing to do with it.

Damn that is so messed up just when he decided to change his ways and stop gambling.

I am in tears not so much for Jake but for Sunny, Benji and yes, some way Nikki cause I don't know if Sunny has fell in love with Nikki okay let me stop lying to myself at least she is in love with him she just does not realize it yet.

I wonder if Nikki is going to let her go now.

Girl this was a wonderful update again I so did not see that coming.

Damn! Damn! Damn!

More soon PLEASEEEEEE!

Thank you!

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Date: 04/01/10
Title: Chapter 26: Gotta Make My Own Way

Ah! Nikki...Nikki...Nikki continue to stave off the blackness.  Hold tight this is your test...be strong I'll will you some of my strength.

Sunny so miss her Nikki and Sergei does not understand that she sees him as ONLY her friend poor guy got it so bad.

Anatoly knows that Nikki truly loves him I got that from what he said about love should change you for the better and that it will not make you do a 360 LOL!! But it makes you do better be better.

Great update as always please update again when you can.

 

Thank you! Thank you! Thank  you!

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Date: 21/01/10