Penname: Thundakat [Contact]

Real name: Stephanie

Member Since: 11/12/08

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Hi all I am an advit reader love all types of genres but have to say that I/R has become my most favorite for the last 3 plus years.  I have found a lot of my favorite authors are here and looking forward to reading lots of their work and finding more favorites.

 



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Big Girls Won't Cry by Suprina Frazier
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 923]
Summary:

They messed with the wrong woman this time!

FBI agent Subrina Rayelle is on a mission to take down the people that forced her best friend Leesha into prostitution and then beat her to death when she tried to escape.

Refusing to even cry one tear of grief for Leesha until all guilty parties are brought to justice, Subrina sets her sights on Nevada where the crime took place. If only she hadn’t met her soul-mate on this mission – a beloved nephew to the leaders of the suspected prostitution ring and who may also be among the guilty parties himself. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 210
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3441
Read Count: 79615
Published: 09/10/10
Updated: 09/04/11

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Title: Chapter 144: Chapter 66.1

OMG! Is it Bree's mom or grandmother that just had a heart attach?

Great update and I am glad the looser got bounced and the fellow loosers too since they don't have a brain of their on to disconnect from Ricky dumba$$

Happy writing



Author's Response:

It was Bree's mother.

Happy Reading!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/02/11
Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 45.3

Can I again say that Blaine makes me sick and my ass itch.

I can't wait that mofo is taken down and taken down hard.  I want his d@mn spirit broken.

Thanks for the update as always

:)



Author's Response:

Blaine seems to be making things on a few other readers itch as well. Yikes!

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/12/10
Title: Chapter 1: Main Cast

Well I am no where suprised that he is going to start a whole lot of mess he lives for that.  He wouldn't be the mofo we love to hate if he didn't

Author's Response:

And we do love to hate him, don't we. lol

 

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
Date: 20/12/10
Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 43.2

Yes, Ricky is stupid in some ways but Caesar honey your actions just gave it all away.

Great update as always.

Thank you!

Happy Writing!



Author's Response:

True. Caesar messed up again...bad.

Happy Reading!



Author's Response:

True. Caesar messed up again...bad.

Happy Reading!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/12/10
Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 64.2

love it

Author's Response: Thx!

Author's Response: Thx!

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/02/11
Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 65.2

See Ricky continues to make my a$$ ache.  He is nothing but a punk a$$ biatch that needs a hand talking.  I am glad Clark and 3 others are quiting the P-Ranch because unbeknowest it is about to all come crashing down and yes because of that bia Rick...with his special needs self.

Bree and Caesar never stop amazing me with their passion.

Bree girl don't you leave your man's house cause of Rick especailly now that we know that Rae is suppose to be bringing her tired gold-digging a$$ to the party yeah there is definitely going to be a story to tell but I don't think it is going to be apporopriate to tell children and grandchildren and Rae I am sure has nothing on Bree when it comes to A$$ WHIPPING TIME.  Bree would wipe the floor up with Rae tired behind.

Great update.  I was laying down reading that is why the last update was not review in full but I just had to set up for this one.

Great update

Happy writing



Author's Response:

LOLOLOLOL!!!!

Girl, you keep me laughing. Thanks for the animated feedback!

Happy Reading!



Author's Response:

LOLOLOLOL!!!!

Girl, you keep me laughing. Thanks for the animated feedback!

Happy Reading!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/02/11
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 15.1

I don't know I am on the fence.  I want Bree/Rina to put Ricky in his place again I just enjoy him being rejected by Rina but I still think Caesar should not play games with Rina and be the stand up guy he has always been and not be in competition of Rina we all know he and she have chemistry and Rina does not need to fall hard in this assignment ang be hurt plus Caesar is already going to end up hurt when he finds out the truth why Rina is there and that is to bring down the P-Ranch even though it is legit b/c of Ricky and Blaine so far it does not seem as though the girls are being mistreated only by Ricky was Lexus held against her will and beaten by him and Van Diamond crazy red.

Author's Response:

Girl, you said a mouthful there. Wow! And you're so right on so many points. Ricky does need to suffer more rejection from Bree and he will. Caesar does need to wise up and just go with the natural chemistry he and she has...and he will...eventually. And yes, that crazy Van Diamond brother was in this book cutting the fool again.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 27/11/10
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 14.2

Could someone please please kick Ricky and Blaine asses they are getting on my last nerves.

Caesar I don't know if you should have gone into this competition with Ricky or @ least tell her what's up.

Thank you for the update



Author's Response:

They gonna get theirs, Thundakat. lol. It's gonna be sweet too (rubbing my hands together). lol.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/11/10
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 12.3

Go big girl what u gone do!?!  I loved it Topaz got stole on!!! LOL!!!

Thank you



Author's Response:

LOLOLOLOL!!! I love that big girl song. And it was my pleasure to crack Topaz's face.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/11/10
Title: Chapter 1: Main Cast

Girl I so understand the struggle I would have a hard time too resisting temptation that FINEEEE.  LOL!!!

Author's Response: tee-hee. Yep!

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Date: 11/12/10
Title: Chapter 1: Main Cast

OMG! Do u mean to tell me this fool can get worse.  Well I guess he could so far he has been an annoyance but not that vicious.

Great writing chica!

Thank you for always responding to my comments :D



Author's Response:

Yes, that fool can and will get worse. And you better believe I'm gonna respond to your comments, each and every one no matter how long it takes me. lol.

Thanks for all the feedback!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
Date: 12/12/10
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 11.2

Good for Rina and Caesar but Rina be careful chica remember what you are there for. Caesar has destracted you and you guard is down so much you did not see the wall has ears and eyes.

Thank you.



Author's Response:

You're so right, Rina/Bree is very much distracted with Caesar. But hey, I had to throw some kinks in her plan some kinda way. lol

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/11/10
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 9.2

I am more and more liking Vicky for the exception of her slimmy husband and adopted slimmier son she seems to be on the up and up unless there is something I am missing. Sure she covered up for that slimball of a child of her and kept the promise she made to her friend that she would continue to look after him for all of her life but that is not her fault that she married slimmy and gave her heart to love a child that has no morals or values other the slim.

She was a pro turned cosmetic businesswoman turned Boss Lady to a profitting brothel and it doesn't sound like she mistreats the ladies it's those two others that are about to bring her down.

Great update.



Author's Response:

Vickie is definitely a complex character. Most folks don't know whether to like her or hate her. I've been on the fence about her at times myself.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/11/10
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 9.1

Ah I love Avalon and I love the relationship she has with her son.  She love with a firm hand but also loving one and she lets him make his own way and his own mistakes without meddling and harsh criticism.  Way to go Avalon.

I am glad Caesar is trying to move away from his shallow pockets and Rina is the one to bring him fully from them.

Great update.

Thank you



Author's Response:

I really like Avalon too. She's cool people. Caesar is gonna have to grow up a lot before Bree/Rina takes him seriously.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/11/10
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 8.2

Okay Salethia made me want to slap some sense in her on this post.  I have tried to over look her faults with her thoughtless verbiage but like Rina that mouth of garbage pushed the wrong button.

Thank you for another wonderful update.



Author's Response:

Salethia sure did push the wrong button with this post.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/11/10
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 6.1

Rev. Slimy down and more to go.  Bobbi I have no words for that ghetto heifa

Sal glad to see she knows who her daughter is and has defended her today.  Good looking out mom.

Great update



Author's Response:

Ghetto Heifa? LOLOLOLOL!!! Yep!

Great comment!

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Date: 27/11/10
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 6.2

I am so happy to hear that Caesar is not an official P-Ranch recruiter or what not but just a family memeber that does odds and ends around the ranch for his aunt vicky

I hope he can same Neelam that man is so fione.

Thank you for updating.



Author's Response:

Yes, C is just there for family reasons. And double YES about how fine Neelam is. lol.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 27/11/10
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 4

Ahhh Damn! We going to lose our girl Leesha... sniff sniff... Damn I hope Ricky and all involved take a head dive hard w/o any mercy str8t to hell.

 

Thank you



Author's Response:

They gonna get theirs no doubt about it.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 27/11/10
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 5.1

You may as well Ricky take back that sigh of relief buddy cause Victoria or Aunt Vicky is not going to save your (excuse my language) fucked-up  pretty Ricky ass for long especially with Rina involved you messed with the wrong sista.

Thank you off to read part 2



Author's Response:

They really did mess with the WRONG sista. It's really on now.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/11/10
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 5.2

Yes, I noticed glad to know he can't continue his reign of terror this must have been before hand. 

I want to know the secret Ricky drunkenly told Leesha about.

Great update and thank you btw how is Sanaa and sexy Red doing anyway.  :0)



Author's Response:

Ricky's secret will be revealed later in the story.

As for Sanaa, she and Sexy Red/Rudolph are doing quite well. tee-hee.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/11/10
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 3

Subrina's mom is a trip though I see some good in her she does not know how to gauge her mouth and her actions to certain things.  I don't have her on my hate/dispise list so that is a plus.  I feel sorry for her because of her way of her coping where as Rina usings food Sal uses put downs of others to make it all right.

Author's Response:

I also pity Salethia, but she does work my nerves at times. lol

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/11/10
Title: Chapter 2: Prologue

Great start.  I have passed this story several times not sure if I wanted to read it or not.  I am glad I stopped and decided to take a peek.  It is everything I have been looking for lately in a story.

Thank you for sharing.  :-)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you decided to read the story after all and that you actually like it. Feel free to email me and tell me what made you keep passing it by.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 27/11/10
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 1

Leesha...Leesha Leesha my poor gulible Leesha girl why why why.  This was a great update.

On to read more.

Thank you.



Author's Response:

Thundakat, Leesha truly was gullible - her neediness and desperation for a man made her that way. :(

Thanks for continuing to read along with us!

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Date: 27/11/10
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 2

Subrina sista and you would be so right on all counts.  Girl, I think we have all been thre when it comes to what we think is love and for a man being stuck on stupid though I did not have it as bad as Leesha I have had my share with my ex-husband of the stupid moments.

Thank you for sharing.



Author's Response:

Most all women can identify with those stupid moments. Sadly, some females don't wake up and smell the coffee in time.

Thanks for commenting!

 

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/11/10
Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 43.1

Why did I already know that Karianne was gay and wanted Rina that 30 second kiss wasn't a quick think it was a desire that has been brewing from jump street.  I think that was why she had been so hard on her in the beginning with allowing her to take this assignment.

Goodness Rina getting play all over the place...Ricky wants her and Caesar now add supervisor and Suppie is jealous as  all get out I think she like Ceasar already have it in her mindset that Bree is hers.

Well that is another secret out of the bad for our dedicated readers

Thank you!

Happy writing



Author's Response:

Yep, you were about Karianne too. Can't hide nothing for you, Miss Lady! lol.

P.S. There is another reason Karianne didn't want Subrina to take this assignment, but that will be revealed later in the story. This secret is a BIGGIE and that's all I can say about that.

Happy Reading!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/12/10