Penname: Thundakat [Contact]

Real name: Stephanie

Member Since: 11/12/08

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Hi all I am an advit reader love all types of genres but have to say that I/R has become my most favorite for the last 3 plus years.  I have found a lot of my favorite authors are here and looking forward to reading lots of their work and finding more favorites.

 



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Big Girls Won't Cry by Suprina Frazier
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

They messed with the wrong woman this time!

FBI agent Subrina Rayelle is on a mission to take down the people that forced her best friend Leesha into prostitution and then beat her to death when she tried to escape.

Refusing to even cry one tear of grief for Leesha until all guilty parties are brought to justice, Subrina sets her sights on Nevada where the crime took place. If only she hadn’t met her soul-mate on this mission – a beloved nephew to the leaders of the suspected prostitution ring and who may also be among the guilty parties himself. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 210
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3441
Read Count: 79615
Published: 09/10/10
Updated: 09/04/11

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Title: Chapter 1: Main Cast

hmmmmm I just wonder what it can be....going to have to use my powers and see if I can guess. 

I have a guess. I am sending it offline just in cause I am wrong and get embarassed



Author's Response:

Send me your guess whenever you're ready. :)

 

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/12/10
Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 41.2

Yes, That rape scene was very convincing if I did not know the story behind it I would have bee like Caesar.

I see so much turmoil coming at the end of this case for Bree and Caesar but hopefully this turmoil will make them stronger.



Author's Response:

Yes, turmoil is definitely on the horizon for these two...unfortunately.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 17/12/10
Title: Chapter 1: Main Cast

Oh no ma'am won't be stopping talking to them anytime soon and they are so life like and not flat words on the screen.

Author's Response: *big grin* Thanks for saying that.

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
Date: 12/12/10
Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 41.1

Well damn I feel sorry for Ricky but not enough to see him go free for killing our girl Leesha and her baby.

I would have shot the shyt out of Cheney too @ least Blaine did right by Ricky in that manner but still Ricky needs so help.

Again great as always always...

Thank you



Author's Response:

Yes, Blaine did do right by Ricky on that front. He's not a complete beast but close to it.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 17/12/10
Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 40.2

That's right Rina make him roar girl...tame YOUR lion.

Great update as always!

Happy Writing!



Author's Response:

She can certainly handle herself...and him it seems. lol.

Happy Reading!

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Date: 17/12/10
Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 39.1

Well can I say I definitely saw that coming.  A girl can only resist for so long before the will power bails on you.

LET'S GET READY TO RUMBLE!!!  HERE COMES THAT HOT MONKEY LOVING! LOL!!!!!

Thank you for the update!

Happy Writing!



Author's Response:

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!

Yep!

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 17/12/10
Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 38

Mama Ava never fear our girl is strickly dickly especially for that fine piece of male meat called your son....Moma you did good real good birthing and raising that one.

Great update as always

Thank you for the update.

Happy Writing!



Author's Response:

Um...no comment...lol. Just know that I've NEVER heard that phrase before. :D

Happy Reading!

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Date: 17/12/10
Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 37

Awwww! I loved the bonding btwn Miss Avalon and Rina...I love Caesar but he interrupted a moment....LOL

I agree with Caesar and Rina (insert hint here) we need to get my girl Miss Ava hooked up with her a fine piece of speciman too that is a real man and not one of those loosers she has been attracting and nothing like the examples across the way.

Stilling loving this story.

Happy Writing! Thank you for the update.  On to my next one :)



Author's Response:

I got Avalon covered on that front later in the story. No worries. She gone be hooked up real good.

Happy Reading!

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Date: 17/12/10
Title: Chapter 1: Main Cast

Girl u know with the last update of Blaine that name so fits him and glad to know I can have the author rolling with laughter.  LOL!

Sorry I been slacking lately but I like it this way it allows me to set and get caught up with reading chapter after chapter :))

Happy Writing!



Author's Response:

You're not slacking. You're doing just fine. Certainly keeping me motivated that's for sure. lol.

Happy Reading!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
Date: 17/12/10
Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 45.1

Well damn...I knew he would be angry but did not know he would fire Bree.

I am so disappointed right now in Caesar's actions but he is in love but damn the jealousy dude you had/have Rina hooked no need to worry about outside influences like another woman "MAN" 

Great update hurry hurry hurry i want to see the outcome of Rina's mission is it over is she fired...if she stays I have no doubt there will some stipulations behind her staying. How can you cut me off like that

Happy Writing



Author's Response:

That's the thing, Thundakat. Ceasar didn't know he had her hooked like that. She keeps her feelings on the DL too much, so he's constantly unsure of where he stands with her.

I didn't cut you off for long. :)

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 19/12/10
Title: Chapter 1: Main Cast

Glad to know that I aint too far off base with good ole pyro-blaine and since I havent read about crazy ricky lately I take it he is somewhere thinking of shyt to get into or problems to cause others.  Blaine burned suge's house down in Jersey and if other readers remember he said he was going to get back at Suge and Bree well he got back @ Suge but she was looked out for cause she still had insurance on the house unbeknowst to pyro...I wonder how he is going to try and get back at Rina/Bree wooo it's getting hot in here and I don't know if that's in a good way or bad well bad if it comes to Blaine but definitely and most assuringly a GOOOD GOOOD thing if it is behind Caesar and his finnnnnneeeee hot self.

Happy writing!



Author's Response:

Pyro-Blaine? LOLOLOLOLOL!!! Too funny.

In one of Friday's posts, you'll see what Ricky is up to. Whatever it is, ain't good.

Happy Reading! Thanks for the comment AND the laugh.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
Date: 17/12/10
Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 36

Dang! Blaine got some major issues.  This is like a disfunctional family all gone wrong.  Everybody has lost somebody during there child or had some mental and physical abuse bestowed on them the only difference is that Caesar and Avolon has made a more postive effect on their future and presence though Vickie doesn't seem all that bad as a person she keeps that a-hole of a husband around but hell I'm afraid if she decided she truly wanted to leave his beehive he would burn her establishment down and the way he keeps a lock on the girls they would still be in the building if he did start a fire. Things keep looking worse with that fool Blaine. 

On to the next chapter.  Loving it as always.

Happy Writing and Thank you for sharing.



Author's Response:

I once heard somewhere that we spend our adult lives trying to get over what was done to us as children. That always rang true for me. Guess cause I know so many folks that fit that description.

As for Blaine and the rest of his clan, they need some serious HELP. Some of them will receive the help that's sent their way. Others won't.

P.S. You ain't too far off about Blaine the fire-starter.

Happy reading! 

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Date: 16/12/10
Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 44.3

Shyt Blaine can't even be near to being fit to be tired.  Now me on the other had am fit to be tired...Tired of that hussy Mercedes she is another that makes my ass itch.  She needs to get some sense about herself b4 she don't wake up again.

Always Always an outstanding update no different this time.

Thank you!



Author's Response:

LOL! These characters are messing with you in the strangest places. tee-hee

You're welcome and thanks for commenting!

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Date: 19/12/10
Title: Chapter 1: Main Cast

Glad to be of service or maybe I am just greedy cause you have definitely been cranking them out :) no complaints here.

Author's Response:

I'm tryna keep my momentum up. So your comments are definitely motivation for me.

Thanks for everything!

 

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
Date: 19/12/10
Title: Chapter 1: Main Cast

Yeah moma! :)) Now that's what I'm talking about.

Author's Response: tee-hee

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
Date: 19/12/10
Title: Chapter 1: Main Cast

LOL!!!!!

Author's Response: :D

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
Date: 19/12/10
Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 44.2

Ricky makes my ass ache and that's all I got to say on that one.

I love how Rina encourages the girls and lifts their spirits.

Caesar baby you may want to get ready for a few good cold showers cause your cuz just franked up babe.

 



Author's Response:

LOLOLOLOLOL!!!! snicker...giggle...guffaw!

You're a trip, Thundakat!

 

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/12/10
Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 35.2

Blaine is truly getting on my nerves. I want Caesar to punch him in the face but he has to keep his cool cause of Rina.

Haven't heard from Ricky lately is he out recruiting or still staying close to mommy/auntie?

Thank you chica for sharing

Happy Writing

Author's Response:

I want a line of folks to punch Blaine in the face. One after the other. lol. You'll see what Ricky has been up to soon.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 06/12/10
Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 35.3

Yes, What now?  Was he able to hear their convo thru the air vent he was doing maintenance on?

Great update as always.

Thank you,

Happy Writing



Author's Response:

No, but that was a great idea though. Wish I'd thought of it. Caesar was further down the hall and at another vent.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 06/12/10
Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 32.3

Yeah Suge is free and I love it how Rina said not in so many words but playa anty up the receipt cause I ain't nobody fool for you to try and deny payment has been paid in full.

Blaine stupid though how he going to fix his brain to say that he is going to pay them back for 2days event.  Playa you about to go down wait and then you will have something to really pay somebody back for and then while in prison say how far you want me to bend over. Chile please get a grip on yourself and I don't mean the the pencil and two erasers below either.

Thank you for the update

 



Author's Response:

I guess you told Blaine. LOL! I love how involved you get in the story. lol.

Thanks for all the animated comments!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/12/10
Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 32.2

see I told you Blaine don't see like he going to easily give up what he thinks his prized possesion (Suge).

I hope it works out for Suge and that is what that trifling ass Blaine gets.  Good thing Vik is out he hospital his side piece was not so good and he ex-lover has remained just that his ex-lover no goodies fo ryou Blaine the pain.

Thank you!



Author's Response:

Yes, you were right about Blaine. You're usually on point about all my characters as I recall, Thundakat. You're very astute.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 02/12/10
Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 32.1

Why is it that I have a feeling deep in the pit of my stomach that Blaine is about to get worse with his methods of running the P-Ranch just could be a feeling.  I don't think he is about to let Suge go.  No matter what Rina proposes.

Great update can't wait to see what comes next.

Caesar has got it so so so bad for Rina and vise versa but sista girl is trying to fight it due to obligations to her mission and revenging Leesha's untimely departure from us....still smarts that one for some reason for me.

Thank you

Happy writings



Author's Response:

Blaine is about to get worse. Can't say in what way though. And yes, C got it bad (thinking about that Usher song). lol.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/12/10
Title: Chapter 1: Main Cast

Yes, ma'am mos def love to do that with his mentally challenged and emotonally franked up self

Author's Response:

LOL!

Girl, you sure know how to make this author smile. tee-hee. Thanks!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
Date: 21/12/10
Title: Chapter 1: Main Cast

Never mind I go away to send it to you.

evil laugh and hands rubbing together.  LOL!!!



Author's Response:

tee-hee.

Thanks!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
Date: 21/12/10
Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 31.3

I got to the end of this chapter thinking I was not caught up only to find out that I was.  I was kind of disappoint but happy too but now instead of going to the next chapter and the next I have to wait for the next chappie it's all good though.  I am happy to see that Caesar and Rina had another backstroke moment before all hell breaks loose.  :D

Happy writing

Thank you



Author's Response:

You read fast, Thundakat. No worries though. I plan to maintain a steady posting schedule.

Happy reading!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/11/10