Penname: Thundakat [Contact]

Real name: Stephanie

Member Since: 11/12/08

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Hi all I am an advit reader love all types of genres but have to say that I/R has become my most favorite for the last 3 plus years.  I have found a lot of my favorite authors are here and looking forward to reading lots of their work and finding more favorites.

 



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Big Girls Won't Cry by Suprina Frazier
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

They messed with the wrong woman this time!

FBI agent Subrina Rayelle is on a mission to take down the people that forced her best friend Leesha into prostitution and then beat her to death when she tried to escape.

Refusing to even cry one tear of grief for Leesha until all guilty parties are brought to justice, Subrina sets her sights on Nevada where the crime took place. If only she hadn’t met her soul-mate on this mission – a beloved nephew to the leaders of the suspected prostitution ring and who may also be among the guilty parties himself. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 210
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3441
Read Count: 79616
Published: 09/10/10
Updated: 09/04/11

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Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 26.2

Okay Karianne I know that was you little test for Rina but that test hurt Caesar so I am not liking you very much right now.  Like damn your quick thought could not have came up with something else.

You suspect dude.  You ain't on the dl are you?

Great update off to read more.  :D



Author's Response:

I'm not liking Karianne either right now. By all means, read as much as you like. :)

 

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Date: 29/11/10
Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 27.3

Miss Hot A$$ trying to get her freak on tonight.  LOL!  The hussy :D  I aint mad atcha Rina get your freak on sista.  I wonder who is going to interrupt this time.

Notice how Slimy Blaine doesn't do devious shyt until Victoria is not around like that prostitution proposal to Rina.

I have a mind to think he purposely got himself caught by Vickey  coming out of Sug's room so she could go to the hospital.

I hope Neelam is not successful in finding some big girl to bring back to the states for "model"  I like Neelam and don't want him to get into trouble and jail time.  I hope he just too this free opprotunity to see and spend time with his family.



Author's Response:

I admit, Subrina is leaning on the hussy side tonight. lol. I'll do what I can do help her stay strong...um stronger when it comes to him. Unfortunately, Caesar is that wild card that she didn't anticipate in this mission, so it's gonna be a struggle.

You got Blaine pegged right. He is a slimy one. As for Neelam, things are gonna work out for him.

Thanks for commenting! 

 

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Date: 29/11/10
Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 25.3

I wonder if Caesar will ever find out about Ricky and Rae and the baby she aborted cause she did not know who the father was. 

I also wonder if Rina will find out about the miscarriage and the Ricky too he said he would never kill the mother of his child well he did as well as his child with his cruelty and the beatings he gave Leesha.  I still feel sad she did not make it thru this story.

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

All secrets will come out before the story is over. Yes, it is sad about Leesha. I really hated writing that part of the story.

Thanks for the comment!

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Date: 29/11/10
Title: Chapter 1: Main Cast

It was nothing major just that I have read so many stories and the title seemed farmilar so I thought I had already read it before not so basically judging a book by it's cover  but in this case by it's title.  :D  I would have been kicking myself over and over again if I missed this story.  Again loving it just loving it and I have gotten pissed off today cause I had to go to work and was busy so I could not catch up like I wanted to.  Kept getting freaking calls rolling in even during my lunch break read the whole hr and again pissed I had to return to work.  LOL!!!

Author's Response: lol. I understand. In any case, I'm thrilled that you decided to join us. And you know I love reading your comments.

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Date: 29/11/10
Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 25.2

Okay...I know it is not funny but I wish I could have been a fly only at that moment.  LOL! Poor Sun-Hee now Rina knows she is senstive down there I don't know why she even thought she could get a wax job there.

Great update



Author's Response:

Sista was tryna bond with the P-Ranch girls. Plus she thought she could handle the procedure. Guess not. LOL!!!

Great comment!

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Date: 29/11/10
Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 21.2

Mommy is so cock-blocking good for her.  LOL!!!!  Though I want Casaer and Rina 2gether I don't want either of them to be hurt just like Avalon doesn't.

Great update as always

Thanks



Author's Response:

Yeah, Avalon is tryna stop all kinds of things from happening. Too bad some things are gonna be outta her control.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 28/11/10
Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 46.1

Dang I can't wait to see Blaine ass go down in a burst of flames.

Ms. Vikkie love her to death...like 4 flat tires on a benz...just love her like reeses pieces but her ass needs to wake up and smell the coffee...Blaine is a slimmy, piece of horse dong and he means you no good. You saw it thru your father and you bounce well time to bounce Blaine cause he is bring your business down.  No morole for the girls means no business for you.

Thank you chica for the update.  I hope your Xmas was fun and you got all that you wanted this year.

Happy writings



Author's Response:

It's gonna take something MAJOR for Vickie to finally wake all the way up. It's coming though..

Christmas was GREAT! I'm satisfied with my gifts and very thankful.

Happy Reading!

P.S. I hope your holidays were blessed as well.

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Date: 26/12/10
Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 46.2

Blaine and Ricky...sitting in a jail cell...yes...yes...yes...yes.yes...yes.

First comes trifling then come murder then comes Ricky being a big man's bitch again!

Ricky is becoming even more pyscho and I still have no love for him.



Author's Response:

LOLOLOL!!!!

Thundakat, you are off da chain! 

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 27/12/10
Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 47.1

Go Ceasar continue to be persistent and I am glad he walked her to her dorm b/c there are some crazy and different people on the property even though I think Brina can hold her own it's always nice to have a handsome ride or die man beside you.

Thank you for my xmas present it was appreciated

Happy Writings



Author's Response:

Yes, Caesar is definitely my kinda man - flawed, but geniune and sincere.

Happy Reading!

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Date: 27/12/10
Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 47.2

Okay I aint going to say a word cause I know u gave me a warning that this was a short update.

So with that being said...thank you for the update.

Waiting for the new one

Happy Writings.

 



Author's Response:

You're most welcome, Thundakat. I'll post more when I can.

Happy Reading!

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Date: 27/12/10
Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 47.3

Hot Damn! Brina girl I don't blame you for that kyptonite moment in time he would be mind too.  I don't blame you for falling in love with him either.  I don't even blame you for 4getting where you have to be and what you have to do as far as Ava is concerned...but baby girl baby girl....I need for u to try to focus cause of

1. where you are curently @ and walls have ears

2. Too many people want to get revenge on you and could and will try to use that kyptonite against you.

3. Ava loves you and is waitng on you across the hwy

4. Girl I know it's hard but u need to focus and not let yourself or Leesha and her baby down.

Loved the update and of course u know I want more more more!



Author's Response:

Yeah, she's gonna need to regain her focus soon. I'll see what I can do to help her out. Like you said, it's gonna be hard though. After all, the girl is sprung. lol.

More is on the horizon.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 29/12/10
Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 47.4

See See what I'ma saying walls have ears and Brina and Ceasar know durn well they are not the quietest there is out there.

Great update as always....Can't wait to see what happens next and what that fool Ricky and Father fool Blaine will come up to bring Brina down.

Thank you,

Happy Writing



Author's Response:

Father fool?

LOLOLOLOL!!!

That's another good one, Thundakat.

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Date: 29/12/10
Title: Chapter 1: Main Cast

Definitely blessed I got to see another year.  :D Glad yours was a blessing

Author's Response: I hear that!

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
Date: 29/12/10
Title: Chapter 1: Main Cast

I bet he does....I just wait to do my happy dance when him and his boy Ricky are taken to the concret.

Author's Response: Oh yes, they are going down...but not yet. More drama has to occur before then.

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
Date: 29/12/10
Title: Chapter 1: Main Cast

Girl I am sure I have more to come dealing with those two...Girl listen to me like I really has to deal with those fools instead of read about them.

Lawd....

Happy Writing chica keep up the awesome work.  It's always a pleasure.  You know how some folk have an addiction to soap operas well this is my personal soap.  hehe



Author's Response:

Lol. I'm glad my characters seem so real to you. They're very real to me as well. And I so feel you on that soap opera addiction. I had to break mine years ago. They had me glued to the set, unable to go anywhere between 1pm - 4pm EST. With books, you can just take them with you and read the latest drama on your breaks. lol.

 

 

 

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
Date: 29/12/10
Title: Chapter 1: Main Cast

U know I was thinking.  Rick already coo-coo for coco puffs I hate to see how far his mind it blown when he finds out he not only kill the woman he was supposily in love with but he killed his child as well.

It still goes thru my mind when he said he was nothing like his father and that he did not kill his child's mother no poo-poo platter you killed her and you child so that makes you worse you get a 2 for 1 and it aint no sale buddy.

I don't think he is going to make it to jail...and he is to cowardly to take his own life and send himself to hell...plus I don't want him to get out of suffering so easily here on Earth.  His a$$ going completely over the bend will keep him locked here on Earth in his own little tortured world not ever realizing his surrounds cause all his deeds keep rolling around and around in his head and he think full moon nights are bad he aint seen nothing yet but that is just my opinion....I am sure you have an even better deed for his chump a$$.

Happy Writing...

Woah I am awfully talkative tonight.  Let me stop hogging up all the time.  :D



Author's Response:

I like how talkative you are. It keeps me on my toes. Helps me to stay encouraged especially on days like today when everything that could go wrong, DID. lol.

Anyhoo, let me get situated at home, then I'll start posting tonight's (Wednesday's) installment.

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Date: 29/12/10
Title: Chapter 1: Main Cast

I gotchu I gotchu they got more dirty to dig up

Author's Response: Yep!

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
Date: 30/12/10
Title: Chapter 1: Main Cast

Girl I broke that habit a long long time ago when I was working during the day...and never got back into them but my reading girl please I get pissed if my teenage sons come ask me to cook...I be like how old r u.  LOL!!

Happy Writing chica!



Author's Response:

LOLOLOL!!! Them boys betta leave mama be. tee-hee.

Happy Reading!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
Date: 30/12/10
Title: Chapter 1: Main Cast

Iight chica...do yo thang!  This is my Friday so I will be ready to read when I get off work.  Who am I kidding I will be reading b4 I get off see I am responding to you now and have been and still on the clock.  LOL!

Author's Response:

Yep! lol. Enjoy your day(s) off.

Thanks for all the comments!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
Date: 30/12/10
Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 48.1

Mama Ava is happy and I like her hope that there love grows strong enough for the storm that is coming.

Great update....off to read more 

Happy Writing



Author's Response:

I'm doing my best to put down strong roots in their love. One way or the other, this story will have a HEA!

Happy Reading!

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Date: 03/01/11
Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 48.2

Yes Brina please be duly noted on Blaine and Ricky cause hell is about to start with those 2 mo'fos and they are going to try and make yours and Ceasar's life miserable and anyone else that gets in their way.

I thought so sure when you said Ms. Vicky was away on a cruise that Blaine had found some way to stay behind so the could plot and scheme to get back at Brina for getting one over on him and with Vicky out of the way he and Ricky can do whatever they want to do.

Great update as always 

Happy Writing.



Author's Response:

Blaine can't weasel out of spending time with his wife all the time. If he didn't invest in that relationship at all, he'd lose it fast. The thing is he's gonna lose it anyway, just more slowly (spoiler).

Happy Reading!

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Date: 03/01/11
Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 49.1

Well I have to agree that knowing his history definitely hasn't made me dislike him any less.

He's a grown ass man now and has been for sometime seek therapy durn.

Great update.  I am finally able to start back up my reading I have missed alot.

Thank you for sharing

Happy Writings



Author's Response:

I think everybody in this story needs therapy, including Subrina due to her mommy issues. No worries though. I'm gonna help her work those issues out.

Happy Reading!

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Date: 16/01/11
Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 49.2

They are so cute....thank you for an update...moving on to the next chapter I see you have been on a roll.

Author's Response:

I've been tryna keep up my momentum, that's for sure. lol.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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Date: 16/01/11
Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 49.3

Thank you for the update.

 



Author's Response: You're most welcome!

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Date: 16/01/11
Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 50.1

Mecedes pretty doesn't go far without brains, talent and common sense and it fades darling don't be a hater all yo life it's not pretty on a lady that is to say that you are one.  Right now you be a mat doormat for Blaine push come to shove you'll be right where all the others that fade of displease Blaine are @ the bottom trying to keep your head above water

'Thank you chica for the update and this amazing story.



Author's Response:

Mercedes has no real clue WHAT she is. She's been told so many lies by others and herself that she truly needs to find herself. I think that's one of the reasons she hates Bree so much - Bree KNOWS who she is.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 16/01/11