Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-the players
This story has been on my mind since I started reading it last night and stayed up until I caught up on it. I am not fiening and hope to get an update soon.
I wanted to slap the taste out of Jazz's mouth like Maya plus add an ole skool beat down on top of that.
Jazz is definitely headed down the wrong path and needs to seek professional intervention.
Reed I feel is just as responsible if not more for what happened to Maya. I wonder did Caleb realize that she was a virgin and he must have had some recolection on what he was doing but I guess whatever drugs were mixed in his drink plus the added misery of Reed's friend having he gun and a bit crazy added in there prompted him to not resist effects the drugs were having on him.
WTF is wrong with Reed and why can't he get his shyte together what demons are he trying to run from. Poor Casey is in love with this idiot and can't seem to move on with a what seems to be a good guy and sacrified her family and future plans for his trifling no good behind.
Nina love her she a fiesty lil bit of hispanic heat and was trying to put Caleb 6ft under.
I love "Pop" Ernest he sounds like a decent individual that did not know how to get over his grief enough to continue having a reign on his sons and deal with his wife's death together but that happens sometime and choices that may not have been in their best interest but he did the best that he could with what he had to work with.
I hope that Maya recovery from the accident is speedy and Dylan pulls thru okay. She has gone thru so much.
Okay I think I have rambled on enough.
Thank you again for sharing. Happpy writing and I hope to see another update soon cause you have a sista hooked.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
Date: 08/07/11