Penname: iamwhatiam6904 [Contact]

Real name: Bretagne Ballard

Member Since: 19/01/09

Membership status: Member

Bio: I love interraciall and multicultural stories. I'm more of a reader...not much of a writer but we will see! Someone may inspire me.


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[Reviews - 204]
Summary:

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Serena Davis is a shy young lady that has had a crush on her boss Mr. Ki, king of jerks, for 2 years. Mr. Ki, in order to stay the head of his family company must marry. What happens when he suddenly asks her to marry him?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 5022
Read Count: 49842
Published: 27/08/08
Updated: 28/07/16


Title: Ki Fashions

Wow this got really interesting and Jae-Hwa is horrible and selfish. That heifer!! I am loving this!

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Date: 12/02/09

Title: Ki Fashions

Not that he doesn't deserve it but she is just setting herself up for failure. She knows that Shane wants her. Thanks for the update!!!

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Date: 20/03/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 55]
Summary:

 

No one could say that Rick Lawrence was a humble man. Even as a child he knew of his superior looks and had no problem telling his classmates of that fact. Now as a 28 year old man he makes a bet with his friend that he can bed famous model K. Jones. Too bad K. Jones is Karma Jones, an old classmate that he tormented. Now he finds himself as Karma’s B***h.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 10266
Read Count: 2921
Published: 19/09/08
Updated: 18/01/09


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow i am really loving this story. She should make him pay. Please update soon.

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed
Date: 29/01/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 74]
Summary:

Dawn Austin is a geologist, living her life in Vancouver until she's offered her dream job in Iceland only days before her 30th birthday. On the eve of her birthday,her body starts to change, and with the help of a new friend, she learns that she is a creature of myth; a Valkyrie.

Dawn is then introduced to a world she never knew existed; made up of creatures and places that she'd always thought were no more than fantasy. But her biggest challenge may be learning to live with what binds her to this world - the Elfen Lord, Hinrik. 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 67135
Read Count: 8924
Published: 25/10/08
Updated: 24/08/09


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7 - Clarity

I LOVE this story. I'm so enthralled with it. Please update soon.

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Date: 26/03/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 37]
Summary: Jen Sutton is the perfect family woman. She has a wonderful husband, three beautiful children and a fulfilling job. She should be happy. She shouldn’t want anything else, and she didn’t, until Dr. Christian Mario came into her life. Somehow, he crept his way into her thoughts, turning them into forbidden ones. What will Jen do, now that she knows that Christian feels the same?

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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: None
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 21996
Read Count: 8142
Published: 12/11/08
Updated: 21/11/08


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

My gosh...that was sexy and heartbreaking at the same time. I'm not a fan of infidelity under any circumstances, but I'll be damned if I wasn't cheering her on. Sex like that should be experienced (by everyone)! You should definitely write an epilouge. That was great...you are a talented writer.

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed
Date: 27/01/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 29]
Summary:

A young girl is forced to live a lie when her father dies suddenly, leaving her at the mercy of strangers.

She finds kindness in her new surroundings, and falls in love with someone she vowed to hate.  But will her love survive when he finds out the truth, and in a time and place where predjudice reigns?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 17777
Read Count: 1821
Published: 01/12/08
Updated: 27/01/09


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - A different path

I really like this story...well done!!

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed
Date: 27/01/09

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary: Haven Marie only wants one thing after a night of clubbing: going home.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2810
Read Count: 2608
Published: 31/01/09
Updated: 31/01/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow that was beautiful. I want a guy like that...

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed
Date: 31/01/09

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[Reviews - 140]
Summary:

Spencer Edwards is a happy bachelor. He’s got a great job, lives in a great penthouse, and thanks to his good genetics, a fair amount of luck where the ladies were concerned. Family was the furthest thing from his mind, but apparently, life had other plans.

 

His world is turned upside down when his older sister and brother-in-law die suddenly, leaving their two young children in his care. Spencer can barely take care of himself, and he’s not so sure he should be placed in charge of anyone else.

 

But a light appears at the end of the tunnel when spirited, no-nonsense live-in Nanny Reese Talbot enters their lives. Through ups and downs and self-discovery, Spencer learns just what it takes to be a Family Man.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 35037
Read Count: 11077
Published: 05/02/09
Updated: 07/08/09


Title: Chapter 5: IV

I am so glad to see that you updated this story! It is turning out to be quite interesting with the dynamic between Reese and Spencer. But I am with Reese, he would be in for a rude awakening after keeping me up all night having sex while kids are in the house.

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Date: 18/05/09

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I really am enjoying it so far. Reminds me of Raising Helen but better. Great job!!

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Date: 06/02/09

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

This is getting so good!! I love her spunk...this is going to be very interesting!

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Date: 04/03/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 272]
Summary:

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Art Historian Aidan Bell and student Collista Carson can't stand each other. Yet for some reason, he asks her to be his new assistant.  Although doubtful that they can co-exist without killing each other, Collista has her grade in his class to think about and so accepts the position.  One thing leads to another, and before long, the two are finding it hard to maintain their professional distance.

Then the specter of Aidan's murky past casts its shadow over the forbidden relationship.  Add a priceless painting, a ruthless art collector and soon Collista finds herself in the position of having to help Aidan solve a mystery before he goes down for the count.  Will he have enough time to teach her what she needs to know about the art of the steal?  

Banner by Idjunkie



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 26
Completed:Yes
Word count: 131714
Read Count: 89856
Published: 22/02/09
Updated: 22/02/10


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One

Oh this is sounding good!! I can't wait for the next chapter or possibly chapters...hint, hint:-) Just kidding. Great job!

Author's Response:

Lol!  I'm glad that you're wanting more. So no worries.  I'll be updating soon. 

Thanks for  reading and reviewing. 

 

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Date: 24/02/09

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[Reviews - 97]
Summary:

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Pathologist Alexx Woods has been widowed for well over two years now.  Promoted to Chief Medical Examiner, she’s flourishing professionally.   Friends and colleagues at Miami-Dade’s CSI department have been wonderfully supportive, especially bad boy CSI Ryan Wolfe, who, to the surprise of everyone, has gone above and beyond the call of friendship in his quest to ‘be there’ for the team’s favorite ‘mother’ figure. 

Yet as Valentine’s Day approaches, life is about to change once again for Alexx.  It all starts with a misunderstanding and the arrival of an unexpected visitor.  The startling revelations that ensue compel her to delve into long suppressed emotions, confront rigid societal conventions and her own deep seeded fears about loving again.

 

 

A Story Written for the 100 First Kisses Challenge

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Alexx Woods
Classification: Crossover, Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: 100 First Kisses Challenge
Series: Rylexx: CSI Miami
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 41347
Read Count: 15303
Published: 27/02/09
Updated: 11/08/09


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Four

I love the two of them together. The sexual attraction is so palpable. Please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  I'm glad you're enjoying them.  I won't be long at all with the next chapter. 

Thanks for reviewing.

 

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Date: 23/06/09

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Six

A wonderful ending to a wonderful story!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  Glad you enjoyed it.

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Date: 11/08/09

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

 

Looking back, he couldn’t quite find that moment when things started to change between them.

A Cold Case story written for the March "Friend or Foe?" challenge.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Det. Kat Miller
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language
Challenges: Friend or Foe?
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3615
Read Count: 3488
Published: 29/03/09
Updated: 29/03/09


Title: Chapter 1: The Other Side

Loved it!! Now if only the producers would take the hint and put her with him. I love her character and her as an actress. She needs more attention. Thank you!!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I have my fingers crossed that will happen between them too. Tracie does need a buttload of attention. She's awesome!  :D

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/03/09

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Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 109]
Summary:

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After her disastrous blind date, Kat Miller and Scotty Valens find some common ground...and a whole lot more. 

Banner by TokenBlackGirl

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Det. Kat Miller
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 79477
Read Count: 122875
Published: 12/07/09
Updated: 07/11/09


Title: Chapter 1: Standard Bitter Love Song #4

Can't wait until the next chapter. I love Kat's character. If only they would give her a real romance on the show.

Author's Response:

I know!  And that annoying ADA is not, IMO, a real romance.  Oh, well.  There's always fanfic. 

Thanks so much for the review; more soon!

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/07/09

Title: Chapter 2: You or Your Memory

Love it, love it, love it.

Author's Response: Thank you!!  I'm so glad!!

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Date: 21/07/09

Title: Chapter 4: The Mess Inside

Still loving it!! Just keep the updates coming.

Author's Response: Thank you!  More as soon as I can!

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/07/09

Title: Chapter 7: How to Embrace a Swamp Creature

Gosh I love this story!! You are doing a really great job with the development of their relationship.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you!  I'm so glad you're enjoying it!  More to come soon!

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Date: 27/08/09

Title: Chapter 9: Orange Ball of Pain

Yay! Another wonderful update. These two are great together.

Author's Response: I have a lot of fun writing them!!  Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/09/09

Title: Chapter 15: Fault Lines

OMG!!! Please hurry with the next update. The suspense is killing me. I am so addicted to this story.

Author's Response: Awwww, thanks!  I'm glad!  Next chapter will be up ASAP.  Thanks so much for the review!!

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/10/09

Title: Chapter 16: Color In Your Cheeks

Oh thank the Lord. Because if they didn't get it together soon, it was going to be a problem. Thanks.

Author's Response: ROFL.  They're stubborn, but I think they're heading in the right direction!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/10/09

Title: Chapter 17: Pure Intentions

Wonderful!! Thank you!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing!  Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/11/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 43]
Summary:

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Uncanny X-Men

When she shows up that first night, he’s not surprised.



Table of Contents
Categories: Books
Characters: Storm/Ororo Munroe
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1550
Read Count: 2932
Published: 09/09/09
Updated: 09/09/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chaleur

My my my.....very nice.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/09/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:  

Someone once told him that everything happened for a reason...

 

Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: Storm/Ororo Munroe
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2962
Read Count: 1312
Published: 02/01/10
Updated: 02/01/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonderful use of the characters. I could see this play out in my mind. Loved it. 

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/01/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

 


Being Human


She’s definitely not just about making tea.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Annie Sawyer
Classification: Off Cannon , Supernatural
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: Annie/Mitchell (Being Human)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1718
Read Count: 2044
Published: 01/02/10
Updated: 01/02/10


Title: Chapter 1: Friend is a Four Letter Word

Damn. That's what I'm talking about!

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/02/10