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Summary:

They messed with the wrong woman this time!

FBI agent Subrina Rayelle is on a mission to take down the people that forced her best friend Leesha into prostitution and then beat her to death when she tried to escape.

Refusing to even cry one tear of grief for Leesha until all guilty parties are brought to justice, Subrina sets her sights on Nevada where the crime took place. If only she hadn’t met her soul-mate on this mission – a beloved nephew to the leaders of the suspected prostitution ring and who may also be among the guilty parties himself. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 210
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3441
Read Count: 79609
Published: 09/10/10
Updated: 09/04/11


Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 23.3

There's a whole lot ugly in that room. Mercedes, ricky, and blaine. mostly blaine though.

Author's Response:

I LOATHE Blaine the most. Just thought I'd let that little trinket out. lol.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 15/11/10

Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 46.2

ricky is such a child, following in old uncle blaise's footsteps.

Author's Response:

He's gonna grow up real fast after the new year (spoiler).

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 23/12/10

Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 47.4

nosy a$$ fools always trying to cause trouble

Author's Response:

Trying is the operative word here. Don't know how successful they will be now that C & S/B are a couple now.

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Date: 28/12/10

Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 63.1

two losers together. ugh!

Author's Response:

Double ugh!! lol

Thanks for your comment!

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Date: 22/01/11

Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 62

karianne is such a two year old.

Author's Response:

Yellllp!

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Date: 22/01/11

Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 64.2

blaine is such a greedy selfish little troll.

Author's Response:

Troll? Yep, he is definitely that among other things.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 24/01/11

Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 67.1

ricky and rae need to take a long drive somewhere and crash...ooh and blaine must be in the trunk when they do.

Author's Response:

LOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!!!

THANKS for the laugh, grumpirah!

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Date: 30/01/11

Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 67.2

ricky, rae, and blaine all need to disappear.

Author's Response:

And they will, one by one.

Thanks for commenting, Grumpirah!

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Date: 01/02/11

Title: Chapter 190: Chapter 85.2

blaine is a sick ass individual. i wonder what he has planning for ms. vickie.

Author's Response:

Whatever he has planned won't be good...for anyone.

Thanks for commenting!

 

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Date: 24/03/11

Title: Chapter 168: Chapter 75.1

well what can i say rae and ricky had this coming.

Author's Response:

Yes, they did.

Thanks for commenting, Grumpirah!

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Date: 26/02/11

Title: Chapter 170: Chapter 76.1

this family is f*cked up on so many levels.

Author's Response:

This is true. They are a 'special' bunch.

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Date: 01/03/11

Title: Chapter 192: Chapter 86.2

man is nuts.

Author's Response:

This is true. lol

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 25/03/11

Title: Chapter 204: Chapter 92.2

completely random thought: didn't subrina spend a fortune on leesha's 'funeral'. I'm thinking her job owes her some compensation. As for leesha being alive, now that imo is not the equivalent of the lie that subrina told ceasar. i can't believe that came out of burt's mouth.

Author's Response:

Grumpirah, you make good points. I'm going to address that funeral compensation thing soon. As for what Burt said, he basically said the ONLY thing that would get Subrina to drop her anger and focus instead on the blessing of Leesha being alive. Bringing C's name up and their situation helped her to zoom in on what was REALLY important at the point.

Thanks for commenting and for getting me to fill in another gap in the story. U rock!

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Date: 05/04/11

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Advertising tycoon Alandra Meyer wants a child. The only problem is she doesn’t have any prospects, nor does she really want them. She’d rather cut off her left arm than rely on a man to do a damn thing for her. Men equal distractions and distractions just aren’t an option in her world. The only person she can depend to conceive the child she so desperately wants is herself…and possibly her oldest friend, Julio. However, before he agrees to be her humble donor, he has a favor of his own to ask. After a tug-of-war between the two, Alandra obliges her best friend's request. Hoping for the best but expecting the worst, she awaits said request to walk through her door that Monday morning, unbeknownst to either of them that his presence will change both of their lives forever.

Disclaimer: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 16062
Read Count: 20534
Published: 08/11/10
Updated: 15/12/10


Title: Chapter 4: Public Persona

her mother is such a joke

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Date: 09/12/10

Title: Chapter 3: Gainful Employement

shoot does she even need julio anymore for his seed, lol.

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Date: 09/11/10

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Summary:

 

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Takeshiro "Shiro" Inoue is a star catcher in Puro Yakyū, the professional baseball league in Japan until injury forces him out. An old contact with the American Major Leagues has him returning to the States and to Lydia Holmes, one of the best pitchers he has ever faced and his best friend whom he'd met right before he'd started his career.  They have been close for eight years, the majority of which had been restricted to online interactions.  But now that they are on the same soil, his career isn't the only Shiro is interested in reclaiming.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 47035
Read Count: 17409
Published: 13/11/10
Updated: 02/03/11


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

great update! i wish Deana would give it another shot with Lydia's dad.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading!  Deana and Otis...*pats them*

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Date: 07/01/11

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

i heart this family especially mom and pop

Author's Response: Thanks! They were fun to write. :)

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Date: 21/12/10

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Summary:

 

 

 Beautiful Banner by Missus James

 

When Mia, a beautiful southern black lady, finds herself as the personal assistant to two of the most gorgeous white men she's ever met, she finds herself in an unlikely situation that will challenge everything she thought she wanted in a normal life. 

 

Mia Shannon struggles to adjust to her life in San Francisco after moving there from the south. It's hard being the only black girl at the company she works for and even harder when she's the personal assistant to two of the most wealthiest, gorgeous men white men she's ever seen. Mia finds herself having feelings for both her bosses and realizes nothing can ever become of them except to exist in her fantasies.

Kale and Aidan fell in love with Mia the moment she walked into their office for an interview for the personal assistant position. It took them almost four years to get close enough to Mia where she was comfortable enough to be around them as best friends. Now they want more and they are determine to make Mia the only woman in their life. 

Loving Mia was first posted on Fictionpress, then later transferred to The Chamber by KatherineMadison. Please do not copy and post my story to any other sites without my permission. Thank you! This story is an original fiction completely written from my overactive imagination. 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:Yes
Word count: 96215
Read Count: 229047
Published: 16/11/10
Updated: 16/02/11


Title: Chapter 15: A Mother's Love

"I think you're going to hell, but I'm still going to love you."....what a thing to say. lol

Author's Response: Only Mama Ruth would say it. LOL 

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Date: 18/12/10

Title: Chapter 19: Meet The Parents

lol that's what those old biddies get. haha. if mia is preggers i really want it to be aiden's for some reason.  thnx 4 the update!

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Date: 21/01/11

Title: Chapter 25: The Miracle

That was beautiful. and oh how i missed these three. 

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Date: 02/04/11

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Summary:

 

 

Miss. Innocent meets Mr. Dangerous.

Who says love has to be soft and gentle?

*****

Caution is an original work of fiction written by C.C. Please do not copy and paste this story to any other websites. 

 

Beautiful banner by: The Queen, Missus James!!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: La Famiglia
Chapters: 33
Completed:Yes
Word count: 165
Read Count: 136399
Published: 27/11/10
Updated: 21/06/11


Title: Chapter 24: Something New?

well i hope lamar is proud of himself.

Author's Response: That jerk lol!

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Date: 19/12/10

Title: Chapter 32: Happy Endings?

ooh i can't wait till the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)

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Date: 28/12/10

Title: Chapter 29: A Night Out And A Little Queasy

pebbles, pebbles. lol so....when's the sh*t gonna hit the fan?

Author's Response: Lol, it's coming!

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Date: 25/12/10

Title: Chapter 16: Lies

well damn that was lower than low. where's grandpa De Luca, F^ck Lamar up!

Author's Response: Lmfao, we might have to call the code blue!

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Date: 12/12/10

Title: Chapter 5: First Meeting

lol, he's such a pessimist. but a hott one!

Author's Response: I AGREE, LOL!

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Date: 30/11/10