Penname: neneburge [Contact]

Real name: Anita Brown

Member Since: 03/03/09

Membership status: Member

Bio:

40+ year old mother of two..married 20years to same fella...who is extremely patient with me and loves it when you girls right the naughty cause it makes me amourous as he puts it..I just say horney..rotfl!

I am currently taking care of our neices who are 4yrs and 8yrs my (my kids: daughter is 21 and my son is 23) and it makes me feel young!!

I love to read. I love meeting new people. I love talking (as you can tell).

I work too hard but I am extremely grateful to have a job at this time!

I am very active in my church and with organizations I believe in because I believe that actions speak louder than words!!

I put God first in my life, my family second , my friends third and everything else falls into place!!

I am very happy I found this place and you wonderfully talented ladies!!! You make me smile, laugh, cry (rarely) and enjoy reading again!!

  

 




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Chasing Venus by ShanniC
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 28]
Summary: Photobucket

 

A chance encounter on an elevator causes two people to reevaluate the meaning of love and life. Can true love be met all while Chasing Venus? Can a wallflower change? Can a savvy businessman learn that love is the riskiest deal of all? Interracial romance. What happens when cultures cross, in-laws meet, and an unconventional woman faces a very traditional family?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 6587
Read Count: 6381
Published: 08/07/08
Updated: 20/06/10

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

I just found this wonderful little story and I am intrigued. I have thoroughly enjoyed the first two chapters and cannot wait to read more about these two!!

It is apparant that Ryochi is smitten by Ms. Nadia and even in her denial ..shee will have to admit she is digging his sexyself!!

I cannot wait for their date..it shall provve quite interesting I am sure...will there be sparks..well it seem sthere are already..lol!! 

Ok so mom is match making it would appear..she is promoting the ex no matter what grief she caused her son..Ryochi is none to pleased..i cannot wait to see where this confrontation leads!!

Great job sweetie...I am enjoying thisstory a lot!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/06/10
Would You Still Love Me in the Morning? by MidnightLone
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 66]
Summary:

what happens when a one night stand becomes somthing more? Lucas is a man of many talents and a dark past that could make or break him. He keeps his distance from others not allowing anyone to get close to him. That was until Bea appeared calling out to somthing inside of him. He wont stop till she is his armed with determination and a killer smile. Can her love save him?

Or will she run?

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 22575
Read Count: 56159
Published: 06/09/08
Updated: 27/11/09

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Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Ok I am all caught up adn I want her to stop running. At this point she has to realize this man loves her. All he ha sdone and said screams I love you but how much rejection is he suppose to take. He is a fragile person just like her and she is doing to him what she has had done to her..she needs to stop and accept that he really cares for her.

This is very ggod sweetie...I love all the characters and their individual stories..there are still so many things yet explored so I am requesting an upt as soon as possible...this is  great stoory!!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/08/09
Valkyrie by rogueprinzess
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 74]
Summary:

Dawn Austin is a geologist, living her life in Vancouver until she's offered her dream job in Iceland only days before her 30th birthday. On the eve of her birthday,her body starts to change, and with the help of a new friend, she learns that she is a creature of myth; a Valkyrie.

Dawn is then introduced to a world she never knew existed; made up of creatures and places that she'd always thought were no more than fantasy. But her biggest challenge may be learning to live with what binds her to this world - the Elfen Lord, Hinrik. 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 67135
Read Count: 8924
Published: 25/10/08
Updated: 24/08/09

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Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7 - Clarity

Yeah ..I am so happy for this update..I love this story!!

Ok Dawn's dream at the beginning was ubber hot so hot I had to turn on my fan..lol!

Love Hinrik with his fine behind..I will take him if Dawn doesn't want him.

What is Leelee looking for..is she trying to find out more info on Dawn's dad??

I am sure that Hinrik's brother is behind those strange deaths and he will be an issue going forward...

I cannot wait for Dawn to confront Hinrik...I hop they get so hot and bothered they get some of that hot, I didn't know I was married sex..rotfl!!

 I love this story and I am so happy it is back...don'y make us wait so long for the next one...cause we can't take it!!

 BTW did I say how much I love me some Hinrik,,,yes!

Great job sweetie!!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/03/09
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8 - Protection

Lawd I remembered why I loved this story so much!! It reads like one of the best sci fi, action packed, love stories Eva!!

Hinrik and Dawn are going to be on hella bad team when they finally get together..cause Ms. Dawn has some serious powers she is harvesting!! She may tun his hair grey but they are hawt togther and they haven't even consumated their marriage.lol!

akob is quite sexy ..I must say but loving Meike and hating Dawn and her kind is a bad mix..I do hope he will be ok on his trip!!

Leelee wwill solve this mystery, I have mu suspicions but I will ait to find out what happened..I just dont think tha gnone was a real gnome!!

Poor Dagur has his hand full with dawn..I feel for him..lol!

I cannot wait for training woith Rinn he seems like a real trip and when Dawn finally talks with Hinrik..it will be quite a svene!!

Great updt sweetiee...plz dont make us wait do long for the next one!! Excellent!!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/08/09
RHAPSODY IN BLUE by Raven White
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 23]
Summary:

A young Irish gangster falls for an older woman with ambitions for musical stardom, in 1930's prohibition Ohio.

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 12029
Read Count: 4880
Published: 15/12/08
Updated: 15/12/08

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Title: Chapter 4: INTERLUDE

Wow TBG recommended this story to me and I am so glad she did..it was awesome!! The imaginery, the dialogue, the relationship and passion was beautiful!1

I adore how he loved her and was unafraid of the consequences and try as she might she had to give in to that love!! I love the May /December aspect. It was not a focus of the story but it was a fact that made his love for her even more special!!

Can I tell you how afraid I was that something bad would happen to them because of his lifestyle and her race but also because he just did not give a darn what anyone thought about their relationship!

How grateful and relieved I was that his boss let him go and that they made a wonderful life for themselves in France!!

Oh btw I love love love that the ultimate badsss was Eva..no one messes with her family...yeah baby!!

I loved ths sweetie..expertly written smart and darn sexy!! Great job!!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/08/09
The Rebellions of Simone Russell by luckybrans
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Simone doesn't dye her hair or wear strange clothing. She lives instead.



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Categories: Daytime Television, Passions
Characters: Eve Russell, Simone Russell, Whitney Russell
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Chamber Character Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3025
Read Count: 3082
Published: 05/01/09
Updated: 05/01/09

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Title: Chapter 1: The Rebellions of Simone Russell

Wow what a gem of a story!! I loved it..I loved Simone!! I want to know more about her, her life, her future!! I see so many people I know and a part of myself in her and it made me feel things I have not thought about for a very long time!! Excellent sweetie..great job!

Author's Response:

Thanks Nene,

It's a huge compliment to say that you see yourself and others in Simone. Thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/08/09
CELIA by chocolate470
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 135]
Summary:

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Their love affair was never destined to go on for a lifetime - his father made sure of that outcome. Pregnant and alone Celia found comfort in the arms of Joseph who became a husband to her and a father to Joshua...the only man she could place her faith and trust.

Circumstances change and she had to seek out the one man that still had a part of her soul. How would things play out and how would it affect those around them?

Dedicated to: Megumi, Brown_Mocha, Sweet Pea and Robin



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 59634
Read Count: 76499
Published: 09/02/09
Updated: 04/06/09

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Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I really dislkike his wife more than anything..I just hope he finds out before she takes him for everything he has and ruins his relationship with his servants.

I am not sure how I feel about Celia actually still being in love with Dr, Campbell..I know that there was not much he could have done to protect her from his father but He should have done more especially when she was having his baby..I don't know...

Plus her husband is away at sea and very much in love with her and that baby...there can be no real future for celia and the dr in this time period so ..I just don't know what to feel about them..

This story however is very thought provoking and emotional...I have a hard time with period pieces durring slavery times but this is so well done and the servants are very real people not stereotypes..I am really enjoying this story sweetie...good job!



Author's Response:

Hey neneburg,

"The Bay" is loosely based on my own country's own history with emancipation and the creation of our own "Creole" population. Marriages they didn't allow but you could pretty much live with one another (not being seen in public) The children and grandchildren of these unions went on to government positions once the Legislature was established.

Jonathan is Celia's first love and she didn't tell him about the baby. He wishes the child that she has was his but he actually doesn't know. After she was thrown out of the Campbell's estate Jonathan went away to England to study. First loves are the hardest things to leave in the past especially if you were torn away from that person.

Thanks for the great review nene! 

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/03/09
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

This is such a sweet sad story! I feel for the doctor and Celia. He has a witch for a wife BTW I DO NOT think he hd sex with her and I think she drugged him. I sure hope he finds out and gets rid of her behind once and for all. I want him to know about his son, I think Joshua deserves to have a better life that his father may be able to help him have financially.

I still am not sure about how I feel about the two of them together but I do realize that he really does love her and vice versa..I just hope this ends good for both of them!! 

Love this story sweetie..cannot wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Hey neneburge...

Amy is a witch that wants what she wants but we all know why he ended up with someone like her...I know its hard to imagine them being together because of the time period but when there is a will there is a way and believe in in "Crufy" land we always know how to make a way...LOL!!!

Thanks for all the support and of course the fabulous review!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/03/09
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Yes she still loves and it is obvious he cares for her. I wonder is he sending that cow off so he can try and get back in Celia's good graces. I wonder when I know she will) tell him about his son. I really don't think he will be angry but I do think he needs to know about his son.This story gets better and better each chapter. I got my fingers crossed for a happy ending for our kids but it will not be easy and w/o some heartache!!

I really love this story...the relationship between Celia and the Dr. pulls you and captures your heart!! Great job sweetie!!



Author's Response:

Hey nene,

The feelings have always remained because circumstances beyond their control tore them apart. Its hard not to think about that love that was lost. So they went on with life married people whom society said that they should marry but Joshua is the child that binds them together forever regardless of what anyone wants to believe. You are correct in saying that someone will get hurt.

I'm so glad that you love this story and thanks for your awesome review!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/03/09
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

OK you wrong for that cliffie..lol!!

Ok he had that kook locked up yeahhhh!!! I could not be happier..but now the poop is going to hit the fan..I want them to be together so badly but there is stll that little matter of Celia's husband..ok!! I know that is Celia's bossy but sister all up in their conversation ,,she needs to chill..he has done all he could to be with the woman he loves and I pray nothing stands in their way!!

Girl it is getting goood!! Love it..you are writing the heck out of this story!! 

 



Author's Response:

Hey nene...having a lot of internet issues

No I wouldn't do a cliffhanger to my readers...Laughing Yeah its Lydia butting in where she doesnt belong. I'm happy that you are still enjoying the story. Thanks for the awesome review!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/05/09
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Ok the stuff about to hit the fan now...if Celia takes him up on his offer what about her husband..I knwo Amy is going to be shipped off but I have a feeling not before causing all inds of problems for the servants and her husband..but who cares about that skank...I am more concerned about Celia and the Doctor and how to let her husband down easy w/o causing him pain he did not deserve..so good sweetie but addicting I need more!!!

Author's Response:

Hey nene,

Would you take him up on the offer? Ok I'm debating as much as Celia is...as much as any woman is! Whenever there is three persons involved in a relationship there is bound to be pain no matter which one she chooses...

I'm so happy that you are enjoying the story and thanks for the awesome review!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/04/09
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Ok Celia sister was seriously getting on my nerves..I wanted her to mind her own business!!

 

I may be wrong but  I want her and the doctor to wind up together, it is not their fault that his hateful daddy bansihed her away and he still loves her but more important he derserves to be with his son!!

I think Joseph and Lydia should wind up together..then she could shut up singing his praises. THough I don't want Joseph hurt does not mean I want him to have Celia either!

I love this story sweetie..I love the doc and celia's relationship so sweet and pure..I just want them to be alright!! Great job!!



Author's Response:

Hey neneburge,

Don't you enjoy having a conscious that is also your sister...you get it everyday...LOL!! Jonathan wants to have the opportunity to take care of the woman he loves and their son because he can do it now. Celia feels caught between the two because there is love and on the other hand she feels indebted to Joseph. Jonathan is definitely going to tighten the screws on her mentally and we all know what might happen when Joseph returns. Thanks for the great review!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/04/09
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Well looks like old Joseph is not in love with Ms. Celia anyway just the baby...that is good news..maybe can hook up with the ship trollop and stay the heck away from Celia..lol!

Dr, Jonathan is taking control and I like it!! He is going to get his woamn and his baby...even if she has to come to him kicking and screaming but I like that Celia is not push over...he will have to work for her but I hope she will finally give in to her heart!!

Amy is a skank and plotting stupid skank but hopefully Jonathan's got her number and will stop her before she causes any grief!! 

Loving this little jewel of a story..it is a love story I would not have imagined working..but you write it so well..it feels just natural!!

 



Author's Response:

Hey neneburge,

Yeah he still loves her but his time at sea has allowed him to really think about his marriage and what the future has in store for him.

Finding out that Joshua is his son makes him want to fight for her more but first he has to get rid of the stubborn Amy discreetly as possible. It's only then he feels that the way will be cleared for them both.

Thanks for the compliment, I feel humbled and also thanks for the awesome review!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/04/09
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I love this story but I really want to hit that darn Amy in the head and drag her behind off to some desolate island away from Celia and the doctor!!

I do believe that cow Amy will get found out sooner rather than later and I hope he dump her behind off in some cave somewhere after he divorces her!!

Poor Celia is caught in between love and obligation, my heart aches for her but I so want her to wind up with the doctor..I sorry but he loves her so much and she does him too!

I do love me some Hortense though...I hate she had to leave cause she called Lydia straight out...sickening sibling that she is...

I am love this sweet story with all it's complexities...you are doing such a wonderful job sweetie..I can hardly wait for more!



Author's Response:

Hey nene,

Remember she is still the wife..Laughing Amy may also think that she knows what she is doing but really she doesn't... It took a lot to leave your husband in those days...it had a lot of consequences (mainly for white society) but Celia is finding it hard to give up on a man who was there for her and Joshua. I hope that I can continue to make you enjoy this story. I'll try my bestWink

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/04/09
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

OK I despise Amy and Sara but the only good thing about Sara is she is going to help us get rid of amy..yeah!!

I love how naturally Joshua has taken to his daddy and vice versa..they belong together and if mommy would just stop fighting it and go with her heart she would see that too..

I think Joseph will make a good match with the sea whore..he is a seaman and belongs on te sea with someone he cares about and that cares about him...nor Celie!!

Thus story keeps getting betterlllI am wwayy ti impatient for another update....great job sweetie!!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much for the review neneburge,

You could always find a good spar partner back in those Victorian times.Smile

Sometimes I believe that children have an idea when someone is going to treat them well and as you say its all natural. Its her duty as a married woman to fight itLaughing

Sorry about the update today forgot to copy the darn thing off my computerInnocent

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/05/09
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

I really would not not be surprised if her sister's baby is Joseph's cause she is really over the top defending him and I wanted to slap her darn face!1

I want Celia and Jonathan to be happy they deserve it after all they have been through and all they will face being together..they some happiness!

I am glad she left with him and glad they finally got to get it on...Jonathan has been waiting a long time and put it on Ms. Celia rotfl!! But it made my heart happy to see them finally able to share their love for each other w/o snicking around...now let's hope Jonathan can stand up to his eveil daddy!

I lurvs this story,,,so sweet and complex..I never thought I would because of the slavery aspect but I adore it!!



Author's Response:

Hey nene,

Thanks for the awesome review! I have really given the readers women that I want to slap aroundLaughing  Technically speaking isn't Celia sort of sneeking around...Laughing Have to correct you a little the Bay is an English colony so the black community has been emancipated since 1832 but you know how emancipation goes....Frown 

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/05/09
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

They are so happy , why does Jonathan's stinkin Daddy have to show up!! I hoep Jonathan and Celia do not let hin steal their happiness again...I glad that he is broke though I just hope Jonathan kicks his butt to the curb!!

I knew Celia's man was not in love with her..I hope he really loves this woman and they wind up together so he does not give Celia a hard time about being with Jonathan..plz let them stay happy!! 

I really love the baby..Joshua..he is adorable!!



Author's Response:

hey nene,

Daddy is tettering on bankruptcy and you know how much it costs to run an estate...:) Like I said the readers will see how that father and son reunion goes! Nene you know some men...want their cake and eat it too...;) As for Joshua is so like his father or should I say fathers...:) Thanks for the awesome review!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/05/09
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

It is over...nooooo!!! Though a happy ending  I am happy about I didn't want it to be over so quickly!! I love this story and I am so grateful they todk Jonathan's stinking ddaddy off...and booted him!! I am sad Joseph was hurt but He didnt love Celia really..it was a pride thing!! I am so happy their family is finally complete and hopefully they will have a girl to make it even more wonderful!!

Great job sweetie..I really loved this story!! 

 



Author's Response:

Hey nene,

Yes it's over for now at least! LOL!! I have some things out there that can be resolved or not...it all depends but I couldn't give it the justice that it needed right now. Maybe I can write that dreaded sequel. There's always this fear that it won't measure up to the first but maybe this one time...who knows...like I said before it all depends. Happy that you loved the story! Thanks for your support and leaving those fantastic reviews!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/06/09
The Art of the Steal by Reese
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 272]
Summary:

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Art Historian Aidan Bell and student Collista Carson can't stand each other. Yet for some reason, he asks her to be his new assistant.  Although doubtful that they can co-exist without killing each other, Collista has her grade in his class to think about and so accepts the position.  One thing leads to another, and before long, the two are finding it hard to maintain their professional distance.

Then the specter of Aidan's murky past casts its shadow over the forbidden relationship.  Add a priceless painting, a ruthless art collector and soon Collista finds herself in the position of having to help Aidan solve a mystery before he goes down for the count.  Will he have enough time to teach her what she needs to know about the art of the steal?  

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 26
Completed:Yes
Word count: 131714
Read Count: 89838
Published: 22/02/09
Updated: 22/02/10

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Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five

Well I was just thinking about this story today what a pleasant surprise!!

I know the professsor will lose this fight and he knows it too but pride will make him fight her more before he fnally gives in...I just hope he does not say or do anything stupid ..he is a man lol!!

I love their relationship...they are formal and hot..lol...they both want each other badly but Bell is allowing his past and his job to keep him from his desires for Collista.

I cannot wait to see how she finally gets him to break down those barriers and come to realization he can no resist her!!

 Love this story, hotness and sweetness combined! Great job!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, Nene!  Yeah, Bell is slowly losely the confident grip he had on this situation.  Not sure he realizes yet that there's more to this attraction than just the physical.  And him being a man does make you wonder if he's gonna do something dumb or not.  lol

Yes, Bell has a couple of genuine reasons for wanting to keep his distance, but let's hope that his resolve his so weakened that he does finally submit. 

Aren't they kinda cute with their verbal formality while being wholly familiar with each other at the same time?

I'm glad you're enjoying the story.  Thanks for reviewing. 

 

 

 

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/03/09
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Fourteen

Ok you on an updting roll girlie and they are all good!! Ok I am kinda worried about Aiden's past and what could be there strong enough to allow that cow to come along and blackmail him??There is something he is ashamed of and it could not just be the relationship he had with the wicked witch of the east when he was young ..that is nothing so it must be more!!

I cannot wait to find out..I just hope whatever it is Collista will not turn her back on Aiden (with his fine self..lol)...



Author's Response:

Well, thank ya ma'am!  I aim to please. lol  Oh, you guys are funny.  After calling him out in successive chapters for not being truthful, NOW you're afraid of what Aidan will reveal about his past?   LMAO, nene! I love it!  Man, Carla's the wicked witch and a cow.   Interestsing combination. 

I'm hoping Collista loves Aidan enough not to take off running for the hills too after the reveal.  We'll see very soon.  *wink*

Thanks for reviewing.

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/09/09
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Six

OK hot was not the word for their love making,,it was sizzling!!! Bell just needs to realize this little Colista ain't going to just walk away from him especially now after she has bitten from the forbidden tree!!He is moral and ethical man but that should not chnage their relationship...he has not forced her to do anything actually kinda vice versa!! So if he plans on trying to end it now he should just give in cause Ms. Colista wants to keeep her sexy professor and I am sure she will!!

Great update sweetie...I sure there are more twist and turns but I love that they finally have done the do and realized their feelings for each  other cannot be surprased!!

I cannot wait for more!!



Author's Response:

LOL.  "...bitten for the forbidden tree!" Ha!  I like that.  I don't think Bell realizes that he's no match for our Collista. 

Yes, there are more twists and turns coming up.  Stay turned.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/04/09
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Seven

Yeahhhh!! I am so happy Aiden is not as big of a dick as I was about to think he was...when he avoided her and didn't even return her calls I was furious at him. That was not the way mature adults handle this situation..he should have talked to her and explained this all before they slept together and after....so they both knew what to expect afterwards..but avoidance is what kids do when you ask tehm to do something they do not want to do...lol

 But good old Aiden could not resist those sexy girls of Colista, I think in the back of her mind she knew if she got him back home alone, he would cave in and sexy Aiden would come back!!

I think they are sexy as heck together and both eggheads so that works out perfectly!!!

I really like this sweet sexy story sweetie...you have written it so well..excellengt job~!! Hey two updates in one week..I am getting spoiled!



Author's Response:

I was scurred of you after that last review, so I was quick to put a bug in Aidan's ear for his own safety.  Quite of few of your were gunning for him, and I still need him for this story.  lol Gotta protect my boy.  No, Aidan being a man did what mature men sometimes do: act like complete buttheads.  lol  Childish buttheads.  Don't let his ethics and morals fool you, dude, is still a man.

I agree. There's no way Collista wasn't at least hoping deep inside that Aidan might crack.  And if she was, she was right on the money.  I don't think he lasted five minutes. 

Thanks Nene.  I'm really glad you're enoying these two as much as you are.  I'm going to try my best to keep spoiling you guys with more freguent updates. 

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/05/09
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Thirteen

Darn that Aiden is fine!!!!! And his woman ain't too bad either..rotfl!!

They are the craziest duo alwasy running to the stupist conclusions..geez!! I am glad this time however it did not make them run away from each other or make them spend too much time worrying about something that was not true!

Even though Aiden was all kinds of wrong at least he did something about his feelings right away..so the problem got solved quickly!! 

And Rocky is way understanding..lol!!

YOU GO RESSE WITH YOUR REGULAR UPDTING SELF..ROTFL!! LOVING IT SWEETIE!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/09/09
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Eight

Ok my kids are getting the true feeling out and it is nice!!

I really wanted to beat Iris; behind myself..sh was way over the line...she was treating Collissts like a child that had been violated instead of a grown womann..who makes her own decisions bt thhankk goodness Adrian is not a hot and tell her to blow off like I would,lol!

Great updt sweetie..I can feel their love growing..don't make us wait so lomg for the next updt to this gem!! Great job!!



Author's Response:

Lol.  Iris is a firecracker, isn't she?  I wanted to hurt her as I was writing her sass.  However, thankfully Aidan is truly smitten and willing to put up with someone who loves Collista as much as he does. 

They are indeed embarking on a whirlwind courtship, though one of a secret native.  The next update won't be as long away as this one was.  Sorry for the delay.  But I'm glad it didn't disappoint.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

 

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/08/09
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Nine

Wow I hope Colista talks to Aiden though there is no telling what stupid thing he may say in an effort to protect her...why can't people just tell the whole truth!!

This Carla witch is bad news but what is it that she has on Aiden..as straight laced and cconservative a she is..what secrets can he be hiding!!

I just feel heart sick for Colista..young in love and very hurt right now!! Don't make her (and us) suffer too long sweete....great update!!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/08/09