Penname: dissociative_identity [Contact]

Real name: Sofiya

Member Since: 31/03/09

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Always You by Renee Banks
Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 42]
Summary:

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When they were young, Kendal and Keoni hated one another. But as they grew into young adults something changed. Now, on the verge of adulthood, they'll come to discover that the ones they've been looking for were right there all along.

A one shot for Nene and the Summer Prompt Fest.

 

Disclaimer/Credit: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended. Image from gettyimages.com.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5755
Read Count: 15791
Published: 04/05/10
Updated: 04/05/10

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Title: Chapter 3: When we were in love

Oh god, this is so beautiful. And the ending! That was like a knife being twisted in my stomach!! When I read that I felt really overwhelmingly sad as well as my self righteousness rising, its not fair! Its not fair! Why?

This was a beautiful story and I loved the imagery. But it's made me feel so sad. Which is a testament to your writing itself.

 Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed
Date: 30/06/11
The Role We Play by mocasoul
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 58]
Summary:

 

 

With a big break-out role in the 1840’s period piece, Lilies, Corrine Evans knew her career was going to change from stage and indie film actress to full on mega star. Working with one of England’s hottest leading men, Ian Foster, as a love interest in the film didn’t hurt either…



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 16836
Read Count: 11087
Published: 07/06/10
Updated: 28/11/10

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Interesting start, looking forward to seeing where this is heading!

 Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed
Date: 07/06/10
Title: Chapter 1: Cast pics

Hey, am loving your cast and your story looks really promising, I cannot wait to read more!

 Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed
Date: 07/06/10
Three's A Crowd by Valhalla
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 61]
Summary:

 

Just when Georgina Akande thought she had rid herself of her creepy ex-fiance, he strolls back into her life in the worst way possible.

A misguided attempt to assert herself leads to some painful home truths, but, also, the opportunity to grow and love again.



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Categories: Books, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Love Is...
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 37015
Read Count: 8026
Published: 18/01/11
Updated: 31/05/11

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Title: Chapter 11: A Cold, Wet Fish To The Face Part I

Have spent the last hour and a half reading this instead of studying.

I don't know how many variations you can get on the word amazing, so I'll stick to that word and repeat it many times over. This story is amazing, amazing, amazing! Love George and her narration, she is such a cool chick! I love all the characters in this story too.

I am eagerly awaiting more, cannot wait to see where this goes!

 Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed
Date: 01/06/11
Retired
Ungodly Fruit by Poppy Velour
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 36]
Summary:
Alice Darhling is a Victorian-era young woman whose life is about to take a hedonistic turn when a vile Lord darkens her doorstep and becomes the catalyst that spirits her away to Wonderland.


An erotic revision of Alice in Wonderland. This is not your mother's old tale.


Table of Contents
Categories: Books, Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: A Fantasy Chronicle
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 9778
Read Count: 11383
Published: 17/02/11
Updated: 30/03/11

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Title: Chapter 2: Wounded Rhymes

Wow, wow and wow! This is amazing! Such gorgeous writing, not only through language and prose but the descriptive writing presents such beautiful imagery.

I love Alice, and I feel so bad for her predicament. She is a wonderful heroine, headstrong with integrity.

I kinda hate Arthur but I like him too. He is sexy and very dark yet how he Chessa I find appalling...but even that scene was sexy.

Im interested in who is going to win the battle of wits, Im rooting for Alice of course and I can't wait to see where this goes.

I am desperately awaiting more!

Much love

-Sofiya.

 

 

 

 Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed
Date: 18/04/11
Title: Chapter 1: All Good Things (Must Come to an End)

I know you're probably busy but I do hope you're updating soon! Loving your work so much!



Author's Response: I've been on a somewhat procrastinator break. I'm been picking at this one (trying to get it right I guess, lol) as well as the plethora of jumble in my head. But after a mini vacay, I will surely begin a revamp somewhat. Thanks for reading and I admire your work!

 Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed
Date: 01/06/11
Memories from an Ancient Past by Pretty eyes
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 24]
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 Some people seem to believe that when our body dies our soul lives on forever and we are reborn again into another body. We are recarnated to relive our past lives differently. To fix our mistakes of the past. We encounter the same people that we once did in our other lives. 

 

As for Alexandra and Shane there is a sense of a familiar connection to these mere strangers could it be because they lived a past life together.

 

Memories of an Ancient past... is not you're average time story. This is with a little Biting blood twist.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Music, Books, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Friendship, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 4165
Read Count: 3339
Published: 25/03/11
Updated: 28/08/11

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey its a really interesting start, great plot! Aaliyah was gorgeous in QOTD, I am keen to see where this goes, more please!

 Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed
Date: 25/03/11
One Long Night by tpeezy22
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Teresa has to spend her weekend completing her assignments for her Major British Writer’s class. What happens when stress, wine, and sleep deprivation are mixed together? Nothing good…

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Movies, Books, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2464
Read Count: 1416
Published: 27/04/11
Updated: 27/04/11

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, this is such an exciting and well written story! So sexy! Definetely a good way to get material for your essay and have fun at the same time!

So it was just a dream? Damn I'm so curious to see where it goes from there.

 Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed
Date: 27/04/11
In My Mind by TRaberah EH
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:

The moment she met him, she wanted to be his girl.  When she lost him, she understood that she always would be.


Title temporarily borrowed from Heather Headly's song of the same name.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1053
Read Count: 856
Published: 22/05/11
Updated: 22/05/11

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Title: Chapter 1: Preface

This is amazing, I am so so intrigued. It is a gorgeous one shot but I do hope you write more! Thank you so much!



Author's Response:

I actually would like to write more and plan to now. Their story isn't quite finished, I'm afraid.

Thank you so much for reading this, your comment made me smile!

 Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed
Date: 22/05/11
Unfinished Business by Missus James
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 22]
Summary:

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One-shot story.


Sadie Thompson returns to her hometown for her grandmother's funeral after being away for seven years and is forced to confront the very reason she left town in the first place.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 7626
Read Count: 3064
Published: 20/06/11
Updated: 20/06/11

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Title: Chapter 1: Unfinished Business

Really beautiful story and really wonderfully written, the setting/scenery of this story is beautiful. I hate to say this though but the situation kind of annoyed me. She left home for seven years because she couldn't face the seriousness of her relationship with Lucas? And then she comes back after her grandmother dies and ends up with him anyway?

Im sorry but Sadie needs to grow the hell up. How could she do such a horrible thing, if not to Lucas, then to her family?? Her grandmother is dead!! How can she live with herself? She missed out on the last seven years of her grandmother's life over some guy...she leaves her grandma without a conscience and then cries once she is dead, I wanted to slap the hell out of her. I'm sorry but it's what you do with your family that's alive that counts, she can cry her tears but it does nothing for her grandma, who she hurt by by her actions by staying away for so long.

I know I am sounding way way harsh but she just comes across like a bratty drama queen child who thinks of no one but herself. I wouldn't trust someone who was as flighty as her, who can take off at a momen't notice without any regard for anyone else. 

Please don't take this as a negative review hun, just my take on the situation, I hope I get to read more about these two because they sound like a really good couple despite what happened and I enjoy reading about flawed human beings, its realistic than your super sweet perfect character. And I hope Sadie somehow gets to redeem herself.

Wonderful short story!



Author's Response:

I don't think that this is a harsh review. Everyone has their opinion and view on stories, so I like to see everyone's points of view. I'll agree with you that Sadie was selfish in what she did. She ran away from town over a guy and left everyone in the dust. Her grandmother was very sad over her leaving and when she died, Sadie then regretted the decisions she made in her life that lead her up to that point. That's why as the funeral grew closer, she was the one that was taking the beating the most because she realized the mistake she made. Her grandmother warned her that she would regret it, but she didn't listen and now she was paying the consquences. Thank you for your review. :)

 Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed
Date: 21/06/11