Penname: bayoumomma [Contact]

Real name: Wanda C Dixon

Member Since: 01/04/09

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Born and raised in Louisiana, presently living in San Antonio, Texas with husband and three kids. I am a big fan of all sports, NFL, MLB, NBA, track and field,  tennis you name it I will watch it. I love to read and happy to have found this site!!




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Beast by Onimosity
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

 

 Perhaps I have a little of the monster in me after all...

How much would you sacrifice for those you love? To save her father, Sunshine must give up the life she's longed for to a powerful gangster.

Can she go with him and keep herself?

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: Beastly Things
Chapters: 43
Completed:Yes
Word count: 183149
Read Count: 419713
Published: 05/12/09
Updated: 22/03/10

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Title: Chapter 3: You Touch Me

That was Hot!! Sergie seems to have feelings for her too. Anatoly said do not mess with what is Nikolai. As hard as she may try not to, she will fall for Nikolai. I enjoyed it ,looking forward to the next update!!

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Date: 05/12/09
Title: Chapter 4: With your kiss my life begins

I feel her pain. I thought her dad was going to tell her not to do it too. What is Antoly up too? I don't know if he can be trusted , why would he want to take care of her know? He has to now that her still being that close to Nikolai is going to cause a lot of troube. I like how generous Nikolai is. Loved the update!!

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Date: 06/12/09
Title: Chapter 5: We are creatures of the wind

He wants her, he gaveher everything she asked for. Antoly and Darla they are going to give them trouble. I like how she is trying to protect her brother. Great update!!

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Date: 06/12/09
Title: Chapter 6: Wild is the Wind

I thought you did an excellent job on your first "sex" scene. Enjoyed the update!!

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Date: 08/12/09
Title: Chapter 7: Cling to me.

I love how Sunshine is trying to make things better for her and her brother, just sorry this is the route she has to take. Benji is more of a man than his dad is that's for sure!  Thanks for another wonderful update!!

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Date: 08/12/09
Title: Chapter 8: Let the Wind Blow through Your Heart Part I

I hope she can be turly happy one day. Sergei is skating on dangerous ground. He needs to get rid of that picture because if Nikolai finds it there is going to be hell to pay. I was thinking she might develop feelings for Sergei but it doesn't look that way at least for now. Priscilla sounds like a sweet little lady maybe she'll be her sounding board!! Wonderful update.

 

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Date: 09/12/09
Title: Chapter 42: I've Made Up My Mind... to Let My Life Shine

I  wouldn't mind seeing Anatoly pop up in a story!

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Date: 17/03/10
Title: Chapter 9: Let the Wind Blow through Your Heart Part 2

Awesome update. He is treating her the way a man treats someone he is in love with.

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Date: 10/12/09
Title: Chapter 10: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

I'm glad that dad decided to go for help. Sergei worries me, he is obsessing over her it seems. Nikolai will have a fit if he sees that picture he keeps carrying around. I like Nikolai and Sunshine, granted it's a horrible deal but he cares for her.

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Date: 11/12/09
Title: Chapter 11: With your child's eyes ... You are more than you seem

Dad hasn't changed any. He stops the drinking but not the gambling. He had to know Nikolai wasn't going to just give in theat easy. Nikolai dosn't just care for Sunny I think he is in love with her. Sergei is too close to Sunny right now for me, someone is bound to get in trouble or hurt from this. Great update!!

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Date: 12/12/09
Title: Chapter 12: The places you've been ...The things you have learned ...They sit with you so beautifully

Dad is about to get into more trouble messing around with Darla. I'm hoping Sergei comes to his senses he is saying and doing so many things that will come back to haunt him in the end. Nikolia and Sunny are good for each other. Loved the update!!

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Date: 13/12/09
Title: Chapter 13: You know I tell the truth... We are just the same

Sergei needs to get the notion out of his head that he can be with Sunny. It's not going to happen. Anatoly has already warned him and who knows Nikolai better than he. That hug he gave her was so dangerous, I wouldn't put it past Nikolai to have assigned someone to watch them. I beleive he trusts Sunny but not Sergei. He is a love sick puppy!!

Still hoping dad doesn't hook up with Darla, but that seems inevitable since dad feels he isn't getting through to her with his actions so far. Awesome update.

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Date: 15/12/09
Title: Chapter 14: Making Holes in the Night

Nikki is not one to be played with something Sergei and Jacob shoud know, yet they still insist on challenging him. Anatoly needs to have a sit down wth his brother before he meets an unfortunate fate. Nikki loves Sunny and he has no intentions of letting her go after the five years is up. He is ruthless but with her he is so sweet and caring. I can see her dad's next step is going to be in cahoots with Darla!! Awesome update. Thanks for updating.

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Date: 17/12/09
Title: Chapter 15: I can feel everything you do...Hear everything you say

Darla and Sergei are going to join forces. I can see Jacob being hurt in the end. Anatoly has warned him, he needs to listen to big brother. I loved their getaway vacation!! Great update!

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Date: 20/12/09
Title: Chapter 16: We are Building Bridges Part 1

Sergei has a death wish. He keeps getting more involved in her life, yet she is showing no signs of feelings towards him. Enjoyed the update!!

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Date: 21/12/09
Title: Chapter 17: We Are Building Bridges Part 2

I hope Jetta isn't connected to Darla. The dreams are disturbing. What is mom trying to tell her. Nikolai is giving her more and more freedom. Sergei to me is  slipping up somewhat, he should always be some where near her to see anyone that she comes in contact with. If something were to happen he wouldn't be able to give Nikolai any details about it. Awesome update!!

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Date: 22/12/09
Title: Chapter 18: A fire burns... Water comes

Please let him change his mind about Darla helping him. Jacob will self destruct without help from anyone. He played a lottery ticket while in rehab. He doesn't need Darla. I'm glad she has Jetta to help her through this. Sergei has to know she has no feelings for him but he will not let up. Fantastic update. Happy holidays!!

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Date: 25/12/09
Title: Chapter 19: Even When You're Miles Away Part 1

Wonderful update. He finally admitted to someone he is in love with her.

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Date: 26/12/09
Title: Chapter 20: Even When You're Miles Away Part 2

I was pleased with the chapter. We cannot get rid of Darla can we? Jacob is going to be stupid enough to follow Peanut again, well for sure he has lost his kids now. Sunny may have been sore but she sure didn't turn him away!! Awesome update!

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Date: 29/12/09
Title: Chapter 26: Gotta Make My Own Way

I like the idea of the date thing and getting to know each other in a real relationship. Sergei can wait until he's old and gray and will never get a chance with Sunny.

He broke up with Nadia. I still don't believe she existed. Awesome update!!

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Date: 21/01/10
Title: Chapter 27: Today Is a New Day

Nikolai and Sunny, they are meant to be together. I'm so glad she finally realized what Sergei ha sbeen up to too. I don't think he is going to give up trying to be with her though.

Jetta can forget about the match making with Jil, she is and always will be Nikolia's. The one that brought him to his knees. I loved the update, awesome!!

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Date: 23/01/10
Title: Chapter 28: Different From Tomorrow You'll See

Sergei and now Jil. Nikolai has all kinds of competition. He has to share his history with her to some extent. Jil  seems just as sneaky to me as Sergei.  I loved the conversation with her mom. Awesome update!

 

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Date: 26/01/10
Title: Chapter 29: I'll Be High Flyin'

Fantastic update. I loved reading more about what happend to him when he was younger. The dinner and dancing and lovemaking scene, I can't get enough of these two. 

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Date: 29/01/10
Title: Chapter 30: By The Time You Make Up Your Mind

Nice update. Nikolai can and will change for Sunny, he is already by having a drink with a friend!

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Date: 02/02/10
Title: Chapter 31: By The Time You Come Round to Me

Jetta is a wonderful friend. I love the talk he an Anatoly had, but Sergei he just will not let go of this obsession of his. When will he learn! Nikolai is doing a wonderful job of courting her. I hope that wasn't Sergei calling her back, he had to have known if she had plans and it wasn't with the friends they hang out with it had to be Nikolai. Awesome update!!

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Date: 06/02/10