Penname: bayoumomma [Contact]

Real name: Wanda C Dixon

Member Since: 01/04/09

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Born and raised in Louisiana, presently living in San Antonio, Texas with husband and three kids. I am a big fan of all sports, NFL, MLB, NBA, track and field,  tennis you name it I will watch it. I love to read and happy to have found this site!!




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A new.... by kellyklue
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 158]
Summary:

Ethan “Dax” Daxton and his wife Dr. Zaire “Zhay” Daniels have drifted apart due to tragic circumstances. Dax awakes from a coma and has a case of amnesia not remembering his wife or current life. But, the minute he looks into Zhay’s eyes he falls in love all over again. The love that Dax and Zhay once shared was honest and sweet, but of late, it proved not enough to cure the hurts of the past, that they need in an effort to move forward.  Both must learn to forgive and love each other again, and that life is to short and precious not to include those whom you hold dear.


They are given a second chance to rediscover their love and what they do with it is completely up to them.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 47806
Read Count: 57986
Published: 19/02/10
Updated: 13/01/11

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Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - How do you know when you’re in love?

Loved it especially the flashbacks. They had a child together that didn't survive, that's so sad. I'm so glad he opened his eyes, I'm wondering if he heard them talking about their first born. Awesome update. Welcome back.

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Date: 28/10/10
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Not today

Dax is the one who messed up in the marriage, yet he screwed around with her professional life, why? I'm not understanding his need to make her look bad when he was the one at fault. His family blames her, do they not know that he is the one that was having an affair and had her committed and all those other awful things he did. Is there more to the story, did she too have a major role in the breakup of the marraige? Loved the update!



Author's Response: Thank you for reading. Dax is hurt by the circumstances that lead them here. And Zhay, is too, but Dax is so used to being in control and now he's not. More to come, so stick around.

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Date: 22/02/10
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-The players

I like the cast pics!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

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Date: 22/02/10
Title: Chapter 1: 1-The Intro

I like the start of your story. I can't wait to see what had them heading towards a possible divorce.

Author's Response: Thanks!1 I am working on the updates and I hope to post them soon.

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Date: 20/02/10
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - I have nothing left to give

They lost so much , now I see why he felt the way he did. She promised him she would stay home and take care of herself. Her colleague knew she was having trouble with her pregnancy as well yet he continued to push her to come in, but it was still up to her to say no and she didn't. I would be crazy to this day if all of that happened to me, how do you recover from so much heart ache? wonderful update.



Author's Response: thank you for reading. they have lost so much. but i think that they are stronger than they think. will they find their way back to each other? I hope so :-).

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Date: 25/06/10
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-Thank's Mom

What happened in the relationship to make them hate each other, inquiring minds need to know!! Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. It will be revealed in the next few chapters. Stay tuned.

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Date: 26/02/10
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - I get it, you love her

Rosie and Barron have a history, very interesting. It seems that they both had a hand in the marriage ending, but what. Nice update!

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Date: 27/02/10
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

Loved it. The history of how all of them got started in their relationships was awesome. I don't know if I should feel sorry Dax's mom or not. Barron's  Dad was an awful man, especially in his treastment of her. He liked Rosie just didn't like her color, liked the wife's skin color but didn't like her. She didn't even want kids, but when it came as a means to and end for her and the relationship with Barron she was all for it. She didn't seem like she was a good mother, which is probably why Dax is so close to Rosie. Wonderful update. Happy Thanksgiving!

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Date: 25/11/10
Blurring Lines by mocasoul
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 89]
Summary:

Regina Morris is black, recently moved from New York, and has a huge crush on Alan Bosley. Will she pursue a relationship with him during Alexandria, Virginia’s most trying time?

A Remember the Titans story...



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 14298
Read Count: 70615
Published: 20/02/10
Updated: 23/08/10

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Nice update!

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Date: 24/02/10
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Thanks for the update! They are asking for trouble!

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Date: 22/02/10
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Thanks for the update. I wonder if the talk will do any good?

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Date: 01/07/10
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I hope Alan confides in Coach about his dad beating him. Wonderful update.

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Date: 18/04/10
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

It would be wonderul if hs dad had a change of heart about her, doubt it will happen. I agree with her he should talk to his dad. Great update!!i

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Date: 30/05/10
Title: Chapter 1: Cast

This is one of my favorite movies!

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Date: 20/02/10
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like it. Alan has a crush, sweet. Thanks for the update!

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Date: 20/02/10
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Thanks for the update. His dad is going to hurt him, he should really think about not going home tonight.

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Date: 12/05/10
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great update. He had to have known what his dad was going to do. Maybe Coach can go and beat his dad's behind.

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Date: 14/05/10
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Nice update. Dad is not going to like that.

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Date: 03/03/10
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

There is going to be trouble at the party. Nice update.

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Date: 09/03/10
Retired
The Memory Keeper by brookmeade
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 46]
Summary:

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"People think it is holding on that makes you stronger, but sometimes it's letting go."

From the author of Into the West

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Comedy , Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 5707
Read Count: 4107
Published: 23/03/10
Updated: 11/04/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Character Pics

I like the cast pics.

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Date: 25/03/10
Title: Chapter 2: Like You'll Never See Me

She can get her dignity and self respect back, move on with her life and find a man that is unattatched. What did she expect.



Author's Response:

I guess she was expecting something different.. ha..what's that old philosophy my momma always said 'once a bullsh*tter always a bullsh*tter" lol well that can be applied to cheaters as well.

Thanks for the review girl!

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Date: 25/03/10
Secrets In Liria by chocolate470
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 63]
Summary:

The opening chapter revisits the sad ending to the relationship of the young lovers Peter Weston and Zuri Adele.

As the years go by both their lives have strayed off into different directions. Now Peter embarks on his journey to Liria in search of a news story but also in search of closure but can his heart truly give up on its one true love? And what has become of Zuri? The woman who holds to key to his peace of mind.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 37037
Read Count: 6021
Published: 25/03/10
Updated: 17/12/10

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Now that the boys are on their own, will Zuri be allowed to make her way. Unfortunately she is about to be engaged to be married.

Author's Response:

Hey bayoumomma,

It's not that simple as it seems because Zuri has integrated herself back into her culture where women basically do what the men tell them to. Thanks for the awesome review as always!

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Date: 25/04/10
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So,they will meet again. Why did she have to stay on and work  for her dad if the boys moved on. Dad re-married and now has a new wife, so why can't she? Thanks for the update!!

Author's Response:

Hey bayoumomma,

Until she gets married then her father can still assert that control over her life. This is the reason why she misses being in England because it showed her a different way of life where women can do and think for themselves instead of waiting around to get married. Thanks for the awesome review!

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Date: 25/04/10
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm wondering if dad knew she was seeing someone outside her culture and made up this story to break them apart. Loved the beginning of your story!



Author's Response:

Hey bayoumomma

Thanks so much! The beginning of a story is always the highlight for me until you need to write the rest of it...LOL!!! Jengo is all about control and since he lost that control over his wife he needed to focus it on his daughter...Thanks for giving such an awesome review!

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Date: 25/04/10
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I don't think Juma is to be trusted. Loved the update!



Author's Response: Hey bayoumomma, Well you might be right...lol!!!! Thanks for the awesome review!

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Date: 22/05/10