Penname: bayoumomma [Contact]

Real name: Wanda C Dixon

Member Since: 01/04/09

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Born and raised in Louisiana, presently living in San Antonio, Texas with husband and three kids. I am a big fan of all sports, NFL, MLB, NBA, track and field,  tennis you name it I will watch it. I love to read and happy to have found this site!!




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[Reviews - 63]
Summary:

The opening chapter revisits the sad ending to the relationship of the young lovers Peter Weston and Zuri Adele.

As the years go by both their lives have strayed off into different directions. Now Peter embarks on his journey to Liria in search of a news story but also in search of closure but can his heart truly give up on its one true love? And what has become of Zuri? The woman who holds to key to his peace of mind.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 37037
Read Count: 6021
Published: 25/03/10
Updated: 17/12/10


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Juma doesn't sound like he is marrying her for the right reasons. What consequences will she have to face? He doesn't have any power does he or will he if he marries her. Loved the update.

Author's Response: bayoumomma, In Asha, the men have the power especially when they get married bc the women's father give them the blessing. First part of women's lives are controlled by the father's, the second part by the husband and that's why Zuri wished for an understanding husband. Thanks for the awesome review!

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Date: 11/05/10

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This sis going to get even more dangerous for them. Great update

 



Author's Response:

Hi bayoumomma,

The plot certainly thickens ;) I'm glad you're still enjoying my story. Thanks for reading!

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Date: 25/06/10

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great update. I hope they make it to safety!

Author's Response:

Hey bayoumomma

Thanks for the great review and I'm glad to you are enjoying my little story!

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Date: 05/06/10

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[Reviews - 124]
Summary:

It’s 1993 and Cynthia Hamilton is the house keeper to one of the biggest rock stars of that year, Caleb Murphy. The trouble with him is he’s a drug addict, a drunk, and a womanizer…but she loves him.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:Yes
Word count: 51000
Read Count: 36560
Published: 28/03/10
Updated: 28/03/11


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

She needs to cut him loose, he will only drag her down. His agent is not to be trusted!

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Date: 20/05/10

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Foolish is right. He is going to take her on a rollercoaster ride. The question is whether or not she is ready for it.

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Date: 28/03/10

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

NIce update, thanks! I hope he stays clean.

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Date: 26/04/10

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I don' t know if I could have the patience to deal with him. He doesn't seem like he really wants to change. Thank s for the update.

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Date: 05/04/10

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

He let her go. Her let her go to fly her beautiful, wonderful, pretty wings around.

Charles Ross considered himself lucky. He has his joy, his sorrow, and his regrets...



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Dark Fic, Original Characters, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2169
Read Count: 2863
Published: 06/04/10
Updated: 06/04/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

One shot? No, Charles you didn't let her go to fly her pretty wings around. The fact that she didn't follow you around and beg you to change her mind allowed her to fly away from you with those pretty wings. You will never be happy, you got all you wanted the wife they wanted you with and all your riches. Yet you still an't stop thinking about her.

I would love to have heard her take on it as well. Loved it

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
Date: 07/04/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

 

Camryn Jones has had enough, and Justin Blake is about to find out just how far she'll go.


 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1044
Read Count: 1946
Published: 07/04/10
Updated: 07/04/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

She handled her business.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/04/10

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[Reviews - 23]
Summary:

Writer Mason Hendrix is currently in a heated battle with writer's block, so he decides a change of scenery might do his writing some good.  Little did he know he would find his muse in the Fender women, nor that he would discover their loves from the past and the future.

Wolfe Fender is the daughter of legendary Frontwoman, Bedouin Fender.  Adoptd by James Logan after her mother's untimely death Wolfe grew up different.  Now Mason Hendrix has come along with the chaos of the Logan/Fender family.

 Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 5993
Read Count: 3180
Published: 13/04/10
Updated: 05/10/11


Title: Chapter 3: Debauchery

The Logan men loved Wolfe and her momma more than they do their own mom and sis. I can't wait to hear the story behind this. Now another man is being added to the mix of loving them as well or should I say her. Thanks for the update.

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Date: 13/04/10

Title: Chapter 4: Jack

What's going on with the two of them? Amanda and mom are going to hate her even more. Great update.

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Date: 28/05/10

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[Reviews - 233]
Summary:

             

 

After being betrayed by her best friend and being cheated on by her boyfirend, Aiyana Kendricks has decided to leave her hometown of Rochester NY behind. Moving to Las Vegas, she finds herself happy with new friends, a great party planning job, and a new boyfriend named Mark. But what happens when her past comes into her life again? Will the new couple be able to stay together when so many forces are trying to pull them apart?

~*~

Life's like a road that you travel on
When there's one day here an' the next day gone
Sometimes you bend, sometimes you stand
Sometimes you turn your back to the wind

~*~

LV Choppers Playlist

Something To listen to while reading LVC. All of the songs have inspired me in some way when it comes to the story and characters.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s), Other
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 34
Completed:No
Word count: 70063
Read Count: 32187
Published: 19/04/10
Updated: 19/01/11


Title: Chapter 5: LV Choppers

Phil has issues. I hope she doesn't create problems for her friend if she starts dating his partner. 

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Date: 08/05/10

Title: Chapter 27: Taking Charge

What a way too hear about the woman you love, cheating on you.

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Date: 08/05/10

Title: Chapter 28: Calm Before The Storm

He really loves her, they haven't even talked yet and he is ready to forgive her.

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Date: 08/05/10

Title: Chapter 26: I Doubt It

Mark better have sense enough not to listen to her.

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Date: 08/05/10

Title: Chapter 22: Meetings

Somara and Ricky need to be together seems like.

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Date: 08/05/10

Title: Chapter 23: Confessions

She is not a true friend, if she expects them to lie for her and hurt Mark. I was surprised to see she didn't say anything about Sophia being in Dave's office, even though it wasn't what she thought it was. Unfortunatley something tells me she will be sharing that bit of info pretty soon.

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Date: 08/05/10

Title: Chapter 24: Devlin Speaks

Too many lies!! I don't see how this is going to end well for anyone.

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Date: 08/05/10

Title: Chapter 25: Either Or

I am so glad Dave finally spoke his mind. She is treating like trash.

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Date: 08/05/10

Title: Chapter 21: Sophia's Story

I hope Mark and Ana are string enough in this relationship, that what mom has planned doesn't affect tham too much.

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Date: 08/05/10

Title: Chapter 18: Betrayal

Mark is stupid for even thinking about getting back with his ex. Right now I have no respect for Phil, how can she sit there and tell that man she loves him after having just laid up with another man. She is no better than Ricky.

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Date: 08/05/10

Title: Chapter 19: Answers Wanted

These are some evil people. If someone doesn't love you then move on, it's as simple as that. Mom says  he is no good for her baby because he may be cheating on her, but what exactly makes what she thinks Mark is doing  different than what Ricky did. Phil doesn't deserve Dave, if she has to have her black man then stop leading him on.

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Date: 08/05/10

Title: Chapter 16: A Talk With Dad

I don't understand her giving up a six figure job offer because of that fool. She didn't trust him anyway so why screw up her career.

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Date: 08/05/10

Title: Chapter 17: Tested

Oh he is so wrong for that. Why would you continually let someone use you, I truly don't understand.  He is going to break her heart at this happy celebration, I hope he thinks twice about that with her family there. I hope Ricky isn't there to pick up the pieces of her broken heart. Awesome update.

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Date: 08/05/10

Title: Chapter 12: Til The Cops Come Knockin

I sure hope Mark is lucky tonight as well. Phil will not be complaining about her pink man anymore.

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Date: 08/05/10