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[Reviews - 28]
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A chance encounter on an elevator causes two people to reevaluate the meaning of love and life. Can true love be met all while Chasing Venus? Can a wallflower change? Can a savvy businessman learn that love is the riskiest deal of all? Interracial romance. What happens when cultures cross, in-laws meet, and an unconventional woman faces a very traditional family?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 6587
Read Count: 5267
Published: 08/07/08
Updated: 20/06/10


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Loved the update. I think Ryo is feeling him some Nadia bigtime. WHat the heck is Aoi doing with his mom???? Ryo better watch out as I feel she's up to some scheme.

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Date: 21/06/10

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[Reviews - 204]
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Serena Davis is a shy young lady that has had a crush on her boss Mr. Ki, king of jerks, for 2 years. Mr. Ki, in order to stay the head of his family company must marry. What happens when he suddenly asks her to marry him?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 5022
Read Count: 49526
Published: 27/08/08
Updated: 28/07/16


Title: Ki Fashions

Yes a baby!!! Hope Ki is happy about it!If only he could avoid that viper and her plans. Soo-Sun needs to be exposed for the manipulator she is.

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Date: 13/07/11

Title: Ki Fashions

Loved it. Glad Ki and Serena are making it work. OOOh Soo Sun is such a  manipulator. Hope she's exposed for what she is, a BIOTCH!!!! Hmmm, makes me wonder if Mai-Young is really Jin-Hun's daughter???!!!

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Date: 27/07/10

Title: Ki Fashions

Loved it!!  You killed it with the chocolate, great update. Yay!!!

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Date: 05/06/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 271]
Summary:

This is a story about a couple who wants to have a child. They will have to use a surrogate to have this baby. The woman they selected is a college graduate who wants to go to Law school. She sees this as a an excellent financial opportunity. She figures the couple gets the baby and she will get her Law degree, however, fate will effect all of their lives.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 34
Completed:No
Word count: 39835
Read Count: 30857
Published: 20/10/08
Updated: 10/03/11


Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Ten Fingers and Ten Toes

Loved the update . Glad Jarred and Jailynn bonded with the babies. Hmmmmm, wonder what Jackson found out???

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Date: 15/02/10

Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Questions Answered

I loved it. Hope she really is their mom. Happy those scam artists got caught.

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Date: 25/02/10

Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 The Wait is over

Awesome story and happy everyone got their HEA. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: I am so glad you like the story and thanks for your comments.

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Date: 13/01/11

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Let the Healing begin

Please update soon, thanks. Really love this story.

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Date: 13/12/09

Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Everyone has Secrets ...

Loved the update. Glad Jailyn is awake. Can't wait to find out what the PI found out.

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Date: 22/01/10

Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Anticipation

Loved it! Glad they all met. Now ,can't wait to see what happens from here. Vanessa needs to be taken down. She just wants those kids for their potential as money makers.

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Date: 16/12/10

Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 What Gives ?... part II

Loved the update. Can't wait until they reveal their surprise to Jarred and Jailynn.

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Date: 03/12/10

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 What Gives?

When will the drama be over???!!! This poor family has been through too much and its time to put a stop to the madness. Can they not enjoy their kids in peace??? Ms Jenkins sure has some nerve being all haughty and disrepecting them in their home.

Wonder if she knew what her daughter was doing and was encouraging her. Was this their means of support??? I can see it now, Ms Jenkins trying to extort money out of Jeffrey and Saige. Can't wait to see what happens next!

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Date: 23/11/10

Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Family Matters

Glad they are all doing ok. Can't wait until they find out the DNA results to confirm things.

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Date: 22/12/10

Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 You Complete Me

Glad they all got their happily ever after.

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Date: 10/03/11

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 44]
Summary:

When the time comes and you find yourself at a crossroad... who will you be... what will you do?



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Categories: One Life to Live, Daytime Television
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 6804
Read Count: 13994
Published: 21/01/09
Updated: 30/03/10


Title: Chapter 4: ROUND FOR ROUND

Loved reading this story so far. I have to say I'm not much of a John fan. Just didn't like the way he's dealing with Vangy because if he was so in love with her as he claimed he would have hung in there in stead of getting engaged to another woman. I fear that Vangy is preggers for him. Who's her baby daddy really??? Hmmm, will Bo and John suspect her pregnacy in view of her fainting??? Please update soon.

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Date: 31/03/10

Title: Chapter 1: All That We Never Said

Interesting beginning.

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Date: 31/03/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 107]
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Evangeline Wiiliamson lays in a coma after an attack by a white supremacy group.  Todd Manning wants to take her for an unorthodox treatment that may possibly increase the chances of awakening the sleeping beauty.   However, her family has barred him from her side and refused his offer of help.  As Evangeline runs out of time, Todd decides that drastic times call for drastic measures and audaciously takes matters into his own hands, believing in his heart that there are just some risks that are worth taking.  


Meanwhile, a mysterious Asian, who unwittingly stumbles onto the latest and possibly the most outrageous of Manning's schemes, intervenes, but the fiesty younger Williamson sister, Layla, isn't exactly grateful for his "assistance".  Stalwartly fighting her fear of the stranger, she eventually manages to turn the tables on him.  Yet when freed from his clutches, she can't help but wonder who this mystery man is, what his role is in the "scheme" of things and why she can't seem to get him out of her mind.


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Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson, Layla Williamson
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 32
Completed:Yes
Word count: 316741
Read Count: 33816
Published: 18/02/09
Updated: 08/02/10


Title: Chapter 32: Epilogue

Loved this story.

Author's Response: Thanks so much.  It's wonderful to know that you liked it.  And thanks for reviewing. 

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/02/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 272]
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Art Historian Aidan Bell and student Collista Carson can't stand each other. Yet for some reason, he asks her to be his new assistant.  Although doubtful that they can co-exist without killing each other, Collista has her grade in his class to think about and so accepts the position.  One thing leads to another, and before long, the two are finding it hard to maintain their professional distance.

Then the specter of Aidan's murky past casts its shadow over the forbidden relationship.  Add a priceless painting, a ruthless art collector and soon Collista finds herself in the position of having to help Aidan solve a mystery before he goes down for the count.  Will he have enough time to teach her what she needs to know about the art of the steal?  

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 26
Completed:Yes
Word count: 131714
Read Count: 88885
Published: 22/02/09
Updated: 22/02/10


Title: Chapter 26: Chapter Twenty-Four

Say it aint so, "sniff", "sniff". My story is at an end. Can't believe its over. Glad the culprits were caught in the end and received their just desserts. Now I guess Colli and Aidan can focus on themselves. I absolutely loved reading this story. Hmmm, wonder if we'll see more about Colli and Aidan in the future???? Thanks for sharing a great story.

Author's Response:

I know.  I know.  I always suffer a duality of emotions when I finish a story: gladness for being able to provide my readers with a finished product that they can enjoy agaiin and again if they want to, a sense of accomplishment as well as one of loss.   I'm crazy that way.  lol 

That said, I won't be coy anymore.  I have at least two stories that I have to do.  One is "Her Dirty Little Secret" which is a follow up to "The Heart of the Matter."  I'm really behind on that one, but I've started writing it tonight.  It's not a long one.  And I announced on the Chamber Forum an original story that has piqued some interest.  It will be longer than HDDLS.  Plus, I have a Shawn and Angela story going right now.  I will be finishing that up in hopefully another 6 or 7 chapters. 

So yeah, I am contemplating a sequel to TAOTS.  It will be entitled Subterfuge.   

Thanks so much for your support on this site and TST as well. 

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/02/10

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-One

Hope that Aidan is alright. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing.  The next chapter isn't far away. :-)

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Date: 13/12/09

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-Two

WTH???? What's going on here?? Aidan got set up big time??? Why is it that the police feels he stole the painting???? What evidence do they have???? I hope they track Carla down before its too late. Aidan has been taken for a ride and now he's paying the ultimate price. That's what happens when Carla came into his life. Sad!!! Is there no justice here????!!!! Great update.

Author's Response:

Yes, Aidan is officially now the fall guy.  So many questions and so little time to answer them without giving everything away. LOL  But yes, there will be justice.  Sit tight.  Next chapter up soon.

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/01/10

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter Twenty-Three

Loved the update and glad Aidan was released. I hope they catch the swindlers red handed.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  Carla and Domenici have no idea who they're dealing with.  They think they do, but Aidan and Collista are a force they never wanted to meet. 

Thanks for reviewing. 

 

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/02/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 37]
Summary:

 

A Modern Vampire Tale 

Nahla Richardson is just a quiet sorority girl - Until her 21st birthday. Her life then becomes one hell of an adventure... and the ride is anything but smooth.



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Categories: Movies, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters
Challenges: The Chamber Grindhouse 3
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 6937
Read Count: 6844
Published: 16/04/09
Updated: 06/05/11


Title: Chapter 4: The Taste of fear

Loving this story.

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Date: 06/01/11

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 52]
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There’s love, there’s loathing and then there’s Lane.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: Bookworm Beauties
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 10543
Read Count: 7260
Published: 08/05/09
Updated: 30/04/10


Title: Chapter 7: Whistle While You Work...

Loved it. Hope to see where this story goes....hmmm, is she gonna end up with ole blue eyes or Michael???? What's the deal with ole blue eyes anyway??? 

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Date: 04/05/10


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love this story. Can't wait to read more.

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Date: 19/11/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 48]
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Tick-tock, tick-tock, tick-tock...welcome to the sound of the biological clock. It takes center stage in the lives of three families: The Whitmans, The Thompsons, and the Murrays. This is the story about love versus loss, dreams versus duty, fame versus family, and babies, babies, babies!



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 32141
Read Count: 4809
Published: 28/05/09
Updated: 01/01/10


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - A Fluttering In The Stomach (2000)

Loved they update. Can't wait to read more on Bo and Jazmine.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/01/10