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Beast by Onimosity
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

 

 Perhaps I have a little of the monster in me after all...

How much would you sacrifice for those you love? To save her father, Sunshine must give up the life she's longed for to a powerful gangster.

Can she go with him and keep herself?

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: Beastly Things
Chapters: 43
Completed:Yes
Word count: 183149
Read Count: 419663
Published: 05/12/09
Updated: 22/03/10

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Title: Chapter 23: When You Are on Your Own

Love the update. Sunny is grieving most but Ben seems to be quite grown for his age. Glad he and Nikki bonded.

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Date: 15/01/10
Title: Chapter 37: I'll Send You My Best Part 2

Hmmm, wonder why he's making the trip to the US??? Wonder if he'll offer Nikki a way out of the business???? Will he ever open up fully to Sunny????

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Date: 23/02/10
Title: Chapter 36: I'll Send You My Best Part 1

Loved it!! Glad she's safe and way from Sudan.

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Date: 22/02/10
Title: Chapter 42: I've Made Up My Mind... to Let My Life Shine

Awesome!!! Almost brought tears to my eyes...sniff!! sniff!!! Loved it. Glad Nikki has an "out" from the business.

 

 

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Date: 17/03/10
Title: Chapter 41: ...And Make My Life Shine

Awesome!! Glad Sergei is still alive. Can't wait to see what Sunny is gonna say to Nikki. Will she stay or will she go???

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Date: 14/03/10
Title: Chapter 21: Cause I Am Me, the Universe and You

Oh nooooo!!! Peanut needs to die!!!! All he has done is brought heartache to Jacob and his family and now he tries to kill Jacob. Oh hell no!!!  Hope Jacob doesn't die and this really is a turning point in his life. Glad to see the progress between Sunny and Nikki.

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Date: 03/01/10
Title: Chapter 22: You Know There's No Need to Hide Away

Loved the update but so disappointed that Jacob killed or is trying to kill himself. Its so sad. I wanted a change but not like this. Poor Benji and Sunny.

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Date: 13/01/10
Title: Chapter 43: Shine - Epilogue

Awesome story and I absolutely loved it!!! Sad to see it come to an end. Glad they had a happy ending though. Can't wait for the sequels. Thanks for sharing.

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Date: 22/03/10
Title: Chapter 40: I'm Gonna Get Up...

Oh nooo, that was just so wrong to leave us hanging like that. Sergei, Sergei.......you have lost your mind!!!!! Hmmm, wonder who got hurt..... Hope everyone survives. Loved the update.

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Date: 11/03/10
Title: Beast

Loved the update.

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Date: 16/02/10
Title: Chapter 11: With your child's eyes ... You are more than you seem

Loved the update. My heart goes out to pops as he's a little too late but at least he's trying. Hopefully he'll get his act together eventually. Nikki is a toughie ,hopes he continues to give Sunny his trust and not be so insecure.

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Date: 12/12/09
Title: Chapter 11: With your child's eyes ... You are more than you seem

Really loving this story. Wow, the protective side of Nikki really came out when pops tried to confront him about Sunny. I wonder if pops will make it. Sort of scary. Darla is a user with no ambition and I hope pops avoid her like the plague. Please keep it coming.

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Date: 13/12/09
Title: Chapter 12: The places you've been ...The things you have learned ...They sit with you so beautifully

Loved the update. Hope pops don't let Darla manipulate him. Sergei needs to be careful when dealing with Sunny or he'll get into trouble. Nikki is quite protective of Sunny but I hope he keeps his cool.

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Date: 14/12/09
Title: Chapter 13: You know I tell the truth... We are just the same

Loved the update. Sunny and Nikki really bonding well but he definitely is possesive and has trust issues. Sergei needs to tthread carefully when it comes to Nikki. Pops still not trying hard enough and he's not making the committment to change his gambling habits. He continues to be a disappointment.

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Date: 15/12/09
Title: Chapter 14: Making Holes in the Night

Wow, Nikki definitely knows how to take care of his Sunny!!! Pops is letting me down ...... Is there hope for him?? Has he not struck rock bottom yet???!!!!! So sad. Graet update.

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Date: 17/12/09
Title: Chapter 15: I can feel everything you do...Hear everything you say

Loved the update but Darla is up to no good. At least Hershell seems to realise that there is more to her than she presents.

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Date: 22/12/09
Title: Chapter 17: We Are Building Bridges Part 2

Loved the update. Eventhough I want Darla away from Jacob, I hope they don't kill her.

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Date: 22/12/09
Title: Chapter 18: A fire burns... Water comes

Loved it!!! Why oh why ,did Nikki involve Darla in this??? I feel that she'll betray him to Sunny for revenge. Poor sap is in love with Sunny.

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Date: 26/12/09
Title: Chapter 19: Even When You're Miles Away Part 1

Loved the update. Hmmm, Nikki's thinking about marrying Sunny.....not unexpected. Is he strong enough to let her go???? Nikki is falling hard for her. Where did Darla disappear to???? Wonder what she's up to now???Jacob is just sinking into an endless pit of no return, so sad.

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Date: 27/12/09
Title: Chapter 20: Even When You're Miles Away Part 2

Loved the update. Jacob has a serious addiction and I hope he doesn't be a fool and listen to Peanut again. Is Darla falling for Jacob?????

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Date: 29/12/09
Title: Chapter 26: Gotta Make My Own Way

Loved the update. Hope Sunny gives him a second chance. Poor Nikki suffering the pangs of unrequitted love. Sergei needs to thread carefully.

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Date: 21/01/10
Title: Chapter 27: Today Is a New Day

Awesome!!! Sunny is giving Nikki a chance. Glad she clarified the Sergei issue for him too. Loved it!!!!

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Date: 23/01/10
Title: Chapter 28: Different From Tomorrow You'll See

Interesting update. Hmmm, wonder if Nikki will ever leave that part of his life behind for Sunshine or will Sunshine accept all of him??? Jil is gonna be disappointed that Sunny is available to hom. Sergei may have gotten the only friends message now. I hope.

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Date: 26/01/10
Title: Chapter 29: I'll Be High Flyin'

Awesome!!!! Loved the update. They are so sweet trying to do normal and failing miserably. They love each other and somehow ,they're gonna make this work. Yeh!!!

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Date: 29/01/10
Title: Chapter 30: By The Time You Make Up Your Mind

Awesome!!! Its so sweet seeing Sunny and Nikki bond again. Still concerned about his lifestyle and how it may affect Sunny.

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Date: 03/02/10