Penname: baha_malo [Contact]

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[Reviews - 1636]
Summary:

 

 Perhaps I have a little of the monster in me after all...

How much would you sacrifice for those you love? To save her father, Sunshine must give up the life she's longed for to a powerful gangster.

Can she go with him and keep herself?

 Beautiful and amazing banner courtesy of BlackMamba


Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: Beastly Things
Chapters: 43
Completed:Yes
Word count: 183149
Read Count: 414288
Published: 05/12/09
Updated: 22/03/10


Title: Chapter 31: By The Time You Come Round to Me

Loved it. Hope they work it out. Still abit worried about Sergei and his feelings for Sunny.

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Date: 06/02/10

Title: Chapter 32: Good Luck With Your Path

Loved it. Glad Nikki and Benjy are bonding. Also abit wary that she's going to Sudan. Loving this story so far.

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Date: 09/02/10

Title: Chapter 38: But It Wasn't Built to Last

Loved the update. Can't wait to see what Sunny is gonna decide. I'm abit afraid for her. Also feel Sergei is gonna get himself in trouble if he doesn't get himself together.

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Date: 02/03/10

Title: Chapter 39: Or We Might Take it Differently

Oh Noooooo!!!! what the hell???!!! Sergei has lost his everloving mind!!!! He has gone to the point of no return!!! I hope they don't kill each other. I can't believe he's trying to do this!!!!! No good can come of this, no good...... Please update soon.

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Date: 06/03/10

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 83]
Summary:

Was It Puppy Love or Is It True Love??? (Not good with summaries.)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:Yes
Word count: 24609
Read Count: 51236
Published: 09/12/09
Updated: 01/02/10


Title: Chapter 5: I Can't Love Him Because I Love Him!

Julia is a confused mess and she needs to shut up and think before blurting out everything. Silly girl. I knew Zach was up to no good. I hope she goes with her instinct and stay away from him. Loved the update.

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Date: 19/01/10

Title: Chapter 4: Main Character

Love the pictures.

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Date: 14/01/10

Title: Chapter 3: Watching

Loved the update. Hmmm, I guess she realised that she has feelings for DC. I can't wait until they get together. I'm sorry but I'm just not feeling Zach and I hope she kicks him to the curb soon. I'm glad she looks beautiful for the prom. I think there's gonna be some drama.

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Date: 11/01/10

Title: Chapter 2: Why Do U Care!

Really enjoyed reading this update and can"t wait for more.

Author's Response:

So glad you are enjoying this and hopefully real soon I'll have something up. Thnak you for reading and commenting!

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Date: 13/12/09

Title: Chapter 6: How Could You?

Awesome update!!! I loved it. Poor DC, he has alot of explaining to do. Hope she gives him a chance. That was just wrong to leave us hanging like that, just when it was getting juicy. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Yes indeed he does. ROTFL! I'm sorry but I have a thing for juicy cliffhangers. I plan to lighten up a bit. Thank you so much for reading. Look forward to reading what you all have to say.

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Date: 26/01/10

Title: Chapter 7: Care To

Loved it. Glad they made up. Let's see what they do from here on.

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Date: 27/01/10

Title: Chapter 8: Was It Real Love?

Loved the update!!! I'm happy for Julia and hope she takes her father's advice and go for her dreams. Her father would never stear her wrong.

I agree DC is being a fool. Has he not heard of  long distance relationship??? Not saying mind you that it would work but its giving the relationship a chance. Why is he so ready to give up without a fight?? My biggest disappointment was DC's decision, what the hell was he thinking giving her an ultimatum????? If the she was on the other foot, what would he felt if she gave him an ultimatum??? It shows he's still immature and probably not ready yet.

Relationship involves compromise and not ALWAYS getting what you want. Also, what the heck is Victoria's problem with Julia??? She just gives out negative vibes all around.

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Date: 31/01/10

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Still Banner

Eureka

The world fractures. It trembles.

A gift for zeta

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Allison Blake
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Allison/Stark (Eureka)
Warnings: Extreme Language
Challenges: The "All I Want For Christmas" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2143
Read Count: 4261
Published: 13/12/09
Updated: 13/12/09


Title: Chapter 1: Still

Loved it!!!  Eureka is one of my favorite shows and I think Allison and Carter have some unexplored chemistry between them. It was nice to see this short about them.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you like it :)

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Date: 15/12/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

October 30, 2003 is Bonnie McKechnie's own personal version of D-Day but its her secret to keep until she meets a man who will change her life forever.

Derek Coburn has secrets of his own that he would kill to keep hidden. When he and Bonnie are thrust together one stormy night, nothing will ever be the same.



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, As the World Turns
Characters: Bonnie McKechnie
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 888
Read Count: 744
Published: 14/12/09
Updated: 14/12/09


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I'm intrigued with the start. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/12/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Zhuli

For My Tangie Mates



Table of Contents
Categories: One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5475
Read Count: 1714
Published: 15/12/09
Updated: 15/12/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story. Hope they can work it out.

Author's Response: Hey baha_malo...I hope you enjoy the Holidays and I am also grateful that you enjoyed my story. Todd and Evangeline always find a way back to each other!theparty

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/12/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

While working a cold case with Lilly, Miller's relationship with ADA Curtis Bell blossoms.

A gift for: TokenBlackGirl!

Gorgeous banner by TokenBlackGirl.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Det. Kat Miller
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Mystery, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Challenges: The "All I Want For Christmas" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5229
Read Count: 3179
Published: 17/12/09
Updated: 17/12/09


Title: Chapter 1: Begging

Loved the story. I'm feeling for that mom though.

Author's Response:

Thanks I'm really glad you liked it!

Yea, when I came up with that back story even I was a little sad at it. It's got to be the most heartbreaking thing in the world to bury a child. 

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Date: 17/12/09

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:

When Det. Kat Miller is transferred out of the Cold Case Unit, ADA Curtis Bell deals with the loss.

 

Another gift fic for Token!



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Det. Kat Miller
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: The "All I Want For Christmas" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1268
Read Count: 3137
Published: 17/12/09
Updated: 17/12/09


Title: Chapter 1: Missing

Wow, loved it. Love watching cold case ,so it was nice to see a story about Kat.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading. I love Cold Case too and Kat just never gets enough play.

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Date: 17/12/09

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 22]
Summary:

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 The Evil Dead

My name is Ash.

 

And I’m about to stuff my baby’s stocking.

A Gift for Minx .



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Family, Horror
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenges: The "All I Want For Christmas" Challenge
Series: Tales of the Boomstick
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2010
Read Count: 3395
Published: 25/12/09
Updated: 25/12/09


Title: Chapter 1: Another Bad Santa

Loved the story. Definitely an interesting but different twist to Santa being a zombie.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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Date: 26/12/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary: It's Christmastime and Kat Miller gets a present... a naughty present. But who gave it to her? And what do they have in store for her at the end of the night?

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Det. Kat Miller
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3231
Read Count: 1106
Published: 26/12/09
Updated: 26/12/09


Title: Chapter 1: Searching

Beautiful story. Very nice surprise for Kat.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/12/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 23]
Summary:

 


Vampire Diaries


He’s not strong enough to fight this. He never has been.


A belated gift fic written for BlackMamba



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Bonnie Bennett
Classification: Off Cannon , Supernatural
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: The "All I Want For Christmas" Challenge
Series: Bloodlust
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1368
Read Count: 4243
Published: 27/12/09
Updated: 27/12/09


Title: Chapter 1: You Won’t Let Me Sleep

Loved it!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/12/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Carmen Santos is the only girl that will lay an eye on Jesse Carreon. They've been friends since Jesse moved there when he was seven years old. Jesse soon realizes that he is falling in love with Carmen, he doesn't want to. Carmen is goregous in his eyes but it's his bestfriend. He worries that he'll ruin yet another relationship in his life.

Fredrick Carreon is Jesse's older brother and being the popular guy at Forrest High School in Jacksonville, Florida. He gets what he wants and when he wants. His best friend Rochelle is the same way. He knows that she likes him but he only uses her for the goods that she dishes out.

When these four teens come to their epiphanies things between them will never be the same.



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 2723
Read Count: 1366
Published: 30/12/09
Updated: 15/01/10


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great update.

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Date: 16/01/10

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 : Drama King

Interesting story so far. Can't wait to see where this story goes.

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Date: 31/12/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary:

What happens when two lovers are separated by an ocean? What happens to their love? What can you really define as cheating?  Lili asks herself this questions and wonders how her love life came to be.  Go in the journey of Tristan and Lili, how an unlike pairing became to be or so it seems.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2114
Read Count: 615
Published: 01/01/10
Updated: 01/01/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting start.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/01/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 237]
Summary:

 

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Broke and in debt from college, Mary Oluwanke gets a job at one of Chicago's most popular Italian resturants, Mambo Italiano. The resturant is a family buisness. And like all families this one has a great deal of problems.

Buon cibo e buona compagnia vanno di pari passo. Faccio buon cibo, così ho prendersi il merito per la buona compagnia"*

*Translation: Good food and good company go hand in hand. I make good food, so i take credit for the good company.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 23316
Read Count: 44192
Published: 02/01/10
Updated: 01/09/11


Title: Chapter 11: Capitulo Nove

Missed this story and definitely loved the update.  

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/06/10

Title: Chapter 9: Capitolo otto

Wow, that was an interesting update. The sex scene was great but was it a distraction to what was really going on???? Is he gonna form a relationship with her to keep her quiet??? Could she really live with what he did??? How will she allow her conscience to justify what she saw now that she had sex with Vico??? Hmmm, can't wait to see what happens next.

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Date: 15/03/10

Title: Chapter 6: Capitolo Cinque

Loved the update. What's the deal with Danielle that she can talk to the boss like that??? Hope Mary doesn't get caught up in any drama.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/01/10