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Mambo Italiano by DameRouge
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 237]
Summary:

 

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Broke and in debt from college, Mary Oluwanke gets a job at one of Chicago's most popular Italian resturants, Mambo Italiano. The resturant is a family buisness. And like all families this one has a great deal of problems.

Buon cibo e buona compagnia vanno di pari passo. Faccio buon cibo, così ho prendersi il merito per la buona compagnia"*

*Translation: Good food and good company go hand in hand. I make good food, so i take credit for the good company.

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 23316
Read Count: 44497
Published: 02/01/10
Updated: 01/09/11

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Title: Chapter 5: Capitolo Quattro

Loved it. Hmmm, interesting meeting between Mary and Vico. Can't wait to see what happens next.

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Date: 05/01/10
Title: Chapter 1: Caratteri di Mambo Italiano (Cast of Mambo Italiano)

Love the casts pics.

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Date: 02/01/10
Title: Chapter 2: Capitolo Un

Me likey. Can't wait to read more.

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Date: 02/01/10
Title: Chapter 4: CapitoloTre

Loved the update. Mary did her thing on the first night of work. Hmmm, wonder who's Tara????

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Date: 04/01/10
Title: Chapter 7: Capitolo Sei

Loved the update. Glad to see Ernesto looking out for her.

Author's Response: THank you!

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Date: 22/01/10
Title: Chapter 8: Capitolo sette

Oh crap, what's a girl to do??? Run like hell!!! But its too late, Mary was spotted. Wonder what's gonna happen from here???? Great update.

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Date: 10/02/10
Title: Chapter 13: Capitulo Undici

Glad to see this story back. Hope Mary and Vico can work it out.

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Date: 25/12/10
Title: Chapter 14: Capitulo Dodici

Glad to see this story back. Wow, you sure started off with a bang!! Loved the update. Are they gonna kill her or will Vico arrive on time??? Poor Mary!! Those thugs abviuosly don't respect a woman. They're vicious. She should have hid instead of going through boldly. She learnt the hard way not to interrupt thugs.

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Date: 16/07/11
Evanescent by BleedingPen
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:  

Someone once told him that everything happened for a reason...

 

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Categories: Movies
Characters: Storm/Ororo Munroe
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2962
Read Count: 1312
Published: 02/01/10
Updated: 02/01/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting story. I was abit worried there when he decided to leave Ro. Glad he decided to stay and give their relationship a chance.

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Date: 03/01/10
Chosovi by SilentPleasure
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 21]
Summary:

All I have ever wanted to do was make my family happy, and if that means marrying without love, then so be it. But now it's more than I've ever imagined: I am a queen! No literally; and now I have a social status that Paris Hilton could only dream of. Only one problem, other than sorting through piles of suitors, the one I'm attracted to scares me. But what could be wrong with getting gobbled up by a hunk of prime A handsomeness?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 5851
Read Count: 4754
Published: 02/01/10
Updated: 06/09/11

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Title: Chapter 4: The Cast!!!

Loving this story so far. Hmm, will she be chosing Deluna or is there another hunk in the woodworks???

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Date: 03/01/10
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Interesting beginning.

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Date: 03/01/10
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 3

She was so funny when she met Slyvester. Lilith needs to be let out more.

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Date: 07/09/11
Me and My New Year's Kiss by tpeezy22
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Sadie attends a boring party that her architecture firm threw to celebrate their merge with another firm. She meets Paul, a designer from the other architecture firm. They have a nice conversation and a little bit more.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2915
Read Count: 1428
Published: 03/01/10
Updated: 03/01/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hmmm, interesting. Would like to see how this plays out.

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Date: 03/01/10
Guilty Pleasures: Because she's Penelope Garcia by dyehanna1
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Garcia is married to a bastard, Derek is with a woman he doesn't really care about, he's having the team over for dinner, looks like everyone will be having a plate full and then some.

 This is a criminal mind pairing.



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1525
Read Count: 2153
Published: 05/01/10
Updated: 05/01/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Actually loved this short. Talk about complex love. Glad they got it together in the end.

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Date: 05/01/10
I Promise U by PassionK
Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 20]
Summary:

A father's promise. A father's love. Chance made you my daughter; love made you my bestfriend!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Family
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death
Challenges: The "Picture Perfect" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3406
Read Count: 5918
Published: 07/01/10
Updated: 07/01/10

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Title: Chapter 2: I Kept My Promise

Awh shucks, that was sweet!! That was absolutely adorable to read. Awesome!!!!

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Date: 07/01/10
Hard Ball by treehuggingsmartass
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 24]
Summary:

Leslie sans never wanted anything quite as bad as she wanted to be partner for the Darnell firm and for some slick playboy who can barely keep it in his pants to up and take it pissed her off. oh how he pissed her off. So now Leslie thought of a way to destroy that dream killer, get her postion and move on to bigger better things. First Step : make him fall in love with her, Second Step: make him let go of that posistion And then The Last step: Smash his heart into million of little gooey red pieces. Let the Game begin.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 4845
Read Count: 3022
Published: 09/01/10
Updated: 28/08/10

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Title: Chapter 2: Tonight is not the night

Interesting start but Leslie is definitely out of control with the drinking. She needs to listen to her friend. All she'll do is embarass herself more.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review !!!

Leslie is normally not a ' get drunk' kinda person but it was there and she was like eff this party so she went for it haha , but i couldnt have agreed more. She shouldve listen to her friend so she could of avoided the whole dress messed up with food ordeal haha

Thank you for reading it though!

much appreciation!

 

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Date: 10/01/10
Title: Chapter 4: Fck me pumps

Love the update. Hope she stops the game before someone gets hurt or more serious feelings become involved.

Author's Response: Thank you and sorry it took so long! I think shes to far gone to stop whats shes doing but we shall see in future chapters!

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Date: 29/08/10
Title: Chapter 3: Misery loves company…not!

Oh oh, I think Leslie is being childish and is making a BIG mistake. She really just need to get back to work, be the better person and focus on her job not trying to hurt someone out of jealousy over a job!!! That's a bit sad if she really does that. If she really has a problem, maybe she needs to find a new job. She really needs to grow up!!! Life is full of disappointment and one just has to roll with the punches and move on. Great update!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!!! :>

I agree what Leslie is doing is really stupid but leslie has made up her mind and NOTHING can change her mind.

She is just stubborn like that.

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Date: 10/03/10
Enthrallment by --rien--
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary:

"This so-called life isn’t about pitying the weak. It’s about survival of the fittest...and these two aren’t fit to be anything but appetizers."

 

Thank you TokenBlackGirl for the Awesome Banner!!



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Other
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Horror, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1759
Read Count: 1780
Published: 12/01/10
Updated: 12/01/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Dawn of Enthrallment

Loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading!!

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Date: 13/01/10
Feels Like Christmas by chocolate470
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Feels Like Christmas

A Belated Christmas gift for Megumi



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Categories: One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 14873
Read Count: 2205
Published: 15/01/10
Updated: 10/02/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting start. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Hey baha_malo Thanks for leaving an awesome review and I'm glad you've enjoyed the first chapter.

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Date: 16/01/10
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow, Vangy really seems very bitchy to these men. What's with the attitude???? Poor Cyrus. Glad Kevin stuck to his guns as it seems to have worth it, now he's with Vangy. What's the deal with Todd??? Where does he get off punishing Cyrus???? As fas as I know he has no claims on her and he has moved on with his life. Loved it!!!

Author's Response:

Hey baha_malo, thanks for the awesome review!

It reflects her change in attitude since she woke up. Why the change? Remember before the coma Evangeline gave so much of herself towards others and to find out these same people weren't really there for her in the same manner caused the change to come out...human nature. Well Todd is Todd and in a way he is trying to make up for his "glaring absence" by being her bodyguard.  

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Date: 22/01/10
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow, talk about hawt!!! Loved the update. Glad they both realised they loved each other after bonding so well. Can't wait to see what happens from here especially what Todd's reaction will be to these new developments seeing that's he's in the sidelines of her life.

Author's Response:

Hey baha_malo,

I'm glad you enjoyed the mutual hawtness...lol!!! In the last chapter you'll see Todd's reaction alright.. The dude can't help himself...LOL!!! Thanks for the awesome review!

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Date: 29/01/10
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loved the update. Boy , Natalie sure has some issues with Evangeline. Todd and Kevin fighting??? Wow, exciting. Hope Kevin and Evangeline can make it work despite the neigh sayers.

Author's Response:

Hey baha_malo

Evangeline may have forgotton about Johnnie boy but Natalie sure hasn't. In her mind Evangeline is to blame for her inability to get things going with John (in my world at least...lol!) Todd and Kevin had to get this thing out of their system because it would have only festered if it kept going - this deep mistrust for one another regarding Evangeline. Well this is the ending of my story so wherever life takes them afterwards my mind really doesn't know but I'm glad you enjoyed reading my little fanfic plus I really enjoyed you posting your reviews! 

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Date: 11/02/10
The Guilty Heart by MorrisonJD
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary: Martha Jones' guilty heart keeps her from moving on with love...Can someone get through to her, or is she destined to be alone.

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Dr. Martha Jones
Classification: Crossover, Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Fantasy, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: Martha/Ten (Doctor Who)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 3419
Read Count: 1280
Published: 16/01/10
Updated: 22/01/10

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Title: Chapter 1: In Which Mickey Smith lets go

Me likey. Hmmm, did Mickey die??? If so, maybe the doctor will be back in Martha's life

 

 

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Date: 16/01/10
Title: Chapter 2: In Which Martha Jones Decides To Stay

Wow  the TARDIS seem to be giving the Doctor his mission by taking him back to Martha. Is Martha running away from her problems or really to be with the Doctor???? Loved the update.

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Date: 22/01/10