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Dystopian Paradise by Darling
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 208]
Summary:

After the hostile takeover of the world by fairytale (and nightmare?) creatures, Roxanne doesn't have much of a choice but to go with the flow. She does have one major problem, though. There's this guy, see...And he thinks that she is destined to be his mate. What's the problem, you ask? Well, for one thing, he can't touch her without doing her bodily harm...



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 47491
Read Count: 24038
Published: 18/01/10
Updated: 09/07/11

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loved the update but still not clear on what happened to Roxanne and looks like Leonardo is avoiding the questions. Why is that? What's going on and who is Mod???? Is he some sort of psychic or protector??? Why is Roxanne being kept in the dark??? Something is not right with this picture.

Author's Response: I PROMISE everything will be explained...eventually. Please keep reading and reviewing! I hope I don't disappoint!

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Date: 19/01/10
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Me likey but who or what attacked her when she entered the house??? Was it Leonardo??? Who is this demon that is dreaming about the woman??? Is it about Roxanne??? Yep, I know so many questions but you've got me hooked.

Author's Response: Stay tuned! All will be answered in time...

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Date: 18/01/10
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Loved the update. Leonardo is snacking on Roxy???!!! WTH???? What's the deal between Mod and Roxy???

Author's Response: You'll have to stay tuned! Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you liked this chapter!

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Date: 23/05/10
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Yay!!! Thanks for the update. Hope she can get use to Mod eventually and maybe we'll find out why he hurt her. Hmm, what's Leonardo's part in this I wonder???  Loved it!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you still like it!

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Date: 25/04/10
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Loved the update. Is it Mod?? Can't wait to find out who it is.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the update. Things get more interesting in the next few chapters. Thanks for reviewing!

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Date: 29/05/10
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow, Roxanne has threwn down the gauntlet and it looks like Mod will gladly rise to the challenge. Yay!!!

Author's Response:

Yes indeed! If you thought things were tense before them before, you ain't seen nothin' yet!

Thanks for the reviews! They mean a lot!

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Date: 13/06/10
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Loved the update. Glad she asked the question as I'm curious too.

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Date: 13/06/10
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Glad to see an update. Loving the characters and story so far. Wow, Mod's character seems complex as well as his relationship with Leonard. What exactly is the relationship bwtween the two?? Wonder what Mod will do next??? What's up with Peter???? Why doesn't he want Leonard to know of his presence??? Look forward to reading more.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like what I'm doing so far.

Mod is an interesting character to play with. He's just full of surprises. Right now Mod is plotting and...stuff. I think you'll like it when I get to it. I can't give spoilers! As for his relationship with Leonardo, I think I can make a short story about that.

Peter is full of surprises too! We'll get to that later.

Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'll see what I can do about better explaining the dynamics of Leo and Mod's relationship.

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Date: 10/07/10
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Loved the update. Poor Mod....he has a long way to go before Roxi trusts him and gives him a chance. Also love Melissa's spirit.

Author's Response: I'm really glad that you liked the chapter! Yeah, Mod has a lot of mess to shift through but there's still the rest of the story. I'm also happy that you like Melissa. She's in an interesting situation, the likes of which I'm struggling to imagine. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 21/05/10
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Loved it!! Hmmm, wonder if Mod would ever be able to touch Roxi??!! It looks like things are beginning to get interesting. Can't wait until the next update.

Author's Response:

Yay! I'm glad you liked this update!

It does look futile, huh? But cheer up because things are going to get much more interesting...if you think dark is interesting.

Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 23/08/10
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Loved the update. Hmmm, seems like Mod is growing on Roxie. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked this update. Roxie is finally getting comfortable with Mod. And you'll see more of that in the next update. Please stay tuned!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 20/08/10
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Glad to see this story again. Yeah!!! Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: No problem! Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 30/03/10
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Interesting update. Still want to know the connection between Mod and Leonardo??? Why does he really want Roxanne???

Author's Response: You'll find out more about Mod and Leo's relationship in a few chapters; however, the way the two deal with Roxanne will be contradictory some times. I hope you continue to read, enjoy and review! Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 20/01/10
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loved the update. Really like Parker's character. That's quite a little family that Leonardo has put together. Hope they all can get along.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like Parker. Roxy will get to know him pretty well.

And, yes, Roxy, Leo, Mod and Parker do make quite the motley crew, don't they? I think you'll like the way they interact and why they behave the way they do around each other.

Thank you for reading and reviewing! Please keep reading! I hope I don't disappoint!

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Date: 21/01/10
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Thanks for the update, loved it. Leo is abit strange and I'm still trying to figure him out. What's really Roxanne's purpose in his life???? Also what's the association between Roxanne and Mod??? WHy does he hurt her????

Author's Response:

Okay, I'm struggling not to give too much away. Just keep in mind that whatever is going on between Roxi and Leo is not what it seems. I'm going to get to that later on. I just like building suspense.

Roxanne and Mod are quite the mess though, aren't they? Things will shape up eventually, but they are going to get very complicated first.

Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you liked this chapter.

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Date: 06/02/10
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great update. Interesting story so far. Hmm wonder who is Peter ???

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story. I can't really say who Peter is right now, but it'll come out soon enough. Thank you for reading and reviewing! I hope you continue to do both!

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Date: 07/02/10
The Menagerie by ChandelierSocialite
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 16]
Summary:

meg 

me·nag·er·ie- 1. wild animal exhibit: a collection of wild animals kept in captivity for the curiosity and entertainment of the public. 2.diverse or exotic group: a diverse, exotic, or unusual group of people or things.


The Menagerie was known for its exquisite women and its exclusive and rather wealthy clientele. It was a brothel, and like all brothels it housed the dregs of society. But The Menagerie was no common brotel, and She was no ordinary woman.

This is a dark tale of a woman bound by her status and her love.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 7710
Read Count: 3021
Published: 23/01/10
Updated: 29/01/10

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Title: Chapter 2: Serva Me, Servabote

Me likey. Wow, I thought James was selfish using her to progress in his life but denying her her wish of a child. I guess ,he just wasn't meant to be the father. Glad she didn't just give up her life to die with him, the selfish bastard. Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

thanks baha_malo! James is a very selfish man and Petra was more than vindictive. they had a very rocky relationship, but Petra is always looks out for her own interests...

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Date: 25/01/10
Title: Chapter 3: No matter how hard i dig, they see right through me

Hope Petra gets her man and a baby. Maybe she'll become mellow. Loved the update. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks Baha Malo... i should hope that petra gets both, but who knows....She seems like the type of person who doesnt mind cutting lose ends.

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Date: 25/01/10
Title: Chapter 4: Something wicked this way comes

Oh oh, the plot thickens is right!!!! Loved the update. Petra has an old enemy who's out for her blood. I hope she doesn't get the best of Petra. What type of creature is Petra that she's poisonous to vampires??? I'm sorta of rooting for Petra eventhough she's a stick in the mud about what she wants, she kind of grows on a person. Wonder if she'll fall for Kale as she did with Richard. I'm hoping she has a happy ending. Hopefully Kale can control his powers soon so that he may help himself. This has definitely been an intriguing story so far.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review baha_malo, hopefully in the next update alot of things involving Petra's heritage get cleared up.

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Date: 29/01/10
Retired
Transference by EvilAngelfish
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

 

Harmony Peterson, an ambitious young medical student, wants to perfect her bedside manner before she begins her clinical rotations. Keegan Grant is more than willing to help.

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 7603
Read Count: 7600
Published: 26/01/10
Updated: 04/02/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Head & Neck

I knew I had started to read this story before and had been loving it. Glad to see it back again.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for checking back to read it! I hope you've been enjoying the story and that you'll stick around for the climax!

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Date: 27/01/10
Title: Chapter 5: Mental Status

Awesome and I absolutely loved it!!!!! Look forward to reading more of your stories.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you liked it.

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Date: 04/02/10
What Friends Are For by Candace
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

When Uhura is temporarily assigned off the Enterprise on a top secret mission, the boys of the bridge crew feel her absence keenly, especially Commander Spock. Captain Kirk decides to intervene to cheer up his First Officer and best friend.



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Television)
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: Drugs/Drug Use
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 993
Read Count: 4747
Published: 30/01/10
Updated: 30/01/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it. Sweet with humorous undertones. Had me cracking up.

Author's Response:

Thanks :-)

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/02/10
Vulcan's Moon by Candace
Rated: All Ages
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Summary:

When the crew has just finished a string of difficult missions, Captain Kirk decides to throw an Enterprise Screw to improve morale. Kirk and Bones take it upon themselves to choose Spock's date.



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Television)
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 975
Read Count: 5018
Published: 30/01/10
Updated: 30/01/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it. That was sweet.

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Date: 31/01/10
Hangovers by Candace
Rated: Teen or Above
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Summary:

Two mini-stories written for the Ship Wars! challenge at ST_Respect on LiveJournal. In the first story, Uhura and Spock face the repurcussions of a night of heavy alcohol and chocolate indulgence. In the second story, Spock is unwittingly drugged during a diplomatic dinner on an away mission.



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Television)
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: None
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 952
Read Count: 7623
Published: 30/01/10
Updated: 30/01/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it.

Author's Response:

Thanks :-)

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/01/10
Alternate Possibilities by Candace
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

When Mirror!Spock encounters Nyota Uhura, she opens his mind to some intriguing possibilies for his own universe.



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Television)
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5218
Read Count: 1855
Published: 30/01/10
Updated: 30/01/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome story. I loved it. Always thought Uhura and Spook had a little chemistry going on, so this story was right on target for me.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/01/10