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Summary:

 

 

 A Special Thank You to BlackMamba for the AMAZING banner

Suzette is a Diva in every way. From the way she dresses to the way she walks and talks. She is beginning to hate being the it girl and decides to take break to try this new spa retreat for some rest and relaxation. When her car breaks down on a country road she is more than happy to be rescued By Kyle a rancher and businessman.

Kyle is a mans man, he loves the outdoors and working with his hands. He is a cowboy after all. On one fateful day after doing some business in the city he is driving home when he rescues his destiny.

Suzette is a city girl in every way,in her high end jeans, expensive clothing and heels (who wears heels in the country?) but she was the most beautiful thing Kyle had ever seen he was a Big man and he loved a woman with curves, a woman who could handle a real man. From the moment he saw Suzette she was his.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9843
Read Count: 31656
Published: 29/05/09
Updated: 04/07/10


Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Awesome story!!! Loved it!!! Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the story.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/07/10

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Awesome story!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you sooo much for the review.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/12/09

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Ooooh that was just sooo wrong!!!! Sneaking away like that was really low of Suzette. That note she wrote was sweet but not adequate enough. Kyle is gonna be upset and rightly so. Hopefully they'll cross paths soon. Loved the update.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. Oh and yes they will cross paths again, sooner rather than later.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/12/09

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Loved it. I hope he reaches her in time and makes it official. Yeh!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, and so do I.

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Date: 23/01/10

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Loved the update and glad she decided to stay with him and give love a chance.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the update.

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Date: 11/04/10

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 57]
Summary:

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At seventeen years old, Leah Henderson is homeless and pissed off as hell at the world. Pick pocketing is a trade she's become accustomed to and used as payment for what she thinks society owes her. However, her most recent victim is definitely no push-over or willing to let a "criminal" out of his sight until she is behind bars where she belongs.

Officer David Greenburg is a kind-hearted man with a loving temperament and wholesome family that, in his opinion, could use another addition and the young lady soaked to the bone sitting in front of him seems to be the perfect candidate. David's eighteen year old son is less than thrilled and more than happy to see her go, at least that's what he keeps telling himself.

Disclaimer/Credits: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended. Photo found on gettyimages.com



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 13411
Read Count: 22476
Published: 31/05/09
Updated: 22/12/10


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Wow, Owen has problems. Leah needs to watch out for his crazy moods.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/12/10

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Glad that Anna and David are trying to help Leah. Hope he could find out more of her past .

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/12/10

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary: He was lonely, she was desperate, maybe they will find solace in each other.

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Categories: One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 21312
Read Count: 5336
Published: 17/06/09
Updated: 19/07/10


Title: Chapter 2: Who is Evangeline Williamson?

Wow, that Laila is a piece of work. Love it.

Author's Response: Hi baha, if you think laila is nuts, wait till you meet their mother, appreciate the reviews dear.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/01/10

Title: Chapter 9: Intervention

I'm so disappointed she let her self go like that. Did Angie's father rape her?? Why did she kill him??? Did she always do drugs or was it because of what happened with Angie's dad??? Please let her get herself together. Glad Todd is trying to help her. I hope she accepts it. Its time for her to get to know her daughter. Great update.

Author's Response: Hi Baha, No she wasn't a junkie from the start but in the two chaps, I will shed a lot of light into her story and she will get herself together soon, Thanks for reading hon.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/01/10

Title: Chapter 1: The moment I saw you.

That was a great start. I loved it. Now I'm off to read the rest of this story.

Author's Response: HI baha, it's great to see you here, thanks for taking an interest in my lil story.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/01/10

Title: Chapter 10: Me Syndrome

Hope Vangie could be helped. Love this story. Glad to see its back.

Author's Response:

Hi Baha_malo,

 

You sound excited, it feels nice that you love this story; I guarantee Vange will get a lot of help, thanks for reading.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/07/10

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Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 133]
Summary:

Love and Prejudice

A Pride and Prejudice spin off. Five years after their marriage, Elizabeth and Fitzwilliam Darcy are made the guardians of Mary Caroline Farthington, a free black woman and the  heir and adopted daughter of Lord Matthew Farthington. When Colonel Fitzwilliam returns from Louisiana, fresh on the heels of a hearty defeat in the Battle of New Orleans, he visits the Darcy's for the Christmas holidays. When the soldier and the heiress fall in love, will love be able to overcome prejudice?



Table of Contents
Categories: Books
Characters: None
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Racism, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 93045
Read Count: 100333
Published: 09/07/09
Updated: 18/12/10


Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Thank you for the update. I loved it. Oh please let the viscountess and Letitia's scheme crash and burn. They have been scheming too much, causing too much damage in their wake. Glad for Mary and Richard, hope they can make it work.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. Don't worry. Letitia will get hers.

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Date: 15/01/10

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Yay!!! So glad to see an update on this story. Glad to see Letitia's plan go to dust. She deserved what she got, trying to trap FW. Hope the general doesn't give him any problems/send him away for a while.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting! And thanks for being patient with me. I haven't quite determined what the general will say, but Richard won't be shipping off anytime soon.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/12/10

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Please update, thanks. Missing my story. Really enjoy reading about Mary aand Fritzwilliam.

Author's Response: I am working on it. I had half of the next chapter completed when my MacBook died. I hadn't backed it up, so now I have to start from scratch. I promise to have it up before Christmas!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/12/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 111]
Summary:

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"Never judge a book by its cover"

Sasha McPherson, 31 year old real estate agent has a dream.  A dream deeply rooted in the American Dream.  She wants to be a million dollar listing agent at Blitz Realty and make partner.  She's beautiful, charming, and with an otherwise open heart.

Pavlov Patrenko, 28 year old temporary resident from the Ukraine also has a dream.  A dream deeply rooted in the American Dream.  He wants to defect to the U.S., buy a home, and build a business in the land of the free.  But only a few things stand in his way-Sasha McPherson, her gilded suit of armor, and one huge 'f_ck off' sign spiked firmly on her forehead.

What happens when east meets west?

Surely Curves up Ahead!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of SparkApCider (SPAC). The original characters and plot are the property of SparkApCider (SPAC), and is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 

Graphics by SPAC 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 22525
Read Count: 19044
Published: 14/08/09
Updated: 25/10/11


Title: Chapter 10: AUTHOR's NOTES

Loved it!! Glad to see this story back.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/10/11

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Thank you for  the update. Loved it. Vic did mess up. Hopefully Pavlov represents himself from this point onwards. Wow, Toukie is an undercover customs agent??!!! Still can't believe that one yet.

Author's Response: Yes.  Toukie's been a real convincing slut. But her biggest screw will come in due time.  Vic doesn't quite understand the magnitude of his failure to rise to the occasion.  But he will.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/01/10

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[Reviews - 59]
Summary:

 

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Tristan Danes is young, good-looking, and unemployed without a reasonably useable degree.His life gets turned upside down with the death of his grandmother and the inheritance of her small New York based coffee shop along with the mountains of debt that came with it.

Kira Moore just graduated from Boston University with a Biology degree. Her life looked good so far with the exceptions of a troubled law breaking sister and the inability to find a job. So what do these two have in common, besides 11 years of friendship they're technically married, well only technically. 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 26320
Read Count: 10117
Published: 21/08/09
Updated: 22/07/11


Title: Chapter 5: The New Start

Glad to see the update. Tristan and Kira are a mess. Hope they decide whether they want each other or not soon.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15/08/10

Title: Chapter 3: The Build Up

Glad to see the update. Loved it!!! What the hell is wrong with Victoria??? She needs to grow up!!! Hope she doesn't expect Kira to bail her out of crap all the time. If she makes a bad choice she needs to roll with the punches. Hope Kira doesn't continue to let Victoria manipulate her. Wow, Kira being spontaneous and getting married???!!!! Can't wait to see the reactions to this.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading baha_malo and I'm super glad that you liked it! Yeah there's a lot wrong with Victoria and the reactions to Kira being spontaneous and getting married are not going to be postive.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/05/10

Title: Chapter 9: The Date

Loved the update. She needs to proceed with caution.

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Date: 24/06/11

Title: Chapter 10: The Makeup

Loved the update.

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Date: 23/07/11

Title: Chapter 8: The Green Eyed Monster

Love the update.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/05/11

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary: Mackenzie Armstrong moves from Arkansas to Chicago to start her job at an advertising agency. She meets new people while she deals with being far from home and the people she love. On her first day, she has an altercation with a fellow coworker, Scott Ross, a man of many quirks. It sparks tension and a war of words between the two, but what will happen when a business trip to New York forces them to stay in the same room?

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 30
Completed:No
Word count: 35118
Read Count: 41273
Published: 29/08/09
Updated: 24/01/10


Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Loved the update.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/01/10

Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Loved the update. What the heck is up with Keesha??? Why would she offer drugs to her friend's BF??? I'm a bit disappointed in Scott for smoking the blunt. Wonder how Mackenzie is gonna handle this??? Hope Scott isnt prone to trying drugs for fun. That just won't fly.

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Date: 12/01/10

Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Loved it. I hope Jared gives Scott a break and gives him a chance to get to know him. Loving Maddie and her sound advice to Mackenzie.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/12/09

Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Loved the update. Glad Scott and Jared resolved their issues.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/12/09