Loved the update. Maxi is gonna be a problem. Destiny better watch her back.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed
Loved the update. Great picture! Can't wait to see what kind of party Lulu has in store for Destiny.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed Wow, talk about family connections. Whose daughter is she really??? What's the connection to the Quartermine family??? Great update.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed Interesting....hmmm, is Lulu trying to set Destiny up with Spinelli???? Great update.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed Great update eventhough sort of short. Who is she and why is everyone so anxious around her???
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed 
"People think it is holding on that makes you stronger, but sometimes it's letting go."
From the author of Into the West
Loved the update but Carla seems abit lost and needs to get her act together. She's 27 for goodness sake! Sang is forward to be touching her like that especially as he doesn't know her that well. Sexual harassment is right. He needs to back himself up.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed Loved the update. That was unexpected surprise with Sang Yi now back into the picture. Can't wait to see what daddy dearest has to say about that.
Author's Response:
Daddy dearest is truly a character lol I'm anxious for his reaction too
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed Interesting start. Can't wait to see what happens next. Glad you haven't forgotten "into the west". Hope to see an update soon.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review!!!
I haven't forgotten "into the west" but that writer's block is truly kicking my tail right now but I'm going to start writing on some of it tonight.. i promise lol
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed Loved the update. Carla seems abit lost and confused as a teenager. She needs to focus, get her life together and stop being so flighty. Sang finally made his move. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed Sequel to Martha's Tears. After an accident in Engineering causes major head trauma to Scotty, Charlene notices some disturbing changes in her boyfriend's behavior.
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Loved this start and can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed 
The opening chapter revisits the sad ending to the relationship of the young lovers Peter Weston and Zuri Adele.
As the years go by both their lives have strayed off into different directions. Now Peter embarks on his journey to Liria in search of a news story but also in search of closure but can his heart truly give up on its one true love? And what has become of Zuri? The woman who holds to key to his peace of mind.
Wow, is it really true, her dad killing her mom??? Glad Peter is there for her in her grief.
Author's Response:
Hey baha_malo
So far there is really no proof of this just their belief but my readers will see what this author has planned. I have made Zuri endure many heartaches and I felt that it was time someone was there to support her. Thanks for reading and sharing your review!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed I'm not liking Zuri's father much. He used her like a slave to his wishes even with the new wife around. She has definitely been a good daughter to him and he has never acknowleged that. That stepmom needs to back it up abit. Glad she will be having a change of scene and hope its for the better. Peter, Peter.....He has issues and he needs to deal with them. Can't wait until they meet again.
Author's Response:
Hey baha_malo,
Well Jengo is in a country where the women are in servitude to the men which includes the daughters so he would never acknowledge that Zuri has been good to him because he expects her to do so or else :( The change of scene wont mean much because she will be entering marriage life...well unless the writer does otherwise ;)...lol!!! Thanks for the awesome review!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed Glad she got justice for her mom in the end. She and Peter can now have their HEA.
Author's Response:
Happy New Year baha_malo!
Thanks! A person could say that I'm a romantic at heart and believe in happy endings but its just because I've grown up around situations where I really haven't seen it for myself so forgive me...
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed Loved the update. I've a feeling Juma is up to no good. Zuri really busting out of her box ,going after Peter. Hope Peter is a true member this time as last time he was a big let down.
Author's Response: Hey baha-malo
Thanks for the awesome review! Peter's trip back into her life has really given her a boost of confidence. Well he is trying to be. He now gets that he's not in England anymore.
Wow, Juma and her dad's true colors are revealed. They seem to be living double lives. Hope Peter and Zuri be careful. Loved the update.
Author's Response: Hey baha_malo,
Yes it has all been a game to them...they have been toying with Zuri from the beginning and she is just starting to figure it out. Thanks for leaving an awesome review...stay tuned!
I hope Zuri exposes her father and Juma! They are evil and violent. Also hope she and Peter get out of Liria alive and safe.
Author's Response: Hey baha_malo,
I'm leaning that way because clearly they need to be exposed and pay for their evil deeds but I want it to be a chapter that my readers enjoy as well...we'll see. Thanks for the awesome review!
Interesting start.
Author's Response:
baha_malo, happy you found the first chapter...interesting...lol! Also thanks for giving me such an awesome rating!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed
Loved the update. Juma is a handsome man. I think Peter has some nerve thinking he can just start over with Zuri as if nothing has happened. As she tried to explain to him, they are from different cultures and he didn't want to be understanding of her situation.
He didn't want to deal with her or the distance with no reply to her letters and now he acts as if he's still her boyfriend. He's really presumptive even getting in Juma's face. Its a pity she still seems to have feelings for him. Peter is pushy now because she's with someone else now. I'm really not feeling Peter right now but I'm loving me some Juma. Peter has to prove himself and all he's done so far is try to cause trouble for Zuri.
Why is it that Zuri has to sacrifice her way of life when Peter didn't feel she was worth the fight initially??? He only came to Liria because of his work and not because he missed/loved her. Now he's in love again and she'll be the one to pay the price. Sad!!! I really hope Peter is worth it at the end of the day!
Author's Response:
Hey baha_malo,
Thanks for the great review! Just hear me out, the reason Peter's reaction is like this because he is still a man in his 20s. I remember meeting one dude in my lifetime that had these things figured out. They were usually still chasing after girls...lol!!! So yes his work forced him to come to Liria but the love he still feels for Zuri is making him want to be with her. Well she isn't making it easy on him wanting to let her go. We women always have our hearts open especially when it comes to forgiveness. Who knows where I might take Zuri..;)
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed Loved the update. I'm feeling for Zuri. Her life is being stifled at 26yrs. Why is it her stepmom not taking over her responsibility and doing more instead of causing strife??? Her dad needs to step up to the plate also. Now that her brothers are off, maybe Zuri can now have her life back. Its as if Zuri is the maid, so sad.
Author's Response:
Thanks for posting such a wonderful review and giving me an awesome rating!
Zuri will shoulder a lot of responsibility because she is the daughter of the former wife. She is lucky that her father didn't put her out on the streets (its that sort of thinking) So don't expect her father to step up to assist her. Right now Zuri has accepted her fate but we'll see how long she will truly accept it.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed Great update. Wonder if that waiter is a set up or coincidence??!!! Hope Zuri gets out of there alive.
Author's Response:
Hey baha_malo,
I love how your mind is operating about where my story is going next...I'm complete enjoying it! Thanks for giving me such an awesome review and an opportunity to think about something...hmmmm.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed I loved it. More please!!!
Author's Response:
Thankx soooo much...I'm glad you enjoy the fruits of my brain!
P+CL
~Outlawstar615~
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed
Love the start.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading my fanfic. Keep checking in.
P+CL
~Outlawstar615~
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