Awesome story so far and I'm loving it. I'm curious as to why she smells like chocolate. Please update soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. I'm just excited that people like the story and I'll try to update as soon as possible.
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~Outlawstar615~
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed
Another great update. That was a sweet story about Godric and her grandmom. I'm still curious about the chocolate scent though. Can't wait for the explanation.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed 
It’s 1993 and Cynthia Hamilton is the house keeper to one of the biggest rock stars of that year, Caleb Murphy. The trouble with him is he’s a drug addict, a drunk, and a womanizer…but she loves him.
Hmm, glad Cynthia got out of there as he has a serious problem. He needs help! Hopefully Cynthia doesn't go back out of pity or guilt. He was only using her for sex when he got the urge and he was becoming too violent with her.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed Foolish was the correct name for Cynthia. She settled for an alcoholic and drug abuser. No good will come of that relationship unless he gets clean for himself. Interesting story though.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed Glad Caleb is ok. Hope this was his reality check! Cynthia needs to get on with her life.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed Oh oh, she's torn between two lovers!!! Hmm, wonder who she'll chose in the end???!!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed About time Cynthia get some sense finally as she's been foolish messing around with that junkie who really was using her as a crutch and sex buddy. He wasn't ready to change regardless of what he was telling her and he really doesn't know the meaning of the word love. Hopefully she remains strong and not allow him to drag her down again. If its meant to be, he'll get himself together and meet up with her again.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed Hmmm, interesting but is he really genuine??? Hope she doesn't continue to be foolish.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed Yep, Mitch needs to be taken down!! Hope Caleb can get his act together this time. However, I just don't see Armand and Cynthia becoming a couple after the kiss Caleb laid on her!!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed Glad Cynthia has worked on getting her life together. Caleb has a death wish and I hope Cynthia doesn't get tangled in his web again unless he's a changed man.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed
Great update but I think Cynthia is taking on too much on herself trying to deal with Caleb and his bad habits. I just don't know if he's worth it or good enough for her. If he wants to change ,he has to do it for himself.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed Loved the update. She needed to slow things down abit with Armand especially as she still have feelings for Kaleb.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed Those two can't seem to know what they want to do with themselves. It will be interesting to see what happens next.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed Man, what the hell is wrong with Cynthia?? She can have her dreams and look for Caleb later. Caleb will always be around but she may NOT get another opportunity to fulfil her dreams of dancing.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed Interesting update but is Caleb really gonna do the right thing???
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed Well I'm not surprised at this developement. About time Craig got a reality check. Adena just wasn't ready for a serious relationship after that divorce. Adena is just mean spirited and selfish as usual just thinking of herself and not the potential danger she might be putting her baby in. Saying it was just hormonal was an excuse for bad behaviour.
As usual she's been using him but he allowed that when he slept with her. So I'm not sorry for him either. He should have gone with his first instinct and taken it slow and allow her some time to recover from her divorce. Adena is just a miserable soul who needs to grow up. They jumped too quickly into starting something up with Craig when she was really wasn't ready. I think she did it because she was just lonely. Also look at the way she wasn't honest to her boss about her pregnancy as if no one would notice. She just makes a bunch of silly decisions without thought. Sad!!!!
Taye just seemes like a weak a** man. No back bone to do the right thing. Now he needs to piss off and leave Adena alone. The grass always looks greener on the other side but he had to get burnt to see that. If she ges back to him......awh well.
Author's Response:
I agree and shit's gonna hit the fan soon!
Thanks for keeping up with the story!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed Why the heck doesn't he leave her alone??? He needs to GIVE her some space. It becomes annoying after a while. What does he want from her now???? He was the one feeling bored in their marriage and screwed around. Now he has his freedom and he's hounding her???!!! The nerve of him!!! Great update.
Author's Response:
Its the grass is always greener on the other side curse. Hes a little too late!
Thanks for all your feedback! I really appreciate it!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed Loved the update but not sorry for Adena. She lied to Craig about the baby which was bad and she received a shock seeing Taye and Kim make out. Hope she starts being honest with herself and the people who care about her.
Kim really turning out to be a first class b*tch. How could both she and Taye think it was ok???? Anyway, she'll get hers. Its obvious she doesn't care about Adena or Missy's feeling. Craig seems to be a good guy and always seem to have Adena's back. What the heck is he, the fall guy????!!! I still think both of them need their space to get their lives together and not rush into anything as Adena has too many issues going on.
Adena needs to face the music and move on. Taye done her dirty, forget him! She can't use Craig to avoid her problems. Hope she doesn't use Craig and try to go rebound with him. It just wouldn't work. Taye isn't worth the stress. Interesting update. She should at least let her parents and friends know she's ok even if she doesn't want to talk to Taye.
Author's Response: Glad you are still interested! Thanks for reviewing! More updates soon!
Taye is a weak a**ed man being lead by his little head. He doesn't deserve Adena. He needs to decide what he wants and move on. Wow, Fee Fee was just trying to hook up with Craig!!! What a small world, everyone with everyone's ex.....Yuck!!! Interesting update.
Author's Response: He is! Thank you! Glad you liked my little twist in the story!
Yep, I meant fall back guy as he always seem to have her back but she never seems to have his.
Author's Response: Oh ok yea, thats what I thought lol. And now she may have lost him :(
Oh hell nooo!!! Taye is a mess!! The grass always seem greener on the other side. Now he doesn't have Adena , he's not having much fun with his affair. What a dick!!! Fee Fee is gonna turn that party out. Hope Adena asks Craig what's going on instead of making assumptions and being miserable. She needs to act as a grown a** woman and stop running away as a child. She needs to face her darn problems head on. Whose friend is Kim, really????!!! Kim is a traitor!!! She always seem to have Taye's back but where's the support for Adena.
Author's Response: EXACTLY! The grass is always greener on the other side but green aint shit when karma bites you in the ass! Lmao, thanks for following! Updates soon. And yes, Adena's party is going to be an affair to remember!
Glad she finally called her parents......there is hope for her yet! Hope she feels like a fool when she finds out that Missy is fooling around with Ron instead of Craig. She just dropped him like a hot potatoe when she was done. Now she's ready to deal with things which is good but hope Craig doesn't make it too easy for her. Loved the update.
Author's Response: Yeah, she is slowly but surely cleaning up the mess! Everything's looking up though! Glad you loved it and continue reading, I really appreciate it!!!!