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Summary: Adena Capricorn is a successful and highly organized 23 year old. Shes an art dealer at one of the most prestigious art galleries in Manhattan. This Capricornian has it all- a great job, great girlfriends and a loving husband. Until her world crashes down when she finds lipstick on her husbands shirt and finds help and solace in the most unexpected of places.How would a Capricorn handle this situation?

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Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: ~*The Zodiac*~
Chapters: 21
Completed:Yes
Word count: 55413
Read Count: 76501
Published: 02/04/10
Updated: 09/05/10


Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Glad Adena and Craig got a happy ending. Look forward to reading your next story also.

Author's Response: Im glad your glad! Thanks for following along from beginning to end and Im excited your looking forward to "Aquarius"! (This will be my favorite one since thats my sign) ;)

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Date: 09/05/10

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Wow, Taye and Kim getting it on...not surprising!!! I knew Kim wasn't a true member and she didn't have Adena's back. Now we see why. She was coveting Adena's man!!! Adena is no princess and has shown herself to be selfish, unkind and ungrateful. How she treated Craig was shameful after all he did to help her not to mention her poor treatment of her parents.

Glad she finally seem to be getting herself together but she could have been nicer or more considerate of her friends and family. Hope if she ever tries to form a friendship with Craig again, he doesn't make it too easy for her. Make her work hard for any relationship with him. She has taken too many things for granted including her friends and family's support. Interesting update though.



Author's Response: Lol everyone's a mess right now. Hopefully things will get better, we shall see! Thanks for keeping up with me!!!

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Date: 03/05/10

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Loved it!!! Kim needs to quit discussing Adena with Taye. Where is her loyalty??? If Adena needs space especially from Taye, let her have it!!! One of the reasons their marriage might not have lasted was because they were too young and immature for a serious committment. They still have some growing up to do.

Author's Response: I agree, thats why certain things need to stay between the two people in the relationship. I myself am going to stay single til my 30's lol. I feel your 20's is when you start to understand who you are and how can you when you are married? Thats just me. Thanks for loving it!!!

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Date: 27/04/10

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow, she finally had the baby after all of that drama. Glad it went ok. Hope Adena and Craig can work it out but I'm still abit weary about her as she hasn't proven herself to be true to anyone but Taye. Craig is too good to and for her and she doesn't seem to appreciate what she has. Kim and Taye's situation, can't say I didn't see it coming but I'm not feeling sorry for her. Now I can't wait to see if Taye will acknowledge this child.

Author's Response: yeah both Adena and Taye need to step up to the mess they made. they have a lot to talk about....if Taye acknowledges it. Karma got Kim tho. Thanks for reading!!!!

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Date: 08/05/10

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Well the crap has hit the fan!!! Loved it but Adena is beginning to make me sick of her immature and silly ways of dealing with things. She's 24yrs, grow up already!!! Running away doesn't solve anything. Enough is enough chica....talk to your parents!!!!

Eventhough she doesn't like surprises she could have at least acknowleged the fact that Craig did it and tried to make her happy. If she wants to go back to Taye, so be it. Live with what you want but she really needs to work on herself first. Craig, Craig let her ungrateful behind go and move on. I don't know if she's worth the stress.

Fee Fee, you know you're lying. Hmmm, let's see what Taye have to say now.



Author's Response: Adena is a piece of work right now! She needs time to herself definitely. Fee Fee is making everything worse! Shit has hit the fan, its gonna be messy! Thanks for reading!

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Date: 30/04/10

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting start.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

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Date: 03/04/10

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Loved the update. Glad she apologized to Craig. Now they appear to be close again but with Adena's pregnancy I wonder how it will affect this new relationship not to mention Taye and Missy????!!! Hmmm, a baby definitely makes things more complicated. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Yep, this pregnancy is going to make shit hit the fan again. Hopefully Adena will make the right decision this time. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 05/05/10

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Taye needs to give Adena her space. Hope she pulls herself together and move on. Also hope she's not preggers as all that does is complicate things. Let the cheater go!!! Great update.

Author's Response:

Yeah, they both need time away from each other to truly think

Again, thanks for all the feedback!!!! Much love!

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Date: 11/04/10

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Taye was a dog and she needs to divorce him and move on. He a CHEATER!!! There is NO justification for that!! Love the update.

Author's Response: Thanks for all the feedback! I really appreciate it!

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Date: 11/04/10

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Taye is a shit head!! To do that to Adena after 10 months of marriage. Don't see marriage counselling going well either. Great update.

Author's Response: I totally agree! Thanks for reading!!!!

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Date: 11/04/10

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary: It's been a few years since Dr. Kelly Lee had brokedown with her sex addiction because it was love that got her through the addiction of lust. Now at a hospital party of lust, to save her love, will she get hurt in the crossfire. Kelly/Lainey Three-shot.

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Categories: Daytime Television, General Hospital
Characters: Lainey Winters
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Slash, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Femslash, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1879
Read Count: 3142
Published: 04/04/10
Updated: 04/04/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting start.

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Date: 05/04/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

 

Camryn Jones has had enough, and Justin Blake is about to find out just how far she'll go.


 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1044
Read Count: 1939
Published: 07/04/10
Updated: 07/04/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I actually loved it. Payback is a b*tch and he got his back in spades with his cheating ways.

Author's Response: thank you!

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Date: 08/04/10

Rated: Teen or Above
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Summary: Ella Fontaine has wished for something better but it seems that whoever answers wishes and prayers misses her memos! Her stepmother, Suzzette, owns the hottest nightclub in their small town called Charming. However, Suzzette is not so charming and neither are her twin daughters, Sasha and Serena. Serena is the club singer and Sasha is the DJ. Ella, however, is forced to do jantorial work, if she doesnt make any money, her step-mother will throw her out on the streets. The highlight of her night is watching the beautiful couples dance together and she wishes she can do the same with her own prince charming.

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Categories: Primetime Television, Music
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: To Break the Spell
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 15909
Read Count: 19503
Published: 07/04/10
Updated: 30/04/10


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Outta Here

I'm with Thad, why doesn't she quit??? Look for a job elsewhere??? They're not her true family and obviously don't like her. Doesn't she have a little money saved??? The stress of dealing with her "family" isn't worth it. She's just their maid. Loved the update.

Author's Response: I feel the same way and Ella is starting to see that now. We'll see what happens! Thanks for all the feedback!!!!

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Date: 16/04/10

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Out Of My League

Loved the update but how the heck was Suzette allowed to do something like that??? Is there no hope for Ella??? Why is it Suzette is allowed to get away controlling Ella's life like that??? Can Ella not fight for her rights as an adult??? Does Ella not have any other family members????

Author's Response: Right? Believe me, these questions will be answered soon! Thanks for reading!

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Date: 25/04/10

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Wanna Get To Know Ya

Loving the progress so far. Can't wait for Ella to get out of the box. Thaddeus obviously has a soft spot for her.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! Still deciding where to go next, update coming soon!

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Date: 10/04/10

Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue: The Way You Make Me Feel

Glad Ella got her happy ending.

Author's Response: Thanks for staying with me til the end!

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Date: 30/04/10

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Underappreciated

Me likey. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I'll update soon!

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Date: 08/04/10

Rated: Most Ages
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Summary: Kat Miller and ADA Curtis Bell are on a break and it's tearing them apart. 

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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Det. Kat Miller
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 987
Read Count: 2482
Published: 11/04/10
Updated: 11/04/10


Title: Chapter 1: Do Over

Loved this short. Hope they can work it out as they obviously still have feelings for each other.

Author's Response: Yea, you and me both. Every episode I'm just waiting for them to get back together, and I think they are now! YAY \o/

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Date: 12/04/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 4]
Summary:

The Hidden secret behind friends that tore the ROC family apart.

Starring

 

Shawn Jay Z Carter

Beyonce Knowles

Aaliyah Haughton

Damon Dash

 

 



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Categories: Miscellaneous, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 1715
Read Count: 953
Published: 12/04/10
Updated: 12/04/10


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Interesting start. Difficult to read as lots of words and no paragraphs/separation but appreciate your efforts.

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Date: 12/04/10

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Writer Mason Hendrix is currently in a heated battle with writer's block, so he decides a change of scenery might do his writing some good.  Little did he know he would find his muse in the Fender women, nor that he would discover their loves from the past and the future.

Wolfe Fender is the daughter of legendary Frontwoman, Bedouin Fender.  Adoptd by James Logan after her mother's untimely death Wolfe grew up different.  Now Mason Hendrix has come along with the chaos of the Logan/Fender family.

 Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 5993
Read Count: 3173
Published: 13/04/10
Updated: 05/10/11


Title: Chapter 2: VooDoo Child

Me likey. Yay!!

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Date: 14/04/10

Title: Chapter 3: Debauchery

Loved the update. How did Wolfe become apart of the family???  The ladies sure don't love her. Are Jennifer and Amanda jealous of her relationship with the guys???

Author's Response: All will be revealed in due time.

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Date: 14/04/10

Title: Chapter 4: Jack

What kind of question is that?? Everybody is different and some people are selfish and just have nasty attitudes while others are cool. He is Amanda's BF and he was happy with her all along with her nasty attitude. Hmmm, now he suddenly sees the light or was he looking thru rose colored glasses???

I think their attraction to each other is gonna cause more drama in the family if Amanda and her mom suspect anything. Hopefully they can do the right thing and keep it together. Amanda maybe a bitch but she doesn't deserve her sister sleeping with her BF especially if they haven't broken up yet.

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Date: 29/05/10

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Experiencing phantom limb is nothing compared to phantom sex. She could feel his breath on her neck even though she knew he was miles away, hear him whispering the words in her ear, telling her to repeat them. She could only hope he was feeling as crazy as she looked. Writhing in her bed, messing up the sheets, labored breathing, the whole nine. She could even feel his long sweaty hair on her, tantalizing her.......now she understood the meaning of the lyrics to Blood Sugar Sex Magik.



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Categories: Music
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 10740
Read Count: 5183
Published: 28/04/10
Updated: 06/08/10


Title: Chapter 5: If You Have To Ask

Interesting update. Anthony seems to have a lil something something for June. Can't wait to see what happens next.

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Date: 06/05/10

Title: Chapter 4: One Hot Minute

Loved the update but Mr Kiedis is a jerk/moron. June also makes me wonder why she's allowing him so much freedom with her body. He obviously doesn't respect boundaries and it borders on sexual harassment. Makes me think of date rape how he's approaching her. She needs to set some boundaries and if he's looking for an easy lay he needs to look elsewhwere. Hope she gets an interview before she allows him in her pants as it looks like that's where they're headed. Hmmm, is she that desperate for an interview to allow it to go this far??? Where is the professionalism???

Author's Response:

Wow, sexual harassment.!! Well, when it comes to the boundaries part I do understand where you're coming from but...Anthony Kiedis has actually admitted to doing things such as this in his younger days....talking to a hot interviewer and then banging her afterward...I know it sounds crazy but its the truth. I swear! He's a daddy now though. No more singing then banging for him...buahaha.

I'll look into June making her boundaries known, but in this scene i think she's just a bit flustered from recognizing the song from her dream then acting on the urges in real life... She really wants the interview and to keep her composure and maybe a nice piece of Kiedis to seal the deal...maybe she'll even get to keep him. ^^

Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/05/10

Title: Chapter 7: Right On Time

Interesting update.

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Date: 06/08/10