Penname: baha_malo [Contact]

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Member Since: 23/04/09

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 28]
Summary:

Experiencing phantom limb is nothing compared to phantom sex. She could feel his breath on her neck even though she knew he was miles away, hear him whispering the words in her ear, telling her to repeat them. She could only hope he was feeling as crazy as she looked. Writhing in her bed, messing up the sheets, labored breathing, the whole nine. She could even feel his long sweaty hair on her, tantalizing her.......now she understood the meaning of the lyrics to Blood Sugar Sex Magik.



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Categories: Music
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 10740
Read Count: 5187
Published: 28/04/10
Updated: 06/08/10


Title: Chapter 3: The Greeting Song

Loved it. Wow, Anthony's sure testing her with that kiss. Can't wait to see what happens next.

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Date: 02/05/10

Title: Chapter 2: They're Red Hot

Me likey. Can't wait to read more.

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Date: 28/04/10

Rated: All Ages
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Summary:

"Nothing spoils the taste of peanut butter like unrequited love." ~Charlie Brown

Spock discovers the wonders of peanuts and love. Prequel to Golden Bells and Serpent Gods.



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Television)
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: Fluff
Series: Constellations
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 7854
Read Count: 18498
Published: 30/04/10
Updated: 30/04/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome!!!

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Date: 02/05/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary: Kat and Bell enjoy a little mid-day rendezvous with a surprise visitor.

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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Det. Kat Miller
Classification: Drabbles , Off Cannon
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 675
Read Count: 1616
Published: 03/05/10
Updated: 03/05/10


Title: Chapter 1: Lock the Door

Wow, talk about exhibitionism. Guess Scotty couldn't help himself. This was hot!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/05/10

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 113]
Summary:

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Jonathan Denson isn't what you'd call the life of the party but when he enters a room, he commands attention. The only problem is, the attention he craves isn't the attention he's getting. It's just too bad that the only person he ever truly wanted isn't ready for what he has to offer. Left with no other option, John decides that he's sick of leaving romance up to fate and takes his love life into his own hands.

Disclaimer: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended    

Huge shout out to KKMonroe, formerly CPM09, for my title. This story would have been called something I wasn't completely satisfied with if not for her genius. Thank you, lovely lady :)



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 12160
Read Count: 25826
Published: 03/05/10
Updated: 22/12/10


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Yay!!! So looking forward to this story. Glad John didn't continue to let his life revolve around Rochelle. Hope he finds true love with someone who loves him but not as a brother. Glad John has his own story.

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Date: 03/05/10

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Loving how Kaleesa is a wrench in Rochelle's plan. She needs to make up her mind what she wants because Kaleesa and John seem to be bonding quite well. I think I love me some Kaleesa and John and can't wait to see where this story goes.

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Date: 20/06/10

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Hmm, John needs to make up his mind about what he wants. Hope he doesn't use Kaleesa to make Rochelle jealous. That would just be so wrong of him. I can just see the drama.

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Date: 24/10/10

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Hmmm, Rochelle and John are in a weird place. Hope John doesn't mess with Kaleesa's feelings as he's still trying to get it on with Rochelle. He needs to decide who he wants and WHAT he wants. Rochelle definitely doesn't seem to be feeling him as a lover. If she sees him as a brother, she sees him as a brother and he just has to accept that and move on hopefully with Kaleesa.:)

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Date: 23/12/10

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 42]
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When they were young, Kendal and Keoni hated one another. But as they grew into young adults something changed. Now, on the verge of adulthood, they'll come to discover that the ones they've been looking for were right there all along.

A one shot for Nene and the Summer Prompt Fest.

 

Disclaimer/Credit: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended. Image from gettyimages.com.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5755
Read Count: 15770
Published: 04/05/10
Updated: 04/05/10


Title: Chapter 3: When we were in love

Very nice. Cute story.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it, baha.

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Date: 05/05/10

Title: Chapter 1: When we were young

Love this start.

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Date: 05/05/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 26]
Summary:

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Twenty-Two year old Mahogany Smith has dealt with one traumatising moment after another. The death of her single mother at the tender age of six. Her first love and fiance` breaking it off with her and then her younger sister trying to break her with every chance she gets. On the outside, the young pharmacist seems to have it all together. She's completely stable and follows a certain path. There's a side of her that's going to be released though.
Twenty-six year old Kheng Santana has just returned from the undeclared "war" overseas. At first glance, it would seem like the young man isnt affected by the tragedies that have taken place while serving the country; but at night the faces of the innocent people killed in the middle of two countries tango appears in his dreams.

“…you don’t see me”
“Ye-“
“NO! You don’t SEE ME!”



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 4751
Read Count: 2310
Published: 07/05/10
Updated: 24/05/10


Title: Chapter 2: Prologue

Wow, what a sad start! Why was her mom  killed??? Can't wait to see what happens next.

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Date: 07/05/10

Title: Chapter 3: One

Loved the update and glad she has a relationship with her father. Why was she unhappy about his comments???

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Date: 09/05/10

Title: Chapter 5: Three

Glad Kheng reached out for help. Hopefully Dr Smith can help him.Those dreams he's having are terrible. Great update!

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Date: 25/05/10

Title: Chapter 4: Two

Loved the update!! Can't wait to read more.

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Date: 11/05/10

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 222]
Summary:

Island Interlude is the story of Gabrielle Hall, a young woman who teaches physical education and K.C. Whitfield an architect who comes to the fictional island of St. Sebastian. They meet and sparks fly but K.C. isn't who he seems and Gabrielle must decide if she can live with who he really is.    

island interlude                

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.  



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 47
Completed:No
Word count: 97729
Read Count: 235247
Published: 07/05/10
Updated: 01/02/11


Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Wow, sounds like Tiffany really messed with his head. Hope his head is now clear and he's up to the challenge of a new relationship without bringing too much baggage as he's trying to get with Rielle. Great update.

Author's Response: You don't know the half of it. He and Rielle have more in common than he and the redhead. Thank you for your continued  support.

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Date: 30/05/10

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Loved the update and how KC stepped up to Rielle, like a gentleman. Can't wait until the date!



Author's Response:

Nice to know they still have some out there, gentlemen that is. His momma raised him right!!!

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Date: 16/05/10

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh how sweet, they've admitted to each other they want a relationship with each other. Loving how they roll togehter.

Author's Response:

I thought it was nice too. Lord knows they'll have enough stuff cropping up to create conflict between them. Let this be one thing that is clear between them. 

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Date: 28/05/10

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Loved the update. Wow, the description of the food was great, made me want a taste as it sounded so delicious. Hmm, are they gonna accept the drink or not???? Can't wait to see what move the guys are gonna do next!

Author's Response: Nothing like a little vino and music to set the mood. For what you might ask? Wait and see! (Evil laughter)

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Date: 09/05/10

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Great update. Glad KC seems genuine about his intentions toward Rielle. Can't wait until the party!!

Author's Response: I'm glad he comes off as sincere too. Getting ready to post so hang on.

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Date: 25/05/10

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Interesting update. Hope these guys aren't players. Those ladies better watch out.

Author's Response: You know sometimes it takes a good woman to settle a bad man. I think that has already been proven with his father. The women need to crack that whip and whip it good!

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Date: 14/05/10

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Loved the updates. I guess sparks will fly when the girls eventually meet up with the boys. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: We'll have a slow simmer before we bubble.

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Date: 09/05/10

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

That was a KC made. Hope Rielle gives him a chance and that they can make it work. Great update.

Author's Response: Thanks for staying up with me and reviewing.

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Date: 22/05/10

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great update. I'm loving it. yay!!!

Author's Response: Thanks b_m appreciating your support.

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Date: 21/05/10

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Great update. Glad to see them bonding.



Author's Response: I know these stories are escapism but I want the characters to feel real, because for me they are.

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Date: 19/05/10

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Great update. Hope KC behaves himself at her home as it seems a lil devil keeps popping up on his shoulder. Can't wait to see how this plays out.

Author's Response: A lil devil in him, a lil devil in her should lead to a lil fun.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/05/10