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Island Interlude by Junebug66
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 222]
Summary:

Island Interlude is the story of Gabrielle Hall, a young woman who teaches physical education and K.C. Whitfield an architect who comes to the fictional island of St. Sebastian. They meet and sparks fly but K.C. isn't who he seems and Gabrielle must decide if she can live with who he really is.    

island interlude                

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.  



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 47
Completed:No
Word count: 97729
Read Count: 235230
Published: 07/05/10
Updated: 01/02/11

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Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Loved the update! KC definitely means business. Hope they can make it work.

Author's Response: Hopeless romantic that I am they better make it work.

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Date: 16/05/10
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Loved the update. Hmm, KC is making his move already. I don't think Rielle stands a chance against all of that heat! Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response:

Yeah but there aint nothing like some milk chocolate to melt down all over that! Ooh wait that sounds kinda dirty. Oh well. 

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Date: 12/05/10
Title: Chapter 7: Cast of Characters

Love the cast pics.

Author's Response: Thank you and please continue to read. I know you've been sticking with the story and I appreciate it.

Author's Response: Thank you and please continue to read. I know you've been sticking with the story and I appreciate it.

Author's Response: Thank you and please continue to read. I know you've been sticking with the story and I appreciate it.

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Date: 11/05/10
Title: Chapter 7: Cast of Characters

Love the cast pics.

Author's Response:

Thank you. I really wanted to put them up earlier but I think it is really good where it is.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/05/10
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Me likey. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Me too boy is it getting hot in Paradise!

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Date: 08/05/10
Retired
Dangerous Affairs by KKMonroe
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 177]
Summary: DA Banner

 

Twenty-three year old Leigh Grayson has had only one thing on her mind for the last five years: Justice. But to get justice she will have to fight one man’s sick obsession.

Will Detective Damien Crook be able to convince her to accept his help and most of all his love?

I want to say a huge thank you to Renee Banks for all her support and editing skills. Renee, you have no idea how much it means to me!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:Yes
Word count: 33650
Read Count: 31680
Published: 09/05/10
Updated: 18/12/10

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Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Wow, that was interesting with the FBI kidnapping her. Hmmm, hope they are trustworthy and not working with Michael. Great update!!

Author's Response: Thank you!!

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Date: 18/06/10
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Wow, Michael is really full of himself.  I feel Slvatore is gonna get rid of Michael soon. Leigh and Damien really didn't know each other well and I felt they moved too fast and need to slow it down a bit. Damien needs to focus on doing his job and not on getting in Leigh's pants. How unprofessional!

Author's Response:  Hey Baha_malo, I know Damien seems very impulsive, but he is a very passionate and caring man. Brian is a good influence on him. But I agree Damien needs to focus more on the job...maybe he will.. :-) Thanks for reading and reviewing, it really is appreciated!!

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Date: 03/06/10
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Glad they got their happily ever after. Leigh can finally move on with her life. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Hey ! Thanks for your review, I really appreciate it! Wow!

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Date: 18/12/10
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Great update!!! Damien needs to keep his focus.

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Date: 06/08/10
Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

Love the cast pics.

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Date: 09/05/10
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Me likey.

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Date: 09/05/10
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Wow, Michael finally made his move. Hope he doesn't hurt her.

Author's Response:

Hmm.. Let's see what happens on chapter 9...

thank you so much for sticking with me!

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Date: 12/06/10
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Loved it!!!! Leigh knows Michael is lusting after her and  is on edge AND she's going to meet him????!!!!! Is she crazy??? She needs to watch herself. Michael seems to be a stalker who is pushing her boundaries.  Poor Damien....he needs to be less intense with the love connection for now so that he can focus on the case as being in love may be detrimental to both of them.  The time for love will come later. He needs to get his head out of the clouds and focus!

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Date: 18/05/10
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Oh oh, I hope he's not gonna kill her. He seems sick like that. Great update.

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Date: 01/09/10
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Loved the update!!! Did Michael set up this threat to Leigh?? Is he stalking her??? Looks like she and Damien have a connection. Can't wait to see how this develops.

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Date: 11/05/10
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Loved the update. Michael is gonna blow a gasket when he finds out she has a BF.

Author's Response:

Hey B!

He sure will!! thank you for reading it!

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Date: 24/05/10
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Loved the update. Wonder if Michael realises its all a set up???

Author's Response: If he doesn't he will find out very soon!! Thanks for reading.

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Date: 29/06/10
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Great update! Glad she wasn't hurt but Michael still messed up in the head.

Author's Response: thanks for reading, I am not done with Michael! aahahah (evil laughter...)

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Date: 27/09/10
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Loved the update. Glad she's being agreeable with them. If this Michael is dirty and involved in killing her dad, he needs to be  taken down.

Author's Response: Thank you soo much!

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Date: 15/05/10
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Hope they have can rescue her. Love it!

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Date: 10/12/10
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

She's getting mixed up with the wrong type of people. Hmmm, will she have to pay a price for Salvatore taking care of Michael???

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Date: 08/11/10
~*The Zodiac*~: Book 2: Aquarius by Butterfly
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary: The setting is Bermuda, the time is now and the characters are four Aquarian 20 somethings that want to rock the world. Literally. Their all girl rock band is called The Aquarians and soon they get discovered and thrown into the life of sex, drugs and rock and roll...and possibly love and heartbreak.Will fame change them? How would an Aquarian handle having everything they could ever want?

Table of Contents
Categories: Music
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, General
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Femslash, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: ~*The Zodiac*~
Chapters: 28
Completed:Yes
Word count: 96946
Read Count: 3942
Published: 10/05/10
Updated: 17/09/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting start. Loved the background on each girl. Can't wait to see where this story goes.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!!

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Date: 12/05/10
Foolish by Butterfly
Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

He has been in love with her ever since he first saw her one summer at the community pool in the slickest bikini ever. However, she was always just out of reach...and 9 years older than he was. Then Fate steps in and brings the two together during troubling times. Age aint nothing but a number but when does it start to count? When does it start to separate two people who seem so perfect for each other? Can it last? Or were they just foolish to even let it start? Inspired by songs from the 90's.

 

Genre: Romance, Comedy, Interracial

Rating: R (strong language/situations, sexual content)



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television, Movies, Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 35203
Read Count: 31808
Published: 15/05/10
Updated: 28/07/10

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Title: Chapter 7: I've Been Thinking About You

Interesting update with all these wet mini dreams. Hope things work out for them.



Author's Response: Hhahaaha you gotta love them, until you realize they arent real... thanks for reading!!!!

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Date: 25/06/10
Title: Chapter 4: I Wanna Be Down

Loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you!!!!

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Date: 31/05/10
Title: Chapter 6: Hey Lover

Wow, that was a hot dream. Loved it!



Author's Response: Thanks and so did I! Lol thanks for reading!!!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/06/10