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Foolish by Butterfly

Rated: Mature Content

[Reviews - 36]

Summary:

He has been in love with her ever since he first saw her one summer at the community pool in the slickest bikini ever. However, she was always just out of reach...and 9 years older than he was. Then Fate steps in and brings the two together during troubling times. Age aint nothing but a number but when does it start to count? When does it start to separate two people who seem so perfect for each other? Can it last? Or were they just foolish to even let it start? Inspired by songs from the 90's.

Genre: Romance, Comedy, Interracial

Rating: R (strong language/situations, sexual content)

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television, Movies, Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 35203
Read Count: 31748
Published: 15/05/10
Updated: 28/07/10

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Title: Chapter 5: All By Myself

Loved the update.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading AND reviewing!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed

Date: 10/06/10

Title: Chapter 3: You Oughta Know

Wow, Nicholas is a sh*thead!!! He's been cheating on her all along and making her fell like the bad guy. I hope his relationship with Brenda sucks and he realises he let go a good thing. By then hopefully Aiyana will be in a loving relationship and preggers.

Brenda also has some nerve too. Like Aiyana said, "who's the slut now" as she was sleeping with another woman's husband. She's definitely fallen off her high pedestal of morality. Please let payback be a bitch for them!!!Especially the dirty dog after all he played all those mind games on Aiyana making her feel small when all the while having his slut on the side. Great update!!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it, hopefully good things will come for Aiyana. Thanks for reading!!!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed

Date: 20/05/10

Title: Chapter 8: If

Great update. Cherry was definitely a bad influence on Aiyanna. Hope she learned from her mistakes.

Author's Response: Yes she was, some friendships had to come to an end. Another lesson learned. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed

Date: 20/07/10

Title: Chapter 2: Unbreak My Heart

Wow, both Raven and Nicholas are two peas in a pod, full of sh*t. They both have issues and are making their partners' lives miserable. Aiyana needs to get out of that marriage, sooner rather than later before she loses her sanity. Great update.

Author's Response: They are, they are perfect for each other aren't they but not perfect for who they are with unfortunately. Aiyana and Christopher are really hurting, hopefully things will look up for them. Thanks for reading!!!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed

Date: 16/05/10

Title: Chapter 9: Come And Talk To Me

Great update.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!!!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed

Date: 29/07/10

Title: Chapter 1: Red, Red Wine

I loved the start of this story. I'm sorry but I'm with Nick on this. So what if those wives appeared to be drunk and telling secrets , she shouldn't have trust any information especially to a group of strangers. That's just silly. I wouldn't have said sh*t as one never knows when things come back to bite you in the butt. He was justified feeling angry. Aiyana needs to do some soul searching as it seems this isn't the first time she has embarassed him. What the heck is up with this couple anyway???

Author's Response: Yeah and her story was a little more awkward for everyone else. She is only getting the heat because he witnessed it, which is very embarassing, especially in front of your boss! She's gotta do something quick to fix this! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed

Date: 15/05/10

Lust to Sully the Cries of Hope by starlitwisher

Rated: Mature Content

[Reviews - 4]

Summary: In the most dire situations he turned to hope to prepare him for the inevitable. She indulged in her lust for his fear.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Un-betaed
Challenges: Saints and Sinners
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 741
Read Count: 2263
Published: 22/05/10
Updated: 22/05/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Definitely an interesting short. It left me a bit curious though as to why she killed him.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed

Date: 23/05/10

My Number One by cella_bella

Rated: 17 and older

[Reviews - 11]

Summary:

Twenty-one year old biracial Katrina Graeme has set out of her comfortable small town home, to go to L.A to make a name for herself. After spending months trying to kick start her career, she returns home to the love and kindness she misses from her family and friends. In attempt to reignite the 2 year relationship with her long distance boyfriend athlete, Alex Ferguson, she realizes that there’s more to a relationship than just love. To her surprise she finds out that her boyfriend has befriended her worst enemy, Trey Hardin, someone who had shattered her best friend’s heart whilst Katrina was left to place the pieces back together. Follow Katrina’s journey as she finds out what love is really about in this technology age, and the sacrifices she has to make to get to where she wants to be.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 3748
Read Count: 1450
Published: 22/05/10
Updated: 22/05/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Nice casts pics.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed

Date: 22/05/10

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Interesting start! I just don't know what to think about Kat. She seems to be abit high strung. Why is she up in Trey and Michelle's business?? Don't make no sense as Michelle didn't ask her to defend her on something that happened years ago. She was just silly with that foolishness!!

That Alex is a dirty cheating dog! Kat is gonna really lose it now. Glad he's breaking it off with her and hopefully not lay the blame at her door for their failed relationship. Hope she finds out he's cheating on her and let the dog go. He doesn't seem to care about her apart from having sex with her. Hopefully her eyes will be opened. She's gonna be so hurt. Maybe she'll find someone else who'll love and appreciate her.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed

Date: 23/05/10

Just Breathe by lockandkey

Rated: 17 and older

[Reviews - 7]

Summary: After "he" dies life for Eden will never the same, she wants to be alone. she will do anything to take back the hands of time and bring him back, her dependence on taylor becomes her new addiction and she wonders if she can ever escape but things change when "his" brother comes to town, he is different, he is something she cant remember. soon she is stuck between "his" brother and Taylor, but with each triangle comes secrets. Secrets that change the life she thought she knew, but is she willing to risk everything?

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 5587
Read Count: 2101
Published: 04/06/10
Updated: 03/01/11

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Title: Chapter 2: The walls can talk

Hmm, interesting update but a lil confusing. Wondering how Taylor plays into her life??? She needs to get herself together. Why doesn't she want to see her family???

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed

Date: 16/06/10

Title: Chapter 1: Gone

Interesting start.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed

Date: 04/06/10

Title: Chapter 4: Run as fast as you can

Eden seems to be self destructing and not coping well at all. Maybe she needs counselling or surround herself with peolpe with more positive outlook on life.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed

Date: 21/12/10

Title: Chapter 5: Eden's Garden

Glad Eden has gotten a release. Maybe she'll be able to deal with more things associated with the death.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed

Date: 04/01/11

Even angels fall in love by dyehanna1

Rated: 17 and older

[Reviews - 14]

Summary:

Before I met you, I was an angel; when I met you, I was a saint; but when you were done with me, we became a thorn in each other's flesh.

I lost my Grace and you lost your life.

I gave up my wings to be with you again.

I lost the mercy bestowed on me,

You forgot the pictures of us, then, turned around and said to me, "Go to hell and rot in it."

Honey, where do you think I have been for the last hundred years?

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Bonnie Bennett
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Horror, Mystery, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Damon/Bonnie (Vampire Diaries)
Warnings: Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 11570
Read Count: 2046
Published: 04/06/10
Updated: 10/09/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Bonnie's diary 1

Interesting.

Author's Response:

Hi baha,

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed

Date: 05/06/10

Title: Chapter 3: The chosen one with the broken wings

Interesting story so far.

Author's Response: Hello baha_malo, thanks so much for reading, appreciate it babe.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed

Date: 23/08/10

Title: Chapter 2: The vampire, the wolf, and the witch.

Wow, that Damon is a mess, stirring up all that trouble. Hope Tyler keeps a cool head or he may lose her for true. Hmmm, however, it does seem like Bonnie and Damon appear to have some sort of weird connection. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response:

Hi baha,

Are you a closet Tonnie shipper? Truth be told, sometimes I am.

I feel just a little sorry for Ty, cos everyone tends to prefer the blood sucking vamp to a cuddly were wolf.

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed

Date: 20/06/10

Mike & Kyra by Carmel Beauty

Rated: Mature Content

[Reviews - 42]

Summary: Okay this is my very first short story. I hope you enjoy! EXPLICT!!! ONLY FOR MATURE AUIDENCES!

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: The "Fearless Females" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 8324
Read Count: 40263
Published: 04/06/10
Updated: 03/05/11

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow, Mike is obsessed which is dangerous!!! They both have secrets which doesn't bode well for either of them. What's up with those papers???

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed

Date: 08/06/10

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow, Mike is crazy ,pulling that gun. Interesting update.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed

Date: 30/04/11

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it. Can't wait to see where you take this story.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed

Date: 05/06/10

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10.1

Loved the update. Kyra is in a mess. Hope she can get away from the sickos.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed

Date: 04/05/11

Sins & Transgressions by EdenWrites

Rated: Mature Content

[Reviews - 7]

Summary:

Dean Winchester falls for Ari, an ex-hooker, who is having dreams of hellhounds.

dean Winchester falls for Ari

Arianna is played by Christie Laing who has appeared on both Smallville and Supernatural a couple of times.

Disclaimer: The creators/writers of Supernatural retain all rights in this work of fiction. No copyright infringement is intended.

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Original Character(s), Other
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Road House Series -Supernatural-DeanCentric
Chapters: 20
Completed:Yes
Word count: 54966
Read Count: 81231
Published: 04/06/10
Updated: 08/06/10

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Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh hell no, the demon has found them. Hope they can escape again. Jo needs to tune it down a notch.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed

Date: 08/06/10

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loving this story so far.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed

Date: 07/06/10

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Ari can't see she's being set up so Dean can't protect her. She is in trouble. Great update.

Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying the story. :)

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed

Date: 07/06/10

By His Side by EdenWrites

Rated: 17 and older

[Reviews - 2]

Summary:

Cassie can't forget Dean so she changes professions.

No copyright infringement intended. All recognizable characters belong to their original creators.

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Cassie Robinson
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Family, Horror, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Cassie/Dean (Supernatural)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 26802
Read Count: 2596
Published: 05/06/10
Updated: 06/06/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting start.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. :)

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed

Date: 05/06/10

Redemption by EdenWrites

Rated: 17 and older

[Reviews - 1]

Summary:

Dean Winchester is having second thoughts about his life when he runs into an old friend. (This was my first NONE Cassie/Dean story.)

--Disclaimer: No copyright infringement is intended. All recognizable characters belong to their original creators.