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Summary: Mackenzie Armstrong moves from Arkansas to Chicago to start her job at an advertising agency. She meets new people while she deals with being far from home and the people she love. On her first day, she has an altercation with a fellow coworker, Scott Ross, a man of many quirks. It sparks tension and a war of words between the two, but what will happen when a business trip to New York forces them to stay in the same room?

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 30
Completed:No
Word count: 35118
Read Count: 41225
Published: 29/08/09
Updated: 24/01/10


Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Loved the update. Can't wait until they take this relationship to the next level.

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Date: 24/01/10

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Summary:

Second chance banner 2

 

To become King of the Lycans, Ulrich has to marry. Between two of his own kind, Sabine, a human, catches his attention and his heart. except on the night of their marriage,she is murdered. 500 years later, Sabine is alive and no longer human but that is only just the beginning of their problems...

*banner by me* i was lazy on the first one and wanted to remake it...

 

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Horror, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 45707
Read Count: 60382
Published: 01/09/09
Updated: 17/09/10


Title: Chapter 15: a visit

Loved it. Hope they find their way back to each other.

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed

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Date: 21/06/10

Title: Chapter 14: Suspicious

Welcome back!!! I was sooo missing this story and was glad to see an update. Loved it. Hope Sabine gets a chance to speak with Ulrich and find out the truth of her situation. Salvatore needs a lesson for all the dirt his has done to Urich and Sabine. I hope he's running scared, the punk!!!

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Date: 17/03/10

Title: Chapter 18: A gift

Loved the update. Glad Sabine and Ulrich are bonding.

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Date: 03/08/10

Title: Chapter 20: author's note

Thanks for the clarification. Loving this story and glad you're continuing with it. Yay!!!

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Date: 19/09/10

Title: Chapter 19: the truth

Awesome update !!! Loved it!! Please let Salvatore suffer big time!!! He's such a coward using Sabine instead of dealing with Ulrich directly. Hope Sabine gives Ulrich a chance.

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Date: 16/09/10

Title: Chapter 17: Hunger

Loved it!! Thanks for the update. Hope Sabine and Ulrich can find their way back to each other despite Salvatore. Also hope Ulrich exposes Salvatore for what he did to Sabine.

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Date: 30/07/10

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Wow, she needs to be honest with Ulrich about her fear of Salvatore and his hold on her. Its good to see that time didn't fade the connection between she and Ulrich. Hope they can make it work and destroy Salvatore in the process. Loved the update.

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Date: 22/06/10

Title: Chapter 13: Ch. 13

Awesome!!! Loved it. Ulrich has finally found Sabine. Now he's on the hunt and I can't wait until he finds her again. Please update soon.

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Date: 14/12/09

Title: Chapter 13: Ch. 13

I absolutely love this story.

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Date: 15/12/09

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Summary:

Angel Lafont is a sexy 22 year old struggling college student.  She is determined to finish school with no distractions......NO MEN!   That is until she glimpse the one man that reminded her she is ALL WOMAN!

Jahki Love at 27 is lonely after being widowed for five years.  He is determined to to find the one woman who will set his soul on fire.  A near fatal crash brings him face to face with his destiny......his goddess.

Can Angel and Jahki compromise and fight for love or will they let lies and deceit keep them apart?

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 33
Completed:No
Word count: 20524
Read Count: 17031
Published: 02/09/09
Updated: 11/07/10


Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 13.2

Great update.

Author's Response: Thanks!

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Date: 28/05/10

Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 14.3

Loved the wedding scene. Great update! Glad they found each other.

Author's Response: Thanks!  Updating soon.

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Date: 11/07/10

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 13.1

Great update. Glad to see their relationship progressing nicely.

Author's Response: Thanks!  Their bond is getting stronger but it will be tested.  LOL

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Date: 24/05/10

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Summary:

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a short addition to the Series Love Bears All

It was an hour to show time.  With the trunk full of chafing pans lined with her love's labor lost inside each one, a fifteen minute drive to her destination seemed now like a hike across the Great Plains-impossible to meet in the time she was now allowed.

"What seems to be the problem ma'am?"  His blue eyes sparkled as he spoke.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of SparkApCider. The original characters and plot are the property of SparkApCider, and is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Graphics by SPAC



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: Love Bears All: A Journey to Love
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 29483
Read Count: 6698
Published: 23/09/09
Updated: 20/08/10


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Great update!!! What the hell is wrong with Jessyca??? She was really high handed in what she did. Treating Farrah and Sammy like that and not apologizing. If she won't apologize she needs not return to Farrah's place or Farrah needs to change her locks. She seems to be twisted with anger and hate. Where's the love for her daughter? Is she holding something over Farrah's head to control her??? Farrah is a grown woman, why is she treating her like that???

How does she expect to have a decent relationship with Farrah when she treats her like sh*t. I hope Farrah stands up to her and tell her about herself, mom or not because she was desrepectful and she shouldn't be allowed to get away with what she did. I'm sorry but Jessyca needs to be taught a life lesson about treating people with respect. She needs to be ripped a new one.



Author's Response: Oh...baha_malo.  It's going to get worse.  But over the next few chapters you'll get to see the past come to light.  Farrah is fueled on fear, Jessyca has her backed into a corner practically.  Jessyca went way overboard, and overreacted.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 08/01/10

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Yay!!! So glad you're back as I missed this story. Thank you for the update. Loved it but Jessyca is a piece of work and needs to ease up with the attitude in ref to Farrah. What does she have over Farrah that she seems afraid of her??? She was so not nice to Farrah. What kind of interfering mom is she??? Doesn't she have her own life to live??? The only thing I like her for is that she has Jared under her guns. Hope he does the right thing.

Author's Response: I'm glad to be back.  I've missed this story as well.  And thanks for keeping up with it.  Jessyca has been carrying this family as mother and father for so long that it's turned her into an all consuming Goddess, wanting control of every element.  She has a lot on Farrah, that's as much as I will speak on here.  She's abrasive.  You may not like her, but you will understand her underlying intent.  She's complicated.  

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Date: 20/08/10

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Summary: It's not until she awakens that she will discover the real dreams truly begin. One shot, one murder, one phone call will spark a chain of events that will show the once sleeping beauty that even if she wants to leave her past behind...others are not as willing.

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Categories: General Hospital, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Crossover
Genre: Drama, Mystery
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 4871
Read Count: 10791
Published: 30/09/09
Updated: 21/12/09


Title: Chapter 3: Miracles Aren't Just for Christmas...

Loving this story so far. You've got my attention and I can't wait to read more.

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Date: 18/12/09

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Summary:

 

 

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A part of the Kerrington & Associates series. Donovan Williams is a rookie in the Miami Dolphins Football Organization. He's lonely and praying for love to find him. Kendra Davis is a rookie in some sorts as well to the Dolphins organization as an athletic trainer.  Will she and Donovan become fast friends and later lovers?

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: Kerrington & Associates
Chapters: 22
Completed:Yes
Word count: 36599
Read Count: 47163
Published: 04/10/09
Updated: 14/03/10


Title: Chapter 16: Sorbet and Candles

Loved it. Garrett needs to be taken down, like now. He's a menace!!!  I hope Rachel sees through his front before its too late. Wow, Kendra and D were hawt!!!! They need to watch their back though. Can't wait to see how they handle their relationship from here.

Author's Response: I'm anxious to see what they do too from here.  They got it bad for each other... Garrett, is horrible and I don't know how to get rid of him.

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Date: 13/01/10

Title: Chapter 17: Confessions

Oh nooo!!! I hope Donovan isn't gonna do anything stupid. Hmmm, now that he's aware of Rachel and Garrett ,he'll be suspicious about those photos if and when they surface. Garrett is stalking him trying to find out information to hurt him. He should be more alert now in reference to Garrett and take him and his threats more serious. I feel so bad for Kendra. She trusted her boss and he set her up, possibly hurting Donovan in the process. Hopefully this doesn't affect she and Donovan's relationship too negatively. Excellent update.

Author's Response: Nope, he won't do anything stupid.  He's going to chill

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Date: 18/01/10

Title: Chapter 15: Haters everywhere you go

Loved the update. Garrett is acting childish. Such a shame that he's trying to ruin someone's life for spite. They did nothing to him. Hope Gerald calls him on his sh*t and report him. Garrett's so petty. I hope Kendra's friend figures out that he's using her for information about Kendra. I can't wait until David goes down. Trying to injure Donovan to get to Kendra was low down and dangerous. He should know better.

Author's Response: Garret is horrible isn't he? David will be going down.

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Date: 13/01/10

Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue

Loved this story. Awesome ending!!!! Sniff!! sniff!!! Sad to see it come to an end. Sniff!!

Author's Response: Oh, all good things come to an end eventually.  there will be more soon.  Thanks for reading.

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Date: 14/03/10

Title: Chapter 13: Dancing

Loved it but I'm sure that photo is gonna cause some trouble for them somehow. Glad she sent the cream off to her friend. Hope she and Donovan continue to bond.

Author's Response: The photos will add some excitement and she and Donovan are finally coming to an undrstanding.

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Date: 05/01/10

Title: Chapter 14: Sailing

Awesome update. Really loved that Kendra and Donovan seem to be bonding well. Donovan just seems like an all around sweet guy.

Author's Response:

Donovan is a good guy!  Thanks for reading.

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Date: 05/01/10

Title: Chapter 21: When We Kiss

Yeah!!! Awesome update. Glad coach resigned after being caught red handed, the sneaky dog. Garrett transferred--Good riddance to bad trash. Rachel seemed jealous of Kendra's happiness and I don't think she has Kendra's back. She definitely NOT a friend.



Author's Response: Rachel was after the all mighty dollar!  Thanks for reading and enjoying it.

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Date: 13/03/10

Title: Chapter 11: Starting Anew

Loved the update. Glad Kendra put David on the spot about the cream he gave her. I hope she decides to find out the ingredients of the cream. Still loving me some Donovan. Dani and Chad make a cute couple.

Author's Response: Thanks for still reading and I appreciate your review!  Thanks!

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Date: 31/12/09

Title: Chapter 12: Let's Take a Trip

Loved the update. Hope she gets some answers back on the cream soon. Donovan needs to beware of that Garrett. Glad Kendra decided to give him a chance and went to Key West. Hopefully they do more bonding. 

Author's Response: The intent is to bond... Cream will be addressed soon

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Date: 02/01/10