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[Reviews - 247]
Summary:

Lay Me Down

 

Life is hard. James knows this for a fact in which she picked a bad time to quit smoking. Working long days as a housekeeper and taking online college classes just adds more stress. With a troubled childhood and a dark past looming over her shoulder, James is untrusting of others therefore lets very few people into her life.

That is until she stumbles -- literally -- into Tristen, a computer software engineer who won't take 'no' for an answer. He's different, kind, and fun. And French. He wants to get to know her, but will her past drive him away like the others and if he does stay, can he endure damage of her skeletons tumbling out of the closet?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content
Series: City of Lights
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 63166
Read Count: 67188
Published: 22/09/10
Updated: 06/08/11


Title: Chapter 13: Closure

Glad she got the chance to talk with her mom and can now move on emotionally.She's going to Paris!!!

Author's Response:

I liked writing the scene between her and Pearl. It aired out all of the anger and pain they've been bottling up for years especially James and now she has found closure and can move on. All roads lead to Paris where James is going to have to play a different ball game in Tristen's territory with his family especially his mom! Thanks! :)

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Date: 19/06/11

Title: Chapter 11: First Comes Love Then Comes ... Baby?

Loved it!! Hope they can make it work but I suspect his mom is gonna cause drama.

Author's Response:

That's a good prediction, Baha! Adele definitely might cause some drama and stress, which wouldn't be good for James in her fragile condition and Tristen might have to put his moma in her place.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/04/11

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 26]
Summary:

 

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"We only got 86,400 seconds in a day to
Turn it all around or to throw it all away
We gotta tell them that we love them
While we got the chance to say
Gotta live like we're dying"

Mimi Balfour lives each day knowing that no matter how bad it gets, the sun will rise in the morning. She's a student at the pinnacle of the social society of Cape Town, and her relationship with one the most influential families' son, Karl Muller, only adds to her image as a "Black Diamond." The only person she hides her relationship is from her difficult father, who hates everything Karl's family stands for.  Then she meets Alessio la Scala, who lives each day knowing that he may not see another sunrise. Does Alessio end up influencing Mimi's heart, and not just her mind and body?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 7338
Read Count: 3122
Published: 26/09/10
Updated: 18/04/11


Title: Chapter 2: 1. Birthday Wishes

Interesting start.

Author's Response: Thanks, hope you find it more interesting a long the way :)

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27/09/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 27]
Summary:

 

 

 No regrets, just love.

When a family crisis forces Broadway diva Charise Leone back to her hometown in wyoming, she expects it to be the same country hell hole she left 11 years ago. What she gets however is one surprise after another. She was the girl who spent most of her teen years in tears. Who knew she would get a second chance at her teenage dream?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 4797
Read Count: 4774
Published: 29/09/10
Updated: 14/01/11


Title: Chapter 2: Don't Ever Look Back

Me likey. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/09/10

Title: Chapter 5: A Sweet Reunion

Love this story but feel its about to go down between Char and her mom.

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Date: 17/01/11

Title: Chapter 5: A Sweet Reunion

Love this story but feel its about to go down between Char and her mom.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/01/11

Title: Chapter 5: A Sweet Reunion

Love this story but feel its about to go down between Char and her mom.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/01/11

Title: Chapter 5: A Sweet Reunion

Love this story but feel its about to go down between Char and her mom.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/01/11

Title: Chapter 5: A Sweet Reunion

Love this story but feel its about to go down between Char and her mom.

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Date: 17/01/11

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 89]
Summary:

Four years later, Keisha is still shook to the core about her nightmare she experienced with the infamous frat-boy murderer and rapist, Tyler. She’s coping and with the help of her friends, Julie, Greg and Will, she’s on her way to a somewhat normal life…until Tyler escapes prison and is hell-bent on finishing what he started.

 Sequel to Party Monster



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Horror, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Rape, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: The Chamber Grindhouse 3
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 17476
Read Count: 21828
Published: 04/10/10
Updated: 01/11/10


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yay!! So glad you decided to do a sequel. Great start!!!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/10/10

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh hell no, what now??? Can he not become unconscious, seriously injured or die?? That sick slut he has with him raping Will needs to die soon too!!!

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Date: 28/10/10

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Jade is a sick shit!!! Ooooh Please let Tyler suffer this time around. He thinks he's too smart and needs to be taken down a notch or TWO!!!

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Date: 24/10/10

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh man!!! Please KILL those two sickos!!! How is it that no one has realised they are missing??? Can the tables be turned on Tyler and Jade??? They need abit of their own medicine. Urgh!!! I'm sooo mad right now!!!

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Date: 24/10/10

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh man, Jade got what she deserved! Yay!!! I don't like the fact the Keisha has become violent. She needs to go to a phone and call for help! I hope she doesn't peg him in the throat.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/11/10

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Glad they got away in the end but I needed more for closure. Hmmm, maybe we'll get another story. Yay!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/11/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 44]
Summary:

It is time for the prophacy to be fulfilled and Bon Temps will be ground zero.  An important figure in the lives of the Vampires world-wide crashes into the sleep town and turns it upside down.  She is the mother of all Vampire stories.

 

Disclaimer: I pretty much own nothing other than original characters.  i don't mean to infringe, plus copyright laws suck anyway.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Original Character(s), Tara Thornton
Classification: Cannon, Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Fantasy, Horror, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 13580
Read Count: 4037
Published: 16/10/10
Updated: 15/03/11


Title: Chapter 3: The Awakening

Me likey. Can't wait to find out the mystery!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/10/10

Title: Chapter 4: Dusk

This story continues to be interesting. Love it!!!!

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Date: 25/10/10

Title: Chapter 5: The Beginnin

Difficult to read as it was all one straight paragraph but I'm liking this story so far.

Author's Response: I know I apologize, for some reason that's the way it kept formatting. I tried like 6 times. I'm about to try again

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Date: 04/03/11

Title: Chapter 6: The First of Many

Interesting update. Glad she's trying to save them. Hope she's able to escape too.

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Date: 05/03/11

Title: Chapter 7: Son of the Morning

Glad they're getting some help from the big L. Hope they can all escape safely.

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Date: 13/03/11

Title: Chapter 8: Son of the Morning (Part II)

Love the interaction between the group. Had me cracking up! :) Lu is gonna be trouble.

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Date: 14/03/11

Title: Chapter 9: No Flames

Lafeyette is too much but loving this story so far. Wonder who's the big huncho in Cairo???

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Date: 15/03/11

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 155]
Summary:

After an absence of over a year, Tara returns to Bon Temps with her infant daughter.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Tara Thornton
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 27052
Read Count: 73424
Published: 18/10/10
Updated: 21/02/11


Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Out of Commission

Glad Sam is ok. Loved the update.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/01/11

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Lullaby

Hope things work out the way Sam would like.

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Date: 28/10/10

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Here to Stay

Me likey.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/10/10