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In His Skin by AquaSoulSis aka LadyFangs
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 117]
Summary:

She slept on through the night, even as he left.  He only looked back once as he walked out of the door. And when she awoke again in the morning, she found a diamond choker wrapped around her neck and an angry, red scratch on her breast. But he was gone.



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Categories: Movies
Characters: Storm/Ororo Munroe
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 23616
Read Count: 14099
Published: 25/01/11
Updated: 11/04/11

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Loved the update. Hopefully Storm settles soon.

Author's Response: umm...well...I'm thinking this story is only the beginning.

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Date: 28/01/11
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Loved the update. Hmm, wonder what Ororo is gonna do now???

Author's Response: I think it was Shakespeare who said, "the journey to true love never did run smooth."  (or something like that).

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Date: 05/02/11
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hmmm, so it was Victor after all. Loved it!! Wonder why he doesn't remember??? What happened to him??

Author's Response:

I am actually planning a complete series for this. This story is only the beginning. I don't like to be cryptic, but it will come. Thank you for reading. I am trying to update this story as quickly as possible.

 

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Date: 26/01/11
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Glad Ro was able to share a laugh with Jane, she needed it.

Author's Response: Yes, she did. Sometimes, it's just like that.

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Date: 16/02/11
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loved the update but what happened to her??? More please!

Author's Response: All shall be revealed. I am thinking this is only the first story in either a duo or even a trilogy.

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Date: 29/01/11
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Me likey!

Author's Response: Thank you! I likey too! 

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Date: 26/01/11
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Loved the update. Wonder who the mystery person is????

Author's Response: The sad part is...I DONT KNOW! Im debating on two antagonists: one that most people will know from the movie-verse...and another that pulls from the comics...Im going to have to make a decision soon though...

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Date: 01/03/11
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I loved it but I feel that mystery man is setting him up!!! Who is this mystery man??? Please reveal him soon.

Author's Response: I'm working on it. Slowly, but surely.

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Date: 11/03/11
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Glad Xavier saw Victor is innocent. Wonder who the mystery man was who messed with Victor's mind???

Author's Response:

Or the mystery people...

 

:)

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Date: 18/03/11
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow, what a hawt update!!! He sure was working up a sweat!! :)

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Date: 29/03/11
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Dvel A'ri by TeaOli
Rated: Teen or Above
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Summary: Sometimes the best decisions are the hardest ones to make. And sometimes the hardest choices are the wrong choices. The trick is figuring out which is which.

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Categories: Movies
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Film)
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 12418
Read Count: 25146
Published: 28/01/11
Updated: 03/02/11

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Title: Chapter 1: The Greatest Good

I love the start but what did the child do??? Who is being punished here???

Author's Response: All will be revealed as the chapters unfold.

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Date: 28/01/11
Title: Chapter 3: Shaken His Ankles Free

What happened to Uhura??? How come she's as a child?? More please.

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Date: 30/01/11
Title: Chapter 8: Attribute of the Strong

Loved the update! Glad their family seem to be mending.

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Date: 04/02/11
Title: Chapter 2: All Else Confusion

Loved the update but what's going on with Uhura and her son?? Story has a sad tone so far.

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Date: 29/01/11
Title: Chapter 4: Doom Me Not

Well that update answered some questions for me, TY. Now, will she become an adult again?? Its a shame that this happened to her because the deity took offense to Spock's words.

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Date: 31/01/11
Title: Chapter 5: Necessary Ills

Loved the update. Now he gets a taste of what she felt like being cut off from him emotionally/mentally. Hope he can handle better than she did.

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Date: 01/02/11
Title: Chapter 6: Until the Hour of Separation

Hmmm, let's see what he has to say now! Hope Nyota can keep it together.

Author's Response: You've hit the nail on the head. Because it's going to be her strength, or lack thereof, which will carrythem through -- or allows them to continue falling apart --  from this point on.

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Date: 02/02/11
Title: Chapter 7: Far From Being One

Awh, that Eshu character is a tough cookie. I thought he would turn Nyota back into an adult but he turned Spock into a child too! Wow!! Glad Sanek accepted him. Looks like the family is mending! Yay!!!

Author's Response: LOL! Yeah, that was what Spock was expecting, as well. But Eshu is a Trickster and is wont to do the unexpected. Poor Spock should have realized that.

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Date: 03/02/11
Cool Kids, They Belong Together by curiouslyamused
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

 

It's not easy to be a coward in love.

 

Banner by curiouslyamused 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: The Other Girl
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 769
Read Count: 1072
Published: 30/01/11
Updated: 30/01/11

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Title: Chapter 1: A Coward Learns Her Lessons Well

Interesting start.

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Date: 30/01/11
Madison Stays Out At Night by curiouslyamused
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

It's strange, how seductive self-destruction can be. It's selfish, to be sure, but oh-so-hard to let go of. 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: The Other Girl
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1928
Read Count: 896
Published: 30/01/11
Updated: 30/01/11

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Title: Chapter 1: A Girl

Interesting start.

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Date: 30/01/11
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RED by Valhalla
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 96]
Summary:

When Carla Jones makes a gruesome discovery at her neighbour's house one evening, life as she knows it takes a dramatic and unexpected turn. A modern retelling of Little Red Riding Hood.



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Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Fantasy, Horror, Mystery, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: Ostrander
Chapters: 24
Completed:Yes
Word count: 76580
Read Count: 30235
Published: 06/02/11
Updated: 16/02/11

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Title: Chapter 7: Crave...

Great update. Jason is so slick but I think they're feeling each other.

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Date: 08/02/11
Title: Chapter 4: A Wolfish Plan...

Yay!!! Glad this story is back. Can't wait to read more!

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Date: 06/02/11
Title: Chapter 24: Red...

Hope Carla can accept all that has happened and accepts jason.

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Date: 16/02/11
Title: Chapter 12: The Danger Beside You...part III

Loving the story so far and her interaction with the brothers.

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Date: 11/02/11
Title: Chapter 8: The Space Between Fox and Wolf...

Noooo, not Isaac ,he's up to no good. Those nightmares she was having with someone sucking her breathe out was scary.

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Date: 10/02/11