I really enjoy this story it was a really good read.
Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed
It's for better...and for worse.
For the "Less Is More" Challenge
Disclaimer/Credit: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended. Image(s) from gettyimages.com.
Shout out to my girl, KKMonroe. She encouraged me to share this with the world. She thinks I teach her, but really she teaches me I have much more to learn :)
Now I want to know what hapeen to bring them to this point, good job.
Author's Response:
I wanna write it for you Sammy! Maybe I'll start a whole series with these two, give them names and write 89 word scenes telling their story....hmmm...
Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed They messed with the wrong woman this time!
FBI agent Subrina Rayelle is on a mission to take down the people that forced her best friend Leesha into prostitution and then beat her to death when she tried to escape.
Refusing to even cry one tear of grief for Leesha until all guilty parties are brought to justice, Subrina sets her sights on Nevada where the crime took place. If only she hadn’t met her soul-mate on this mission – a beloved nephew to the leaders of the suspected prostitution ring and who may also be among the guilty parties himself.
This is really good, and I hope she gets to her friend in time. Can't wait to read what happens next.
Author's Response:
You'll find out what happens on Friday night. Stay tuned...lol
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Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed Ricky is a mess, and what's up with the uncle. I hope his aunt doesn't get into trouble for helping him, she should let him suffer.
Author's Response:
You're so right about Ricky. lol. You'll see what's up with Hugh Hefner Jr soon enough. lol. Blaine is an even BIGGER mess than Ricky.
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Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed
Uh-oh what Ricky and Blaine got going on behind Victora's back, this can't be good.
Author's Response:
Trust me, it's NOT good what they got going on behind Vickie's back. Not good at all.
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Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed Shame on Leesha's mother for taking credit for everything, I really hate people who do that. And what's up with the pastor?
Author's Response:
Yeah, Bobbi is some no-class act. I can't stand when people do that either. That pastor is about to go downnnnn.
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Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed
Nana don't play, I like her. Great update.
Author's Response:
I like Nana too. It was fun creating that character.
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Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed Hi, just getting caught up. Good thinking on Leesha's end for finding away to keep some sort of journal, since I'm sure ricky took all of her things.
Author's Response:
You thought right about Ricky. He's low down for sure.
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Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed I feel like this Karianne chick is going to be a problem, she needs to back up off Subrina and give her a chance. Oh and I can't wait to read her family's reaction to her make over.
Author's Response:
Karianne is someone to definitely watch in this story.
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Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed ugh, her momma is to much, I kind of feel bad for Subrina that now her mom is giving her praise for something so superficial.
Author's Response:
Ugh, exactly about Salethia. She's a hot mess!
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Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed Caesar comes across as a well rounded guy, I like that. And his mom is so sweet.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like C and his mama. I do too.
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Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed Can't wait to see what happens at this staff meeting.
Author's Response:
I can promise you it won't be your average staff meeting. lol.
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Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed I can't wait until they meet, this is getting good. And Ricky just mad because she didn't fall for his sorry ass lines again even though he doesn't know who she really is.
Author's Response:
Ricky's a hater for sure!
Thanks for the continual feedback, Sammy1on1!
Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed Ricky is just pitiful. And good she noticed Casear.
Author's Response:
Do you pity Ricky this early in the book? If so, get prepared, he's even more pitiful later.
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Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed Those poor women, I hope that Bree will be able to help them.
Author's Response:
Stay tuned, Sammy1on1. Bree is gonna do her best to help them all...all that WANT to be helped.
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Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed I like how Caesar is not shying away from his feelings for Bree and that he is actully embracing them. For someone who has never dated a plus-sized woman before he is handleing his attraction to Bree really well.
Author's Response:
C is certainly trying to embrace this new development in his life with open arms.
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Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed Ricky needs help that's all i got to say about him, and Caesar you have nothing to worry about she is defintely into men.
Author's Response:
Oh yes, Bree is most definitely into M-E-N. tee-hee
Thanks for the feedback!
Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed 
A New full story by Thespiandiva
Valerie Valone is a stubborn girl about town who has been celibate for two years. when a friend suggests a very popular... ahem escort agency, valerie is aprehensive. but when she does call, she is pulled into an addiction that is bigger than she ever would imagine.
Love, plz tell mr you would consider writing more about these two, and their friends.
Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed 