I think you ended it in the right spot. This was hella good RP! In my imagination when the kids are grown, she'll eventually leave Eddie and go find Christian where they'll work side-by-side and love each other.
RP, that was some sexing that I can only hope I'm the recipient of one day. You wrote the hell out of this story and I thank you.
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed
Can two people fall in love after what is only suppose to be a One night stand? Nykia Walden and Antonio Bronson share a night that neither can forget. Was it only a one night stand or did these two share more than lust?
Nykia and Tony have both had those closest to them betray them. They definitely have that in common. I love how Nykia handled her ex-fiance and ex-friend. A woman after my own heart.
Why do I feel that Michelle isn't going away so easily? Me thinks she'll be back.
Great start on this story. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed Melissa, it's just dancing! Let the girl dance. Is Melissa worried that Nykia will find that one night stand and she'll have to ante up? lol
Thanks for updating.
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed Alright--every one has now met and Kia and Tony are off to have what I hope are amazing intimate relations. LOL
Tony's dad is a huge prick. To want his son to marry a woman who can't be trusted and isn't honest with her man. Oh yeah dad, that's the woman you want your kid to marry. I'm glad Tony knows who he is and won't let his dad dictate his life to him.
What a great idea for Rachel to take Tony's picture with her phone.
Looking forward to the next update.
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed If you hadn't mentioned this was your first sex scene I never would have known. There was definite heat there. Keep writing and you'll find yourself growing in that area.
Tony is sprung; Nykia put it on him. Can't wait to see how their relationship progresses.
How are Mel and Nick?
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed I have a feeling Tony & Nykia will meet again! Great update!
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed Thanks for the update! Things are getting pretty complicated. Wilson's in 'love' with Nykia who just happens to be Tony's one night stand. Hmmm. Can't wait for the meet and greet! LOL
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed Wow! How much more twisted and complicated can it get? Kia thinks Adrian is Tony. How painful and difficult it must be to look into the eyes of a man and think he wasn't as touched by what went on between the two of you as you did. That he's a cheating liar. *ay yi yi*
Now she's dating Wilson and she's pregnant! *slaps forehead* What's a girl to do? I know Kia isn't going to be like Tony's ex-fiance and abort the baby, right? I can just see her talking to Adrian about it thinking he's Tony and Adrian going WTF? This has the potential of being a Three Stooges moment. LOL
Great update!
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed Okay, I don't like Wilson. That's not how you treat a woman, pregnant or not! He handled that all wrong. It may get the ball rolling but his style is extreme to say the least.
Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed These two are going to make me slap them! Good update.
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In an era filled with prejudice, racism, class divisions and societal norms enter Drake and Eliza – one born into wealth, one born to serve that wealth. Whilst growing up they shared a mutual respect for one another but years spent apart made their lives take its assumed direction. Could a return visit rekindle their friendship and something more?
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Choc, you brought me another Tangie tale! I know they have different names but they'll always be Tangie to me.
I'm intrigued by this storyline and look forward to reading more.
Gloria is a mess and Eliza should punch her in her mouth. Go head, let her do it! LOL
Love...hahahaha...It is not a Tangie tale...shhhh
In later updates I will show why Gloria thinks she is the bees knees....:)
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed Alright, tongues just don't come out by accident Drake! Your fiance is in the same house. You know you and Emilie aren't meant for each other--why you playing with that girl's emotions? Kissing her on the forehead and then liplocking with Eliza. You wrong for that! LOL
Love you know how it goes...LOL!
It's the times...it's the way things are back in those days...Drake will lead himself to the water to take a huge drink...;) you know what I mean...Once you go...nuff said!
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed I'm a little ticked off at Drake. He's slept with Eliza--now what? Does he think that he and Emilie will carry on as before?
Emilie's aunt is going to be trouble. I just feel like we haven't heard the last of her.
Thanks for the update.
Oh Love,
You are having trouble with my male lead...LOL!!!:) You haven't heard the last of a couple of characters that are watching these two so look out in the upcoming updates!!!!
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed Does Drake expect Eliza to be content with being his mistress the rest of his days. Unless they move to a country that won't persecute them, I don't see how they're going to make it. And what if she's pregnant? What then? She's trying to be logical about it. I know he's jealous and wants her all to himself, but he's going to have to make some geographic changes in my opinion. Thanks for the update!
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Hey Love,
I hope you have a Merry Christmas! And have a Happy New Year!
I do understand your worry but there may be a way for this couple to be together and stay in the Bay...Stay Tune!
Thanks for the awesome review!
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed 
Ugly Betty
He knew if it was going to happen, it would happen in her office.
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Loved that epi of Ugly Betty. I actually felt sympathy for Wilhelmina. Don't get me wrong, I like her all conniving, malicious, snarky, etc. but seeing her vulnerability, embarassment and humiliation gave me a glimpse into a different side of her. She and Connor are really the only reasons I watch anymore and it's not usually the whole show. I channel surf. LOL
I like the one-shots you do of Wilhelmina and Daniel. Maybe we could get one with Conner?
Hey lovemboth. I have to say, I'm pretty invested in the show this season due to Wilhemina's storyline. She's kicking ass this year and the Conner stuff was pretty damn good. It's funny that you ask about a Conner fic. I'm pretty much doing as many one shots with Wilhemina as I can and had already planned to do a fic with those two. So be on the lookout.
Thanks for reading this one lovemboth. I really appreciate it.
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed A young girl is forced to live a lie when her father dies suddenly, leaving her at the mercy of strangers.
She finds kindness in her new surroundings, and falls in love with someone she vowed to hate. But will her love survive when he finds out the truth, and in a time and place where predjudice reigns?
RP, another great start! I hope you continue the story.
In my opinion, they need to move elsewhere so that Cerise can actually be a young lady in public. How painful it must be for her to have to hide who she really is.
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed A single mother is determined to give her sons a father for christmas even if it means reopening old wounds.
The mother in me says focus on your finals. The fan fic addict in me says don't neglect this story; you can do both. LOL
I like the premise so far. Anxious to find out why she lost Sean and why he's not apart of his children's lives.
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed ** This is a fanfic for the BBC series 'Merlin', that I fell in love with.** Arthur and Gwen fall under a spell that was meant for someone else, and its effects have a ripple effect on those around them.
Great start! So will both Gwen and Tara be in love with Arthur? Poor Dristan!
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed Savannah "Savvy" Townsend suddenly hates Christmas and it's all thanks to a man, a Christmas Carol, and an elf costume. Connor Bartley has finally decided to come home and take over the Eastern Division of his family department store chain, Bartley Department Stores. Sparks fly between the two and as their sexual attraction brings them something more than what they bargained for, as well as a Christmas that they will never forget.
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Bah humbug! Continue! 
I've missed you Chayne! Merry Christmas!
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One Life to Live
Evangeline Williamson is a brilliant attorney with a pragmatic approach to life and who always tried to do the right thing when it came to her clients and her job. But it all come crashing down after her most notorious client, Todd Manning, is found guilty and later exonerated of a crime he didn’t commit. Her career and reputation gasping at death’s door, Evangeline accepts Todd’s offer to become chief counsel for Buchanan Enterprises, a company he’s recently acquired through a hostile takeover.
The pay is substantial and the perks keep coming. But there’s no client more demanding than Todd Manning and two years later Evangeline has had enough of living his chaotic life instead of her own. She tells him as much and gives him two weeks notice to find a replacement, forcing Todd to realize just how desperate he is to keep her in his life—not only as his attorney but as the woman who’s stolen his heart.
Woo hoo! Let the games begin! Thank you so much for putting David in this story--I loves him!
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed I apologize for being late again on reviewing one of your stories. I'm pleading here.
I loves me some Todd and Evangeline and I did remember this story and I'm glad you finished it. I always love David and even enjoyed Neil (that's a first) and Keri.
The banter between Todd/Evangeline, Todd/Neil, Evangeline/Keri, David/anybody was spot on. Made me want to meet these people if they were real.
Thanks!
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed 
Simone doesn't dye her hair or wear strange clothing. She lives instead.
I don't watch Passions but I enjoyed your story. The characters came alive; I could envision how they looked and sounded. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks, loveemboth! I feel like I should be recommending Passions, but it's off the air and damn was it a frustrating show.
Spencer Edwards is a happy bachelor. He’s got a great job, lives in a great penthouse, and thanks to his good genetics, a fair amount of luck where the ladies were concerned. Family was the furthest thing from his mind, but apparently, life had other plans.
His world is turned upside down when his older sister and brother-in-law die suddenly, leaving their two young children in his care. Spencer can barely take care of himself, and he’s not so sure he should be placed in charge of anyone else.
But a light appears at the end of the tunnel when spirited, no-nonsense live-in Nanny Reese Talbot enters their lives. Through ups and downs and self-discovery, Spencer learns just what it takes to be a Family Man.
I love this story! I loved the line in the first chapter about the IT people thinking up new viruses when they were in the boring finance meeting. LOL
I always enjoy your writing and look forward to more.
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed *sob* This was such a heartfelt chapter. Poor Jennea, poor Vincent, poor Spencer, and poor Reese! I look forward to the lighter chapters but I'm so glad that Spencer let the dam break on his emotions about Tracy.
Good update!
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed She just wanted to be the woman he couldn’t leave behind.
A Supernatural Story Written for the 100 First Kisses Challenge.
I'm glad you wrote this. I hope it was cathartic for you. LOL
I don't watch SN but I have watched clips of this epi on YouTube. Thanks for sharing your version--it was better.
