Penname: lovemboth [Contact]

Real name: Lynnette

Member Since: 02/07/08

Membership status: Member

Bio: 43 year old divorced mother of two; daughter is 22 and son is 17. Avid reader who is so thankful for the prolific and talented fanfic authors.


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Revenge 101 by greatodinsraven
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 156]
Summary:

revenge 101

Audre Highsmith thought she had everything in her life under control.  That is until her ex boyfriend got engaged to someone else.  Now Audre's about to learn that the sweetest revenge is in throwing out the rules and following her own happiness.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 50934
Read Count: 114958
Published: 23/07/08
Updated: 31/05/09

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Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Hmmm. He memorized her backside. It made quite an impression, obviously. LOL

Me thinks Audre's friend may be leaving without her. At least, let's hope so.

Great update, GreatOdinsRaven!



Author's Response:

I suppose it did hahaha!  Christian knows a good thing when he sees it and he's definitely going to be aggressively pursuing Audre, now whether Jenelle will be leaving without her, well we'll have to see!

Thanks for the review and the stars!

 Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/07/08
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great start! Looking forward to the next update.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!  Update will be coming soon!

 Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/07/08
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

GreatO, you know I was going to go smooth off until I saw your chapter end note. You were this close to me just losing it!

Anywho, loved both phone conversations. So glad that Christian has Audre's number and is on to her. I can just see Mrs. Highsmith rolling to Audre's college and laying it down for the Dean. LOL

Looking forward to "the date". Good chapter.



Author's Response: Sorry!  I'm trying to stay on the ball but I really am in the middle of the date so it's coming I promise!  Christian is on to Audre but I predict she is going to get tired of the zingers and start dishing as hard as she gets hahaha.  I really do like these two together and enjoy writing them so I'm glad you do too!  And Mrs. Highsmith is no joke, we'll find that out soon enough!  Thanks for reading and the stars!

 Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/09/08
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Too damn short! LOL

Great imagery. I could see the restaurant and almost smell the food. Going to eat now. I hope when I get back you'll have delivered part 2. :)



Author's Response: I know that was kind of a tease wasn't it lol.  Yeah it was inspired by a restaurant I went to and my mouth was kind of watering when I wrote it!  The finale of the date is coming up but not today hahahaha.  Thanks for the review and the stars!

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Date: 19/09/08
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

*lovemboth does a back flip and a toe touch* Woo hoo, greato is back and she updated one of my favorite stories!

I loved their convo. The non-date was so realistic and it moved at a great pace. So glad Christian kissed her since it wasn't a date and all. LOL

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response: Woo hoo I'm back!  I wanted the date to be kind of realistic I was really aiming for writing a nice sweet boy meets girl kind of story with Christian and Audre and I wanted for them to really get to know each other.  You know my boy Christian had to get a sample, that's why I love him!  Thanks again for your patience and your great reviews and stars!

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Date: 22/10/08
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Okay, Jenelle is killing me! Sleep would be the last thing on my mind too!

How you write Audre's mom and dad is so realistic. It's like I can hear their actual voices; the dialogue is great!

Physical intimacy coming in the next chapter?! Woo hoo!

Thanks for updating, GreatO. I missed this story.



Author's Response:

Jenelle is funny, there's not much of a filter between her thoughts and what she says, I love the fact that she says what people think but are afraid to.  I'm glad you like how I write the parents, they are going to be coming up in the next chapter I post and I'm having alot of fun writing them.

Thanks for the great review and stars lovemboth!

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Date: 06/12/08
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Eeeeeeee!!! GreatO is back! *lovemboth does a cartwheel and a back flip*

I've missed this story so much! And I got so many updates I'm just tickled pink! Christian is the man, oh yes he is. I will have phone sex with him any time.

Greg and Cassandra deserve each other and karma is a b!

Welcome back, GreatO! I've missed you more than you'll know. Thanks to Minx and Divisionred for helping you get your groove back. Did it involve a young, sexy Jamaican hunk?



Author's Response:

Thank you lovemboth, cartwheels are awesome, so's your review!  Christian is the man, and I had TOO much fun writing that phone sex scene, I've never done that before so I really wanted it to be tight and Minx was great about helping me up the sexy quotient.  Greg and Cassandra are peas in a pod for sure but there's more karma coming and that's all I'll say about that.  I didn't realize how important writing was to me and how much I missed posting at the Chamber until I started again, so thank you for the welcome back and for still reading the story.

Unfortunately there was no Jamaican hunk, I better tell them to get on that. . .

 Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/03/09
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Ahh, sweet relief! This couple intrigues me to no end. They appear to be opposites on the suface; however, Audre just learned to bury hers due to her mother's disapproval of her 'style'. So glad that Christian is digging it back up.

I've missed this story GreatO! Thanks for the mind blowing update.

 Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/07/09
Be Content With the Lies by luckybrans
Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

The war with Voldemort is over and it's time to move on. For some, lies are the only way to do so.



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Categories: Books
Characters: Angelina Johnson
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2276
Read Count: 2938
Published: 25/07/08
Updated: 25/07/08

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Title: Chapter 1: Be Content With the Lies

The end? Surely you jest! When I saw it was rated for all ages I was like "eh" but this was really good! Please reconsider and continue the story.

Author's Response:

Sorry but it's the end. I have this weird thing where I usually end the story where some people might consider the perfect beginning or middle part.

I'm glad you read this despite the low rating. :)

Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/07/08
A Day In The Life Of..... by truth7
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:

This is a story about a woman who keeps fighting to live despite the fact that life keeps showing her that sometimes it is better to be dead than alive.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2715
Read Count: 3154
Published: 26/07/08
Updated: 26/07/08

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Title: Chapter 1: A Day In The Life Of.....

That was heartrending. The pain and betrayal the heroine has endured. My dream is that she doesn't give up and triumphs over adversity and the horrors of her past.

Thanks for sharing. It was good.

 Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/07/08
Capitol Hill by Harlen Winters
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 171]
Summary:

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Enter into the world of political drama and intrigue as Payton Samuels takes on the job of Director of Media Relations for the campaign of the nation’s golden boy Senator Cameron Marshall. Millionaire playboy and heir to the international fashion conglomerate The House of Marceline, Jared Marcel seeks to win Payton’s affection. Experience the back door deals in Washington…knowing everyone has an angle and no one is what they seem.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 26
Completed:No
Word count: 63247
Read Count: 10951
Published: 07/08/08
Updated: 20/04/09

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 "Trust Me"

Hmmm...does Cameron know Payton?

About time a woman didn't make it so easy for Mr. Marcel. That's it Payton, keep'em guessing. Men like a little chase.

I've always felt such empathy for women in the public eye who have been embarrassed and humiliated by their partners. Grace may end up being a royal b*tch, but right now I feel sorry for her.

Looking forward to your next update.



Author's Response: I love characters that are complicated. They have that gray area, they are not completely bad or good. Thanks for your review, I hope you enjoy the next update.

 Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/08/08
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 "Everything is Never Enough"

Oooo, I think I know who he's seeing! Update soon...please.

Author's Response: LOL! No comment....I will be updating soon.

Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/08/08
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 "Nothing in Return"

Love Brett's little talk with Jared. Too funny! Now, I'm a little worried about this secret Cameron and Brett have. Is it that bad?

I hope you allow Gavin and Grace to become a couple. First, Grace needs to dump Ethan. Image can only take you so far and it's not worth your soul.

Update soon!



Author's Response:

Hi Lovemboth, Brett definitely knows Jared, but like she said she is a woman first. Gavin and Grace have been friends for a long time, there is a lot of respect there....we shalll see.

Thanks so much for your feedback!

 Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/08/08
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 "Zanzibar Blue"

Girl, if you don't hurry up and write what the secret is I'm going to hunt you down!

I was blown away by Jared's speech to Payton. Just knock me over with a feather. It was beautiful, moving, and all that jazz.

Gavin's waiting to make his move...yay!! Let's get Grace moving along, alright?

I don't know why I thought it was Cameron in the pics. Did Brett take pictures a la Vanessa Williams?



Author's Response:

Hi Lovemboth, You have me cracking up...if I told you...you wouldn't keep reading now would you?

I am going to reveal that soon...I am about 5 chapters ahead I am trying to pace myself.

Jared is suprised himself..and Gavin is a patient man.

As far as Brett...no comment. Thank you so much for the feedback!

 

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Date: 29/08/08
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 "Letting Go"

Loved the girl's day at the spa. If I was Payton, I'd hit it and just lie. :o

Too funny about Brett holding up her fist and urging Payton to stay strong...power to the people. Girlfriend wants those shoes bad!

Will Waverly approve of her dad being in love with Grace? Uh, I'm waiting.

Fun update, Harlen.



Author's Response:

Hi Lovemboth...If I was Payton, I'd hit it and just lie....a girl after my own heart! I love the friendship that they have and Payton has found her own niche in their bond. I love women encouraging and supporting each other. It is so complex with Waverly and her father. She wants him with someone...but is that someone Grace? We shall see. Thanks for your feedback. Talk to you soon.

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Date: 04/09/08
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 "The Magic Touch"

What a sweet update. I loved that Jared gave her a piggy back ride. They had the restaurant all to themselves. Jared's got deep pockets.

Author's Response: Hi Lovemboth, Yes Jared and his family have really deep pockets. This is a whole new world for Payton...something that Jared grew up with. Thanks for your feedback.

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Date: 05/09/08
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 "New Beginnings"

Woo hoo! It's time for Payton to start lying to Brett and Waverly. lol

Jared better not break Payton's heart. It's hard enough on her to let go and let flow. She's trying though.

What a quandary Gavin is in. In love with his best friend's wife.

Looking forward to the next update!



Author's Response:

Hi Lovemboth, You are too funny! I love it let go and let flow....Payton is trying. Jared is serious. He is not the one to worry about.

Gavin is in the proverbial rock and hard place. He is trying to be good, but it's hard. I will be updating soon. I think you will like the next chapter. Talk to you then.

 Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/09/08
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 "Hello Stranger"

This was the best:

“So a day at the spa with all of the services that the three of us had came to about $2,000.

 Buying out a private dining room at the Ritz Carlton for just the 2 of you that cost him about $8,000.

Making a cup of hot chocolate that cost about $2 is what got him laid….priceless.”

 

You had me rolling!

 

Ming is up to no good. Did that heffa get Payton's number off the caller id? Did she leave her skanky underwear behind?



Author's Response: Hi Lovemboth, Waverly does have a way with words! Ming is definitely up to no good! But it works out, Jared doesn't give up that easy.

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Date: 18/09/08
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 "The Opposite of Love"

I'm not sure how I feel about Grace and Ethan reconciling. Kind of torn.

Brett really needs to come clean to Cameron about her past. Girlfriend knows that in politics nothing stays buried for long. She's just making things worse.

Looking forward to the next update!



Author's Response: Hi Lovemboth, Grace is slowly but surely getting stronger. She is in a unique place that doesn't have clear boundaries. She will find her way. Brett's fear of losing everything is her driving force in her decisions. She is terrified that Cameron won't understand. Thanks for your review. The next update will be posted soon. It is time for everyone to get away on vacay.

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Date: 28/09/08
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 "Gone Sailing"

Harlen, you know that was so wrong! Damn Ethan for calling! LOL

Grace just needs to go ahead and start divorce proceedings so that she can move on with her life. I really don't have any sympathy for Ethan. He's a serial adulterer; his chances have dried up!

Good update!



Author's Response: Hi Lovemboth, Grace is trying to figure out what she wants and who she wants to be.  She is really at the proverbial fork-in-the-road. Ethan is finally starting to see what he took for Granted and Gavin wants what he wants. So we shall see! Thanks for your comments.  <:-)

 Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/10/08
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 "Life is Good"

What a nice interlude. I want to go!!! LOL

Waverly, Waverly, let daddy make his own decisions. It's his life, plus he's grown.

Brett needs to tell Cameron. Don't know how those pics got out if they were supposedly destroyed. Maybe someone in the FBI is connected to this?



Author's Response:

Hi Lovemboth, Waverly let someone make their own decisions??? LOL You know her in the middle of everything. Brett wants to deal with it her way, not willing to admit she and Waverly are over their heads. We shall see...thanks for your comments...much appreciated!

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Date: 15/10/08
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 "A Done Deal"

So happy they admitted their love for each other. Jared means business and he's going to close that deal. I ain't mad at ya, handle your business Mr. Marcel.

Lovely update!



Author's Response: Hi Lovemboth, Jared is that type of man that knows what he wants and gets it. Honestly, could you tell him no? :-D  Thanks for you comments.

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Date: 21/10/08
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23 "Unexpected Encounters"

Leave him Grace! LOL

I'm intrigued by Reed and Morgan. Let's explore more shall we?

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Hi Lovemboth,

 Don't you want to sit Grace down woman to woman and tell her she doesn't need him! We all know someone who we have wanted to say that to. It is getting them to a point where they believed that about themselves, and that is where Grace is. She is beginning to realize she is stronger than she has given herself credit for.

Reed and Morgan are on opposing sides one trying to keep and the other trying to uncover secrets...we will see who comes out on top...(no pun intended) :-)

 Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/11/08
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24 "Bright Ideas"

Waverly needs to back all the way off of Daddy! I'm not liking her too much right now. LOL

Reed is all kinds of sexy and I need more of him--thanks in advance!

I just love how Jared wants Payton with him all the time. The man is sprung!

Thanks for the update Harlen. It was good as usual.



Author's Response:

Hi LovemBoth, You know how Waverly can be and Gavin understands that. Reed is going to handle his business. We love the strong silent type! Jared loves him some Payton. This will be a fun project for them to work on. Thanks so much for the compliment.

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Date: 05/12/08
Coq au Van by insight spinner
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:

by insight spinner © 2007

This is a very short scene that happens after Todd and Evan leave Capricorn set after the April 6, 2007 episode of OLTL. It's just a drabble -- While it is rated mature it is designed to be suggestive and not explicit. You'll have to fill in the rest for yourself.

I'm posting it because it fits with the Tangie Teases series.  Thanks to BlackMamba for letting this short-short hang out.

-- inspin



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Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: Tangie Teases
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 388
Read Count: 2721
Published: 13/08/08
Updated: 13/08/08

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay, you need to write another drabble picking up where this one left off. It was good but I want more. I'm greedy that way. LOL

Author's Response: LOL, yes I know you are greedy, I am too.  I fought hard to let this one stand, but I'd like to try another that goes a bit farther, so let me see what an old chick can cook up.

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Date: 14/08/08