Thanks for the update, Diva...you sly one...now it all makes perfect sense...the triplets are Saige and Jeffery's and Jeffery didn't cheat on Saige...those witches are lower than a snake's belly...how could you do that to families who are already going through the emotional stress of trying to conceive...and all for some monetary gain...there really some cold people in this world...but Charlene paid with her life...luckily for Saige and Jeffery...they will get to raise their children...I really feel for all the families who lost their children and may never be reunited with them...

This story is really shaping up...Jailynn and Jarred have their much wanted twins...and Saige and Jeffery have their much desired triplets...now the issue of Jackie and the child that 'died' all those years ago to clear up...love this story...can't wait til the next update...thanks for sharing...

Jeffrey's all over the place with this wild story...if he doesn't even remember having contact with the woman...then how could he have fathered her children...unless Jeffrey's lying or leaving out a few salient details...his story doesn't make any sense...

Looking forward to the next update...

Well Saige is a good one...and obviously she takes her marriage vows to heart...she really loves her husband...a truly remarkable and strong woman...I have nothing against those beautiful babies...like Saige said...they are innocent and they are pawns used in someone's sick game...but Jeffrey IMHO is hardly a 'victim'...stupid...dumb...remarkably bad judgement all come to mind...but victim...not so much...

Sorry for leaving so many comments for this one chapter...but I'm reading along as you post it...

Looking forward to what happens next...

Pokerdiva...oh please...this can not be happening...all of their lives are in danger...Jarred...Jailynn...the twins...this is the worst possible scenario...and if Jarred survives and Jailynn and the twins don't...I can't imagine how he would live with himself...just a few moments changed all of their lives in an instant...you've cranked up the volume on this story for sure...I'll be on the look-out for the next update...

So it seems there is an unbeknownst before connection between Jailynn and Saige...could be Saige be the 'stillborn' baby that Jackie's mom told her she lost when she was fifteen...are Jailynn and Saige sisters...is that why they look so much alike...strange set of circumstances for two identical twin brothers to meet and fall in love with two sisters who never knew anything about each other...

So glad that Jailynn seems to be on the road to recovery...and knowing that both she and Jared will get the opportunity to raise their babies will give her that extra incentive to come back all the way...

Can't wait to hear about the revelations that P.I. has to make to Jeffery and Saige...I'm still hoping for a happy ending for both couples...

Great job, diva...just don't make us wait so long for the next update...loving this story still...

Now I'm more sure than ever that Saige is Jackie's child too...what else could explain the instant connection that Jackie feels toward Saige...who for all intents and purposes is a complete stranger to her...and the why the triplets and twins look so much alike...I know that their fathers are twins...but still their children wouldn't look so similiar just because of that...somehow...I know that they are all connected...I can't wait for the DNA results are in for the triplets so that the real mystery can be solved and Jackie discovers her first born daughter and Saige discovers her birth mother...and Jailynn gets the sister she always wanted...

Merry Christmas to you and yours...and have a joyous and glorious New Year...

Oh that was simply...beautiful...oh, how I felt Han's loss...it was so tragic...so very cruel...I think the flashbacks are very much needed in this story and I'm so glad you complied...I have been reading all along...just never replied...this is a very intriguing story indeed...Aaliyah and Trish was always the beacon of light in this tale...glad you so beautifully honored that...I look forward to the next chapter...and thank you so much for it...

Author's Response: Thank you...yes Han, such a tortured soul.  Ah...Aaliyah was a special brand.  So sad.

Dang, that was a freaky scene Perri walked into...so Craven's already employing mind control on his intended...and poor Perri is defenseless against it...she's really no more than a means to an end (or in his case a beginning) for him...

I hope Han can somehow defeat Kai/Craven again...looks like the fate of mankind will be in his hands...and maybe his soul can finally find peace again...

It never ceases to amaze me how 'real' you write these characters...

I can almost 'feel' Jake's trepidation...he's been unceremoniously thrusted into the role of 'father' and he has no earthly idea of what exactly that entails having no example of what a 'real' father supposed to do and be from his own experiences...loved him 'taking notes' as the pastor was giving his sermon on how a father should behave and what his role was in a family...yet, I sense there is a long road ahead of him...first...he really needs to sit Renee down and tell her the unabridged version of the truth...Faith is his daughter and Renee needs to know this if Jake wants to have any relationship with his child...I'm wondering why he is still so reluctant to share his past with her and he should really be questioning why this is so himself...I mean...he's supposed to be with her, right...then there should be no barriers between them and he should really be comfortable sharing with her what life was like for him 'before' there was a them...but his conscience is slowly eating away at him for the lies that trip off his lips like honey...and how he actively tries to separate his past from his current...

I can also understand Li's possessiveness where Faith is concerned...let's face it...she's had Faith to herself for all these years...and as the only parent around for that little girl...sharing her with someone else...even if that person is her own father...is a pretty tall order...and I don't care what Li's trying to convince herself of otherwise...she and Jake have a lot of unfinished business between them...she practically wants to jump his bones...Jake doesn't know it...but Li wants him ever bit as much as he used to (and still does if he's honest with himself) want her...

Miss Irene is such a wise sage...I like how she's subtly leading them both to that conversation where they have to put their cards on the table and speak from their hearts...she's not being overt about it...but she's pushing them in the right direction...right now...Faith's needs takes priority...Li really needs to sit Faith down and explain to her what Jake was to her...she's a little girl and the reveal that Jake is her father will be a lot for her to swallow...but Li needs to be honest with her about the situation and how her own fears changed the course of their futures...not scare her I mean...but let her know that her father didn't know about her existence...which will probably lead to questions about why Li didn't try to contact him or hid Faith's existence in the first place...Faith needs to know her father just didn't 'abandon' her...the situation was complicated and needs to be explained gently to her...I'm hoping I'm making sense...at least a little...

I love this story and am glad to see you and it back...can't wait to read more of this journey of love and rediscovery between Jake, Liandra, and Faith...great work...please update soon...

Congratulations on the completion of your first fic...it was WONDERFUL!!!  What a perfect ending to a really beautiful story...loved it...job well done!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the story.

Finally!!! Suzette admits the truth that's been staring her in the face...Kyle is her destiny...for awhile there...I was getting quite disappointed in her...love like Kyle's only come but once in a lifetime...he loves her body and soul...now it's time for her to put him out of his misery and tell the man the truth...that they are fated...and their love is more than a summer 'fling'...looking forward to more...

Thanks so much for updating, Sade...though I didn't pester you...I have been feining for your stories something awful...you are quite a talent and weaver of tales...thanks much again...UPDATE SOON!!!!

Kyle is such a great guy...he's always thinking about his woman and wanting to do everything is his power to please her...can't believe that he thought her leaving him was somehow his fault...is he serious...Suzette would need to be fitted with a permanent dunce cap not to realize how much that man loves her...oh, how I love how he loves her...thinks of her as his 'queen'...thinking of her career and how important it is to her...making adjustments in his life so that they can have a future together...already dreaming of their future family and their kids...like I said earlier...if she doesn't want him...hell, I'll take 'im...looks like Suzette is already wracked with regret...seems her heart want let her leave its other half...can't wait until the next update...great job, Sade...

Author's Response: thank you as always for the review, I will do my best to update asap!

Arghhhh!!!!  Why do y'all keep doing this to me...these one shots are killing me...but oh, how do I love them...

I was actually transformed into Rachel's world...I felt the love she has for her beloved Leo...I felt her timidness...her trepidation...her resolve to reveal her feelings to her husband who was husband in name only...

I wish I could learn more about these characters and their story...it might have been a 'fluff' piece...but the way you wrote it was beautiful and oh so poetic...

Thanks for sharing...