Title: Chapter 11: Almost Doesn't Count
A little late to turn tail and run now...I can understand being caught up in the moment...but shouldn't she have thought some things through before she hooked up with Maks again...like, if I'm going to get my freak on...then by all means...bring and USE protection...her first experience with Seraii should have taught her this lesson...but I suppose you're right...she still has a lot of growing up to do...freaking out and turning on Maks still isn't going to solve the problem if she is in fact pregnant...and if she was so miffed with him about what she overheard about the situation with Erin...WHY IS SHE STILL SLEEPING WITH HIM...and I believe she is deliberately setting out to sabotage this new relationship anyway...she's so very insecure...wondering why someone like Maks wants to have something serious with someone like her when he can any woman in the world he wants...this all stems IMHO on her lack of confidence...not only in her professional life...but most decidedly in her personal life as well...
I believe Maks is being so nonchalant about this whole situation because he KNOWS that she is 'the one' for him...he's already picturing a life with her...family, marriage, kids...the whole nine yards...that's why he tried to reassure her that he'd do the honable thing by her...but I really do think it's a bit early in the game of love to be bringing another child into the mix...unfortunately, life is unpredictable...and 'accidents' happen...Maks is much more emotionally secure at this point in his life than Brandy is...don't know about time to be playing 'meet the parents' as of yet...they still have a lot of work to do on this relationship...there are some serious trust issues involved...and they still haven't even had the Erin conversation...
Can't wait to see what is in store for these two next...still loving this story...looking forward to another update soon...
Author's Response: I can understand where you are coming from, but Brandy and Maks had 3 months to get to know one another. In fact during that time thay shared alot of their dreams and personal experinces, but as friends. what Brandy didn't realize was that Maks had fallen in love with her before they had sex. I know it feels that they are moving fast, but for them they feel as if they have been knowing eachother for a long time.
If Brandy could just get past all of her insecurities, Maks better watch out! Thanks for your feedback it is greatly appreciated.
Reviewer: attheritz Signed
Date: 08/12/10