This is a Fan fiction about Season 11 DWTS R&B Singer Brandy and her dance partner Makism Chmerkovskiy. This is an intense romance btw Brandy & Makism. Enjoy!
No, I don't think it over over for them...but this new bit of information that Brandy has discovered has certainly made things much more complicated for them...I really don't like the fact that Maks wasn't wholely honest with her about his relationship with Erin...even if it was only a fling for him...she did ask...and he wasn't completely truthful about what went down between him and Erin...I'm thinking that he probably didn't want to make her any more skiddish than she already is about trying a relationship with him...possibly confirming in her mind at least his 'playboy' image...now, Maks's little 'lie' of omission might have possibly cost him his one true chance of a life with her...
And I'm really not understanding Brandy's rationale for continuing her trip in New York with Maks if she really doesn't want to have anything more to do with Maks after it is over...I'm assuming that she still plans to go on sexing him and getting her freak on...all the while as she plotting to get him completely out of her life...that's kinda cruel...why not just confront him with what she knows...and letting him explain his side...and for her sake...I hope she's using and making him use protection...because if not...well....time will tell...
You've amped up the volume in this tale...oh, what a tangled web you're weaving...can't wait to read more...thanks for the unexpected update...short, but oh so good...
Now this is what I'm talking about...you're going beyond the physical and exposing their inner hearts...it is much appreciated by this reader...I love the complexities of relationships...especially new ones...and try as we might...it's hard to not bring baggage from a previous relationship into it...I'm glad that Maks and Brandy had 'the talk'...and now they both can see just how serious the other is about their growing relationship...can Brandy let go of her fears...is she willing to go out on that proverbial limb with Maks...I think Maks just needs to keep opening his heart to her and she will finally see just how serious he is about her and them...Maks has always struck me as a man of such traditional values...and I like how you describe Brandy as being almost 'innocent' when it comes to relationships...but I was a little put off by Maks calling her a 'little girl'...but I do realize it is probably because he's so in love with her that he can't see how she still so afraid to see him in the same light...she knows she loves him...but because of his career and the closeness of his relationships with his partners and him being in the public eye...she's afraid that giving him her heart completely could backfire on her...glad he went back upstairs and tried to apologize...Brandy is so fragile now and Maks needs to handle her feelings with kid gloves until she works through some of her issues...
Girl, I love this story and can't wait to see where you take them next...I've got my fingers and toes crossed that they can make a go of it...and don't worry about being totatlly 'accurate' in your depiction of these characters...this is a work of fiction that I'm definitely enjoying so much...please update soon...
It's been a long time since I've reviewed...not because I've lost interest...I've been greedily consuming every update as you put them up...just haven't had much time to review...but didn't want you to think that you had lost my interest...quite the contrary...I love this story!!!
Well, well, well, it seems that Jamaica's living up to its name as being the 'Isle of Love'...Maks and Brandy...Kelly and Val...now Serena and Jamar...hmmm, wonder what Serena's response would have been to him had she not been so worn out and fell asleep...I really like them together...but it was still rank what Serena did to her girl, Kelly...she should have been upfront with her...but at least she's shown remorse...she just let her heart get in the way of her common sense and courtesy...
Not only can I not wait for when Brandy and Maks return to the States...wonder also what the future holds for these fledgling couples of Kelly and Val...Serena and Jamar...
Keep of the great work...thanks for sharing!!!
Reviewer: attheritz Signed Okay, I know I'm late to the party, but I have been reading along as each chapter has gone up...and I love it...I loved Team BranDMC and was devastated for them when they were so unfairly eliminated off of DWTS...this willl be the last year I watch that mess...it's become too political for me...and has forever tarnished the "entertainment" value of the show...but I digress, off my soapbox...
Love this story...I love your imagery...feels like I'm almost there with them as they experience this tale...but even though I absolutely heart the hot, hot lovemaking...I'm ready for the romancing and the courtship to begin...they love each other...so give us more of why they feel this way about each other...yes, we know they are incredibly attractive...but what makes each of them IT for each other...that's what I want more of...this isn't meant as a criticism of your writing...just a way to hopefully help you flesh out your story...because believe me...I couldn't have come up with a better story...you are a fantastic writer...just need the characters to be more fleshed out...I know it's difficult when dealing with real people...but I have faith in you...
I hope Brandy doesn't let her fears consume her and really just let go...let flow and allows Maksim a chance to be truly a part of her life....can't wait until Maks meets Seraii....
Great story...keep it coming...
Reviewer: attheritz Signed Oh, Nakia...you know you and your family are in my prayers...Godspeed to health for your grandmother...and your son's friend...though tragic...is not unheard of...I'm an educator and we were inserviced on suicide at the beginning of the school year...and sad to say...they are getting younger and younger...I'll pray for his soul and his family also...but the mind is such a delicate thing and sometimes...it just can't see past today to see a brighter future for tomorrow...
To the story...yep, Maks has his work cut out...Brandy is pissed and rightfully so...though she should always question what she reads and sees in those mags...she's a celebrity herself afterall...and should know that sensation sells papers...but she's so emotional right now that her brain is trying to grasp anything it can to make some sense of why Maks broke her heart so callously...and this is the easiest answer for her...but make no mistake...she loves that man with everything in her...why else would she fly into a jealous rage after seeing those pictures of him and Joan...I love how both Kelly and Ray J flew to her defense if Maks was truly trifling with their girl's heart...but Maksim loves him some Brandy and I have faith in him to make it right for her...looking forward to what happens in Jamaica...update soon, please!!!
thank you so much for your prayers, they mean so much to me. My grandmother is doing well, surgery went well. Thank you for praying for my son and his friend's soul. Please keep his family lifted in prayer, they are not coping very well, which can be expected. Thank you so much.
Now to the story: Yes our Maks truly does love him some Brandy, and she loves him. Jamaica is going to cause a transformation for our sweet dear Brandy. Kelly and Ray J are true to Brandy, they love her and know her so well. Thank you again for your prayers and for R&R this story. Wishing you and yours are very Merry Christmas! Love Nakia.
Reviewer: attheritz Signed Sounds like Maks is about to handle his business...YOWZA, LOL!!!
I believe Brandy had already come to the decision that she was going after her man on her own...she's finally growing the heck up...'bout time!!! And homegirl's horny too...and I mean we are talking about Maks here, MEOW...
Kelly and Val...now Maks...Kels is a grown arse woman...and girlfriend sure isn't hurting for male attention...but good looking out for baby bro...and he better come correct...calls Ms. Kelly don't play with no boys...
Can't wait for the next round of hawtness...hurry up with that typing...a sista has needs, ya know, LOL!!!
Merry Christmas!!!!
Reviewer: attheritz Signed Damn, Nakia...that was blazing hawt!!!! Maks is kinky and he's writing his name all over that...and the best part is they are both seeing a future...together...sexing with love is the hottest thing ever...love these two together...can't wait for more sexy times...
Now, to Ms. Kelly...hmmm, she's met a piece of sexy hot chocolate...and already dismissing Val because of his age...but I wonder if girlfriend will find out that age ain't nothing but a number...can't wait to see where you go with this mini-triangle...loved the update....looking forward to more...
I know I love those two together!! Yes our boy Maks is kinky, and he claimed his woman. Brandy finally realized that if she wants love she has to be an active participant.
Yes, Yes, Ms. Kelly has met a man, and she has underestimated the power of the Chmervoskiy charm. Thank you for R&R.
Reviewer: attheritz Signed My word...Brandy and Maks are a couple of freaks...in love...doing the horizontal mambo on a dance floor...in the middle of a crowded club...dang...I'm speechless...
I think Kelly doth protest too much...noticed she noticed the red-head on Val's arm...wonder why, hmmm...and no you didn't use Shemar Moore as the image for Jamar...what's a girl to do...two fionne men...both want her...so far, Jamar seems cool...but I have my reservations since he dated Kelly's friend, Serena...wondering why she broke it off with him after declaring her love for him after only a week of dating...things that make you ponder...can't wait to see where you take us next...
Reviewer: attheritz Signed Kelly sure is giving a lot of lip service...but one touch from Val and she's like a puddle in his hands...why does she insist on calling him a "boy" when he is anything but...arrogant as heck...but definitely not a boy...this is getting gooood...can't wait to see what happens next...
And Brandy is right...Maks better handle Erin before a sista has to take off her earrings and grab the Vaseline!!!
Reviewer: attheritz Signed Could Serena still be having some lingering feelings for Jamar...is that why she had that far away look...something is definitely up in that arena...and I really think she should have told Kelly about her past relationship with Jamar...I certainly would have if Kelly was my girl...something is about to pop off at tonight event that's for sure...
Val is incorrigible...but I loved seeing Kelly squirm...she's hiding from her real feelings for Val...trying so valiantly to convince herself that he's not getting under her skin...but she knows that's not the truth...she's been shook...and it's Val that is doing the shaking...
I love the grown up relationship that Brandy and Maks are having now...the honesty is refreshing...they are such as hot, sexy couple...and the beauty of it all...it's all tinged with so much love and mutual respect for each other...love it!!!
Can't wait for the next update!!!
Reviewer: attheritz Signed If you ask me...I'd say that Brandy acted a bit childishly...didn't she but a few moments before make a vow to trust her man...but at the first hint of trouble...she's ready to bolt and run...and I'm not excusing Maks' behavior...a man putting his hands on his woman is never acceptable...no matter if it was done in the heat of passion or out of fear of losing her...he acted irrationally too...but at least he pulled himself up and apologized immediately...Maks is a man that I feel at times is too passionate...he loves Brandy I have no doubt about that...but he is also very possessive of her...he has trust issues too...but not to the extent that Brandy has them...Brandy is right...they shouldn't rush into anything...at least until they work out some of their issues...about him doing the Bachelor show...if it's just a contractual obligation as Maks has stated...then neither one of them have anything to worry about...right...but I understand how hard it would to watch my man on a 'dating' show with him as the 'prize'...and Maks should be a bit more understanding since he blew his top when Bran was on Lopez talking about flirting with some cop when they weren't even in a committed relationship at the time...yep, they need to both cool off and then they do need to talk like two grown adults...
Kelly...Kelly...what's going on babe...Val rocked your world last night...and she's worried about what other people will think about her if she starts openly dating him...that girl has issues too...and she should know better than most that age ain't nothing but a number...she could be throwing away the best thing that ever happened to her before she even gave it a chance...at least give the man a chance to really get to know you...that's all he's asking for right now...
Yeah, Serena was foul with how she handled the situation with Kelly and Jamar...especially when Kel's been her girl...I still don't understand why she just didn't simply pull her over to the side earlier and explain the situation to her like a real woman...you don't blindside your friends like that...humiliate them publicly...foul, foul, foul...so now she's contrite and wants to right the wrong...but guess what...she's on Kel's timetable...not hers...Brandy gave her some sage advice...hope she takes it...wow...these women are something else when it comes to matters of the heart...it's strange how they can see each other's situation with so much clarity and goof their own love lives up...
Loved the update and can't wait to hear the Kelly/Serena conversation...and Maks and Brandy...you've got me scared for them...can they work it out...because they surely can't live happily without each other...thanks so much for sharing this amazing story...and sorry for being so long-winded this time...
Reviewer: attheritz Signed Wow...Kelly and Val are scorching...hmmm, those Chermkovskiy men...makes me want one...yum, yum...lol...Val has already dropped the L-bomb...I hope Kel gives herself a chance to return the feeling...
Loved how Kelly handled Serena...glad she differientiated between not liking her ACTIONS...though she still has much love in her heart for her girl...but Serena needed to be checked and just grow the heck up...sometimes...one's actions have consequences and there are no easy fixes with a simple "I'm sorry"...I hope Serena honors Kelly's request of giving her space because if she doesn't...she stands a good chance of losing that friendship and rightly so...she needs to back off for now...absolving one's guilt at the expense of your friend's feelings is never a good idea...
I'm still nervous about Brandy and Maks...seems they are at an impasse...Maks has made the first overture to repair the damage...I hope Ms. Brandy doesn't fly off the handle and actually talks to him this time and see if they can resolve this situation maturely...like adults...
Good news of the RL front...though I prefer to stay out the lives of celebs...but they were smoking on DWTS so I hope they see where this 'thing' takes them...
Love this story Nakia...can't wait for the next update...
Reviewer: attheritz Signed
Hot damn...now that was HAWT!!! Fiyah I tell ya, LOL...I hope they can weather the storm of this separation...because I need more of this...happy writing!!!
Reviewer: attheritz Signed
Evangeline awakes from her coma to find that the love of her life is getting married to her worst enemy. Along with her trusty sidekick, bad boy Todd Manning--she creates a blueprint for REVENGE.
Great start...a pissed off Evangeline...a diabolical Todd...oh, the damage they can do...and please, no more Ms. Nice Girl...take the Red-Headed Demon down divastyle....muwahahaha...evil laugh...
Reviewer: attheritz Signed Dum..dum..dum...so let the games begin...more, more, more please!!!!
*soap opera organ* Will Evangeline's press conference be all that it should be? Dummmmm Will Natalie be able to reach her groom in time?! DUMMMMMMM...tune in next time...ROFLOL
Reviewer: attheritz Signed Franklin Mott goes on a reality show looking to make a love connection. Pure crack, inspired by this interview with James Frain.
I cracked the heck up when I read the premise and the first chapter of this story...Franklin Mott was KRAZY with a capital K...and the sad thing was he was so sincere about his devotion to Tara that the psycho actually had me actually rooting for his crazy arse...James Frain is a comic genius and he made Franklin Mott the most memorable character True Blood ever produced...
A reality show...Franklin...oh, the questions he'll ask the 'contestants'...evil, maniacal laugh...how do you feel about choking because you never know when Frankie Baby may snap and chock a bitch...can you outrun werewolves...how do you feel about duck tape...are you into kinky Victorian nightgowns...and my personal fave...seeing how 'romantic' he is...do you like the decor at Shoney's...haha...
I am so looking forward to another update of this story SOON...you've got me hook, line, and sinker!!!
Reviewer: attheritz Signed Do you know how much I laughed as I read this...this is good...Coke for that V-ho were-bitch, Debbie...Crystal (Bones) hehe...Lorena is back with her crazy-arse...love the nickname Styles...that she does have...Ginger...Screech...I'm howling over here...wonder what Yvetta name really means...something obviously not pleasant...is it Ukrainian for gold-digger...but my absolute favorite was his nickname for Tara...his 'Strumpet'...I love how you've incorporated little ditties from the show in choosing the nicknames...loved it...can't wait for what's next...loving the idea of Franklin as the Bachelor...
Reviewer: attheritz Signed Loved the confessionals...perfectly matched their show personas...can't wait for more...love this...
Reviewer: attheritz Signed 
Some people seem to believe that when our body dies our soul lives on forever and we are reborn again into another body. We are recarnated to relive our past lives differently. To fix our mistakes of the past. We encounter the same people that we once did in our other lives.
As for Alexandra and Shane there is a sense of a familiar connection to these mere strangers could it be because they lived a past life together.
Memories of an Ancient past... is not you're average time story. This is with a little Biting blood twist.
I really like this story...interesting indeed that they both are having the same recurring dream...or is it really a dream...but more of a recollection of a shared past...please continue...
Reviewer: attheritz Signed Are Alexandria and Shane reincarnations of Akasha and Lestat...interesting that Shane has still has vivid memories of an erotic scene that occurred between Akasha and Lestat in Queen of the Damned...and why did Alexandria freak out when Shane revealed that he thought they had slept together...is Alexandra still a virgin and it's an impossibility...interesting indeed...look forward to see whre you go with this one...
Author's Response: Thank you for you're comment. I'll be updating soon. You'll find out answers soon enough.
Three months after Tara leaves Bon Temps to find herself, she faces the biggest threat to her life and sanity so far. Will she be able to trust Sam and herself to defeat the biggest foe she’s ever
I'm loving this story...I must confess that I'm a Tam shipper...but I have a sweet spot in my heart for Fara...sue me...I loved that adorable nut, Franklin...so glad to see another Tara/Sam story...the more the merrier...
Now on to the story...I love that you had Sam protecting/watching over Tara while she was in Shreveport...he didn't intrude in her new life (though he probably wanted to...given his true feelings for her)...and just how does Jason know about his secrets...I know Sam has been acting weirdly aggressive lately...but I'd would think that most people probably would take it as him finally getting tired of everyone always taking advantage of his kindness and him finally snapping...
Besides, Jason's a hypocritical arse...Sam a womanizer...oh please...then he must be a himbo himself...and since the show began...he's been looking through Tara as if she didn't matter and was a sexual nonentity as far as he's concerned...so why is he so suddenly, jealously irate that Sam has shown an interest in her and declared his love for her...you snooze, you lose, buddy...
Laffy is a gem...and Sook can be such a bitch sometimes...why does she think ALL the male attention in town should go her way...some best friend she is at times...can't wait for the Laffy/Tara talk as well as the Sam/Tara talk...glad she decided to move back to Bon Temps...and give her and Sam a real chance...and who is that that's following her and what exactly is Stephanie...can't be anything good...can't wait to read more...
Very nicely done...thanks for the rapid-fire updates...
First, I must confess that the first 14 chapters are already written and posted on Fanfiction.net. That's why they are going up so fast. I'm working on chapter 15 now. Thank you for your wonderful review!!! I live for them.
As for the story.
1) Jason doesn't know much, but he knows there is something funny with Sam after the whole Maryann business. Plus Sam moved to a po-dunk town without a past. No one really cares, but everyone knows that. Mostly Jason was just blowing smoke because his pride was hurt and he wanted Tara to hear what he had to say (like it makes a difference LOL)
2)Jason is kind of an ass. He's never lost a woman or had to compete for one. He's an Alpha male. You're right about Jason not seeing Tara sexually, but that was something I wanted to change, because I think those two have a chemistry. In my story Jason killing Franklin and then Tara kissing Jason changed things a little for him. Its like his eyes were opened.
3) I LOVE LAFAYETTE!!!! He is a joy to write/watch. Sookie can be a bitch. You totally correct. She's actually a little jealous becasue Sam never truly forgave her for tossing him aside, but he forgave Tara for basically dumping him. Sookie threw all her fish back in the pond, and now she wants some attention from Sam, but its too late baby...
More to come ;)
Reviewer: attheritz Signed Thanks for the update...but why is Tara still keeping secrets from Sam...but I guess that works both ways...he still hasn't revealed his sordid and criminal past either...but he needs to know about what happened with Franklin, Jason, and her that night he nearly beat Calvin Norris to death...I know this is supposed to be a triangle but I'm really not feeling Jason at all...
Looking forward to more...
That was all kinds of hawt...I'm game...please continue...would love to read more about these two characters....
Author's Response:
oo ii yay thank you so much for ur review working on the next story line now ...:P
cynn333~
Reviewer: attheritz Signed 
Emery Harris has her hands full running the Beckenbach family for the past 7 years and she's loved every minute of it. So throwing the surprise 35th anniversary party for her employers is hardly a chore. But rather than worrying about the guests and the band, Emery finds herself fretting about the arrival of the prodical son. For the first time in 3 years Nick Beckenbach will be stateside. As much as Em has tried to convince herself that she's moved past her feelings for him, she can't be sure until this weekend is over. But there is more than just her feelings for Nick to contend with. One thing is for sure, the party won't be the only surprise this weekend.
Okay...I've got to admit I'm rooting for Emery and Sebastian...haven't even met Nick yet...but there's just a special 'closeness' going on between Em and Bas...and I like it very much...they're the type of friends that will always have each other's backs and they can tell each other anything...and Sebastian is so perceptive about Em's moods...and so thoughtful and caring...and who doesn't like a man who can cook and is a hunk in his own right...like I said...right now...it's Bas by a mile for me...
Looking forward to more...
Reviewer: attheritz Signed Okay...I'm firmly entrenched on team Sebastian-Emery...why can't she see what's right in front of her face...Bas is secretly crushing...no, pining away for her...he's wants to be much more than 'just friends'...the subtleness is there...but it's there all the same...I hope I'm not reading too much into this...but I can't wait for the catalyst that will open both of their eyes...Gayle's right...all that fineness shouldn't go to waste...and who better to sample it than Em herself...
Hurry on back with more...loving this so far!!!
Reviewer: attheritz Signed 