Penname: attheritz [Contact]

Real name: OLW

Member Since: 03/06/09

Membership status: Member

Bio: Teacher...avid reader...some would say I'm a workaholic...love creative people...and one day hope to find the courage to write a work of fiction for others to enjoy...just don't think I have the discipline for it right now...lol..


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"Never judge a book by its cover"

Sasha McPherson, 31 year old real estate agent has a dream.  A dream deeply rooted in the American Dream.  She wants to be a million dollar listing agent at Blitz Realty and make partner.  She's beautiful, charming, and with an otherwise open heart.

Pavlov Patrenko, 28 year old temporary resident from the Ukraine also has a dream.  A dream deeply rooted in the American Dream.  He wants to defect to the U.S., buy a home, and build a business in the land of the free.  But only a few things stand in his way-Sasha McPherson, her gilded suit of armor, and one huge 'f_ck off' sign spiked firmly on her forehead.

What happens when east meets west?

Surely Curves up Ahead!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of SparkApCider (SPAC). The original characters and plot are the property of SparkApCider (SPAC), and is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 

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Categories: Original Fiction
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Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 22525
Read Count: 19049
Published: 14/08/09
Updated: 25/10/11


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Looks like Sasha's finally waking up from her Allen fog...good girl...I love Portia...Allen don't know who he's messing with...can't wait for more...

Author's Response:

It took a fall like that plus a slap for added measure.  Portia rocks!

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Date: 27/09/09

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Summary: Mackenzie Armstrong moves from Arkansas to Chicago to start her job at an advertising agency. She meets new people while she deals with being far from home and the people she love. On her first day, she has an altercation with a fellow coworker, Scott Ross, a man of many quirks. It sparks tension and a war of words between the two, but what will happen when a business trip to New York forces them to stay in the same room?

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 30
Completed:No
Word count: 35118
Read Count: 41275
Published: 29/08/09
Updated: 24/01/10


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh, this story speaks to my heart...I'm a simple 'country' girl too...can imagine the culture shock from moving from the country to the big city like Mackensie....whereas people in the country are more laid back and hospitable...and the face-paced lifestyle of the city makes them appear 'cold' on first impression...

Looking forward to reading more...good start...

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Date: 29/08/09

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To become King of the Lycans, Ulrich has to marry. Between two of his own kind, Sabine, a human, catches his attention and his heart. except on the night of their marriage,she is murdered. 500 years later, Sabine is alive and no longer human but that is only just the beginning of their problems...

*banner by me* i was lazy on the first one and wanted to remake it...

 

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Horror, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 45707
Read Count: 60694
Published: 01/09/09
Updated: 17/09/10


Title: Chapter 14: Suspicious

Yay!!!  Finally you updated...I've really been missing this story...

Now that Ulrich has seen Sabine...there's no way he's going to let her go again...yes, he has to take care of some unfinished business...but trust he'll be back to claim what was taken from him...and I can't wait until that thing Salvadore finally gets his...sadistic, perverted cretin...I wonder what the real backstory is between him and Ulrich that caused him to do what he did to Ulrich's bride on their wedding night...this has to go way beyond the mutual dislike between vampire and lycan...this seems more like some kind of personal vendetta...and please, by some miracle...can Sabine have her memories back of her husband and one true love...it breaks my heart that she feels so very...alone...and disillusioned with world...and she doesn't even remember the great love she once shared with her husband...

Please update soon...I'm holding you to it...this story is too good to be dropped for such long periods of time...

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Date: 18/03/10

Title: Chapter 18: A gift

Sabine and Ulrich's reunion is so bittersweet for me...they've both been through hell and their life experiences have changed them so much...still the light of true love bonds them throughout the years...what a powerful, wondrous thing true love is...I pray that Sabine doesn't totally freak out when Ulrich tells her the truth about their past...or blame him for the misery her life became because of Salvatore's machinations...they are both victims of circumstance...

Oh how I hate Salvatore...that can never be said enough...he needs a slow and painful death...torture...anything...but he needs to be made to suffer as he has made them...

Mona is a cow...judgmental harpy...did she ever think that it was life itself that took the light from Sabine's eyes...that her eyes are 'dead' because for so long a POS made her feel worthless and unworthy of love...she was just looking for a reason not to like Sabine and try to steer Ulrich away from her...I wouldn't have minded if Sabine had ripped her throat out...and I hate that her b*tchiness put a damper on Sabine's excitement about an evening out with someone who as far as she remembers...made her feel something beside anger, fear, and self-loathing...

Looking forward to more...thanks for updating...

 

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Date: 03/08/10

Title: Chapter 9: A mortal no more

I just read the first part of this saga up to this point...first, let me say how impressed I am with your ability to draw me into this story and this world...

I'm so heartbroken for Sabine and Ulrich...I can't stand it...and I hate Salvatore with the heat of a thousand suns...

I can't wait to read about how Sabine and Ulrich get their second chance at love and happiness together...though it seems impossible right now with her having no memory and her being made into a vampire and he a lycan...but I'm hoping that true loves prevails...it just has too!!!

Great story and impeccable work...looking forward to the next journey into this saga...

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Date: 04/10/09

Title: Chapter 15: a visit

Well, this was an unexpected treat...Second Chance updated...whoopee!!!

Ulrich is determined to have his true mate back...and that catty and dare I say callous Vanessa is nothing but trouble on legs...bet she's always realized she was always second best in Ulrich's heart...but the cow did give him a son...so she uses that to her advantage...

Oh, thank you for the bit of softening around Sabine's heart...guess curiosity got the better of her...and now it's some private time in store for her and Ulrich...I'm so excited...can't wait for the next update...no matter how long it takes, lol...

Thanks again for the update...looking forward to more...

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Date: 20/06/10

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh, thankies a thousand times, Variety...short, but oh so satisfying...

Ulrich and Sabine have finally made that connection that was never lost even through all the space and time...love like that never truly dies...oh, how I hope Ulrich tells her the whole truth of her life soon...I think that will quell some of the wanderlust that stirs within her...her feelings of aloneness...she's not alone and she has a rightful mate...a man (okay, Lycan) who loves and cherishes her...I think this might have been the greatest tragedy of all...she lost everything and was left with nothing because of one evil being's thirst for revenge...he used and abused her body and in some ways...broke her beautiful spirit and turned her into a creature of the night with no bearings to grab on to...I hope he dies a slow and painful death for all the sorrow he has wrought...soon, very soon Salvatore...your time is coming...and I want Ulrich and Sabine to rip him limb for limb...

Can't wait for more...this story just keeps getting better and better...

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Date: 22/06/10

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Summary: When Evangeline "Eve" walks into the gym, her sole intention is to get rid of the stubborn five pounds that insist on staying with her. In her lack of concentration she runs into a gorgeous specimen of a man. Meeting Jake distracts her from the workout she came in for but after a few moments in his presence she might end up getting one she never expected.  

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1538
Read Count: 3625
Published: 13/09/09
Updated: 13/09/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love your writing style...so descriptive...

Yeah, that was definitely hot and no beating around the bush with these two...hope they don't do these kind of clandestine meetings often...could be bad for your health in this day and age...if one suspends belief...this was awesome and so easy to get swept away in the sheer power of the moment...but what can I say...I guess I tend to overthink everything...and like I said...this makes great fantasy material...but in the real world...not so much...



Author's Response: You are so right. But that's what makes it fiction/fantasy right? It tends to be something you wouldn't do in real life. I also think that's what makes it so intriguing...

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Date: 14/09/09

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A part of the Kerrington & Associates series. Donovan Williams is a rookie in the Miami Dolphins Football Organization. He's lonely and praying for love to find him. Kendra Davis is a rookie in some sorts as well to the Dolphins organization as an athletic trainer.  Will she and Donovan become fast friends and later lovers?

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: Kerrington & Associates
Chapters: 22
Completed:Yes
Word count: 36599
Read Count: 47434
Published: 04/10/09
Updated: 14/03/10


Title: Chapter 16: Sorbet and Candles

Is it just me or are both David and Garrett giving off some wierd and 'freaky' vibes...yikes!!!

David appears to lust after and loathe Kendra with equal measures of intensity...he wants to destroy her career, yet the way he refers to her physical attributes gives me pause...and makes my skin crawl...I hope that Kendra is able to bring him down while exonerating her name and reputation once the true origins of 'the cream' are revealed...she just has to be smart about it...and let the element of surprise work to her advantage...

Garrett is just pitiful...he acts more like a jilted girlfriend than a jealous teammate...what's his real deal...is he really so threatened by the possibility of sharing his 'limelight' with another up-and-comer...he's just a sad case...and it's just beginning the troubles he's probably going to cause...I hope he gets his too...SOON...

I hope that Kendra and Donovan can weather this storm together...and I hope that infamous 'cream' and its usage does not come between them...they are so good for each other...

On a personal note...thanks again for your prayers and well wishes during my time of bereavement...it was very much appreciated...



Author's Response:

Good, I'm glad David is making your skin crawl, he's one of those, I hate you creepy old guys... at least thats what I'm seeing.. As for Garrett, pure jerk! 

Thanks for reading and I hope you're feeling a little better.

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Date: 15/01/10

Title: Chapter 17: Confessions

Okay...I can understand Donovan being upset...justifiably so...but did he have to really take it out on Kendra like that...yes, she made a HUGE mistake...using that cream before checking it out...but shouldn't Donovan also be concerned that HER career could be in jeopardy, too...she's a victim, too...David preyed on her naivete...and now not only is Donovan in hot water...but so is Kendra...not cool, D-man...not cool at all...

Glad Donovan saw Garrett with Rachel...at least he has the heads up about whatever that fool is up to...

Though I'm a bit miffed at Donovan right now...hopefully he'll cool down and come back and apologize to Kendra and they can put their heads together to come up with a gameplan to salvage both of their careers...

Looking forward to more...thanks for the update...



Author's Response: You know some men, don't rationalize when they are angry. Thanks for reading.

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Date: 17/01/10

Title: Chapter 21: When We Kiss

Yes, I did...and the ending was perfect...and ultra-romantic and in keeping with the man that Donovan is...how sweet!!!  They are soulmates...and it was fated since the first chapter of this wonderful fic...thank you so much for bringing it to us...can't wait for more of KA's...could it be Chad and Dani next up to bat???

P.S...Rachel is a real witch...may she in Garrett live long together in misery in Texas...far away from Donovan and Kendra...



Author's Response: Chad and Dani are definitely up to bat next.  Kendra and Donovan made me smile... Garrett and Rachel may show up again in the future... hmmm... Thanks for reading and leaving me thoughful and constructive reviews...

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Date: 13/03/10

Title: Chapter 2: Allow me to reintroduce myself

Yay, D...I'm so glad you're telling Donovan's story...and Kendra sounds like the perfect woman for him already...can't wait for them to clash...the more fierce...the firier the passion will be...

Why'd you had go and make me feel so guilty for saying all those mean things about Donovan in Second Time Around...then hit me with just how great of a guy he really is by having him pray and ask the Lord to send a woman he could love and make his wife...

Also...can we get some pics of Kendra...my man D deserves the very best...you heard the man...beautiful, smart, sexy, and sassy...

Great start...I want more, more, more!!!!



Author's Response: Hey girl, thanks for the kudos... I'm looking at casting now... Not sure who I want to be the right woman for my man... LOL...

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Date: 05/10/09

Title: Chapter 4: Miami Nightlife

Loving it, D!!!!

Can't wait to see what happens when they're alone!!!



Author's Response: Thanks... I'm enjoying this....

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Date: 10/10/09

Title: Chapter 5: A kiss of Coffee

Awww, D, I'm loving me some Donovan...

I love how he's so confident that Kendra is the one...I love a man who knows what he wants and isn't afraid to go after it...that girl just don't know what she's in for...I also love that Donovan is so spiritual...he believes in God and he believes that He has sent him the woman he's supposed to be with...

I'm also so interested in Donovan's family...they seem very interesting...so his parents were foster parents...lots of love in that family...it takes some very special people to take in homeless/orphaned/emotionally and physically abused children nobody else wants and love them...I love how you're peeling back the layers to reveal just how fine a young man Donovan is (we all can see what a great physical specimen he is)...but he is a good man through and through...also love how much respect he has for his intended...though he wants her...he wants more than her body...he wants her heart...

Sorry for the late review...too tired last night to leave one...but please continue...love this story so much!!!



Author's Response: Thanks.  I appreciate the fact that you're good with the more layers of this guy.  I love my hero's.... I want you guys to love them too.

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Date: 22/10/09

Title: Chapter 6: Your Personal Trainer

I almost thought David was going to turn out to be a chavinist...but he recognizes Kendra's merit...wonder why he decided to make her Donovan's personal trainer...what an interesting development...

My girl woke up with a smile on her face and late for her first day of work...all courtesy of the D man...the man has mad skills after just 'coffee'...Kendra's feeling Donovan too...but she has to walk a fine...she wants respect from her boss and the other trainers...so she'll have to watch her step...but knowing Donovan...that's going to be a pretty tall order...I know it's hard to earn respect in a male dominated career but I have faith in Kendra...

Getting good...more, more please!!!



Author's Response: Thsnk you. it's going to get better and motives will be made clear.

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Date: 24/10/09

Title: Chapter 7: Veggie Tales

Loved Donavan's mom...some sage advice...especially after the fiasco with Taylor...and he has to be careful for the sake of Kendra's career...but Donovan's so sure he's found the one...I think he has too...

Can't wait to see what happens next...



Author's Response: thank you honey.

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Date: 28/10/09

Title: Chapter 8: Is a kiss just a kiss?

Oh, this is getting soooo good!!!

Poor Kendra...her heart and mind are at war...and Donovan's laying on the gentlemanly charm thick...can Kendra resist...or will she take a chance on her heart...I hope she does...yes, girl...he really is real...lol...

I can't wait to Donovan's family to come for a visit...and I knew David had something sneaky under his sleeves...Kendra...watch your back girl...

Loving it, D...more, more please!!!



Author's Response: David is a sneaky bastard... Donovan knows what he wants and will get it this time!

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Date: 06/11/09

Title: Chapter 9: Challenges

That sneaky bastard...and he's crazy too...playing with the team's star player's future and health just to prove his archaic point...I hope this backfires on him but good...gosh, I hate David...

I hate chauvinist...and he's a coward to boot...so he believes that women should be home barefoot and pregnant does he...is it 1959 or 2009...seriously...and poor Kendra...she's too busy trying to fend off Donovan's much wanted advances trying to prove to David and the others that she belongs there...she doesn't suspect a thing...

Can't wait until the next update...loving it!!!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading....and i love your reviews!

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Date: 07/11/09

Title: Chapter 11: Starting Anew

Thanks for the update, D...

I loved the A Bronx Tale reference...one of my favorite movies BTW...Dani and Chad are so cute together...trying to hide there feelings from one another...but uh-oh...trouble looms ahead...Kerrington in the same restaurant they're sharing a meal after work hours...and the no-fraternization clause in their contracts...wonder how they get out of this one...

I can't stand David...he is just plain evil...I bet there is some type of illegal substance in that cream...and Kendra will take the fall when it comes to light that she has been using it on Donovan...David will play dumb...and Kendra career will be in ruins...Donovan will probably face some type of suspension from the league...will he blame Kendra for it...how will it affect their budding relationship...

The picnic at the beach was great...so romantic...glad Donovan started to slow it down a bit in his pursuit...yeah, he's found a good thing...just sit back and watch her come to him...

Loved it as always...until next time...later...



Author's Response:

Glad you picked up on the Bronx Tale reference... I love that movie.  I like Dani and Chad too... I like Kendra and Donovan too... LOL...

Still trying to figure out where we're going with "the cream"... LOL

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Date: 30/12/09

Title: Chapter 12: Let's Take a Trip

Me likey, D...

Glad Kendra's following her instincts and remembering David's suspicious behavior and having that cream independently tested...hopefully the affects on Donovan won't be too far-reaching...

Garrett...what is his problem...sounds like he's going to be trouble with a capital T...me suspect there's a whole lot of jealousy, envy, and resentment coming from that camp...is he so upset that he's being upstaged by the star rookie...watch your back D-man...

Rachel is a hoot...glad Kendra listened to her and decided to go on the road trip to Key West with Donovan...romantic setting...a weekend alone...getting to know each other better...sounds like a recipe for a little naughty *wink, wink*

Love the restraint that Donovan's showing...and Kendra's not blind to his charms and softening toward him...as if she wasn't feeling him already...can't wait to read more...

Thanks for the update...on pins and needles looking forward to what happens next...



Author's Response:

No hanky panky yet.... too soon, too soon. 

Thanks for reading... I'm trying to update more...

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Date: 01/01/10

Title: Chapter 13: Dancing

Don't tell me that was the paparazzi...or maybe someone David hired to get some more ammunition to use against Kendra...bet those pictures are going to come back to haunt both Kendra and Donovan...I hope Kendra gets those test results before those pictures come out...I also hope she disclosed to Breana that David gave her that cream to use on Donovan...because knowing David...he'll deny everything and place the blame squarely on Kendra's shoulders...

Key West sounds beautiful...hope to one day get a chance to visit...Kendra and Donovan are growing ever so closer and the fight is just about out of them...I love how Donovan is the perfect gentleman around Kendra...shows he was raised right and has the upmost respect for her...and that he doesn't want just a passing fling with her...but a real committment...

Thanks for the update, D...more, more please!!!



Author's Response: As if the cream wasn't enough, they've gotta have some drama in Miami...  Key West is GORGEOUS!!! 

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Date: 04/01/10

Title: Chapter 14: Sailing

That was really sweet...so they're both ready to take that leap of faith and pursue a relationship...but for Kendra's sake...Donovan agrees to keep it in the closet for now...it never ceases to amazes me how much of a good guy he really is...okay...confession time...I always knew he was a good guy...just didn't want him coming in between my chosen couple of Taylor and Matt...*drops head in shame*, LOL...but I'm his number one cheerleader now and I want him to get the girl...Kendra is his destiny...

Thanks for the update...looking forward to more...



Author's Response: Taylor and Matt are my all time faves. Matt is based off of a real live person well, about 65% off him. Anyhoo, Donovan is a good guy!

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Date: 05/01/10

Title: Chapter 18: Planning it Out

Ewwww...I feel dirty after reading this chapter...the unmitigated gall of David...as if Kendra would let the piece of slime anywhere near her goodies...puleeze...he must really think her really dumb...he has jeopardized her career...possibly damaged her reputation...and has the subtlety of a bull in a china store...I hope she knees him in the groin once she gets her evidence of his treachery...sick bastard...not only does he have a low opinion of women in general...but he thinks they're only good be sexual playthings for men...there are just no words for how I loathe this beast...

Glad Donovan is trying to come up with a gameplan to get both he and Kendra out of this mess...Garrett is sick, too...so it was him following them in Key West...that fool needs to be dealt with too...

So glad Donovan realizes it wasn't Kendra's fault about that cream...and recognizes just how tenous her career aspirations have become...loved he told her he'd take care of her...poor Kendra...bet she was feeling all alone and sick with guilt about what happened...

Can't wait for them to take down both of these creeps...and get back to the business of loving each other...looking forward to more...



Author's Response: Thank you maam.  I am gertting on it today to get some clarification

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Date: 22/01/10

Title: Chapter 19: A plan put in motion

Okay, D...David almost made me throw up a little in my mouth...oh, my....he's beyond disgusting...skeevy pervert...but he's about to get his backside handed back to him back on a silver platter...couldn't happen to a 'nicer' cretin...Candid Camera indeed...but I doubt he'll find much humor from the fallout...can Donovan beat the brakes off of that fool before he's dismissed...

Glad Garrett finally got his...not only did Donovan hand his *ss back to him...but he got exposed to the whole team as the pathetic, jealous bitch he really is...

So glad that Kendra didn't get fired when those pictures were exposed and the GM and owner were fair to her...

I can't wait till this all blows over and we can get back to some more Kendra and Donovan loving...and hopefully...wedding bells will be ringing in the near future...and Kendra...learn to keep your trap shut around your 'girl'...who seems to have a bad case of diarrhea of the mouth when pillow talk is involved...



Author's Response: The end is near!

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Date: 09/02/10

Title: Chapter 20: If it can happen it will

No apology necessary...glad you're on the mend...take as much time as you need to get yourself back healthy...I love your stories and will wait until you're up to giving us more...

I love Donovan and Kendra...David is an arse of the highet order...though I'd have loved to seen Donovan do more than punch him that one time...scum like him is better dealt with by hitting him where it hurts...in the pockets...so glad his malice will be rewarded with him getting his and hopefully getting kicked out the training business...he's a real psycho with no respect for other people...

So glad Donovan and Kendra reconnected and Donovan is such a good guy and definitely husband material...you hear that, Kendra...he wants your heart and soul girl...don't be afraid to give it to him...

Great update, DS1...looking forward to more...



Author's Response:

Thanks for being so patient with me.  It's been a trying beginning of the year, but hopefully, prayerfully it will get better soon.

I like Donovan and Kendra too.  Something easy with them.  No pretenses....

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Date: 09/03/10