Penname: Suprina Frazier [Contact]

Real name: Suprina Frazier

Member Since: 20/06/09

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Writer of Edgy Inspirational and Secular novels. I'm also an avid reader and a mother of two.

Any WIPs that I have on this site will be updated mainly on the weekends (bearing no unforeseen circumstances). Completed stories are subject to be removed when ready for publication.

Thanks for reading along with me!




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Love Angel © by Ajani
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Summary:

Angel Lafont is a sexy 22 year old struggling college student.  She is determined to finish school with no distractions......NO MEN!   That is until she glimpse the one man that reminded her she is ALL WOMAN!

Jahki Love at 27 is lonely after being widowed for five years.  He is determined to to find the one woman who will set his soul on fire.  A near fatal crash brings him face to face with his destiny......his goddess.

Can Angel and Jahki compromise and fight for love or will they let lies and deceit keep them apart?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 33
Completed:No
Word count: 20524
Read Count: 17071
Published: 02/09/09
Updated: 11/07/10

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Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 11.3

They got my atmosphere charged. LOL!!!

I would really like to see what they are going to SAY to each other now. So far they've been doing a lot of thinking and feeling. They need to open up and admit to each other what we all know by now - they're in love! lol. I look forward to those declarations and seeing what's going to happen afterwards.

Thanks for the frequent updates, Ajani. You rock!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

A lot is going to happen in the up coming chapters.  Some people true nature will be revealed and maybe even declarations.  LOL

I am happy your liking it so far!

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Date: 09/10/09
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 14

J is sooooo generous. I likes me a giving man!

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response: LOL!  It is moving slower than I thought but I will post as much as I can today!

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Date: 11/07/10
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 14.2

tee-hee. They're a mess, lusting for each other at the altar. It's almost over. They'll be able to get their groove on soon enough. tee-hee.

Thanks for the update!

 



Author's Response: I thought that was kind of hilarious.  LOL  They are so far gone for each other that you would probably be able to see steam coming off of them. 

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Date: 11/07/10
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 13.1

Yay! They're getting married!

*doing my happy dance*

THANKS for the GREAT update, Ajani.



Author's Response: LOL!  It is about to go down!

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Date: 22/05/10
Title: Chapter 28: Author Notes

Thanks for picking the story back up. Sorry to hear that life has been so difficult for you lately. Much luv!

Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement.  I look forward to finishing this story and giving everyone something to talk about.  LOL

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Date: 22/05/10
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 5

LOL!!!!

This was such a funny chapter to me. Jahki was acting like a total butthead after being thrown off guard with Angel's sudden appearance in his life. And she was acting like a naive doormat. C'mon, Angel, you got power in them hips, girl. Use it to make this more of a win/win situation.

Great job, Ajani! Thanks for sharing.



Author's Response: I am so happy you liked that chapter. Thanks!

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Date: 15/09/09
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 1

First of all, major kudos to you for being brave enough to share your talents with the world. That first story is always the scariest to share because you don't know how it will be received.

Well, here's what I think of your first try. I LOVE it!

1. I love the fact that the title is a play on the heroine's first name and the hero's last name. Very creative.

2. I also love how you gave Angel someone in her corner from the jump. Struggling college students need those. 

3. Lastly, I love how nice Angel seems. I am worried about her possibly being corrupted though if her wish for a wonderful (and I assume 'wealthy') benefactor comes true.

Good job! Keep 'em coming, Ajani. 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much Suprina!

I am nervous about it but I will continue until the end and hopefully others will like it also.

 Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed
Date: 02/09/09
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 2

*chuckle* Is this love at first sight? Or lust at first sight? Maybe a little of both? LOL!

Thanks for updating so fast.



Author's Response:

I wonder..............

I think its both.  LOL

 Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed
Date: 03/09/09
Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

Cute cast! I'm so glad you finally got the hang of inserting photos. Yay!!!!!!!

One question: Who's the cutie playing Jahki? He looks familiar but I can't recall his name.



Author's Response:

Thanks!!!!!

His names is Christian Keyes and he played in one of Tyler Perry plays!  CUTE HUH!!! LOL

 Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed
Date: 24/09/09
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 3

I look forward to when he realizes that his prayer has already been answered. That his angel is already headed his way.

Good post. Keep 'em coming please. :)



Author's Response: As a praying man he will see it but the question is will he wait for it to come al the way true?

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Date: 10/09/09
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 4

Angel tickled me with that daydreaming in the middle of the club thing. lol. Even so, I hope she gets that under control before she starts working for Jahki. I don't want her to lose her good job.

Nah...with him feeling the way he does about Angel, he probably will let her keep working for him anyway. LOL!  Men. *shakes head and laughs again*

Thanks for sharing your gift with us.



Author's Response: I found the daydreaming in the club hilarious myself.

 Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed
Date: 10/09/09
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 6

Oh, Jahki. You are going about this the wrong way, man. It's gonna be your own fault if Angel starts hating you.

Thanks, Ajani, for another good post.



Author's Response: Yes he is going about it the wrong way. The wuestion is will he beable to redeem himself or dig himself deeper?

 Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed
Date: 17/09/09
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7

Okay, Jahki. You need to stop tripping, man, and fast. You are starting to creep even me out and I KNOW why you're acting so crazy. lol.

Thanks for another great update, Ajani.



Author's Response:

LOL

I find it kind of funny how a man who has always been able to control his emotions, could be so out of control when it comes to awoman.

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Date: 22/09/09
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8

I LOVE a praying man! Good post, Ajani. I'm looking forward to seeing his prayers answered.

Author's Response: I thought you might like that.  I figured since he dug himself in such a hole he might as well seek help from a higher power, because he is going to need it.

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Date: 22/09/09
Title: Chapter 2: The Cast II

Still loving the cast. Great additions!

Author's Response: Thanks!

 Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed
Date: 25/09/09
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 9.1

Another great post! Thanks for the welcome distraction from my work. I love how everybody can see that they like each other but them. Too funny!

Author's Response:

Thanks and your welcome!  I think that is funny also. 

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Date: 27/09/09
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 9.2

Tee-hee. Jahki acting like a fraidy-cat was hilarious! Thanks for yet another great post, Ajani.

Author's Response:

LOL

I thought that was funny when I wrote it.

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Date: 27/09/09
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 9.3

*shaking head* These two are a TRIP! Somebody got to say something eventually. lol.

Excuse the impatience, Ajani. Trust me, I do understand why they have to be careful with their feelings in the work environment. After all, it could turn out very, very bad if one person feels sexually harressed. I guess I'm just ready for them to smooch. ;)

Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Only time will tell.  LOL

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Date: 27/09/09
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 1

PS. Thanks for letting me know what Lavendar Rose means. I love learning new things.

Author's Response:

Your welcome!

I learned that from you.  I think it adds something extra to the story.

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Date: 27/09/09
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 9.4

Very good! I like that you made Angel an VI native. I wonder if she still speaks the lingo sometimes.

Hmm...I'm also wondering if J is going to buy her a car. I certainly hopes he lets the girl get off in time to at least go to her classes. Now that would really make her like him more.

Thanks for keeping it good, Ajani!



Author's Response:

No, she does not speak the lingo but still enjoys the VI culture.  Your doing it to me now Suprina. LOL

 Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed
Date: 28/09/09
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 1

Author's Response:

No, she does not speak the lingo but still enjoys the VI culture.  Your doing it to me now Suprina. LOL

Doing what, Ajani? (speaking innocently) Doing that thing that you do to me when I'm writing a story. That predicting too close to my story notes thing? LOL!!!

 



Author's Response:

Yes, that is exactly what i am talking about.  LOL

 Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed
Date: 28/09/09
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 10

Great build up. Can't wait to read what's about to go down now. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thanks, I cannot wait either.  LOL

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Date: 01/10/09
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 10.2

Ooo...that was so WRONG of their parents to do them that way. I'm fuming about that. :(

Even so, that was another good post, Ajani.

 



Author's Response: They do not believe they did anything wrong.  Lord and Taylor believe everything in life is a business merger.  How do you think they took Monica's death?

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Date: 01/10/09
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 10.3

Dang!!!! What an awful way to die. Yes, scandalous is the right word. And the nerve of their parents living high on the hog after making them so miserable.

This story is really coming along. :D



Author's Response:

Yes, it was a nasty way to die!  That was not the original option but it fit well with things to come.

Their parents did not know they were miserble past the first year of their marriage.  Remember Monica and him were getting along even though she was getting nasty with Drake.

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Date: 01/10/09
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 10.3

Author's Response: ... How do you think they took Monica's death?

I imagine they took it hard. I hope they gave Jahki a big cash settlement for all his pain and suffering...and humiliation.



Author's Response:

You will find out in the final installment of chapter 10.  The seduction part up next! YUMMY!

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Date: 01/10/09