Penname: guitarlovechild [Contact]

Real name: Roceial

Member Since: 04/07/09

Membership status: Member

Bio: I have a passion to read. I am a good writer, but I don't have the patience to sit down and write a story. A peom maybe but not a story, even though I have a million and one ideas.


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Ki Fashions by Quania2004
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 204]
Summary:

KiFashions-2.jpg picture by Quania2004

Serena Davis is a shy young lady that has had a crush on her boss Mr. Ki, king of jerks, for 2 years. Mr. Ki, in order to stay the head of his family company must marry. What happens when he suddenly asks her to marry him?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 5022
Read Count: 49841
Published: 27/08/08
Updated: 28/07/16

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Title: Ki Fashions

Girl you haven't update in so long I thought something happen to you. Thank you for updating after 2 or so years. The chapter was great, angels sang, it rained gold, blah blah blah. I truely deeply hope I don't have to wait another two years for a chapter.

 Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 13/07/11
Title: Ki Fashions

OMG Quania, it took you like 400 years to update. I don't know if I should be happy that you finally updated and that it is pretty good or be mad that you took so long and the chapter is not like 50 pages long. But whatever you did something and I'm content.

 Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed starstar
Date: 22/08/09
Heartsong by Miki
Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Rachel finally has the courage to say those three little words to her husband.

 

A late entry to the "I love you" challenge.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1435
Read Count: 3122
Published: 06/07/09
Updated: 06/07/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thats just the sweetest thing I ever read. I want to tell someone I love them then get threaten afterwards.


Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

 Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07/07/09
An Illogical Woman by Candace
Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 39]
Summary:

A series of vignettes from the point of view of Spock, Spock Prime, Sarek and Tuven, a male OC, about the illogical women at the center of their lives.



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Categories: Movies
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Film)
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 21283
Read Count: 34929
Published: 09/07/09
Updated: 18/02/10

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Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 10: Departures

Ain't that nice. I'm happy that they got back together, but sadden it took so long.

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Date: 19/02/10
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Weddings

I fine this story to be enjoyable. Thanks for writiing.

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Date: 09/07/09
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Yesterday is Today

Ain't that just chipper. Makeda, what a weird name where is it from Kenya?

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Date: 13/11/09
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: First Meetings

That is too sweet. Even though I did not lick the  computer.

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Date: 14/11/09
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Meeting the Family

Poor Tuven all this advince is confusing him and getting him drunk.

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Date: 19/11/09
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 9: Changes

That was a tough chapter. It kind of made my heart cry.


Author's Response: Thanks for the comment and for reading. Things will get better come chapter 10. I felt their relationship needed some bumps and angst in order to be strong.

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Date: 06/01/10
Retired
Love and Prejudice by Candace
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 133]
Summary:

Love and Prejudice

A Pride and Prejudice spin off. Five years after their marriage, Elizabeth and Fitzwilliam Darcy are made the guardians of Mary Caroline Farthington, a free black woman and the  heir and adopted daughter of Lord Matthew Farthington. When Colonel Fitzwilliam returns from Louisiana, fresh on the heels of a hearty defeat in the Battle of New Orleans, he visits the Darcy's for the Christmas holidays. When the soldier and the heiress fall in love, will love be able to overcome prejudice?



Table of Contents
Categories: Books
Characters: None
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Racism, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 93045
Read Count: 100582
Published: 09/07/09
Updated: 18/12/10

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Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

It took you forever to update, but I am happy that you did. All this drama is wrecking havoc on my heart, those viel bitches.


Author's Response:

Sorry it took me two months! For some reason this chapter gave me such trouble.

Don't worry, the evil bitches will be taken care of very soon. 

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Date: 14/01/10
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

What a great hook, I am very curious to know what happens next.

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Date: 10/07/09
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Yeah I bet she is quite pleased. You are golden with the pen young lady, BRAVO!

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Date: 11/07/09
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

You are kicking major ass over here. I can't wait to see what happens next


Author's Response: Thanks! I hope I continue to kick ass. Things get a little more complicated as the story progresses. I've written up to Chapter 14 where things get a little more dramatic and I am always afraid that the ride I have in store for them will be a bit ridiculous.

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Date: 14/07/09
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Well it seemed like everything was going good. But what the hell is up with Georgiana? Fitzwilliam is her blood cousin right?


Author's Response: Yes, but back then, first cousins often married. It seems sort of gross nowadays (and it is illegal). I know some fanfiction authors like to pair them together, but that is just too gross for me! Plus, I think Georgie needs to look elsewhere for love and not to one who was sort of like a father figure to her.

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Date: 14/07/09
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

God Georgiana need to stop acting like such a bitch! I know yeah that there will no inbreeding for her but damn, find someone with money and sit ya ass down. And Darcy is blowing me too, but I will keep strong and keep on reading.

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Date: 16/07/09
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

This makes me ever happy that I was not born in those days and that I have no interaction with rich people. I would have slapped someone by now.

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Date: 16/07/09
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

My word! Those two are some real bitches. Poor Mary and her achy breaky heart. Oh I love how you don't update for like a year, and come back with something like this. Good job 



Author's Response: Oi! It hasn't been that bad :-P   Yeah, those two are straight up bitches. I didn't want to make such two dimensional characters, but it is sort of fun to write evil characters.

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Date: 04/10/09
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Damn it woman!! Really! Did you really have to end it right there? And I know you won't update for another three monthes or so. DAMN! *calming breathes* Ok whatever good job, you make me want to cry.


Author's Response: Sorry! I was going to write more, but I try to keep the chapters to 10 pages and this was getting long. Also, a bit of a cliffie seemed like a good place to stop while keeping my promise to update this week. But, you shouldn't have to wait 3 months. It was two weeks between this chapter and the last. As I have been picturing the ball in my head for the past three years, the next chapter should be up soon.

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Date: 21/10/09
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Damn its like one step froward and two steps back. Keep going girl this is getting too good. Oh and loved when old dude got his ass kicked, 10 points just for that.

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Date: 01/11/09
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

It's nice how you included that sonnet. You know that was about his black mistress. Thank you for updating and not abandoning your readers.


Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!

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Date: 19/12/10
Tribble Talk by bana05
Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary: Spock wished he could admit tribbles didn't affect him the same way they did humans, but that would be a lie. And Vulcans don't lie.

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Television)
Classification: Cannon, General
Genre: Friendship, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: Fluff
Series: Star Trek: Beyond TOS
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1694
Read Count: 4196
Published: 10/07/09
Updated: 10/07/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Tribble Talk

You make me want a tribble and Spock. Even though I always wanted a Spock. Young or old always sexy.


Author's Response: Definitely always sexy.  Thank you for reading!

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Date: 11/07/09
Do No Harm by bana05
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary: Summary: McCoy realizes he's a doctor, not a bounty hunter; but after what happens to Uhura on Triskelion, he wishes he were.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Television)
Classification: Cannon, General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: Adult Situations, Rape
Series: Star Trek: Beyond TOS
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2165
Read Count: 4505
Published: 31/07/09
Updated: 31/07/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Do No Harm

I wanted to see how they could react to that for the longest. thanks


Author's Response: Thank you for reading; it was a pretty significant thing so...yeah.

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Date: 01/08/09
Kiss From An Angel by Noobie
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 43]
Summary:

                                                       

It's not interracial, and I wasn't sure if I could post it or not. But I really like it. It's a Michael Jackson Tribute/Story. I highly suggest you give it a chance. But if you don't, your missing out.

For all of his child hood, he felt different. He was different from other boys, he didn't have a chance to be normal.

He didn’t get to have normal child hood experiences. He didn’t really have a significant other to tell him how beautiful he was, and how loved he was.


I wondered what if he had some one special during his childhood? Some one who was able to give him some normalcy in his life?

 Some one who could tell him how beautiful he was when he couldn’t possibly believe so? What if he had a shoulder to fall back on when times get hard.

What if he had some one who loved him with their whole being? Some one who he would spend his life with?


 How differently would things be, or would they be the same? Would they be able to stay together? Or would temptation ruin what they worked so hard for?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 23
Completed:No
Word count: 102749
Read Count: 5379
Published: 10/08/09
Updated: 01/02/10

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Title: Chapter 11: Out take #6 Special Delivery

This is a lovely story. You have me giggling so hard, because I can't read the sex scences. I never imaged Micheal like that and I feel total akward reading about about him doing that. But you don't have to ommit it or anything, the story is still great.



Author's Response:

Lol really?

 

I love writing/reading them. Whether people want to think about it or not, Michael was definitely sexually active. If you read interviews or books regarding his partners, they say he was a wonderful lover. He was a man, with needs. I don't see the difference between writing a sex scene involving him or Chris Brown. They are both sexy men.

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Date: 11/08/09
Title: Chapter 11: Out take #6 Special Delivery

This story is so lovely. The sex scences have me feeling akward; I never thought of him like that, but the story is still great. I was wondering if someone was going to have the balls to write a Micheal story.

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Date: 11/08/09
Title: Chapter 13: Out take #7 Break of Dawn

Aww! How sweet.I guess its okay that you took so long since the update was extra sexy ( for some strange reason).


Author's Response: lol. Michael Jackson IS sexy. lol.

 Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16/08/09