Penname: Sweet Pea [Contact]

Real name: Angela

Member Since: 02/07/08

Membership status: Member

Bio: Just a lady with a healthy fanfic obsession.


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Love Is Never Gone by pinkrose
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 155]
Summary:

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This is a General Hospital fan fic that takes place in 2014.  When Keesha Ward left the show in 1998, she returned to Philadelphia to tend to her sick father.  In my story, Keesha also found out she was pregnant by A.J. Quartermaine.  She gave birth to a daughter, Julianna Mae Ward, and has remained in her family home all this time.  She studied to become a nurse and had a successful career until a diseased liver brings her closer to death than life, and she decides it's time to let A.J. know he has a daughter.

Other PCers are also in this story.  Sonny and Carly Corinthos have died.



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Categories: Daytime Television, General Hospital
Characters: Keesha Ward
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 64
Completed:Yes
Word count: 151015
Read Count: 363606
Published: 15/07/08
Updated: 26/08/08

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Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

*Clapping happily* I'm so happy for this family. They've been given another chance to do it right.

Author's Response:

Thanks, Sweet Pea! :-)  Yes, that is the chance they've been given. :-)

 

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Date: 12/08/08
Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Alright AJ, he finally grew a pair when came down to Jason!!!

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweet Pea! :-)  Welcome back!  I read where you moved.  Hope it's been going smoothly for you! :-)  LOL about AJ!  Yes, it finally happened! *grin*

 

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Date: 18/08/08
Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Jason is completely nuts! Poor Michael, I really feel sorry for all the trouble that the adults in his life caused. He missed his childhood.

Author's Response:

Thanks, Sweet Pea, for the review and the stars! :-)  Yes, Jason has lost it, but we'll see what happens. *grin*  And yes, Michael will go through a couple more things, unfortunately. :-(  But I think he'll ultimately be okay! :-)

 

 

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Date: 18/08/08
Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Poor Michael, his younger years were straight messed up!!!! I can't wait to see what Keesha said to crazy Jason.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweet Pea!  Thanks for the review and the stars!! :-)   Yeah, Michael's early life was one big mess.  Hopefully, his future will begin to look brighter! :-)  Crazy Jason!  LOL!  My girl told him a few things. *grin*

 

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Date: 19/08/08
Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 57

I hope that Michael can finally find some peace. Most of his life has been filled with hurt and pain, caused by the adults who were suppose to love and protect him.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweet Pea! :-)  Thanks for the review and the stars!!  ITA about Michael, and I think he will. *grin*

 

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Date: 23/08/08
Title: Chapter 64: Epilogue - Part 2

I really enjoyed reading this story, and the fact that AJ and Keesha finally got some real justice. Great story and I hope to be reading more from you soon!! That's my hint to update Paradise Found!



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweet Pea! :-)  Thanks so much for your wonderful support throughout this story and for all the reviews and stars.  I appreciate every single one!! :-)  I'm glad you enjoyed the story!  Hope you will continue to enjoy Paradise Found, too! :-)

Take care and thanks again!!!

 

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Date: 26/08/08
Silence by insight spinner
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 24]
Summary:

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Zoe Washburne is haunted by the death of her husband by a Revear harpoon. Her world is a waking nightmare filled with her pain and grief and the never ending images. Captain Malcolm Reynolds determines to fix the problem and gain his second back. Will Mal waken feelings long denied in the process? And what will that mean for the tentative progress Mal and Inara are making towards finding one another?

See story notes for disclaimers.

In case you aren't familiar, folks in the Firefly/Serenity 'verse speak a mix of English and Mandarin with many the common folk tendin' to use a colorful western dialect.



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Categories: Primetime Television, Movies, Music
Characters: Zoe Washburne
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: Zoe/Wash (Firefly)
Warnings: None
Challenges: Song Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 15644
Read Count: 25022
Published: 17/07/08
Updated: 31/08/08

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The Earth is Always Singing

Nice update. I liked reading what's going on inside Zoe's head right now.

Author's Response: Thank's so much.  Yes, I worried but after having such a loss you would be lost in your head, I think.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Date: 10/08/08
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4:Tell Them I Ain't Comin' Back

This was a VERY good chapter. I absolutely loved Mal and Zoe's talk/kiss.

Update soon!!



Author's Response:

LOL!  thanks.  The Mal/Zoe shippers are coming out of the woodwork!!  hmmmm...I've got an idea about that.  I'm glad you liked it.  I didn't want to go overboard, I mean the woman is grieving after all. 

 I'm trying to wrap it up by the end of the month.

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Date: 19/08/08
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: That Silence is a Song

I noticed that he still held Zoe's hand. I was a little disappointed that he chose Inara, but that's life. I enjoyed reading this story.

Author's Response: I'm getting a lot of that.  You know, I was disappointed too.  I was thinking I would set out to write a Zoe/Mal fic and Inara butted in right away, I was really surprised, but got over it and wrote what you see.  I might have to do another story along those lines, though.  Thank you for reading.

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Date: 01/09/08
Blackout by greatodinsraven
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 63]
Summary:

Jake is a cynical Chicago bar owner just looking for some peace.  Josephine is a woman with a shady past just looking for a second chance.  When their two worlds collide during a city blackout each knows that the other presents a threat and yet they can't resist each other.  They along with several people from different walks of life converge on Jake's bar while chaos erupts around them.  Everyone is in for a night of secrets, revelations and lessons learned.  Who will survive the blackout with their heart intact?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 14109
Read Count: 4110
Published: 21/07/08
Updated: 23/10/08

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm hooked!

Author's Response: yea I'm glad! more is coming.

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Date: 22/07/08
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This chapter was straight sexy. Jake put it on her so hard, he forgot that he didn't trust her.

Author's Response: Okay Sweet Pea you just made me spit out my morning coffee hahaha.  Sometimes getting some of that good sex will make you forget some important things hahaha.  Thank you for the review and stars.

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Date: 05/08/08
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Thanks for the backstory on Josephine, and a look as to why she's running. Seems like she really messed up. It's one thing to date dangerous men, but another to steal from them. At least she found a hot, sexy, good guy. But then again, he doesn't trust her, and rightfully so. 

Author's Response: Thanks Sweetpea.  She is really messed up and she just might be in some MAJOR trouble, we'll learn more about that.  Jake doesn't trust her at all so we'll see if they can break down each other's walls.  Thank you so much for reading and the review and the stars sorry for the long wait for the upate.

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Date: 02/09/08
Revenge 101 by greatodinsraven
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 156]
Summary:

revenge 101

Audre Highsmith thought she had everything in her life under control.  That is until her ex boyfriend got engaged to someone else.  Now Audre's about to learn that the sweetest revenge is in throwing out the rules and following her own happiness.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 50934
Read Count: 114859
Published: 23/07/08
Updated: 31/05/09

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Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I like Christian. He's upfront and honest. He also has a sense of humor.

Author's Response: Thank you Sweet Pea!  Yes he is all those things and more so I'm glad you like him so far!

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Date: 29/07/08
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Greg is so wrong!!!

I hope Audre's revenge on that (sexy, fine) jerk is sweet.



Author's Response: Oh it will be.  Greg is going down. . .with his fine butt hahaha.

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Date: 23/07/08
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Great update. I love Janelle, she is so funny and blunt.

Christian is winning so many points, especially at the end with the music box with the black lily. 



Author's Response: Thank you Sweet Pea!  Jenelle is hilarious I enjoy writing her.  And I have a crush on Christian can't you tell hahaha, the music box move would've definitely had me on lock but let's see if it works for Audre.

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Date: 15/08/08
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Loved the mother - daughter conversation, it so reminded me of my mama. Maybe it's a southern black mother thing, but we love them anyway!

Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah I kind of literally took soundbites from some memorable conversations I've had with my mom, older sister and aunts and spliced some of them together.  I'm glad it reminded you of your mom because when writing this story I really wanted it to be more real and something that everyone could relate to on some level.  Thanks so much for reading and the review and the stars!

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Date: 10/09/08
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Damn! So Christian is a dirty talker. It was refreshing to see Audre let loose.

Author's Response: Christian is definitely down for the dirty, he's a smutty boy and I love him madly.  I like writing Audre's evolution.  She's not a perfect character and she's a work in progress and I love seeing her realize that and grow into herself.  Thanks for the review and the stars and for reading!

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Date: 31/03/09
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

I liked the build-up to their explosive passion. It was sexy and I'm always up building up a relationship/connection between two people.

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Date: 01/06/09
Be Content With the Lies by luckybrans
Rated: All Ages
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Summary:

The war with Voldemort is over and it's time to move on. For some, lies are the only way to do so.



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Categories: Books
Characters: Angelina Johnson
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2276
Read Count: 2916
Published: 25/07/08
Updated: 25/07/08

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Title: Chapter 1: Be Content With the Lies

Bitterly sweet, that's what this story was.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hoped the bitter part wasn't too much :)

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Date: 25/07/08
A Day In The Life Of..... by truth7
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:

This is a story about a woman who keeps fighting to live despite the fact that life keeps showing her that sometimes it is better to be dead than alive.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2715
Read Count: 3135
Published: 26/07/08
Updated: 26/07/08

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Title: Chapter 1: A Day In The Life Of.....

Wow! The emotional spiral was amazing. I can't help but to feel her pain and pray for her success.

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Date: 28/07/08
Capitol Hill by Harlen Winters
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 171]
Summary:

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Enter into the world of political drama and intrigue as Payton Samuels takes on the job of Director of Media Relations for the campaign of the nation’s golden boy Senator Cameron Marshall. Millionaire playboy and heir to the international fashion conglomerate The House of Marceline, Jared Marcel seeks to win Payton’s affection. Experience the back door deals in Washington…knowing everyone has an angle and no one is what they seem.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 26
Completed:No
Word count: 63247
Read Count: 10949
Published: 07/08/08
Updated: 20/04/09

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 "Hello, Mr. Marcel"

This seems very promising. Great start and I can't wait for a update!

And shout-out to the MAC LipGlass, that stuff is the BEST!



Author's Response: Thank you! I am so glad you enjoyed it. I was a little worried about how it starts off, but it will definitely keep moving. Yes...nothing beats lipglass!

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Date: 08/08/08
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 "Short and Sweet"

Poor Jared worked hard and he didn't even get her name. That's cold.

I like Grace already. Ethan's gonna pay for his actions when he gets home. 



Author's Response:

Jared is getting what people call 'Karma'  :~)

There is a lot to Grace that I am looking forward to bringing out.

I hope you enjoy the next update. Thanks for your review.

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Date: 09/08/08
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 "Trust Me"

The juicy secrets and lies, I love life on Capitol Hill!!!!

I can't wait to see who Grace called, it has to be some SUPER SEXY ex-lover. OH, and what secret does Waverly and Brett have going. 



Author's Response: Thank you! I am so glad you are enjoying it. Hopefully, it is unfolding in a way that makes you keep coming back! I love a good suspense story.

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Date: 12/08/08
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 "Up Close And Personal"

Great update. I loved Peyton's reaction when she saw Jared again. It was realistic and comedic.

Ethan just has all kinds of drama going on!! I love it!



Author's Response: Thank you Sweet Pea, congratulations on being the reader of the month! I am so glad you are enjoying it. There is so much more drama to come.

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Date: 17/08/08
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 "A Love/Hate Relationship"

Love the playfulness going on between Payton and Jared, these two are made for each other.

I was clapping when Grace slapped Ethan. That jerk should not get off to easy. 



Author's Response:

Joking and playfulness will definitely be a big part of their relationship. Ethan does love to push Grace's buttons, and he pays for it! I hope you enjoy the next update. I love the feedback.

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Date: 18/08/08