Penname: Sweet Pea [Contact]

Real name: Angela

Member Since: 02/07/08

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Bio: Just a lady with a healthy fanfic obsession.


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Capitol Hill by Harlen Winters
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 171]
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Enter into the world of political drama and intrigue as Payton Samuels takes on the job of Director of Media Relations for the campaign of the nation’s golden boy Senator Cameron Marshall. Millionaire playboy and heir to the international fashion conglomerate The House of Marceline, Jared Marcel seeks to win Payton’s affection. Experience the back door deals in Washington…knowing everyone has an angle and no one is what they seem.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 26
Completed:No
Word count: 63247
Read Count: 10949
Published: 07/08/08
Updated: 20/04/09

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Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 "Everything is Never Enough"

Great insight into Gavin's character. Of course, now I'm wondering how he's double crossing 'cheating' Ethan. Could he be meeting someone at said hotel, that will betray Ethan's trust in him!!

Author's Response: Sweet Pea you are too funny. No comment!

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Date: 21/08/08
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 "Nothing Good Comes Easy"

Look at Jared trying to cut off loose ends so he can have a real shot with Peyton! Men need to take note, that is what you do if you want a real shot with a good woman!

Author's Response: Jared is surprising himself about how serious he is. He is not taking any chances!

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Date: 21/08/08
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 "Looks Can Be Deceiving"

Grace had my rolling!! And who would turn out to be her knight in shining armour, Gavin (Mr. Big)!!

Author's Response:

Hi Sweet Pea,

Mr. Big....coming to the rescue. Grace could use a hero right about now. Thank you for all of your comments. I really appreciate them.

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Date: 25/08/08
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 "Nothing in Return"

Dang it, I am like a crackhead waiting for my next fix trying to figure out this big secret.

I am an official member of the Gavin/Grace love affair!!!

 



Author's Response: Hi Sweet Pea, Well I am more than happy to feed you addiction! Things will be coming together. I am about 5 chapters ahead of you. I will put u down with G&G fan news letter! Thanks for your reviews. I really appreciate them.

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Date: 27/08/08
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 "Zanzibar Blue"

Oh snap, now Mr. Big is in on the situation!! I loved this chapter because it had a little of everything. A little romance with Jared and Payton, a little 'gansta'-type action/father-daughter relationship with Gavin and Waverly, and secrets and lies with Cameron and Brett. KEEP THE CHAPTERS COMING!

Author's Response: Hi Sweet Pea, Thanks for the compliment. Things are going to be picking up soon. Thanks for your continued support. I always look forward to hearing from you.

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Date: 01/09/08
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 "Letting Go"

Is Payton finally gonna do the deed with Jared?

Will Gavin and Grace ever be able to truly show their love for one another? 

I'll be sure to tune in for the next chapter!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi Sweet Pea, You would be great at chapter summaries for me. I am looking forward to the next chapter to get things moving. I will be talking with you soon.

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Date: 03/09/08
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 "The Magic Touch"

This chapter was so cute. I think I awed and said 'that's right' 100 times.

Author's Response: Hi Sweet Pea, thank you. Payton is coming around and Jared is definitely trying his best.

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Date: 05/09/08
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 "New Beginnings"

I loved that Peyton realized that she'd made love for the first time and it was more than just sex.

It is so hard for me to feel sorry for Ethan, and I don't! He has had years to make it up to Grace, but it took him getting caught in the limelight to realize how much she means to him. Whereas, Gavin has always treated her with respect. 

 



Author's Response:

Hi Sweet Pea, Yes there is a big difference and Payton realized it for the first time, which is even scarier for her. She will learn to trust. What is the saying? You don't know what you got till it's gone? That defines Ethan....but Gavin has known for a long time. It is not easy being in love with someone that is unavailable...on top of the fall out with his daughter and best friend....does he think Grace is worth it...we'll see!

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Date: 08/09/08
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 "Hello Stranger"

WTF! I have to know the backstory to the pictures of Brett! Talk about career killer!

I was wondering when one of Jared's old girlfriends/sex buddies was going to turn up!



Author's Response: Hi Sweet Pea, Brett has a lot to loose. You know I am going to give a backstory...I think while on vacay might be nice.

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Date: 11/09/08
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 "Nothing Can Come Between Us"

I love the way Waverly and Peyton put Ming in her place. This woman is to desperate and it's just SAD!!!

Author's Response: Hi Sweet Pea! Ming is desperate and loves to play childish games.

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Date: 14/09/08
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 "Suffocate"

Ming strikes again. How pathetic, but then again it worked.

Author's Response: Ming does strike again. She doesn't give up easy...but neither does Jared.

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Date: 18/09/08
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 "Ready For Love'

That's what I'm talking about. I'm so happy they worked things out. I wish I had a great guy that would just take me away from my everyday stressful life.

Author's Response:

These two had a bump in the road..but they are off to a good start.

As far as the great guy...you never know what is right around the corner...life is funny that way.

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Date: 18/09/08
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 "My luck just took a turn."

It'a about freaking time!!!! Grace and Gavin have so much potential to be a power couple, but if they got together now Ethan will be the one everyone feels sorry for.

Poor Cameron, I can already see his hurt when Brett's secret comes out, because it's going to come out.



Author's Response:

Hi Sweet Pea....yes about time! G & G do have so much potential. It is the circumstances that they find themselves in that dictate whether they can and should be together. They could be good for each other.

Secrets do take on a life of their own. The fear attached to it has dictated Brett's life. Hopefully she will be free from that soon.

Thanks so much for responding!

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Date: 22/04/09
True Love Waits by PriscillaPal
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Picture of Drucilla Winters and Abe Carver

Drucilla Winters visits Salem to visit her newly married aunt, Celeste Perrault. But her new husband is Stefano DiMera and the Salem P.D. want her to spy on him for them. But when Commander Carver makes that request, both he and Dru discover an attraction to one another that will not only threaten Abe's marriage to Lexie and Dru's hopes of a reunion with Neil, but it will also incur the wrath of The Phoenix.



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Categories: Daytime Television, Days of Our Lives, The Young and the Restless
Characters: Drucilla Winters, Lexie Carver
Classification: Crossover
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: Lexie/Abe (Days of Our Lives)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Red Light Special
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 51994
Read Count: 1885
Published: 09/08/08
Updated: 22/12/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow! That was more than an explosive meeting, they were like rabbits!

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Date: 10/08/08
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Martin didn't waste any time getting Lexie!!! Damn, just a kiss and enter!!!

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Date: 15/08/08
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Dru and Abe just couldn't stay away!! Neil has some nerve! First, he's trying to get her out of his life, but then he's trying to control how she runs her life. He's a dick!

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Date: 17/08/08
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I can't help but to wonder what picture Jack kept for himself!!!!

At this point, Dru needs to forget about funky Neil and find a man that will give himself to her. The question is if Abe is that man.



Author's Response: I am curious about your last sentence. do you question whether Abe is not the right man because you're honestly not feeling them as a potential couple? Or is it something else? Or can you see Dru with another character? I have to say I would've never put Abe Carver with anyone, much less his own wife, as of last year. But as of late, James Reynolds doesn't look any worse or better than the actors that play John Black, Roman Brady and Bo. Of course in the end, there is always Patch Johnson...

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Date: 20/08/08
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I question Abe as the man for Dru, just because he always seems to go back to Lexie no matter what. I haven't seen the show in years, so that may have changed. 

The scene where Dru was trying to crawl over Abe to get to the passenger seat but "accidentaly" impaling herself on him, was very good. 

This chapter showed how crazy Stefano really is!!!!

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Date: 25/08/08
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Stefano is pure evil!!

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Date: 03/09/08
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Call me crazy, but I think 'Patch' is so damn sexy.

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Date: 31/03/09
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

There is so much going on her I don't know where to start.

Theo thinks Dru is his mother?! That's funny. So now she and Abe are going to get married. I can see how Neil and Steve fit into all of this, but I can't wait to see Sharon's role. 

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Date: 08/04/09
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

So is Steve about to find out about his future child. I love that Dru's pregnant from someone else. It adds to the craziness of the story.

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Date: 11/05/09
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Lexie is crazy, now she wants to seduce Devon?!

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Date: 18/04/09
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Did Lexie really have to do that! What a bitch!!

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Date: 23/07/09
Secretary by TokenBlackGirl
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 32]
Summary:  

Anyone who thinks controlling people is a science is dead wrong.  It's an art.~ Jim Profit

 

 

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television, Movies
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Crossover
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2729
Read Count: 2351
Published: 12/08/08
Updated: 12/08/08

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Title: Chapter 1: Alice

That was . . . hold on I need a minute . . . I need another minute . . . . Damn it you know it was good!

Author's Response: LOL, thanks so much. I didn't think this would take quite as long to write as it did, but I wanted to get it right. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)

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Date: 12/08/08