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Member Since: 20/08/09

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When My Back's Against the Wall by shiree022000
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 215]
Summary:

 

THANK YOU TokenBlackGirl FOR THE WONDERFUL BANNER! 

19 year old hair stylist Tina Jones' love and loyalty is put to the ultimate test when demons from 23 year old Chris Brown's closet come out to play.

WARNING:  this story is rated NC-17 For strong sexual content, violence, and language.

YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 34
Completed:No
Word count: 193686
Read Count: 19508
Published: 18/12/08
Updated: 10/11/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Why Does She Love Me?

 I luvin this and the Characters are great!!

Author's Response: Thank you.

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Date: 13/11/09
Title: Chapter 6: You Should've Known Better

OH no! If he she was with him since he was 14 he was her first everything so I can understand wjy she would be so inlove with that crazy boy.... this is good

Author's Response: Yeah, it's a very complicated situation. Thank you so much for reviewing as you go.

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Date: 13/11/09
Title: Chapter 8: Wipe Me Down

Awww...

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Date: 13/11/09
Title: Chapter 11: Another Again

Wow this was so emotional I almost cried but she did the right thing ! I'm with Team Tina

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Date: 14/11/09
Title: Chapter 12: All I Have

That good I glad she can finally escape that negro

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Date: 14/11/09
Title: Chapter 13: No Air

OMG what happen to tina!!! and tina's mom is in the mix uh oh

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Date: 14/11/09
Title: Chapter 15: Utopia

uh oh

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Date: 14/11/09
Title: Chapter 16: I Will Be

so she back with that no good chris YUCK!!

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Date: 14/11/09
Title: Chapter 17: The Set Up

What is on that TAPE!!!!!!!!!!!thats what I wanna know

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Date: 14/11/09
Title: Chapter 19: Dance! Dance!

Awww hecky naw this is so good it's hilarous firs lloyd than peaches saving Tina with a straw...omg it's crazy good

and Fathead earl in the other chapter had me rolling LOL

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Date: 14/11/09
Title: Chapter 20: Life Line!

OK Shalaylay betta shot the gonzo nose negro lloyd hahahaha

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Date: 14/11/09
Title: Chapter 23: Lights Out

Dayum she still with that crusty negro?

this is funny



Author's Response: crusty? lmao!

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Date: 15/11/09
Title: Chapter 24: Can You Stand the Rain

Good chapter

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Date: 15/11/09
Title: Chapter 25: Don't Let Me Get Me

This is crazy good I think she needs to break up with chris for a while, and find some other dude. The sex scenes need to be a lil more detailed & explicit for example read the "The Lover" by Tokenblackgirl ...Awesome 

but other than that you good



Author's Response: Thanks! I've been working on it.

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Date: 15/11/09
Title: Chapter 26: 2 Wrongs

WhoA! that was deep

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Date: 15/11/09
Title: Chapter 27: Love In This Club

Awww Dayum breakup and makeup that's all they do...ole skool song

 

I'm glad they back together you write so well

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Date: 15/11/09
Title: Chapter 28: The Terminal

Very Good!sexscene and I'm wondering about Chris and Raymond was that a set upor what? *giggles*

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Date: 16/11/09
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 27 - Secrets (Part 2)

OH UH this keeps getting better and better Sexy Sonny is Tina's Father Wow...poor rhi rhi she was ridiculas...Finally Chris will know crazy Sorrell is stalking Tina!



Author's Response: I really really want to thank you for reading this long ass story and leaving comments as you go. I like that you give your true opinion, good or bad. Thanks alot.

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Date: 16/11/09
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 28 – Love Don't Come Easy

Now I'm getting tired of these petty kiddy arguments between Tina and Chris Sh*t is annoying

 

Truth be told LOL

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Date: 16/11/09
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 29 – Volume Overload

Seriously, I'm getting a headache from one petty tina and chris thing to another I pray to GOD people don't act like that in real life.LOL

Author's Response:

GOOD THING IT'S JUST ABOUT OVER THEN.

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Date: 16/11/09
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 31 – This Time Imperfect

It was good, I thought it was the end this is a crazy drama it gave too much whiplash I need a break lol

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Date: 16/11/09
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 31 – This Time Imperfect

Where you at girl! The break is over and I'm ready for more drama.  I luv this story, it's hella fun to read!LOL

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Date: 05/02/10
An Illogical Woman by Candace
Rated: All Ages
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Summary:

A series of vignettes from the point of view of Spock, Spock Prime, Sarek and Tuven, a male OC, about the illogical women at the center of their lives.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Film)
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 21283
Read Count: 34936
Published: 09/07/09
Updated: 18/02/10

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Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 10: Departures

I did something rather embarrassing.. I did the happy dance when I saw this story appear on the websiteYEA!

I luv that Makeda has so many strong Vulcan male figures in her life from Spock, Elder Spock,and Sarek and etc.( If I missed anyone) That was really cool.

This is sucha sweet story, I'm glad Tuven understands Makeda being human and her need to embrace her human side to learn and understand that's who she is, Although she's Vulcan and was raised in vulcan culture she is also human.

Makeda by Les Nubians

 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=22HL5ZOOHGI&feature=related

Thanks for a wonderful story as always!!!



Author's Response:

LOL. Thanks for reading! 

 I love that song by Les Nubians. That song and that fact that Makeda was one of the Candace's made me love that name. If I ever have a daughter, I want to name her Makeda. 

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Date: 18/02/10
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 9: Changes

Poor makeda and tuven I hope they work it out. * sigh*

 Great story...



Author's Response: Thanks for all your comments :)

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Date: 07/01/10
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Meeting the Family

Interesting...

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Date: 07/01/10